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Reviewer: prettylashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 1:20 PM Title: Ch 12 I Want You

Idk whether you noticed or not... But bella is such a hypocrite. She told rose that her reason being upset with edward is because he kept things from her n she never does that. Neither she told him about the kiss that she n jasper shared nor she told about bookstore incident. So in my books relationship always goes two way. Edward made a dick move but he was sure that he is not the father of the baby... N bella thought that its no good to tell bookstore incident with jasper .. If edward does get to decide for both m sure she doesnt also... I cant believe she is not showing one ounce of remorse for the kiss.. M sorry if it is coming too judmental, it is the truth. I don't like this bella at all and her way of running in the arms of jasper whenever there is a problem. M sure if edward hadkissed someone else, she would blown it out of proportion.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 2:26 PM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

Awesome story I read it on ff.n ;) I hope you are able to post the sequel if you have started it at all ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 9:43 AM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

Loved the wedding on the beach, I could picture how lovely everything would have been! Never doubted that Bella would tell him to re-up and that Edward would feel like he won the prize of his life! Looking forward to the sequel, I really like all these people and want to read more about them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 9:17 AM Title: Ch18 Be Somebody

Great chapter, Rose delivered safely of a beautiful little girl, and Edward bought Bella a tee shirt and an engagement ring! I am so happy for everyone!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:51 AM Title: Ch 17 The Runner

I knew Alice was going to have to show up in Jasper's life and this was the perfect time. It's so weird that Edward's face would be the catalyst for recovering Jasper's memories! So nice that he's getting better every day.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:27 AM Title: Ch 16 McFearless

Poor Edward, having those two for parents! At least Esme loved him so he had that much at least.That was a really strange meet the parents experience! Now hopefully it will be better, seeing Jasper.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:21 AM Title: Ch 15 Trunk

This is working out so well it almost scares me! I love that they are living together and Emmett and Rose have their own place. I'm with Bella , now they just have to see about Jasper!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:00 AM Title: Ch 14 Cold Desert

Thank the good Lord that Edward is going to be okay and Jasper probably will too! I can just imagine Bella playing nurse to Edward's patient! They are so lucky to be able to do that, it could have been so very much worse!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:39 AM Title: Ch 13 Day Old Blues

Just let it be an injury and not a death, that's all I ask!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 2:37 AM Title: Ch 12 I Want You

Tough to read about, and unimaginably tough to go through, no doubt! I feel for every woman who goes through it and admire them immensely! Now I'll just cross my fingers and hope the guys come home okay!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:38 AM Title: Ch 11 Crawl

I want to bang their heads together, just to get their attention! People, life is too damn short to be acting this way, too precious to waste! Quit waiting for the other to step up and say what's in your hearts! Where he's going, there's a chance he won't come back in one piece or at all!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:14 AM Title: Ch 10 Four Kicks

Please don't tell me Bella is going to piss away the little time she and Edward have left before he deploys! She can't be that stupid, even if she is afraid of being hurt again! Shame on her if she does, and shame on him for letting her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 12:54 AM Title: Ch 9 Ragoo

They were having a wonderful time, right up until Bella answered that damn phone! She will now have a cow, no doubt, until Edward explains, I hope! Now I know why he hated LeJuene so much. I'll bet this Victoria accused him of fathering her child, when it was someone else.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 11:39 PM Title: Ch 8 On Call

I realize this is pretty upsetting news , but I sure wish Bella wouldn't run right to Jasper to unburden her soul about how unhappy she is! It not only looks bad to Edward but keeps giving Jazz false hopes, I think! That's not fair to either of them.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 10:20 AM Title: Ch 7 True Love Way

Oh yeah the girl has got it bad! Well, actually so does he. Rosalie and Emmett may be getting married, but Bella is pretty happy right now too! I suppose since they are so wrapped up in each other, something awful is about to happen.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 9:58 AM Title: Ch 6 Molly's Chamber

Obviously neither one of them was ever a scout, because they sure weren't prepared! How depressing to find a condom box and it be empty! Lucky Edward is imaginative! Too bad Bella's truck died, but they tend to do that if you never put oil in them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 9:37 AM Title: Ch 5 Genius

Nice girls don't on the first date, huh? Since when? If it had been me I would have grabbed that gorgeous hunk of man and had my way with him! I hope Jasper accepts Bella's decision and doesn't feel too bad.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 9:15 AM Title: Ch 4 Holy Roller Novocaine

Oh crap! Jasper does want Bella! Where is Alice when you need her? That dream Bella had was pretty telling, half hot and half ice! Next thing we know Edward and Jasper will be competing for Bella. That ought to be very interesting!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:46 AM Title: Ch 3 Red Morning Light

