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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 10:58 PM Title: OUTTAKE

Loved it 

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it 

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it 

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 17 Sep 2022 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 3:23 PM Title: OUTTAKE

thanks so much for sharing this AWESOME!!! little story ;) i thought they were going to have another child though ;D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:05 AM Title: OUTTAKE

LOL!!!!!!!!! I can not believe that Edward and the guys followed Carly and her date to the movies.  Lol.

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Date: 15 Nov 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Lol!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 9

Well, Rose was a bitch to Bella.  I thought Bella handled it well because I probably would have went off on her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 8

Lol!!!!!!!! That is all I can say about this chapter.  Lol!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward may need his wife but his kids need a spanking,  big time.

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Date: 15 Nov 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 6

Glad they got some time away 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

Edward is really moody. Does he have  PMS much. Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love how realistic your story is. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

OMGosh! Emmett and Rose 's twin are little devils. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

Those 3 are too funny.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Jasper story is hilarious.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:31 PM Title: OUTTAKE

Team Edward!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 10:00 AM Title: OUTTAKE

:) 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 10

Cute! Thanks for sharing your story! How about a spin-off for Emmett?



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

loved this



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Date: 15 Sep 2013 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

loved this - so annoyed at Rose and Emmett though for almost ruining it for the kids



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“So how’s the divorce moving along?” Jasper asked Emmett.
 
Emmett sighed in disappointment. It had been a hard year for him, after our family getaway at the zoo last year, Emmett and Rose had a major talk. He found out that there had been many “meetings” with one of her colleagues, Royce King. She even shared that he had kissed her, but it meant nothing. When Emmett asked if she still talked to him, she admitted that she was very close to him, but she promised nothing romantic would ever happen again. However, a couple months down the road, Emmett came to surprise Rose with a romantic dinner and found Rose and Royce in a rather indecent position. Emmett was still taking care of the twins; Rosalie saw them on the weekends.
 
“It’s moving along slowly. But I am telling you both, it is hard as fuck, being a single parent. Rose barely even talks to the kids. She’s always traveling with that son of a bitch or working. Has she even spoken to Bella or Alice?”
 
“She called Alice once a couple weeks ago about a dress design she wanted for a work function, but that’s about it.” Jasper shrugged.
 
“Bella hasn’t heard a thing from her.”
 
“Man, my life sucks. I’m a thirty-one year-old divorcee with two kids. I work at the fucking McDonald’s, who would want that in a life partner.” He groaned. 

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Nice chapter. Just very short



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“So how’s the divorce moving along?” Jasper asked Emmett.
 
Emmett sighed in disappointment. It had been a hard year for him, after our family getaway at the zoo last year, Emmett and Rose had a major talk. He found out that there had been many “meetings” with one of her colleagues, Royce King. She even shared that he had kissed her, but it meant nothing. When Emmett asked if she still talked to him, she admitted that she was very close to him, but she promised nothing romantic would ever happen again. However, a couple months down the road, Emmett came to surprise Rose with a romantic dinner and found Rose and Royce in a rather indecent position. Emmett was still taking care of the twins; Rosalie saw them on the weekends.
 
“It’s moving along slowly. But I am telling you both, it is hard as fuck, being a single parent. Rose barely even talks to the kids. She’s always traveling with that son of a bitch or working. Has she even spoken to Bella or Alice?”
 
“She called Alice once a couple weeks ago about a dress design she wanted for a work function, but that’s about it.” Jasper shrugged.
 
“Bella hasn’t heard a thing from her.”
 
“Man, my life sucks. I’m a thirty-one year-old divorcee with two kids. I work at the fucking McDonald’s, who would want that in a life partner.” He groaned. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

Art imitates life: vacations with friends can be brutal!



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“So how’s the divorce moving along?” Jasper asked Emmett.
 
