Date: 28 Jul 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 28 Jul 2021 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year
Loved it!
Date: 28 Nov 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait to read more of this story! Loved the first two chapters!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sad chapter. I can't wait for the next. Please don't take so long.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow that was an intense chapter. Poor Bella.
Date: 12 Apr 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm worried about her and Riley being together.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter... so much going on for her, :( Poor Bella. Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 05 Apr 2013 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad your back. I loved the final conversation with her father. It was much needed. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
I shouldn't have read this in public.....I can't stop my tears and people are staring :(
Date: 16 Feb 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year
Boys are so stupid.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
As horrible as it seems its the right thing to do and their very mature to realize that. I think they were becoming dangerously co dependent on each other. This break is only going to make them stronger eventually.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm so glad. Date rape cases are so unpredictable.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is a very complicated person. I don't blame him for reacting the way he did. I hope that he can let his pain go.
I'm glad Bella yelled at Edward for how he treated her. I'm glad he knows how it made her feel.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh these poor kids. I lost my first baby at 17 weeks it's horrible. I didn't have a D&C I should of but I needed to let it happen itself I could let someone else take my baby. I know irrational but I was 21, scared and grieving.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ah yes. My mom was the 'cool' mom and also a nurse so my mom also had to deal with my friends pregnancy scares. Come to think about it that around the same time my mom let slips that there were condoms in her bedside table and no questions would be asked if some went missing. She told us she wished we would wait but wanted us to be safe. We went to Catholic School So we had no sex Ed class. It was nice to have a parent we could be honest with.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh I was completely floored. I never saw that coming. And I'm sorry but there is something creepy about a college guy that sniffs around high school girls. When I was 16 there was a 21 year old guy that hung out with us all the time and I always was unsettled by it.
I believe Alice. The bruises along are a sign. Maybe she started out okay with it but changed her mind, there is nothing wrong with that. I wonder if Edward knows more. Guys usually stick together and Edward seems to concerned for Alice to think she's lying.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
As well as a first time goes it was really sweet and as perfect as it can be. But Edward climbing into her room to hold her as absolutely amazing. It proves how much he really cares and loves her. Most guys wouldn't of given a shit. They got what they wanted. So was that how your first time was or how you wished it to be.
I went to catholic school and had all kinds of catholic guilt likely so did my boyfriend. We got engaged at graduation and waited until senior week to lose our virginities. Let's just say that Disney World really is a magical place. Lol
Author's Response:
Definitely how I WISHED it would have been! :-) My first time was dreadful!!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh. I think he can wait longer then her if he has half a mind to.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
See I never had that kind of fun in HS. My mom was a detox nurse at the time and my uncle was a big time cop. So I was scared shitless to even go to those parties. Even though I did have a drinking party at 16. But I didn't even try a drop. Lol now college different story all together. Lol still I never did anything until I was 21.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
This chapter just made me realize that some guys never change. Lol
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year
HERE! A little late but really isn't that just about right for high school. Lol
I graduated HS in 1998 so I am right there with you.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year
Awesome story, and can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 02 Feb 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year
This story is so great!
I love it, really.
I am saddened by what happened in the life of Edward and Bella, everything was so confusing in their mentes.Bella is strong to get through everything, but this Edward sunk into trouble, he clearly loves, but is acting like a teenager (ops ! They are teenagers). then, Riley will fight for Bella, and, Edward? update please? Kisses.
Date: 02 Feb 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Charlie is a hypocrite! Speaking of his daughter and cheating on his wife.
Edward was an idiot, but he's a teenager, so I understand.
Bella went through so many things, good that she and her mother talked.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella, is in the middle of a situation as difficult, losing his best friend, ficsndo foot to another ...
And now I see more difficulties lie vir.Bella be pregnant? OMG!!
Date: 01 Feb 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
They are sweet, Edward is trying to be all adult, but he is still so young!
I feel that they are separating, it's sad ...
But I know you will make everything better.
Kisses.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year
Oh my! This is getting good. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like where this is going. Fully on board. Bring on the messy High School Hijinks!
Date: 30 Jan 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
High school gossip and hijinks, there is nothing like it. What fun and trauma all at once.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year
So thrilled this story is over here at TWCS posted as it was originally intended in all it's wonderfulness. I was gripped by the vivid characterizations from the start.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year
came to add it over here so I could read it without the editing :) Excited for more!
-Kate
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year
It's so sad how their relationship has failed. I can't wait for more.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Edward and Bella.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
ANOTHERRRRR UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x
Date: 22 Dec 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
want more please!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
He was really great with her. I'm nervous about the upcoming angst!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm excited for the drama.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year
soo good
Date: 09 Dec 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Excited for the next chapter.
Date: 08 Dec 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year
Definitely here!
Date: 08 Dec 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year
It was a good first chapter. I'm interested in the characters and want to see where it is going to go.