Bella avoidance, my foot! I knew he wouldn't be able to carry that off! I'll bet Bella was glad she didn't do anything too bad last night! Even better that she said it loud enough for Edward to hear.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:27 AM Title: Ch 2 California Waiting

I hope meeting Edward hasn't scared Bella into Jasper's bed! That could definitely cause a problem for both Bella and Edward! They were both rather struck with each other I thought!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:03 AM Title: Ch 1 Happy Alone

Green eyes and messy hair, sounds good to me too! He must be something else if he turned her from Jasper on a dime! Well, she was hoping for that something missing, and it looks like he has arrived!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:23 AM Title: Prelude

That is a really true sentiment right there in that lovely poem! Makes me wonder who wrote it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 4:24 PM Title: Ch 11 Crawl

Bella is always the scared little but thoughtless bitch

not just your version of her but many make me hate her so bad

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 3:58 PM Title: Ch 10 Four Kicks

I don't like fighting or physical violence whether between a man and a woman or two men

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 3:41 PM Title: Ch 9 Ragoo

glad he came back to you

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 3:28 PM Title: Ch 8 On Call

they should get married in vegas too

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 2:49 PM Title: Ch 7 True Love Way

what a way to spend a weekend

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 2:29 PM Title: Ch 6 Molly's Chamber

but you just made my mind think of all you can do without a condom and most of them are good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 1:55 PM Title: Ch 5 Genius

I would hate to use BOB is Edward or Jasper were available

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 1:24 PM Title: Ch 4 Holy Roller Novocaine

someone's gonna get hurt

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 12:55 PM Title: Ch 3 Red Morning Light

love for you and your story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 12:40 PM Title: Ch 2 California Waiting

how she end up staying on base?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 12:24 PM Title: Ch 1 Happy Alone

yea

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 10:10 PM Title: Prelude

aww

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:37 AM Title: Ch 14 Cold Desert

aww

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:19 AM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

thanks for the story i really liked it.  thank you to your husband for his service too.... hey you should send me that threesome you wrote!! its hard to be a military wife!!

thanks again for the story!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:02 AM Title: Ch18 Be Somebody

cool glad they are happy and you made everyone happy too!!!!  ed is soooo good!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:04 PM Title: Ch 17 The Runner

cool i am glad you brought her in so jas could be happy... for once i guessed right!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:55 PM Title: Ch 16 McFearless

dumbasses doesn't cover it ... anyway glad that is over.. dumbasses you son almost died....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:39 PM Title: Ch 15 Trunk

cool.... glad everything is working out.. is alice one of jas's hot nurses so he can find some love too?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:16 PM Title: Ch 14 Cold Desert

knew that you would keep him safe... poor jas..... he gets screwed out of bella and then gets hurt really bad.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:06 PM Title: Ch 13 Day Old Blues

ok you didn't kill him did you.... wounded yes?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:24 PM Title: Ch 12 I Want You

yum!! sounded good...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:12 PM Title: Ch 11 Crawl

she is going to feel bad because if something happens to him while he is gone she will be very upset!  i still am upset with her because she runs to jasper knowing his feelings and he is dumb because he takes her back!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:21 PM Title: Ch 10 Four Kicks

i can feel everyone's stupidity is going to come out.... yeah jas and ed fighting over me wet dream... but i would go into the ff world and have a threesome!!! ahahahah



Author's Response:

I wrote a 3some outtake for the very first two chapters, almost like an alternate for it... I just don't have it posted.  yeah the the 3some idea was in my head and I had to get it out LOL

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:00 PM Title: Ch 9 Ragoo

Complications complication.... the past will bite you in the butt... ed you should have been upfront... bella is going to go nuts!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:05 PM Title: Ch 8 On Call

vegas trip yeah!!!!  ok bella is a bitch why would she run to jasper about ed... that is really rude and hurtful

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:30 AM Title: Ch 7 True Love Way

yum i could be twisted around ed... please pretty please bella is a lucky witch!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!!!! <3

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:17 AM Title: Ch 6 Molly's Chamber

oh man what a buzz kill... but ed is right on with other things!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:06 AM Title: Ch 5 Genius

go bella go bella.. i love lemons i love it haahahah

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:13 AM Title: Ch 4 Holy Roller Novocaine

ooh it's on it's on it's on!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:03 AM Title: Ch 3 Red Morning Light

cool glad that is all straight... hope you find someone for jas

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:56 AM Title: Ch 2 California Waiting

ok please tell me it ain't true   she just slept there right?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:49 AM Title: Ch 1 Happy Alone

yum ed in a uniform can't wait for you to describe that!!!

