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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

loved this

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

loved this chapter girlie, looking forward to the next chapter and the drama to ensue... HUGS thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, that was a great chapter. It has been a while since we read one but this was good. Setting us up for the big moment!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hope all is well... Great chapter as always!!!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

Awe I've missed this story... I love it!

Reviewer: ruthieann53 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

Greetings from the gulf coast of Texas.  I have enjoyed this story so much.  I read People Like Us and just could not make myself shut my computer down.  I even forgot to make dinner one night and I must say my husband is a good one and didn't complain about the PB&J sandwhiches that I gave him.  These stories have just the right amount of everything.  I have laughed, cried, got upset and have just enjoyed them both so much.  Keep writing cuz you are good!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loveed it.... But I don't understand why Edward didn't react in anyway when he heard Daryl talking to Peter.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

 loved it.   we all understand about the  curveball  that life can throw at us.  take care

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

 so glad  Edward overheard  Darryl  talking... and awwwww  for  Jackson. I  hope  Bonnie  is  good.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2013 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

I feel so bad for Edward for having to keep this secret. He wants to be honest, but he is so scared for his family. They are so much more accepting of their children growing up than I am. At twenty, I would still not let my children have friends spend the night in their bed. They are still kids in my eye. I can see Edward's challenge with Rio. I can't believe Bella is so ok with the sexuality of her children. Just because they are teenagers, does not mean they are sexually active. It is almost like she is encouraging them to be active and wants them married off soon. 

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

It was worth the wait:)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for your apology. You have my respect for sharing it. Congratulations on your new job. I hope it's something you enjoy. Having raised three sons & a daughter, I completely understand your position. I will tell you, when you get to witness your child(ren) grow into independent, responsible adults, your heart feels like it could burst right out of your chest, negating any past ripples.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

Welcome back. The last two chapters were great. You are doing an amazing job with all the kids and new love and our favorite couples. I am so impressed that Edward didn't immediately beat White. Great job. 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 13

I tell you this after every update, but it is still true. You are my favorite author, by far.  Your ability to bring so much life to your characters is amazing.  How you do that with so many characters is is truly a gift.  Love all the kids, all the olders, all the parents.  Thank you for sharing your talent, no matter how long it takes.  As for this chapter, I think Edward is going to regret not tell Bella what is going on. Regardless of the reason a promise is a promise. I love angst, but I love these kids so much and I don't want anything to happen to them. OK yes I trust you to give us all our HEA, just a little nervous about the in between. See told you that you are a wonderful author!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update. I hope everything is going good for you in RL. I am glad that Bella and Edward had fun while out with everyone else and when they got back home. Also glad that Edward finally told the men. I am not sure how I feel about Edward keeping the information from Bella. On one hand I see not worring her about it till they find out more but he also promised her no more secrects. I hope that this does not set them back in their progress in their relationship. Loved the talked that Edward had with Jackson. It is funny that Edward told Jackson to make sure that Bonnie is back in her room at a descent hour but he would probably kill Rio if Edward found him in Alexis's room. He would not let him stay with Alexis I am sure. LOL!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

Best of luck with the new job! Great chapter.

Reviewer: mimi2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

I hope Rio doesn't get blamed for the shit that Nadia's going to cause :(

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh I've missed you and your story! It's like I'm part of the family ... Your writing is that excellent!

 

i do hope things continue to be calm on the home front. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

Jackson is so lucky to have such broad minded parents.

Edward is right about Darryl, they need to keep him onside to get to the bottom of this threat.  He's going to be devastated when he finds out about Peter's betrayal.

Great story.

Reviewer: wylie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for continuing to share your story - I truly enjoy your writing!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

I'm happy to see the whole family coming together and stepping up where its needed.....I hope Anderson and Brian can get more info and stop any tradigies from happening. Glad to hear your RL is settling down. Wishing you calm and peace at home :) stay strong!

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

Good to see you back and thank-you for a great chapter. I missed these guys.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh waiting is so, so hard. But, definitely worth it. Another fine chapter. 

Hope all is well w/ your family. Kids r tough. The bigger they get, the bigger their problems get. But, in the end...it's worth it.

Hpoe the next chapter is soon.

 

 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

You used a line in this story that I have thought for a while. "Why can't this ever be easy?" It seems they have more drama then your average famous family with 7 kids lol. It just keeps me coming back for more.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great update....anxious to see how it all unfolds

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: cassie616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter, sooo worth the wait ;-) 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved the chapter!   Not  sure if the new job was a good or a painful thing for you, but in any case, here's hoping its a positive phase of work growth!    As for your "Child"  thoughts and prayers for brighter positive days ahead!  

