Date: 19 Nov 2012 2:26 AM Title: Photos
I love the story and I am pleased you have continued on sort of from where BD finished but how come you have the chapter repeated again in the same chapter. once again I love the story.
There are two? I will look into it. I have been doing some editing to the story. I figured out that some of the chapters has double. I will look and fix. Thank you so much for telling me. Thanks for reviewing too.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 8:23 AM Title: Afterglow
Wow!!! This truely is such an amazingly beautifully well written story!!! Thank for all your hard work & dedication to this story!! This story truely has captivated & intriguied me!!! I look daily to see if u have update this story as well as your other amaing story.
Thanks I needed this...I should be updating again soon, I am trying to get this one done so I can focus on my others. It's not always easy doing three stories at one time. Or, two stories at one time. I could update faster if I was only working on the one. Then I have this problem where I am constantly looking for or trying to improve the grammar of my other stories. LOL I have the time, which a lot of people don't.
I figure there should be about 41 chapters to this story, already have it outlined. So, it's just a matter of me sitting down and putting it on paper. Thanks for reading and reviewing I need the encourage words.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:47 AM Title: Half Breeds
Aro est malin ! Il fait tout ça pour récupérer les Cullen, il doit vraiment s'ennuyer dans son château !!!
Aro is smart! He did all that to recover Cullen, he must really be bored in her castle!
Lassé sans doute, mais pour moi Aro possède un complexe de dieu. Je pense qu'il se sent comme il est au-dessus tous les autres. Il ne se soucie pas des humains autres que ce qu'ils peuvent fournir à lui. S'il avait loin de les contrôler qu'il le ferait. Avec Joham et les hybrides, il pourrait bien trouver son chemin. Merci pour examen.
Bored probably, but to me Aro has a god complex. I think that he feels like he is above everyone else. He doesn't care about the humans other than what they can provide to him. If he had away to control them he would. With Joham and the hybrids, he might just find his way. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:32 AM Title: Volterra
Bon début, j'ai l'impression qu'Aro va faire du mal à nos amis !!!
Good start, I feel Aro will hurt our friends!
Merci pour l'examen, vous êtes le seul ici qui a passé en revue et je l'apprécie. Ouais, le diabolique Aro va essayer à nouveau de détruire la merveilleuse Cullen.
Thanks for the review, you are the only on here that has reviewed and I appreciate it. Yeah, the devilish Aro will try once again to destroy the wonderful Cullen's.