Date: 22 Jan 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love it!!! Bella just had to interfere, but it has led to some very good questions and will lead to some even better drama! I was glad to see Emmett, if only in a memory, as it brings more insight into Bella's life growing up with a protective elder brother. And how you had Bella show up was a nice touch, especially with how she vanished after telling Watson that she was glad that Holmes had a friend like him. You really are doing an amazing job, so keep it up!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
You may have made him OOC, but I can still see enough of the original character from the film that I don't notice as much. I'm not sure if that sounds bad...but it was meant as a compliment. I really do love this story, although I have to wonder where Emmett is in all of this. You mentioned him as her brother, if I remmeber correctly in an earlier chapter, but that is it. Other than that, superb :)
Thank you so much for the reviews, it means a lot. I know holmes is a little if not too much OOC, but i am still trying to capture him. Hopefully with much practise I will get him right.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Even more development! I love the idea of Bella being the one who helps Holmes control his "curse" and how you've brought in James and Victoria is brilliant. You really are doing a fine job, and although I noticed one or two erros--don't quite remember where--they in no way hindered my reading :)
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm rather new to this site, but I thought I would branch out from Fanfic.net and see what else was out there. I'm quite glad that I have. I really like the concept you have going here and love the idea of a Robert Downey Jr. Holmes crossover with Twilight. You are doing very well thus far, and I cannot wait to discover more about this story :)