 

Loved the chapter and the progress of the story!   Till next time all the warmest of thoughts to you and yours! 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter

well done

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful as always and I am looking forward to more Michele, when you have the time!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

excellent as always. a little play time and e remembersed to talk to the menfolk.   think him not telling b is a bad idea though

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

looking forward to more

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

That was amazing :)  I loved it!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

Excellent job.  Glad E overheard that conversation.  Hope he remembers to talk to Em about it.   Alexis seems like a great kid.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

I can't believe these children are already finding soulmates. They are just babies. I am with Edward. They are only 20 and still in school. I hope they plan on dating a long time before getting engaged. They have a lot of schooling ahead of them. Plus they are just starting to find out who they are as people. They have a lot of growing up still to do. I am so scared for the children. I hope Edward and Emmett can find out what is going on before the crazy men set their plan in motion. I hope Darryl goes to them with his fears and knowledge. They will protect him, if he is honest and helps them spoil the plan. 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

Excellent. What are you cooking up for Jackson?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Busy chapter but a lot of info to process.

I hope by Edward waiting until the next day to talk to Emmett that nothing bad occurs in between tonight & tomorrow.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 11

G. Great job. Totally worth every word. Ok the ceremony was beautiful but then I was impressed with all of the love Edwards and Bella's children had towards each other. Now Jasper's child is a total drama queen and I am not a big fan yet. I still remember how selfish Alice can be. 

 

As far as the badgiys I need to o back and figure out why Peter is so against Edward. Great job with the set up. 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

oh Edward, I am thinking you shouldn't have kept that little tidbit to yourself! I love how close the kids are with each other and can talk about anything.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

Edward is showing his true colors again.  He should have gone to Emmett right away with his suspicions.  He is going to getting himself into more trouble.  I'm glad Lexi and Jack can get along well enough...their party sounds kind of cool.  Thanks for the update of the crazies coming...sounds like things are going to get totally crazy soon! I was getting a little confused so thank you for clearing my path.  Great update...thank you.

Reviewer: Prillylove25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it. The back story at the beginning helped. Great update. 

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 12

great chapter as usual well done...

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

Sweet, hawt and beautiful relationships.  Just perfect!  XOXO, Cheri

Wish you would post the picture of Edward holding Jackson and Lexi as newborns, one on each arm.  Was the best pic you ever posted and I miss seeing it. No pictures showing now on PLU. I checked. Please...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

thx for the explanation about Larry, i was trying to make sense of it but didn't want to look like an ass if everyone had figured it out and not me...lol *sighs* oh Edward, you and your temper....better reign it in when it comes to Alexis, i heard it's pretty lonely on the couch......how soon till Larry and Peter make a move (and please tell me it will be foiled) So Bonnie is cool right, not working for anyone???????

Reviewer: wylie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the continuing story -very enjoyable!

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

LOVE IT

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

Pretty light chapter but I think sets up a lot that is to come. I just hope all the Cullen's come out safe. 

Glad to see Jack met someone, just hope they both finish school.

Hope the next chapt is up soon.

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

LOVED IT!!!!!!!! Thanks for  explaining Larry. The first of this chapter clear up a lot of things. I can not believe that Edward sat there for 2 hours. I just knew that he would go to Emmett or Andy right off the bat. I am so glad that Edward over heard that phone conversation. Loved Carlisle's little talk with the kids. lol. So glad that Jackson has found someone. Loving this whole story. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 12

I loved this chapter Michele and I am so looking ofrward to Edward going to Emmett, I was rather shocked that he didn't already.  I hope they are able to help Daryl, he doesn;t seem that bad afterall

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) loved this

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 12

Excellent chapter. The strands of the storyline are really coming together.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved hearing about the "kids" story development.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: hilndgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

OMG! Found this sequel a couple of days ago. Loved the original and love this as much if not more as I finished it this evening. It's amazing how people with addiction issues always want to blame others. Looking forward to the next chapter. I have my own ideas about how a couple of things may play out.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

So not what I thought would've become of Peter. I'm sure it'll bite him in the ass. I hope none of the children (Max) gets hurt.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

Just caught up with the story and it is truely amazing. I am surprised that Anderson let a few of the bad guys slip through. Thank you for sharing. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

Because you used the word "tribe" I am stuck with jacob's tribe is out to destroy them. Loving the sequel. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh wow, that was amazing :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 11

It's starting to come together! I just hope Darryl gets smart and comes clean...don't hurt any of the kids :( I trust in a HEA!!!

