[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue
i'm so glad i came across this story again on here ;) i 1st read it on ffn and i'm off to read bp now ;D
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue
Hello Morgan! So glad to have you back. You have been missed. I am quite anxious to move to the next installment.
I hope that you & Kim had a wonderful Holiday season! I look forward to bearing witness to your words (& Kim's polishing of them) during this brand new year.
You know how I roll & therefore you must certainly know that I will be wrapped up in the beginning of Brute in the next couple of minutes. See you there!
Robin :o)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Pendulum
Very interesting chapter. It's nice to get more background on Jasper. I can see the wheels turning in Edward's head. He's thinking he might be able to live on a diet of vamps rather than humans if he changes. I have a feeling that it isn't a good idea to live on vamps alone.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Pit
I knew his admission would hurt Bella. I'm just wondering how persuasive Bella can be ;) That was awesome what Bella and the orchestra did tweaking his song like that.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bliss
Oh snap! Eddie just dropped a major bomb on Bella. What a way to ruin a perfectly great evening. I'm so glad I don't have to wait for an update to see how this revelation is taken by Bella.
Great job with writing their love making. It was sweet and sexy without being vulgar. That is hard to find in this fandom (and trust me I'm guilty of vulgarity).
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 5: Kiss
Yay for Bella's control. I can't wait to see how Edward reacts in the light of day to all of this. It's easy when you're high on love to happy content with what she is.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 4: Down In The Dumps
Nice to meet Dr. Whitlock and Dr. McCarty. I like the way you are going with more traditional vampire lore. Makes it different from most of the other stories out there.
My heart was breaking for Bella when Edward sent back that angry response after she told the truth.
I'm afraid to know how she's going to prove it.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 3: Up In The Air
I was wondering how long it would take for Carlisle and Esme to figure out what was going on with the carriage. I died laughing when Esme thought it was windy because the carriage was rocking.
Esme is awesome. I love how she tries to keep the mothers in line that lust over Edward as he teaches their daughters.
What an interesting way for Bella to be revealed to Edward. I can't wait to see what his reaction will be.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Theatre of the Mind
Interesting back stories on everyone. I'm wondering if Alice's secret will ever be revealed and how Bella will take it. It's nice to have Bella and Jake with a relationship that is that close but not romantic. It's easier for me to enjoy when I don't have to grumble and groan over Jake pining after Bella.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night
This was an interesting beginning. I can't wait to see if Bella has the strength to resist until she has permission.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Down In The Dumps
Oh how glorious this chapter is! Morgan they just keep getting better as they go on! I love your writing style and character development. This story is so addicting and fantastic! Very well done darling! xo
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 3: Up In The Air
Sweet! I really loved this chapter too. Bella having the more tradtional vampire powers is a refreshing change to our beloved characters. Edward's song was so sweet, and I love how naive and inocent he is here. Well done darling! xo
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Theatre of the Mind
Awesome chapter! I loved the back story information...very unique and interesting. Can't stop reading this! xo Well done darling!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night
Morgan this is fantastic! I really LOVE that you're a guy writing fan fiction for Twilight :) Its so refreshing to have a male's perspective on things. I can't wait to see where this story will take our beloved characters. Well done darling! xo
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 20: Sleeping With The Fishes
oh my...somehow I think my fave vamps will be ok :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 18: House Arrest
"Morgan Locklear owns his IMAX tickets to see Eclipse." It was bitchin on the imax big screen- you could see wig hairlines!
Bella as a pirate- HA!
Edward~ large and in charge! What a douche :(
"is your secret weapon." anytime I hear or read secret weapon I always hear the voice from "an american tail" and the lady mouse that has the speech impediment...
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 17: House Call
Vamp smexin' MOG style is HOT
I really dig the Edward Jacob freindship that is forming
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 15: Big Spoon
"Morgan Locklear wrote a letter to Nintendo thanking them for Mario Galaxy 2" ~ I love it too!
I liked that you did the Bella Edward POV before Jake's POV of the shooting.
