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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

Looking forward for the next chapter

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it Happy New Year

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

R u done with this story? I hope not please update :)

Reviewer: Steph1597 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

Alexis and

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

They didn't always use protection... Is she going to end up pregnant?

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

Crazy!!!! Loving it though!!!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love it!!!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 18

Excellent ... Love the new perspective!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for giving us some Alexis and Rio time. They are really good for each other. I just have to ask a question. Their first time you mentioned that Rio put on a condom but after that it was never mentioned again. Did they have unprotected sex??? I was also just wondering because of the conversation that Rio's parents had about Rio's sister and the deadbeat dad of their grandchild. Thank you for sharing. 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

It's funny how some of her insecurities mirrored B's at that young of an age.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved the chapter. You have to love the excitement of young love. I hope they used protection more than just the first time. Alexis is not ready to be a mom and Edward would kill Mario, she was pregnant. She has to graduate and get married first. They have plenty of time for children.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Yes! I loved it....ahhhh those passionate Latin lovers!  Dayum!

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Very sweet, um I know they used a condom the first time, but not the other times. ...is Edward going to try to kill Rio???? I loved that Rio gave her space but also talked it out. Hope they'll have a long and happy life together

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thanks G. Great little chapter.  

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

Tender, sweet and beautiful.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved this Michele, thanks for giving us this insight.  I wonder if the lack of condom use will fit into the story with the pitter patter of tiny toes joining the Cullen clan in the form of a great grandbaby/grandbaby.  Love you and your stories as you plainly know without a doubt.  XOXO, Kasi~

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 18

Little Lexi is all grown up. Little bit sad, but wonderful.  XOXO, Cheri

 

 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

I really love when men make it special for the woman. Mario did good! Hard to believe as smart and as beautiful and from such a supportive family could have issues though. Hope they work through those quickly.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 18

Very sweet, innocent & vanilla. Thanks for that Insite. Does that mean Lexi will be the one kidnapped and then Rio to the rescue? Oh, and they forgot the condoms...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

Sweet chapter.  Mario seems like a real nice guy.   Glad they found each other.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 18

thank you for the update.I love it.....I don't know how they are going to servive

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

loved this

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved the chapter 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

Sorry this is so late hubs keeps stealing my laptop and I have gotten far behind. That man is evil and I hope his stooges get a conscience and stop him. Bella is such a good mommy and Edward seems like a fun dad.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

Awwwww! Dammit....that made me cry! I miss the Uncles too! I was just remembering all their crazy shenanigans!!!!!

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

I hope Darryl comes clean soon. I don't think Edward will back down on security back home, but I am worried about the kids at school.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

I keep hoping that Daryl will come clean. Guess I'll have to wait and see.

 

love the scenes with Edward and Bella and the kids.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

You make these characters so real. I find myself sad that the biggies are all heading out and away, I feel for Bella. Also afraid for the Mini's. You always keep us on our toes and I love you for it.  You also always leave me wanting more, the sign of a great writer. Thank you again and again. XOXO, Cheri

 

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad at least one of the crazies is having a change of heart!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

Larry is beyond crazy.  Sounds like he wants to go after max and the younger girls. Hope Darryl goes to Edward and they can come up with something to stop Larry.  You are an amazing writer. I so love all your stories. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

Patience is a virtue. Lol. We just love reading your work. Great chapter, got a nice mix of everyone?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow, the "Chief" is smarter than I gave him credit for. Planning other kidnapping in different areas. I hope that Daryl can help the Cullens to not lose their children. That would just be awful. I am glad that Bella's Master stepped in and took care of her needs. 

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

Hi Ginger,

after having finished the first story and now uip till here, I just HAVE to give you feedback on this amazing story!
Bella and Edward are just the perfect couple! And this is due to the fact that they are NOT perfect! They love each other (although I still believe that this kind of love and devotion does NOT exist in reality) and their family, which is the most important thing at all!
The family is crazy as it can be, but they do have a lot of fun and adventures never stop!

The obstacles in their lives can be helped with the solidarity of one true family and Esme and Carlisle have just achieved that!

The only thing that irritates me is that you keep telling us that everathing will be fine in the end. I mean it is okay to know that there will be a HEA, but I git the impression that by smoothing us you take some of the tension away! We know that something will happen, so just let it happen ;)
I still hope that Darryl will find an occasion to talk to Edward or Andy, this would help a lot! They can set him up without Larry knowing it! He should have a bit more trust in the Cullen men ;) Hopefully the family does not have to endure the drama of one ore several children missing! Bella would be moritiied! I don't think that she could really stand that... I mean she would, but afterwards it would take a lot to make her feel safe again!