Reviewer: yuri11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 6:57 AM Title: Prelude

nice

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:20 AM Title: Ch 6 Molly's Chamber

i loved it iam sad for jasper but bella is head over heals for edward

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:00 AM Title: Ch 5 Genius

I loved it she made the right choice .edward was so sweet to plan the date around all of her favs .loved the shirt lol that was awesome

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:38 AM Title: Ch 4 Holy Roller Novocaine

oh crap jasper is going to be a problem for bella and edward but i hope he meets alice and leaves them alone

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:54 AM Title: Ch 3 Red Morning Light

oh thank god nothing happened w/jazz he is hot but not for bella lol love this story

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:38 AM Title: Ch 2 California Waiting

Oh no i hope she just slept at jaspers edward is so hot i loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:19 AM Title: Ch 1 Happy Alone

i loved it .i can't wait to read more

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 1:27 AM Title: Prelude

i really liked that iam an army wife so i get it

Reviewer: princess_bec Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 2:20 AM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

This was the first story i've read that has marineward in it and I loved it!  Great story and I can't wait to read the sequel :)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 7:55 PM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!  I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of Edward in the Marines. whoorahh

Reviewer: shar Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:30 PM Title: Ch 12 I Want You

my hubby is in the army. been there done that and is sucks balls he is gone right now so that hit close to home for me. you made me cry. but it's right on the money sad sad day.  good job

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:44 PM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

yay they have made it! and the sequel is comming!

thank you for writting, and for showing a little of what this life is like.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:13 PM Title: Ch18 Be Somebody

the t-shirt was so cute

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Date: 01 May 2010 2:48 PM Title: Ch 17 The Runner

look at that alice! i wonder what made a-j blush? maybe she is helping him with stress?



Author's Response:

I've been thinking about writing an outtake for when Jasper was in the hospital :o)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 5:13 AM Title: Ch 16 McFearless

glad to see edward opening up about himself, even if it was a disater. so happy that bella through that shit in his parents' faces

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:32 AM Title: Ch 15 Trunk

yeah they are back together and rose and em and the baby. everything is going great... except for jasper. maybe he will meet a cute little nurse named alice?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 12:06 AM Title: Ch 14 Cold Desert

i hope that jasper is gonna be ok. glad to see that eddie is ok and off to have bella 'take care' of him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:24 PM Title: Ch 13 Day Old Blues

oh god what have you done?!? tell me he is just hurt and now gets to come home early...please. no lost limbs or comas, or life threatening injuries.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:24 PM Title: Ch 12 I Want You

well yyeah it sucks they only got a week but at least it was smething, and not them figuring shit out after he left...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:24 PM Title: Ch 11 Crawl

fucking stuborn assed people! time is running out...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:24 PM Title: Ch 10 Four Kicks

well yes it would have been hot, even hotter if you could have found a way for them to be in those little pt shorts!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 12:11 PM Title: Ch 9 Ragoo

wow thank you for sharing your story. again i do not think i could do it. but your heart loves who it loves...

now what the fuck did that phone call mean?  vic cheated and got preggers, but the baby is now here and not his eddies so no worries? what's b gonna do?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 6:36 AM Title: Ch 8 On Call

i could not even imagine! going about your normal life and boom! the axe falls and your world is flipped into fear, lonliness, and uncertainty. off to kiss my hubbie and whisper that i love him. (he's sleeping)then it's bed for me too.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 6:07 AM Title: Ch 7 True Love Way

heehee they couldn't even make it through dinner

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:42 AM Title: Ch 6 Molly's Chamber

i am so glad i don't have to worry about condoms anymore! that shit always sucked.

feel bed for jasper, but he will find his girl in the end, right? you can't leave jasper high and dry.



Author's Response:

*giggles* ppl worry about Jasper so much... I love Jacksper too much to leave him lonely :o)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:19 AM Title: Ch 5 Genius

love bob , but i love the real thing more! i am sure that bella will too.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:47 AM Title: Ch 4 Holy Roller Novocaine

poor bella she is so screwed! but hey i wouldn't mind stepping in for her, edward and jasper fighting for my affections..... swoon.

then again b is definately on to something with the threesome thing - everybody gets what they want ...



Author's Response:

I have a threesome one shot written for this fic... its completely seperate from the story and is a "what if" bella left the club with jasper and edward the night she met edward... it's all smut and kinda funny... it's on FF.net

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Ch 3 Red Morning Light

oh my god! you're a marine wife did that 'if you go commando your shit falls out the bottom' thing really happen? that would have been too funny, especially for a big bad marine surrounded by big bad marines! heehee



Author's Response:

yes, that really happened... however he did that shit on purpose.  I will not name him but he was a bit of a clown and during PT he let it all hang out to get a laugh... he's actually a really great guy with a pervy, weird sense of humor!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:12 AM Title: Ch 2 California Waiting

i wonder what had eddie running from NC? something to do with a redheaded slut?

i wonder what bella was doing in jasper and em's room? my bet her and rose went home with the boys and passed out.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:48 PM Title: Ch 1 Happy Alone

ooo... sweet talker is gonna get lucky...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:34 PM Title: Prelude

that is so sad. i am so happy that i am lucky enough to fall asleep next to my hubbie every night. prayers that we ALL get to tell our honnies we love them today.