Interesting twist on the thirst of the vampire with age.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 14: Moonlight
Oh MOG~ R-e-s-p-e-c-? Where is the T? It fell off after reading this: "Morgan Locklear owns every a-ha album ever released."
I can tell you are married and fear your wife: ""You killed him!" Bella grabbed his groin and twisted savagely."
Can a vampire hyperventilate?
I love that Edward is so in Love with Bella that he's willing to forgive her just about anything! Even turning him into a blood sucking leech.
Nice take of the New Moon Edward save :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sunshine
I love this line: "He did not remember how he had gotten back home but recalled the rocking back and forth motion of his cocoon. It must have put him out like a baby and Bella had carried him like a stork carries a newborn"
"Rosalie observed that Edward was dressed to match the horse as soon as they walked outside" *SNORT*
Oh, Edward- you sill Nun virtue stealer
The week off after Edward was shot...I bet you got some HATE mail my friend...*cheeky!*
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 12: Love Returned
Sorry I've gotten behond on reviews- no good excuses anyway:
Jacob is such a doll. I heart him.
Your lemons crack me up! So original at times "Edward still thought like a virgin" "She looked down at the intimidating obstacle between her and his belly button"
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 11: Lesson Learned
I really like the Alice Bella relationship and that Alice isn't a total flake. The "overly excited pixie/sprite" is so overused in FF, it's nice to see a different dynamic!
Oh- and the scoundrels down by the river...totally had it coming :)
Hmm- Edward in only socks...yum (oh- sorry)
"icy licorice" that's Jagermiester, right?
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17: House Call
Sweet Jake will show his hand. Such a different story. Thanks for sharing. Meg
Date: 22 May 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 14: Moonlight
Even if they die they had a beautiful story and a tragic ending, maybe they will be together in the after life );
Date: 10 May 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sunshine
Edward seems to find lots of dangerous situations. And not all are related to Bella. Poor guy. This last one, is a cliffhanger and a big scare. Will he be okay? Or will some changes have to be done?
Date: 09 May 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 12: Love Returned
It had to be really scary for both Bella and Edward. A simple thing, a second of missed attention and blood was there. Bella's self control was amazing, and appreciated by both of them. This was a huge thing, if she can resist his blood.
Date: 09 May 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 11: Lesson Learned
Alice is reckless and can cause some difficulties. Jasper's first idea of killing her, has seemed to change, but he is still aware that she needs to change her ways. She acts like spoiled girl and that can be dangerous, as they have just found out.
There was some confusion for me in this story. Jasper never said a thing about "Irina" and Bella never answered her question. And why if Edward was there no one had noticed, or Edward done something, was he just passing by?
Author's Response:
Bella didn't want to answer the question and Jasper allower her to get away with dodging it. Edward was otherwise occupied with his brush with death. Jasper said that Irena was his biggest failure and that's all they got out of him. Everything makes perfect sense to me.
MOG
Date: 03 May 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 12: Love Returned
I found your story yesterday and took me till today to read the story. I like this story very much, your writing is very good. I like the different twist on the vampire lore that you are taking with this story. Keep up with the good work, and can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad to know that it reads straight through okay.
MOG
Date: 29 Apr 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 11: Lesson Learned
Poor Edward. Why doesn't he just give in and let Bella turn him already? He'd really be better off and wouldn't get hurt as much.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Game of Chance
I was wonder what all the secrets and low voice talks were about. Honestly, I never imagined it would be such a surprise. Jacob needs this time and sharing it with Rosalie makes it even better. He is a unique character, so playful and so serious at the same time. He is intelligent, and enjoys studying, figuring out things, finding answers.
Bella depends on him a lot, and he worries a lot about her; so much, he was willing to put his plans on hold. Bella, wouldn't hear about it.
Jasper said a very important thing, he might not have won money, but he learnt quite a few interesting and important things. In the long run that's a bigger win.
Everyone enjoyed Emmett finding his match at the game, all but him. But he is a good man, who will return next time as happy as always.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3: Up In The Air
Oh a cliff hanger.