So I am really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope it comes soon ;)

Oh and BTW: Found this story on the German fanfiktion.de, translated by Haifischbecken! I just had to look up the original and satisfy my hunger for more chapters ;)

Take care!

Bella89

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

Crazy Larry indeed. The chapter was worth the wait. I love the family you have created you can feel their love. Until next time. Mwah!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 17

i'm getting more and more nervous.....jeez i hope Darryl says something before its too late!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 17

I'm praying that Darryl has a change of heart & can figure a way out of his predicament.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved this chapter like always.  Thank you for sharing with us all.  XOXO, Kasi~

Reviewer: annah Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

I am not too happy with FF these days, so I am coming here to read and review.Larry, the "Chief", is really insane! Very scary. I hope Darryl makes some good choices about what to do. So, Nadia is gone. Huh. I thought she should have been immediately fired for coming on to Nick (or Jack?), and that a VERY thorough look into her 'background' would've been done right away.This was not an angsty chapter - makes me worry for future ones!Thanx for the update.annaharding

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

fantastic chapter

love your writing

well done

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hope Peter comes clwan with someone before a kid gets hurt

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved this

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am glad that Kathy was found ok. You are doing another amazing job writing this story. I love it all. You always leave me wanting more. Can not wait for your next update. 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

loved this story, cant wait to read more soon.... c you when you update..

Reviewer: Gran6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

Are you ever going to finish this?  Please don't leave us hanging!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

man oh man it is going to get real bad before it gets better. Poor Cullens, and family.

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

Ok, I'm glad that things are starting to happen. It was dragging for a bit there. Great update!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter. They have to get these idiots. The Cullen family and employees are smarter than these mental patients.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

Hate prejudiced cops.   Those girls are smart and brave.   Peter needs to just do the right thing.    Poor Nicholas. 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

Can't figure out why the girls were taken, and can't figure out which of the kids are next? You are good lady, at keeping us all guessing!  As usual can't wait to see where you take us.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 16

OH WOW...  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

**snarl**  **growl**  you stop there ... You can't stop there!!!

okay, happy that the girls are safe, but but but WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 16

Thank goodness the girls weren't harmed, physically, at least.

Was the event mentioned here, where B was involved with the paps running her off the road & there were casualties, writeen in this sequel? I only remember the episode from "people Loke Us", when B was followed by paps & the 3 children were young & one was a baby.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

great update ... I am seriously worried but I trust you, you know that.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

sounds  like  Peter  may be feeling kinda  remorseful...hmmmm.......?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 16

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

fantastic chapter

great story right from the beginning

love your writing well done

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

loving this

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

LOve the update, but I am confused . Bella tld the officers her name was Bella Swan. Did she stop using Cullen?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

I like that the girls were found unharmed but...and I get it was a distraction. But what is the plan? Prior to this chapter I thought they wanted one of the kids (dead) but now it sounds like they want them all.  

It also sounds like Peter is wavering. And, some of them think the chief is crazy and they don't trust him, so how does he have this power?  

I'm enjoying this story, thank you. My greedy self woukd like more chapters quicker.  

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love it! 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

thank goodness both girls are ok! please, whatever can go wrong with Larry's plan, let it go wrong!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

Such exciting drama!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hope they have this Nadia in lockdown. She can't get away and spread lies. I hope they can get some information out of her about Kathy. Erica is a smart girl. She will help the Cullens find her sister. 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

As always, I can't get enough of your writing and story. More please more more more!!!!!!

 

love the plot twist and hoping Erica is found soon so she doesn't have to suffer long ...and can help locate Kathy.

 

Did I mention I want more?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

I have hope that the girls will be found,

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great job.  Loved the transition from light to dark.  I don't understand how the taking Kathy is going to put Nick in a bad light though - his alibi is solid so is this a failure for the chief?  Plus, Erica is a huge string - smart girl.

