Date: 02 Sep 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved this!!! Start to finish you had my attention. Snarky Bella was fun to read. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 25 Jul 2017 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
That was so good, really enjoyed the characters especially Edward. Thank you
Date: 16 Jul 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Excellent fiction. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
cool little story ;) thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
I enjoyed EPOV.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
They've came a long way from their beginning.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
I loved this chapter.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
So glad you didn't drag that drama out. Leah is one fucked up bitch.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh fuck, the girl attracts trouble.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
What did Bella just do?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
What a frustrating situation.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think Bella will be wasting her time.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm assuming Creepy Guy is after Carlos because of his drug deals. Unfornately, Bella has caught his eye.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Holy hell.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm with Bella here, she needs to get outta Dodge, lol.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
What the everliving hell is going on.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was an incrediable moment for them to share. I hope he comes clean with Bella soon about what his secret is.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm wondering if Bella and Rosalie's assumptions/theories are gonna be true.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah, she should've told Rose what happened when the apartment caught fire. First fight is behind them now, I'm sure more will come.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is a dream come true. Leah's putting shit in Bella's head because I bet the bitch is crazy.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2015 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope Sam realizes how lucky he was to get away with his life. Here's hoping Bella's luck is changing. Surely things have to get better for her. Damn, what a first time for E/B.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
Very interesting indeed.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2015 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
What is up with Edward? Why were the guys acting so strange? Reading on to find out what's going on with them all and who the roses were from.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, I want more of this smooth motherfucker. He's gonna sweep Bella right off her feet. Don't blame Rose one bit for feeling the way she does about Emmett.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm enjoying this story. Reading as time permits.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2015 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Reading on...
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is a great tipper.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Who indeed?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bella sure has had a run of bad luck.
Sherry
Date: 07 Feb 2015 5:11 PM Title: HIGH STAKES
Great story and I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for posting it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 7:52 PM Title: HIGH STAKES
Wow, that's really exciting! I'm happy for you :D it also looks like it's going to be really good!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 24
Looooved this! I can't wait to see what these next chapters hold and to read some of your other stuff! :)
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
Haha, I knew it :) But all of the stereotypical pregnancy signs were there, so I'm not going to claim to be a genius.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter! I'm really sad now, because I'm sure this is ending in the next couple of chapters :( But that will give me the chance to read your other fan fictions :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Lol, I suspected it was her. I guess we'll find out for sure :)
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
I honestly feel like going to the cops, at this point, can only do more harm than good.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
For some reasonthe review box was all messed up on the last chapter, so I couldn't review, but I'm here now! :) Loved this chapter, and I especially love our couple! I had passing thoughts that it could be someone Bella worked with, but it wasn't really an option that I lingered on. I really thought it was CG, haha. Anyway, I can't wait for more of this story to unfold!
Date: 22 Jan 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
I...am so confused.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Okay...So my thoughts that Edward and his family are in a Mob or something are becoming more sure by the minute, but then I think that they're not. So I'm really not sure what to think :(
Date: 22 Jan 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Haha! OMG! The fact you reported your car stolen is awesome XD
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Looooved! Great lemon :D
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Okay...So I have a feeling something other than a "burst pipe" was wrong with Bella's car. I'm not sure if I just have amazing deduction skills, or it was super obvious. I have my guess pegged on that creepy guy with the cap that reminds me of James and was at the BIG C. I don't know, I guess everything will be revealed eventually :)
Date: 22 Jan 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! I am loving this so far :D For some reason I feel like Bella's "Secret Admirer" is someone other than Edward...I guess I'll find out :D Unfortunately I have a terrible sore throat, but fortunately your fanfiction is a great distraction ;)
Date: 18 Jan 2015 12:47 AM Title: HIGH STAKES
Congrats on your publishing. Loved the update. Bella is an old hat at dealing with those customers.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Two things:
AAA will actually fix your tire on the spot if it is repairable, so you don't have to use a donut or buy a new tire. Maybe somebody just let the air out orut a hole in it that could be fixed with sealing foam.
