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Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

Awe!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

Well jackass you had it...now you just need to get it back!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

:)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

I love it.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Ugh i love this soooo much!

Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Can I move in too?

Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting

Love it when grandparents put in their "orders" for babies.

Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

Pft I remember pregnancy hormones, I would have rode him until the sun came up, doubt he would complain.

Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

Awwww

Reviewer: xiolaperry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Another fantastic story! You are one of my favorite authors & I am looking forward to more update alerts.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Lovin this!!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Cute!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Woo hoo for getting her to move in

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting

good meeting.  I was gonna say gramps is a wanker, but he made up for it.  LOL

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Loved it :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Yippee

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting

That went good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

I love it!  I am so glad she decided to move in with him...

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Great chapter. I love how things are moving forward.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting

Loved this chapter... it was sweet!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

one more step in the right direction.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

aww bella is too adorable.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

Loved it :)

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

Awwww can they finally fully trust each other now 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

looking forwad to more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

she doesnt want to be alone and needs some answers

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

More of this !!!!!!_

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

How sweet.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

!!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

They are so sweet together so sad all the months missed.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

:)

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

So cute!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

Things seem like they are on the right track for them. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

awww e is being so sweet

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

Loved it :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

Edward you are doing good!!!   lol, Cheri

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

Loved it :)

Reviewer: E-Hart360 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

oh...that's so sweet 

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

Awww loved it 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

sweet chapter.  Glad he is being there for her. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

:)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

I am glad they are getting closer and closer. I hope he won't have to live without his daughter and Bella. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

He could offer his house for them!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

he is so sweet and she loves it

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

ty  good chapter

Reviewer: ttyler1029 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

I like your story. Please continue :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

She is shocked and happy

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

Awwwwe

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

Ahhhhh, what a wonderful chapter.  Loved him being there 1/2 hour early!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

aww daddye fot to see the baby

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

How sweet. I love it.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

Wow just read it all andlovin it!

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

Ahhh another brill story of catastrophia you never fail do ye girl xx

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?

GREAT STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?

just show up and be patient and helpful and offer to have dinner and get to know one another who knows it could be for them later.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?

:)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?

Mmm

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?

awww poor Jasper.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?

So sweet. I like this chapter.

Reviewer: Lolo Eighty-Four Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

LMAO!! "To being a dirty old man!!!!"

Reviewer: Lolo Eighty-Four Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Ah Karma! Gotta love her! :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

glad they are talking

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

awww he's trying at least

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

cant blame her for being pissed

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

so true.  you've been a wanker E

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

I think touching his child for the first time ..was a hugh step in making this a reality for him ..she seems to want to believe him ..lets hope she at least trys

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

She is shocked happy and so wants to believe him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

Yes, she believes him.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

I am glad they are talking this all out. Edward was so cute feeling their baby move for the first time. I am glad Bella let him feel the baby. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

Proud of him for opening up.  Will it be enough?  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

What a schmuck, lol.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

How sweet.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

More please :-)

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

oh no not the talk ...I am really enjoying this story ...

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

love it can not wait for more

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

Eat first talk later for Bella :-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

Well sounds like a business deal. No love or attraction. That's okay too perhaps then they can get along for this baby.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

he is doing good so far

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

Loved it.

Reviewer: clementine49 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

I am really loving the way you have set this up -- it's a very different perspective, and very well written!   This Bella is a tough cookie -- good for her!!

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

He's in :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

He is in so deep!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

This one is my favorite so I save it for last :-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

:)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

Great chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

There is hope

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

At least she let him in her office that is good.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

Thank you for one huge thing. Bella is not a spinless weak girl under his spell. I like strong self confident Bella... Glad you found her..

 

 

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