Great job!!!!!~! loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

I thought it was perfect. The fade to black worked. I love lemons but sometimes the "thought" is more tittilating.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love it! Can't wait to see what devious fun you come up with next. :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you so much for the update............I love this  story just like the first one........Nicolas is smart like the Cullens.I prey they find Erica and Kathy..Find Peter and nadia and beat the mess out of them...The Chief should get his to....I'm sure the Cullens will prevail.........I'm liking lexi & Rio together

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

loved this

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 15

Tell you this everytime, but I LOVE this story!  Best thing I ever did was print out your first page pictures (especially the kids) and I pull it out with each new chapter it just helps keep them clear in my head.  You did such a wonderful job bringing each of these Cullen/Whitlock kids to life with your choice of pictures. OK, this chapter was hard for me. Nadia needs to go straight to He!!. I hated Nick being uncomfortable and down right scared.  Yes he isn't a kid, kid but a predator is stil a predator.  Love Lexi and Tiff, but of course like his father Jackson is my favorite.  He is just a carbon copy of his Dad, and God I love his Dad!  Till next time, thank you for sharing your talent with all of us E/B lovers that can't write their way out of a paper bag, as much as I wish I could! PS Really enjoyed the background with Josh & Lexi.   XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 15

grrr, i'm dying for this crazy diabolical plan to blow up in the chiefs face!!! i hope they find Kathy soon and Erica finds her way to safety

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loving Mario and Alexis.   Nadia needs to go down with the rest of the psychos. Nicholas is going to regret being a manwhore someday.   Oh Peter...I hope they cut your balls off for hurting Kathy.   Kathy was smart telling her sister to run.  Great preplanning.  Poor little Erica.  She is smart though.  

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved this chapter update, thanks for sharing with us all.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

OMGosh!!!!! As always......another GREAT chapter. You are an amazing writier. I can not believe that Kathy got kidnapped. I am so glad that Erica got away. Hopefully they will find Erica soon and they can get to Kathy also. Can not wait to find out what the Chief's plan is. Why take Kathy and Erica?? What has happened to Nadia???Where is she??? 

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Kathy. What happened to Nadia? I hope she got carted off to jail.

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ok, so that was exciting. I really can't wait to see if Erica finds help. Until next but not too long pls!

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter. I hope that they find the girls quickly and that Peter and that Nadia chick get found out

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

Fabulous.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter

need us some playroom time thou

you write it so well

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

Looking forward to the Lemons!  I love the tattoos!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I so love this E&B!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm ready for the drama...it won't be too bad will it...are you ok? You don't update as much...I hope all is well

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

That was an amazing update. Peter is so slimy that my computer is oozing. You are such an outstanding writer thank you for sharing your talent. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

I can't believe that creep had the nerve to show up and leer at Bella and the young girls. He knows Edward does not put up with that crap. At least he can be watched while he is at the compound. 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh oh oh! A chapter! I was so excited to see it that I had to stop to read it thru! Excellent as lays. You get better at writing with every chapter.

 

love the girls' antics and the drama on the beach.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Peter is just creepy.

I'm hoping Rio will be one of the hero's of the story. 

The girls spying was fabulously funny!!! I'm surprised threats of punishment weren't thrown at the girls. 

Missing d/s play but ready to get to the drama. 

 

 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

LOVED the part of the girls hanging over the balcony. I can sooooo see them all doing that. LOL!!!!!!!!

I am glad that Edward made Anderson and them tell all the women what was going on. Edward has got to putting on one hell of a performance if he is letting Peter that close to his family. Bella is probably going to kill Edward when she finds out that Peter has something to do with this whole thing. 

Glad that Mario has an extra incentive for keeping the Cullens/Whitlock kids safe. 

LOVING this story as usually. Hope you can up load pictures soon. I miss them. That was the 1st thing I did, I scroll down the whole chapter to see if there were pictures. lol. 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

that whole "mission impossible" sequence was hilarious...lol. i don't know how they'll all hold it together, to stomach that man while waiting to apprehend him will be the greatest act they'll ever have to pull off

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter! Anxious for whats going to happen with mr north-- i know they will get him good for messing with family

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 14

omg I lol'd with the dangly alice and Bella and Rose complaining about her weight. Glad the boys were finally honest though. Peter is awful and I am really nervous about what is going to happen soon.
great chapter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bad boys fro keeping secrets from the ladies.     Ugh Peter is so pathetic.   Hope he gets whats coming for him soon.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great update as always. Peter does seem to have lost it. How could the chief have recruited such a loose cannon and expect to be successful?  

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

I absolutly have loved reading all of the stories that u have written. This story has truely captivated & intriguied me so verry much. This story truely is an an amazingly wonderfully beautifully well written story!!! I am in awe of u. I wanted to thank you for all your hard work & dedication in writting this story & really all of ur stories, but especially this story & a people like us!! I espesially love long storie, which most definaly are my most favorie stories. Your stories are truely well developed in detailed plot & story development. PLEASE PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT SO LONG BETWEEN UPDATES PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSE!!!!! I am definatly giving this story a 10 star rating!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

As always just plain wonderful! Just started PLU for the 5th time. Yes I need a life! XOXO,Cheri

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