Date: 13 Jan 2018 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
I like the story of course the beginning was hard, but I like when the Major is dominate in stories but also knows when he needs to make love or be careful with her when she is hurt.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
It's a ten from beginning to end!!!!! I loved how you handled such a brutal double rape!!! You did a great job with the healing process as well!!!! I also loved your Jane!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, it is not easy to write about things when they hit close to home. i think i did alright, and without giving too much detail that could possibly scar a reader emotionally
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well done. Loved it!
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 03 Jul 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oookay have to say you kinda totally lost me with Jasper's behavior
Author's Response:
Umm, thanks for the review.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Don't understand Jasper's actions at all it is like you totally flipped his personality 360. He was so dedicated to her then that....I just don't get it
Author's Response:
I didnt want him to make sense, in one way, as emotions are his thing, but what about his own. add to that the mistake she made when the female brought blood to him.
This type of thing effects people in different ways. when my husband was witness to a lashback, yes, even after all these years, he didnt know how to handle it at all. he didnt bother with sex or being effectionate at all. just done all other hubby stuff instead. this went on for days, until i blew up at him about it.
so i needed people to see Jasper isnt invincible in that way. he isnt all knowing and he can feel, get confused, and stress over shit.
I hope that helps.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad for the healing....I am sorry you had to go through something like this. No one should have to. I am glad you are healing too.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your thoughts. I believe if can see what is able to heal us or help us heal, then it is best to bring that in and use it.
Makes no sense, does it? But, writing and reading and drawing is what helps me as well as music. They can sooth and heal almost anything for me.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah! Kill him jasper! Way to make him suffer!
Author's Response:
I am behind her hero in a leather jacket as well.
Date: 03 Jul 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella, love jasper, kill Edward and Carlisle, yeah for esme
Author's Response:
i agree completely
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hi, wendy! I know that I havent been in touch for a while, but i've had a few troubles lately. I'm so glad that you are putting up your stories here, I've always loved reading anything (ok, almost anything) that you write. I now have a little of the best you have to give to keep me company when sleeping isn't going to happen at night! Thank you, so very much, you are still the best! Love ya,Lady Skyelite(Skye).
Author's Response:
Hi darlin',
I hope you are well.
I have many more to put up yet, so enjoy them as they appear on my profile
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
sorry it was hard to get out keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
don't worry we all love your writing
Author's Response:
Thanx doll, i appreciate you sticking with my stories.