Emmett sighed in disappointment. It had been a hard year for him, after our family getaway at the zoo last year, Emmett and Rose had a major talk. He found out that there had been many “meetings” with one of her colleagues, Royce King. She even shared that he had kissed her, but it meant nothing. When Emmett asked if she still talked to him, she admitted that she was very close to him, but she promised nothing romantic would ever happen again. However, a couple months down the road, Emmett came to surprise Rose with a romantic dinner and found Rose and Royce in a rather indecent position. Emmett was still taking care of the twins; Rosalie saw them on the weekends.
 
“It’s moving along slowly. But I am telling you both, it is hard as fuck, being a single parent. Rose barely even talks to the kids. She’s always traveling with that son of a bitch or working. Has she even spoken to Bella or Alice?”
 
“She called Alice once a couple weeks ago about a dress design she wanted for a work function, but that’s about it.” Jasper shrugged.
 
“Bella hasn’t heard a thing from her.”
 
“Man, my life sucks. I’m a thirty-one year-old divorcee with two kids. I work at the fucking McDonald’s, who would want that in a life partner.” He groaned. 

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

I've always said to my husband that they gossip worst than women sometimes!  Edward totally needs to focus on his family and his drama...not the others and their drama!  Can't wait to see what your going to do for us on the final chapter, but what ever you choose, we will love it!



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“So how’s the divorce moving along?” Jasper asked Emmett.
 
Emmett sighed in disappointment. It had been a hard year for him, after our family getaway at the zoo last year, Emmett and Rose had a major talk. He found out that there had been many “meetings” with one of her colleagues, Royce King. She even shared that he had kissed her, but it meant nothing. When Emmett asked if she still talked to him, she admitted that she was very close to him, but she promised nothing romantic would ever happen again. However, a couple months down the road, Emmett came to surprise Rose with a romantic dinner and found Rose and Royce in a rather indecent position. Emmett was still taking care of the twins; Rosalie saw them on the weekends.
 
“It’s moving along slowly. But I am telling you both, it is hard as fuck, being a single parent. Rose barely even talks to the kids. She’s always traveling with that son of a bitch or working. Has she even spoken to Bella or Alice?”
 
“She called Alice once a couple weeks ago about a dress design she wanted for a work function, but that’s about it.” Jasper shrugged.
 
“Bella hasn’t heard a thing from her.”
 
“Man, my life sucks. I’m a thirty-one year-old divorcee with two kids. I work at the fucking McDonald’s, who would want that in a life partner.” He groaned. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

:) loved this



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“Rose sent me a text that they will meet us at the zoo. Her and Emmett were having a little fight about one of her co-workers,” Bella said in a low voice so our children wouldn’t hear.
 
“I hope everything is okay,” I told her.
 
 “Me, too.”
 
Alice and Jasper joined us with James a couple minutes later. Jasper nodded his head for me to join him to get food. So I grabbed my empty glass and asked Bella if she needed anything before heading over to the counter with Jasper.
 
“What’s going on?” I asked him.
 
“Emmett, found a text from the Royce guy this morning on Rose’s phone. They’ve been yelling at each other all morning. She keeps saying he is just a collegue, but it’s not sounding to good, man,” Jasper explained.
 
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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

looking forward to more 



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“Rose sent me a text that they will meet us at the zoo. Her and Emmett were having a little fight about one of her co-workers,” Bella said in a low voice so our children wouldn’t hear.
 
“I hope everything is okay,” I told her.
 
 “Me, too.”
 
Alice and Jasper joined us with James a couple minutes later. Jasper nodded his head for me to join him to get food. So I grabbed my empty glass and asked Bella if she needed anything before heading over to the counter with Jasper.
 
“What’s going on?” I asked him.
 
“Emmett, found a text from the Royce guy this morning on Rose’s phone. They’ve been yelling at each other all morning. She keeps saying he is just a collegue, but it’s not sounding to good, man,” Jasper explained.
 
See you in two weeks!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

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“Daddy, point your toes!” Carlie cried.

“Carlie, can’t you wait until your mother gets home to help you with this?” I asked.

“No, I need to practice, now! My recital is in a couple of weeks!” she exclaimed.

“Okay, but do I really need to be wearing this?” I asked, pointing to the tight fitting pink tutu.

“Yes,” she replied.

