Reviews For The Beautiful Swan
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Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 6:41 AM Title: preview
Date: 03 Jan 2013 6:41 AM Title: preview
i like the story alot but you should get a beta.
Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:24 PM Title: My Name Is Bella
Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:24 PM Title: My Name Is Bella
Extremely confusing. You didn't use quotations, so I'm assuming Annie is an alter ego? But then she talks later? And if a different person speaks, you should start a new paragraph, very confusing. Perhaps look for a beta to clear some things up.
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