This going to kill me, but this is the last chapter I'm going to read tonight. Hopefully, more tomorrow. It was great and nice to get a glimpse into Edward's family life. Love that Rose is a bit loose, and with Jake of all people.
Thank you for the great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind reviews. I was looking forward to hearing your reaction to the next few chapters but you haven't been on in alomst a month, I hope you are well.
MOG
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: Theatre of the Mind
Another great chapter. I love the background. Despite it encompassing over three centruires there's just enough detail there to know what she was doing and who she met along the way to bring her here. I can't even say I'm sorry there was no Edward in this chapter. I'm thinking I can manage one more chapter before falling asleep.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night
I love the traditional lore. Let's face it without Edward there wouldn't be much of a draw to Twilight, and the sparkling in the sun would make anyone roll their eyes. If it was anyone but Edward who was taking off his shirt.
I literally stumbled upon this while going to check on my account, and I couldn't have beeen happier to find it. I'm on a bit of a fic lock down whenit comes to reading new stories but I think I'll have to make time, somewhere to read this.
I love the vampire Bella and innocent, awkward Edward. I'm very curious to see how their relationship progresses. As I'm writing this I'm actually just finding out that this has been rec'd all over the place. Apparently I'm a bit slow on the uptake, but reguardless I'm hooked now.
on to chapter 2...
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bliss
Beautifully written. I adore this story, finally a plot so unique compared to the seemingly redundant ff storylines. Thank you for sharing this brilliant adventure!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Pit
looking forward to listening to the music...you are a man of MANY talents MOG :D
Date: 31 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 5: Kiss
mmm that was a little showy...(just kidding) xx
Date: 31 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: Down In The Dumps
"Alice used it for love. Bella used hers for reading." What am I doing wrong...I use mine for sleeping :D
"He walloped himself in the face a few times while attempting to fasten his suspenders. He finally gave up, resigned to suffer saggy trousers." seems like my boys always have saggy trousers (I teach high schoolers) They all walk like penguins.
sometimes, I sign my name with angry jabs as well...
Date: 29 Mar 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Pit
It was amazing. The song itself was great, but with the work Bella, Laurent and the rest of the musicians put into it, they made it even greater. And most of them have no clue what inspired and who is behind that magnificent song.
Edward is being pulled to a whole new and amazing world. His knowledge of music is vast and it seems that at the Theater it will widen considerably.
Alice was sweet and has to be more than thrilled to see her friend so happy.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bliss
Bella's skills and powers are impressive. But with Edward, things seem to not work in the same way as with the rest of people. Why is that?
It was an amazing performance that, of course, captivated Carlisle and Esme profoundly. They are smitten with the woman that holds their son's heart, and much more.
Their time together was magnificent. All that Bella had heard off now could and was tried, thankfully for her, Edward is strong and was able to keep up with her.
However, his last words were a shock. A shock that I am certain will be explained next chapter.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 3: Up In The Air
Oh my gosh- when Edward is talking about what he would do if he got a lady up to his room...chocked on my breakfast a little, too funny. And this Edward is just too cute!
If the carriage is a rockin' don't come a knockin'...
"When he sat down at the bench the line of his shirt was like a snowy horizon filled with blissful possibilities." Dirty old women :D
"Although taking in Edward's appearance once more, he couldn't help but think that she was liable to break the thin lad in half." I LOVE that this is a strong Bella! Levitation...oooohhh
Date: 29 Mar 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 5: Kiss
Things did not go as expected or planned this evening. They were better than either one could have imagined them to be.
They both had regret, sorrow, sadness and questions. All were calmed with three little words that have begun to change their lives forever, literally in this case.
I loved that they went to the Eiffel Tower, what a romantic place to express love and speak with such honesty.
As elated as they both are, there are still many things to talk and figure out. But in this case, time isn't such a pressing issue.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 4: Down In The Dumps
I have to admit that what Bella wrote on her letter does seem impossible, but what type of explanation did Edward expect? What would the truth be for him?
His feelings and confusion are making things hard to grasp and understand.