I inwardly groaned and picked up the book I had recently purchased Dancing for Dummies. I could not believe my eleven year-old daughter had forced me into doing this.

“Tendu…Plié…Tendu…” she repeated.

I kept flipping the pages trying to figure out what the fuck she was talking about.

“Daddy! You’re doing it wrong!” she declared and stomped her feet.

“I’m trying to help, but this is like a fu-fudgen foreign language!” I yelled.

Her green eyes held so much frustration in them. She screamed before stomping up the stairs and hissing under breath.

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Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

Tell Edward Crisco is the best thing to get gum out of little girl's hair. Peanut butter will work, but that's nasty in hair. lol He needs another vacation! Thanks for the new chapter.



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“Daddy, point your toes!” Carlie cried.

“Carlie, can’t you wait until your mother gets home to help you with this?” I asked.

“No, I need to practice, now! My recital is in a couple of weeks!” she exclaimed.

“Okay, but do I really need to be wearing this?” I asked, pointing to the tight fitting pink tutu.

“Yes,” she replied.

I inwardly groaned and picked up the book I had recently purchased Dancing for Dummies. I could not believe my eleven year-old daughter had forced me into doing this.

“Tendu…Plié…Tendu…” she repeated.

I kept flipping the pages trying to figure out what the fuck she was talking about.

“Daddy! You’re doing it wrong!” she declared and stomped her feet.

“I’m trying to help, but this is like a fu-fudgen foreign language!” I yelled.

Her green eyes held so much frustration in them. She screamed before stomping up the stairs and hissing under breath.

See you in two weeks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) loved this



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“Daddy, point your toes!” Carlie cried.

“Carlie, can’t you wait until your mother gets home to help you with this?” I asked.

“No, I need to practice, now! My recital is in a couple of weeks!” she exclaimed.

“Okay, but do I really need to be wearing this?” I asked, pointing to the tight fitting pink tutu.

“Yes,” she replied.

I inwardly groaned and picked up the book I had recently purchased Dancing for Dummies. I could not believe my eleven year-old daughter had forced me into doing this.

“Tendu…Plié…Tendu…” she repeated.

I kept flipping the pages trying to figure out what the fuck she was talking about.

“Daddy! You’re doing it wrong!” she declared and stomped her feet.

“I’m trying to help, but this is like a fu-fudgen foreign language!” I yelled.

Her green eyes held so much frustration in them. She screamed before stomping up the stairs and hissing under breath.

See you in two weeks :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

:) loved this



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The guys and I decided to visit the park, so I could tire Lizzie out. I still had to go grocery shopping and do a shit load of laundry at home.

“So, did you and the missus rekindle the intimacy?” Emmett wiggled his eyebrows.

“Jeeze Em, might as well ask him if they had wild and crazy sex?” Jasper laughed.

I looked over at Lizzie who was now playing with her doll before answering. “We were alone for a whole week without kids, what do you think?”

“Hey man! Rosie and I haven’t had sex in quite some time. She always tells me that I have to call her assistant and pencil her in! Who the fuck has to schedule sex with their spouse! Oh that’s right, me,” Emmett complained.

I felt bad for my friend. Two key things men loved more than anything were sex and food.

“Dude, you have to call and schedule an appointment?” Jasper slapped his hand against his thigh as he laughed.

“Oh yeah! Laugh it up, fucker!” Emmett pouted.

See you in two weeks!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for the update! I like this couple.



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The guys and I decided to visit the park, so I could tire Lizzie out. I still had to go grocery shopping and do a shit load of laundry at home.

“So, did you and the missus rekindle the intimacy?” Emmett wiggled his eyebrows.

“Jeeze Em, might as well ask him if they had wild and crazy sex?” Jasper laughed.

I looked over at Lizzie who was now playing with her doll before answering. “We were alone for a whole week without kids, what do you think?”

“Hey man! Rosie and I haven’t had sex in quite some time. She always tells me that I have to call her assistant and pencil her in! Who the fuck has to schedule sex with their spouse! Oh that’s right, me,” Emmett complained.

I felt bad for my friend. Two key things men loved more than anything were sex and food.