Reviewer: Barbr9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:15 PM Title: Ch 12 I Want You

The departure was hard it brought back memorys of my Brother being deployed to Dessert Storm.  My brother was in the Marines and my sister is married to an ex marine.  I married an Ex Army guy.  My Uncle was in the Navy during Vietam.  So I am familiar with military and the hardships it brings.  The only branch my family was not part of was the Airforce.  I wanted to join the Airforce to fly jets but not having 20/20 vision made it not possible.  I tested high to fix the planes and they wanted me to join to be a mechanic but if I couldn't fly I didn't want any part of it.  Any how hope the next chapters brings happier times.  I won't know till I get back to reading.

Thanks

Barb



Author's Response:

my hubby is a marine and my dad is retired navy so i'm a military girl all the way!!! i wanted to fly but i have shitty vision... going to nursing school now,

Reviewer: Barbr9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 2:04 AM Title: Ch 4 Holy Roller Novocaine

Phew this was a Hot chapter.  OHHH and the love triangle begins.  I would love to have 7 minutes of heaven with Edward.  Great story.  I have read and quit a few bad ones lately.  Your story is written well and has me intrigued. 

Thanks

Barb



Author's Response:

thanks so much... sorry you've read bad stories.  i hope that I keep you interested!!

Reviewer: conceivablyeternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:42 PM Title: Prelude

I wish I could say I could help but really I am only really good with spelling and tenses. Not exeptionally great with the punctuation at all : ; not really my cup of tea.

 

My pet peeve is people who confuse your with you're. I am finickity about spelling but not so much to put me off a good story.

Just crap story lines do me in.

So it's going fab so far.

Reviewer: conceivablyeternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:34 PM Title: Prelude

Still good though if it was awful I wouldn't be reading it.

 

Anyway glad to know that you are improving. But it's probably better than I could ever do!



Author's Response:

*giggles* well thanks, editing your own story sucks... I'm trying to get someone else to do it LOL writing is much harder than I thought it was. 

Reviewer: conceivablyeternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:26 PM Title: Ch 2 California Waiting

Love where this is going.

 

But a quick grammar tip. The past tense of to see, is "I saw" not "I seen", seen is used when you say thing like I had seen, or I have seen.

Just a quick tip for future reference.



Author's Response:

this fic is a bit messy... I need to sit and go through it again... it was my first so I've learned a little more since writing it.

Reviewer: raindrop0620 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 9:01 AM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

This was a great story! I can't tell you though how many times you scared the crap out of me because I thought Edward died, lol.. Can't wait for the sequel! :)

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 11:26 PM Title: Ch 14 Cold Desert

Oh that brought back memories, Landstuhl and Ramstein is so pretty, the fucking hospital is huge... been twice and I still haven't seen all of it. LOL Those blue buses with a red cross on it tho... you get all weird seeing them.



Author's Response:

never been there so i had to do a bit of research...the hubby never got hurt thankfully

Reviewer: midnightkisses13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:27 AM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

I just read the entire story over the past few days and absolutely fell in love with it. Marines hold a place in my heart as my dad was a Marine. so anyway absolutely loved it thought it was VERY well written and loved how sarcastic Bella was. can't wait to read the sequal!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! I'm a Navy brat and a Marine Corps wife =) So glad that you enjoyed my Marineward!!!!

Reviewer: sweetremembreance13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:02 AM Title: Ch 15 Trunk

weres his alice at



Author's Response:

keep reading!!!

Reviewer: Descartes1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

I really enjoyed reading this!  My Dad was a Marine.  Once a Marine, ALWAYS a Marine!  I will definately be looking for the sequal.



Author's Response:

My dad was in the Navy and my hubby is a Marine =) Thanks so much for reading!!!!

Reviewer: shirley123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:41 PM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

awww i loved it

Reviewer: shirley123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:40 PM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

awww i loved it

Reviewer: christylou Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:07 PM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

thanks for the story!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:56 AM Title: Ch 19 Use Somebody

loved the story cant wait till the new one comes out !



Author's Response:

I will be working on the sequel once I get a little further into my WIP fic

Reviewer: Indianagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 12:54 PM Title: Ch 10 Four Kicks

I really think she is acting like a baby about this. She needs to act like the woman she is supposed to be and let him explain things before blowing up. She is starting to annoy me.



Author's Response:

You aren't the first to say that....trust me!!! You just have to look at the entire picture...don't just look at what happened in Vegas...look at what happened before they left and what she looking at facing when they get home.  People do dumb things out of fear.

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