It seems Jacob is skillful to say the least in charming those around him, both human and vampire. Jasper is a vampire, and one who works in a hospital, and who "controls" the vampire population. That's unique and interesting. I hope we find out more about him.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 3: Up In The Air
Edward has had a good life. He is loved by this family and had their support. They want to see him happy, and knowing he is meeting someone has made them happy.
He has always been quiet and shy and even naive. His mother has been there keeping an eye for her son. That's sweet and nice of her.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 2: Theatre of the Mind
it was good to know the background and past to Bella, Jacob and Alice. They are tight and unique group. They seem to do well in helping each other through the life they now lead. There's trust and understanding, and the certainty that they will be there for one another.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night
I've just began your story, which was recommended by eviekinz. I am liking it a lot. Yes, it's different to see Bella as the vampire and Edward as the naive victim, who somehow finds a way into her heart. She is pleased with her life and would have never considered to make some changes and adjustments.
I can't wait to see how things evolve...
Date: 29 Mar 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night
I totally dig the dynamic between Bella and Jacob,
I also really like the role reversal of BxE here
Author's Response:
Thank You for reading!
I look forward to hearing your reviews as you progress with the story.
MOG
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Pit
What an amazing chapter! Your description of the music is so moving and I can hear it in my head (it helps that I actually own the song and it is on my iPod);) Brilliant my dear! I also love the compromise our two young lovers came to. He will think about it. *sigh* I think this is truly the first time that I like Bella as much as I like Edward and your Jacob is simply divine which I can't even say about the original. YOU ROCK...quite literally babes!
Thanks for sharing, give my love to Jenn and I can not WAIT til next Saturday!
Author's Response:
BadLady,
I wasn't prepared for how happy I would be to see your review on TWCS. You really get around, my dear!
I'm glad you think the song worked.
I'm thinking about spreading the word to Team Jacob fans that he has a positive portrayal in Bella Voce. It has been nice to see people so receptive of him.
I can't wait until next Saturday either.
MOG
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bliss
Damn, now he's done it, update soon great chapter and thanks for the lemon ^^
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I'm glad you like citrus from a man.
MOG
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4: Down In The Dumps
Wow what a different story. Can't wait till The next installment. Meg
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 4: Down In The Dumps
Wonderful chapter and delicious little cliffie my friend! This is by far one of my very favorite versions of Jacob...oh, and Emmett! He's a doctor who creates more injury than he heals! Vampire Jasper working in the one place he shouldn't be able to is also humerous as well as curious.
I suppose it will be a bit before we see how Bella chooses to show our Edward that she is a vampire so I will just have to bide my time well. I do look forward to reading your first lemon my dear...whenever that may be *wink*.
Take care, tell Jenn "Hi", and thank you oh so much for sharing!
Ladyeire
Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: Down In The Dumps
This keeps getting better, can't wait for next chapter update soon ^^
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you think so, I wasn't sure if people would like the turns in chap 4.
MOG
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 3: Up In The Air
So, I'm going to post my review on all sites this story is on, just so that other people know the awesomeness of this story!!
Ok, so this review is very disjointed, I wrote it as I was reading it, cause it’s fun that way! I’ve used quotes and hope that people reading this have already read the chapter!!!! So…here we go!
“Water trickled down his stomach and became trapped in the dusting of fine hair on his lower abdomen.” Well now, if this isn’t a big tease!!! Thanks for the visual! Anything to do with Edward and no clothes will always be a hit, although I would like to note, that this is done in such a non-smutty way..Very classy Mr M!
Please to be thanking your lovely beta for this line: “He lay on top of his blankets letting the water dry on his hard body before crawling under the covers, naked.” ..and again with the nakedly ways of Edward…le sigh!
I’ve enjoyed the canon aspect of him being a romantic but lacking in confidence. Do you think that canon Edward is a lot like this? Lacking in confidence, or more tortured?
Interesting of Edward to believe he couldn’t actually initiate sex. Good thing Bella’s a vixen, I mean sexed up vampire then!