“Dude, you have to call and schedule an appointment?” Jasper slapped his hand against his thigh as he laughed.

“Oh yeah! Laugh it up, fucker!” Emmett pouted.

See you in two weeks!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love these two together.  Compared to the other couples, they are awesome!  I hope all is well when they get home...thanks for the update, love this story!



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The guys and I decided to visit the park, so I could tire Lizzie out. I still had to go grocery shopping and do a shit load of laundry at home.

“So, did you and the missus rekindle the intimacy?” Emmett wiggled his eyebrows.

“Jeeze Em, might as well ask him if they had wild and crazy sex?” Jasper laughed.

I looked over at Lizzie who was now playing with her doll before answering. “We were alone for a whole week without kids, what do you think?”

“Hey man! Rosie and I haven’t had sex in quite some time. She always tells me that I have to call her assistant and pencil her in! Who the fuck has to schedule sex with their spouse! Oh that’s right, me,” Emmett complained.

I felt bad for my friend. Two key things men loved more than anything were sex and food.

“Dude, you have to call and schedule an appointment?” Jasper slapped his hand against his thigh as he laughed.

“Oh yeah! Laugh it up, fucker!” Emmett pouted.

See you in two weeks!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

looking forward to more 



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The guys and I decided to visit the park, so I could tire Lizzie out. I still had to go grocery shopping and do a shit load of laundry at home.

“So, did you and the missus rekindle the intimacy?” Emmett wiggled his eyebrows.

“Jeeze Em, might as well ask him if they had wild and crazy sex?” Jasper laughed.

I looked over at Lizzie who was now playing with her doll before answering. “We were alone for a whole week without kids, what do you think?”

“Hey man! Rosie and I haven’t had sex in quite some time. She always tells me that I have to call her assistant and pencil her in! Who the fuck has to schedule sex with their spouse! Oh that’s right, me,” Emmett complained.

I felt bad for my friend. Two key things men loved more than anything were sex and food.

“Dude, you have to call and schedule an appointment?” Jasper slapped his hand against his thigh as he laughed.

“Oh yeah! Laugh it up, fucker!” Emmett pouted.

See you in two weeks!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! I get anxious like Edward whenever we have to get ready to go somewhere. I literally have nightmares about getting to the airport late or forgetting our tickets.



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“Are you sure we have to go back tomorrow?” I asked.

“Yes, we have children that we both miss deeply and I have a job to get back to,” she replied as she dropped the beach bag on the floor.

I did miss my children, but I really enjoyed my time alone with Bella. Who knew when we would next be able to spend longer than an hour together? Once we got back she needed to finish her book tour and the filming. These next couple of weeks were going to be hell.

“Come with me, lover boy,” Bella said seductively.

My grin widened as she slowly peeled off her bikini as she led me over into the bathroom. She turned on the warm water in the shower and helped me out of my trunks. I quickly picked her up before bringing her into the shower.

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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 5

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“Are you sure we have to go back tomorrow?” I asked.

“Yes, we have children that we both miss deeply and I have a job to get back to,” she replied as she dropped the beach bag on the floor.

I did miss my children, but I really enjoyed my time alone with Bella. Who knew when we would next be able to spend longer than an hour together? Once we got back she needed to finish her book tour and the filming. These next couple of weeks were going to be hell.

“Come with me, lover boy,” Bella said seductively.

My grin widened as she slowly peeled off her bikini as she led me over into the bathroom. She turned on the warm water in the shower and helped me out of my trunks. I quickly picked her up before bringing her into the shower.

There is an additional teaser posted in my facebook group! The link is on my profile!

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) love this



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“Are you sure we have to go back tomorrow?” I asked.

“Yes, we have children that we both miss deeply and I have a job to get back to,” she replied as she dropped the beach bag on the floor.

I did miss my children, but I really enjoyed my time alone with Bella. Who knew when we would next be able to spend longer than an hour together? Once we got back she needed to finish her book tour and the filming. These next couple of weeks were going to be hell.

“Come with me, lover boy,” Bella said seductively.

