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Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella doesn't know what to do any more and Edward being scared for her 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

so glad she is honest with him

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thank you for posting so much!!! Luvin it!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 11

That's so sad for Bella but I think Edward is about to change things for her..good for him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

he is such a good guy

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

he will help her

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

You are perfect for the job Edward. he he

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

she is smart but she is sick poor thing

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

interesting brown hair :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

aww poor b.  Glad e is taking care of her and that she is being honest with him.  Lanie is too cute

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

lol for his dirty mind.    aww poor bella.   glad E is going to help her.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

OME I hope you can write fast because that was not a very nice cliffie!!!  Really enjoying this story.  Thank you, Cheri

Reviewer: katie0422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

wow!!! can't wait for more

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

I really like what I have read so far. I can see where this is going and I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

oooh she knows Esme...... interesting.    Uh oh  Dr C.

Reviewer: RainbowCupcakes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

I was so into this story that I didn't even realize that I was at the last written chapter! You have me hooked, so don't leave us hanging too long :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

Glad B got to talk to E about everything.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 7

Glad someone brought her an apple.   Poor B.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

Sweeeeet

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

How old are they again?

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Bella, trying so hard and it just keeps getting so hard to get by.  I hope things will get better for her.  Maybe Dr. Cullen and Lainie will be the cure and in turn she will be what they need also.   Please update soon!

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh bad Bella but had little choice she had to survive and is Edward going to say or do after this 

please PLEEEEEEEEAASE UP DATE SOON

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Here's his chance to score some points with Bella :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

Bella Bella Bella

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love your stories!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow  Jane is a piece of work

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow  hope her kids bring her some apples.  LOL

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

TOTALY ENJOYNG THE STORY!!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

kids are so cute

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 6

Another great chapter. Now to see how Edward handles the dating seen. Will Jane make a future appearance ? Wonder what Lainie has been sharing with Bella about wanting a Mom.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Miss Swan is not so young and it Lainie like.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

Good meeting ...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

Edward, I know a charming young woman who could suit you!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for this great chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

Jane is a piece of work.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thats what she thinks lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

out of the mouths of babs lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

He just had his ass handed to him like he was not guilty enough already.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

He is a great dad.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

just in the nick of time.  I have read this before and I am excited to read it again great story

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Not sure if that went well

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a first meeting!!!! I don't think either one knows what hit them. Let the fireworks begin :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

not a good first impression there Mr Cullen.  LOL

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

After just two chapters you've got my attention. Looking forward to learning more about this Edward and Bella. You managed to get a lot in with short chapters, I LOVE IT
Can't wait for an update!!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

First meeting and oops!  What will Edward do?  Can't wait till next chapter.  Will all the chapters be short?  Love the story!

Reviewer: CrazyMazie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Are you reposting your stuff?  I know I read this and bunnies before, but it looks like they are being reposted?

[And what I really want is more Conventioneers].



Author's Response:

Not reposting, but posting for the first time on TWCS. This is posted on ff.net as well.

 

Thanks!

Cat

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ah we meet Eddie

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

seems like it could turn into a cute little story. update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Edward and cute all at the same time 

up date really really soon please

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

Guys just don't get what all we do!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

I think he needs help.
Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like good news, Bella has a proposal for the work.
Thank you.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait for more.  Love some daddyward!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

More please :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.  cant wait for more.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start! Interesting premisee. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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