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love it

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

Teary eyed over the beautiful ceramony. Amazed by Shania and Michael. In love with Charlie and Calisle. Edward and Bella...just perfect.  Loved the renewal dress, fantastic, sexy and classy.  Can't tell you enough how excited I get when I see your updates.  You spin one hell of a story, lady and I thank you for it!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: smith052293 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 11

I tried to pm you but says its disabled..story so far is great!!! I do have a question though I am going to back and re-read the first one because I can't think who the heck is Peter???

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter. Love the images that you included. I want that cake! Great moments between the children, and the children and Edward. 

 

Frowning at Peter and hoping this all has a HEA ... I know you'll take care of us!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

aw wow, the people really have it out for them and they have no clue. The ceremony was beautiful and that little dress was so damn adorable I think when my daughter gets married I am going to suggest it. Prob be in purple though lol. That cake would be perfect for my family too! Great chapter and I hate the drama thats coming.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

Now we know who is behind all the mystery but WHY???? What is the reason behind the revenge? From what I can tell all Edward and Bella have done is help Peter. What is the deal with Larry? Why does he want revenge?? LOVED the wedding!!!!!!! Everything was perfect!!!!!! Loved how Jackson took care of Andrea. Glad that Edward did not blow up at Rio. He handled that very well. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 11

Jack is a good kid.   Daryll needs to come clean and soon.     Ugh Peter is pathetic, but drugs will do that to you.  

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 11

beautiful renewal ceremony!!! omg, Peter an chief Black are pretty sick individuals. i hope Daryl can screw up their plans enough.....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

Mercy this was so good!   TY for the chapter abd do I ever LOVE all your photos! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

lookingg forward to more 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

That was beautiful... the renewal, Edwards talk with Lexi and jack coming to Andreas rescue.   

Thus will definitely be a scary ride. I just hope all come out intact.  I can see some heros in the making. 

I would have loved more D/S between E & B but I imagine that will come in time and there was certainly more to the story that needed to be told.

Eager already for more. :)

 

 

 

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

great update Michele as always love this story hard core and look forward to more.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) loved this

Reviewer: Prillylove25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow!  Peter too!  Damn this is getting good!!!!!  Great update. 

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

What a great chapter I loved all the family bonding time! Poor Edward his Lexi is growing up on him! ;)



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review, honey. I think that all daddys have a problem with this! I know that mothers and sons have a 'thing' too, so you can just imagine what Alice, Rose and Bella are going to be like!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

So excited to see a chapter. I keep falling in love with your characters and story over and over again. Love especially the talks between Edward/Bella and the kids. Eager eager for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words - I'm afraid that RL (real life sucks!) is catching up with me a little bit - but don't worry, I'm writing like a demon when I can!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved this chapter. I am glad that Edward talked to all of his boys and got most things worked out. I loved loved LOVED how Bella handled Edward!!!!!!! That was perfect!!!!!!!!!! Glad that Bella talked to Alexis. I just hope that Rio is not in on the revenge thing. I hope he will prove that he is worthy of Alexis. Can't wait for the next update. LOVE this story. 



Author's Response:

You are such a sweetheart for your encouraging review! And don't worry, I would personally beat the living SHIT out of Mario/Rio if he is a baddie!!! xoxo

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

I don't blame Edward. I have an 18 year old daughter and I would hate if she dated a 29year old man. I know my husband would be having some serious talks with this man about his intentions with his little girl. 18 does not mean grown woman. You can't even buy alcohol at that age. You are not a full adult in the United Stated until you are 21 and you can be on your parents insurance until 26. Edward better do some talking to both sides. He at least has Emmett's employee background checks. There is something fishy going on and no one is above suspicion. He is new on the job.



Author's Response:

Aaahhh - you are such a suspicious little fish, arent' you, sonogal?  Clever little minx - but even though Edward will be having some very serious conversations with both of them - Rio is a good guy, so I hope that this puts your mind at ease. As for the stuff that's going on, well, all will be revealed soon (at least to you readers - the characters will still be in the dark for a while!).

 

Thanks so much for your review xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

Killer chapter! 



Author's Response:

thank you darling xoxo

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

That was a great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading xoxo

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jane3105 xoxo

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

:)



Author's Response:

thanks, honey

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love the story. It keeps getting better and better. Look g forward to the next chapter and the rest of the story.



