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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2021 7:57 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

hot

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 10:54 AM Title: Going Home and Decisions

good job

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:35 PM Title: Going Home and Decisions

Oh my God, I was about ready to slap Bella silly.  I can't believe that she took so long to confront Edward.  I know he was being childish by ignoring her but he was probably hurt and confused, he laid his cards and heart on the table and got nothing back.  Thank God she couldn't keep it in any longer and she admitted she had feelings for him too.

I really enjoyed this even though it did take me a while to get back to it, lol. Thanks for sharing, I'm off to read EPOV now.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 6:47 PM Title: Vacations and Boyfriends

Gah!!  When are they going to get their acts together.  If Riley's not careful he could be in Edward's firing line and it won't be Riley's fault either.  I could bang Edward and Bella's heads together.

I can't believe it's took me this long to come back to these two stories and finish them.

Jane x

Reviewer: Lissy2110 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 7:41 PM Title: Going Home and Decisions

Hey,

an interesting little story.

Thanks

Lissy

Reviewer: DrPepperChk21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 4:22 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

I would love to see more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 10:51 AM Title: Going Home and Decisions

:) loved this story

Reviewer: TJ1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 9:09 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

Really like this story (both of them) keep up the good work!! :-)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 8:54 PM Title: The Morning After

Great story

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 5:11 PM Title: The Morning After

Hmmm, I'm not sure about Jake and his feelings towards Bella.  I can't work out whether he's realised he has feelings but doesn't feel like he stands a chance because of the way Bella looks at Edward, he has feelings but is unsure whether they would want a threesome or whether he realised after going down on Bella the morning after that his heart wasn't really in it and he'd prefer them just to be friends.  Jake's clearly embarrassed, but for which reason, that's what we need to know.  Of course he and Edward may have talked about this already and it's obvious that Edward fancies Bella, I mean, he even reads fan fiction with her, lol.  I really like this story and I'd love for you to continue it.  I'm off to read Edward's POV, maybe that will give me some more clues, hehe!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 4:11 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

I love poly stories, lol, I'm a complete whore. *snort*  I'd love it if you did more.  That was so hot, no wonder Bella squirted, I think she surprised herself.

I love their friendship, it's deeply formed and when the drinking started and the question was asked why Bella had never thought about either of them and vice versa, the answers are quite easy really.  How do you choose one over the other?  How can you leave one person out that you're just as close to?  Then you have to consider choosing might destroy what they've had for so long.  Now the big question is; what will the morning after bring?

Jane x



Author's Response:

Thanks I am glad that you like...this was a story my beta wanted to read and initial going to be a o/s. After some major reviews on ff I decided to include more. I don't know how much more, but more. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 10:40 PM Title: The Morning After

Really enjoying your story. I wouldn't mind if she ended up with both of them :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing....LOL 

Reviewer: bellaroxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:44 AM Title: The Morning After

i am loving ur story..but lol..the pics are not visible....

 



Author's Response:

Let me see if I have them uploaded here, if not give me a few minutes. I have tumblr or facebook I often share my pictures there too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

http://carolinacullen.tumblr.com/

https://www.facebook.com/carolina.cullen.319

Reviewer: jlou10dun Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:06 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

naw poly!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:38 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

No they all stay together :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Now, you can read one of the boys POVs.

Reviewer: Kornygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:29 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

Hot... Damn I would love to see more ;-)



Author's Response:

I am working on it....the Morning After....I will have to see from there. Also planning on adding another story to this one..."The Night My Life Began" its from one of the boys pov. Check it out too.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: po3a Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

Yes you should continue ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I will continue.

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 1:05 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

I want to know whatnots like the morning after!



Author's Response:

The morning after is in the works.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:26 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

OHH!! There should be much more.. Please. This could get really good.

E/k

Author's Response:

There will be the response for more, has pushed me to write more. Develop more of a story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:57 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

Hell yes to more!

Author's Response:

LOL okay I will see what I can do. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:19 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

Holy shit yes, I want to know what happens in the morning!  How the hell do you discuss that in the morning?



Author's Response:

Good questions, but I have to figure it out soon. Thanks for reading, reviewing, and letting me know what you think.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 10:12 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

More please :)



Author's Response:

Yes, we will be having more. I don't know if I marked it uncompleted at this time, but will in the future. Be sure to favorite the story or me for updates.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:59 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

OME YES I WANT MORE!!!!!  lol, Cheri



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote Cheri... I have had an amazing response to this story. Everyone is looking for more. I will place it here for everyone to see. That there will be more. 

Edward's POV will be a story title "The Night My Life Began" this will be his side of things.

Bella's POV will be "The Night I Will Never Forget" 

So, we will see from both perspectives or this is what I am thinking.

Reviewer: Ski Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:44 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

Please continue!!

Author's Response:

I will thanks for the review

Reviewer: bmjtc4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:05 AM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

More, please. :) Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks I have been properally talked into doing it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:11 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

I would like to see more....what happened between them after this.



Author's Response:

I think between my beta and the review that there will be more. I am in the process of deciding who, what, when, and where plot wise... Thanks for the review. Don't forget to fav or alert. So, you can see what happens next.

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:07 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

more please. but i want her to be with edward haha



Author's Response:

No worries my dear, not much of a Jake fan. Edward and Bella all the way...but you have to wait and see what I have planned next **wink**

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:20 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

This was great. I would love to see more. I'm going to favorite just in case.



Author's Response:

Thanks you do that there might be other stories you are interested into. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:13 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE  UPDATE SOON!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

I am about to...beta has been begging me to do more. I think I just might. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:36 PM Title: The Night I Will Never Forget

I am so excited to be your first review.....and all kidding aside this was well written and very exciting ...my husband like all men loves a touch of pron and i love Twilight so reading in bed for us with this was a win win situation all around

kudos to you ..and on to the next chapter ...lets see if its at all possible for two guys to share the same girl without wanting to kill each other



Author's Response:

Loved it... ;) Wish my hubby was that exciting about my love for all thing twilight or a least the exciting parts. LOL I digress thou. Well, see my beta wants me to do more, and another review from another site is on the same band wagon... Maybe once my vamp story is complete, then we will see where they go. Thought about just making a full story of it and having her choose between them, or having one chose what to do. Or, play with them both for a little while. Keep checking back might have more soon. 

Read The Perfect Submissive or Down on main street, there might be some scenes there that are interesting. LOL Thanks again for being the first one here.

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