Such a dreamer: “Edward's last thought before finally drifting off to sleep was how he felt like he could achieve anything with Bella by his side” ..or is this the ‘pull’ that these two have for each other??
"I think it must have been windy as well because that coach was rocking back and forth for a while." Gigglesnort!! Wonder if she was nakedly getting aquainted with Jacob?!!!
I love Carlisle, sitting at the table reading his paper, while still listening in on the goings on in the kitchen. Such a “dad” thing to do!! And OOOmmaahhh…Daddy Carlisle rears his head! Naughty Rose!
Oh the sweet visual of Edward sitting at a piano, composing..yes yes I do like this, as much as the nakedly handsome Edward! Oh oh oh and you did SUSPENDER EDWARD..le-freakin-sigh…
Awww, love the excitement of him singing for her.
What would be better than Edward playing and singing piano for Bella? Doing it Nakedly!!!!
Whoa, Bella was nearly distracted by the straddle…I was definitely distracted! Visual anyone!??!!
And what a fine way to end the chapter! I didn’t predict that to happen, but thought it ties in very nicely with the ‘rescue’ aspect to the storyline. Am very very excited to see Edwards reaction in the next chapter!
Thanks for writing!!! Love ya stuff!
P.S Nakedly is totes a word! Hahahaa!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 3: Up In The Air
You did it again! This is a regular thing with you. I love your brand of humor because it's just right. Rose and Jacob getting it on in the carriage did have me laughing so hard I cried, not going to lie!
Thanks for sharing your vision and please pass that thanks on to Jenn, your lovely wife. I can't wait for the next update my friend. I am hooked and look forward to the remainder of the ride.
Author's Response:
I'm always excited when I see a review from you! thanks and I geve Jenn your praise as well.
MOG
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 2: Theatre of the Mind
The funny mixed with the sadness was a very pleasing combination. I loved the scene when Bella meets Jacob...classic! Mesmerized by the to and fro nearly made me hyperventilate!
Thank you for sharing...I'm off to read chapter 3, after which I will again review! So glad this was so thoroughly rec'd because it is incredible!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night
Bravo my dear man! First of all, I am so delighted to see a man writing a fic about our beloved characters. I already love the direction you are taking this in and the fact that Edward is the bumbling human rather than Bella. It makes him no less attractive.
You descriptions of the clothing, the singing, and Paris are beautiful. I am going to enjoy every last word of this I am sure.
Thanks for sharing and I am off to read the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: Up In The Air
Brilliance once again. Love the sibling rivalry between Rosalie and Edward. Absolutely loved the part when the lightbulb went on for Esme & Carlisle and they both yelled at the same time "Rosalie Lillian!". Laughed so hard.
Wow the ending of this chapter...didn't expect for that to happen. Guess I expected Edward to find out more about Bella further in the story. This will be interesting now on how the story will unfold.
Thank you for your dedication to this story. Look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I know you! We tweet all the time!
You are the only one who has reviewed on this site and you've reviewed all three chapters so thank YOU for YOUR dedication. I can't wait for you to read Chap 4.
MOG
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: Theatre of the Mind
Great history of the characters. I really liked the flashbacks throughout the story, it helped give more insight into the emotions involved with the current moments. Not much to say yet as we are still learning about the characters, but I can already tell that I am going to enjoy this story.
Regarding the discrepancies that you mention in your A/N: I personally will never point out discrepancies in any story because the stories are fiction and you, as an author, are at liberty to write whatever pleases you. I am here only to read in awe & enjoy the story.
You have definitely gained a reader for life (or until you stop writing) just from the two chapters that I have read so far. ;) Thank You!
Looking forward to chapter 3 & the possibilty of learning Edward's history next.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Night
You definitely have me intrigued. First story I have read that basically has the roles reversed. I rather like the idea that Bella is the stronger personality so far in this story. It will be a nice change of pace for me.
The other thing that I'm looking forward to is your story-telling. If your work is anything like SR's work in UoEM, then you will have a reader for life (or until you stop writing). ;)
Now on to the second chapter!