Author's Response:

You are too kind, aussieKayz! Thank you for your review xoxo

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

Can't ever tell you enough how much I love your portral of family.  This story just makes you smile like an idiot and you don't care.  Also love how many wonderful and exciting sequels that may be in the future with these children. So many stories, so many worlds to explore. Don't usually like sequels where E/B are older (don't like to think of them that way) but this story, you just love the kids so much... Wonderful story, thank you for sharing your amazing talent!  Now on to the WEDDING!!!!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

You are so funny, cjrich - and much too kind with your flattering words! I appreciate your review and please know that I'm writing as fast as possible to bring you the next 'instalment' -

Hugs,

justginger

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

except for the little fact that someone is out to get them, its seems our favorite family is finally getting their shit together!!! woo hoo. Love how honest they are with each other.

Author's Response:

I love how you just 'cut to the chase', vickic, you are the best! Thanks for the review, hon.

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love it as usual. Awesome job!! 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

great conversations all around. We'll see haw Edward handles the Rio situation next chapter i guess...... I'm just surprised they didn't have any security this trip considering what's going on......

Author's Response:

the security was 'lurking' in the background, babe - sorry I should have put that in there.  Next chapter up in the next few days - just waiting to get it back. xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

SO amazing :)  I really loved it!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love when i find it updated! Great way to spend a Sunday night. :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10

Sweets - great chapter.  The father son talks were done so well and the mother daughter heart to heart were kind of special.  And your little lemon was perfect.  Thank you for this chapter without the looming darkness.  It was nice to see the family heal a bit. 



Author's Response:

thank you for your awesome review, honey. xoxo

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter.  The kids are all great. So, I think Lexi missed out learning about Charlie  & Renee. And Bella didn't connect with the girls about Max. Maybe I'm getting ahead of myself. The girls still need their bracelet/GPS. It seems Edward had more in depth conversations with the kids than Bella.

Ok, I sound like I'm Bella bashing, sorry. I love her character.

 

I loved the last sceen with Edward dominating her in the tent. Nicely done and just what Bella needed. 

Ready for the wedding.  And, I hope Rio saves Lexi when the time comes. 

 

Thanks for sharing your amazing talent!!!

 

 

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

This aamzingly well written story is truely captivating & intriging!!! I truely look forward to each & every update always impatiently waiting for the next chapter update. Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication u put into writting this story. Your an amazingly talented writer & I definatly rate this story as a 10 out of 10!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

Glad the kids are all up to date on the basics of whats going on so they can watch out for each other, esp Max.

 

Yummy End!!!



Author's Response:

thanks for your review, as always my sweet friend.

xoxo

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

Kids. Got to love em. I loved how you wrote how fierce their love is so that the kids could tell by watching. E&B are good role models for their kids. We all have rough spots in life but I don't think many of are as lucky to be in such a fierce passionate love.  It's good god the kids to see the good with the bad...it's reality. 

Ok, now I want to know more about the guy with the vendetta. I take it it was the therapist Bella saw for her PPD.

Eager for more.

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good security team, they were great w/ the little pne. Glad Max has his bracelet.

Fabius to see our Dominant back and w/ very appropriate changes. Still yummy!!

thanks for sharing your talent 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love the tats. Very nice touch. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Catching up. Lost you out of my favorites fur a while. 

Not really cause I get to read 4 chapters in a row.  Yeah!

anyway, I love this story and want to see E&B make it back to each other.  And, we have to get the bad guy and save pre opus Max.

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

soooo does nadia or whatever the hell her name is have to deal with the guy who was impersoninating doctors and whatever did happen to that guy. or does nadia have to do with jacob or something???? hopefully nothing bad is going to happen!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter, but I have a question. At the top the  chapter you state that Nicholas is 18 and is starting Stanford working on an MBA. Is he a genius and started college young and got a BBA or other type of Bachelor's Degree while his siblings were in high school. You can't get an MBA or even work toward's one until you finish an undergrad degree. His older siblings are working on Bachelor's Degrees. This just confused me.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm trying to figure out exactly who this "Chief" may be. My 1st. thought was Billy Black but that just doesn't seem right. I'm going with a relative of Jacob's that would've taken on the role of Chief.

I had a feeling one or more of B & E's children would be interested in their lifestyle. Not because I think it's hereditary but because the children learn from observation & implementing what they know & have grown up with. It's a good thing that they've had a healthy & knowledgable upbringing. 

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