Most curling irons I have used have an automatic turn off switch, so Bella shouldn't beat herself up. She was not the cause of the fire.
So is the creep the guy she waited on the first night? Let's just call him "James". And is Esme actually jealous of Bella's light flirtation with Carlisle? Just wondering!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Such a sweet message! Okay, maybe with a slight undertone of creepy -- especially with the $500 tip -- but on the surface, very, VERY sweet!
Date: 03 Dec 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well damn. I was hoping that Bella would be harder to read and aloof in a cool way. Not bitchy. But not jealous. I hate jealousy. She was jealous about a man she doesnt know... Not cool! Be sexy and cold not insecure and weak.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Very cute ending :)
Date: 26 Sep 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ruh roh Scooby doo
Date: 26 Sep 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hmm someone's mighty protective :)
Date: 24 Sep 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Snap crackle pop! Why is Alice showing up loaded?!
Date: 24 Sep 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loving this story
Date: 23 Sep 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well at least they made up :)
Date: 23 Sep 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sexy times ;)
Date: 23 Sep 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome story so far! I love the interactions
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it! A fantastic story.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
GREAT STORY I HAVE LOVED EVERY MOMENT ABOUT IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !:)
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
I missed this so I had to visit it again. Still great.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
this was a great story good job
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can guess
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting start
Date: 07 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
So I waited until u finished and read this today...and it was great!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Excellent. I loved hearing a bit of Edward's side of things.
Date: 20 Oct 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great seeing those early scenes from E's point of view.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love your story......hope your ging to continue on Edwards side.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
AH i LOVED this!!! i loved it so much!!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
I loved this story. A little mystery, a little action, a little sexin'. A very tasty blend! Thank you.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
No, I did not have it all figured out! I thought CG and Chilly were cops, but I thought BELLA was the suspect for them. I thought Bella might be pregnant but wasn't sure. You had me going, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
My first guess was Leah. And I thought Creepy Guy was James. At least now I don't feel so stupid about overlooking Carlos!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Carlos?! Didn't guess that!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
It's gotta be Leah! But why?
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Don't think it's Aro--too much of a wuss.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Maybe Jake's a traitor, and it's him.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't be Sam--to obvious.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is taking this a LOT better than I would!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
What. The. Heck.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oooooh, this is gonna be so good.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
So Edward is mobbed up? That would throw things for a curve!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor, poor Rose!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
I don't know if we should trust Edward's motives. A car is just so much.
Date: 27 Aug 2013 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Arrrgh, Sam has bad breath? Why'd you go and have to put that in there, LOL?
Date: 27 Aug 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
*claps* Brilliant fic. Thanks so much for writing it! :)
Date: 25 Aug 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Maybe that fire wasn't started by the curling iron?
Date: 24 Aug 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow, this is getting good.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yes, please. Cream, three sugars. Of course I'd have coffee with him!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Who was the creepy guy in the bar? James?
Date: 23 Aug 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella's a "glass half full" kind of girl."
Date: 22 Aug 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Uh oh, what does Edward want for that 5oo bucks? I wonder?
And just who is Edward to the club? More than just a regular?
Date: 20 Aug 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Cute and funny. I don't think I would have taken the dive for the phone. Gloves or not...yuck.
Date: 20 Aug 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think I'm gonna like this! I came over here from FFn. Aren't they a pain in the ass?
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome story... Enjoyed your drama! Meg
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2013 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it. I'll miss these two. I'll be sure to watch for the next story. Tha is for writing and sharing.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
"But the girth, the width, the fucking circumference for you mathematicians—Jesus fucking Christ." - so funny I was giggle snort chortle laughing and almost shook my husband awake.
""Do that again," he demands. "Squeeze your pussy around my cock again so I know how it feels when you do it. So I know the difference between when I make you do it."" - so effing haaaaawt.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love it and sad that theylost the first baby.