My grin widened as she slowly peeled off her bikini as she led me over into the bathroom. She turned on the warm water in the shower and helped me out of my trunks. I quickly picked her up before bringing her into the shower.

There is an additional teaser posted in my facebook group! The link is on my profile!

 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter! Real life sucks sometimes.



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“They should give us a discount for waiting this long. It’s been ten excruciating long minutes.”

 

“You know, most couples don’t really care about the car, the flight, or the hotel when celebrating their anniversary. They spend the time enjoying one another’s company while reconnecting with each other.”  Bella gave me a pointed look.

 

Damnit! Why does she always have to be right?

 

“I’m sorry,” I apologized and pulled her into my chest. Her arms wrapped around my back as she ran her soft fingers up my spine.

 

“Don’t worry.” She laughed. “You do this every year. If you didn’t overreact over something, I would’ve thought something was wrong with you.”

 

I smiled in agreement. I did tend to always act a little childish during our romantic getaways, because I wanted everything to be perfect, and that wasn’t really realistic in our family.

 

“Mr. and Mrs. Cullen, your room is ready,” the lady at the front desk said.

 

“Finally,” I mumbled under my breath, earning a smack to my arm from Bella.

 

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Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) love this.  Men make the worst patients



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“They should give us a discount for waiting this long. It’s been ten excruciating long minutes.”

 

“You know, most couples don’t really care about the car, the flight, or the hotel when celebrating their anniversary. They spend the time enjoying one another’s company while reconnecting with each other.”  Bella gave me a pointed look.

 

Damnit! Why does she always have to be right?

 

“I’m sorry,” I apologized and pulled her into my chest. Her arms wrapped around my back as she ran her soft fingers up my spine.

 

“Don’t worry.” She laughed. “You do this every year. If you didn’t overreact over something, I would’ve thought something was wrong with you.”

 

I smiled in agreement. I did tend to always act a little childish during our romantic getaways, because I wanted everything to be perfect, and that wasn’t really realistic in our family.

 

“Mr. and Mrs. Cullen, your room is ready,” the lady at the front desk said.

 

“Finally,” I mumbled under my breath, earning a smack to my arm from Bella.

 

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Date: 18 Mar 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

Looking forward to more 



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“They should give us a discount for waiting this long. It’s been ten excruciating long minutes.”

 

“You know, most couples don’t really care about the car, the flight, or the hotel when celebrating their anniversary. They spend the time enjoying one another’s company while reconnecting with each other.”  Bella gave me a pointed look.

 

Damnit! Why does she always have to be right?

 

“I’m sorry,” I apologized and pulled her into my chest. Her arms wrapped around my back as she ran her soft fingers up my spine.

 

“Don’t worry.” She laughed. “You do this every year. If you didn’t overreact over something, I would’ve thought something was wrong with you.”

 

I smiled in agreement. I did tend to always act a little childish during our romantic getaways, because I wanted everything to be perfect, and that wasn’t really realistic in our family.

 

“Mr. and Mrs. Cullen, your room is ready,” the lady at the front desk said.

 

“Finally,” I mumbled under my breath, earning a smack to my arm from Bella.

 

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Date: 18 Mar 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG I just want to hug them all and be the live in doctor!  Can I be the live in care person for them all?  lol



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“They should give us a discount for waiting this long. It’s been ten excruciating long minutes.”

 

“You know, most couples don’t really care about the car, the flight, or the hotel when celebrating their anniversary. They spend the time enjoying one another’s company while reconnecting with each other.”  Bella gave me a pointed look.

 

Damnit! Why does she always have to be right?

 

“I’m sorry,” I apologized and pulled her into my chest. Her arms wrapped around my back as she ran her soft fingers up my spine.

 

“Don’t worry.” She laughed. “You do this every year. If you didn’t overreact over something, I would’ve thought something was wrong with you.”

 

I smiled in agreement. I did tend to always act a little childish during our romantic getaways, because I wanted everything to be perfect, and that wasn’t really realistic in our family.

 

“Mr. and Mrs. Cullen, your room is ready,” the lady at the front desk said.

 

“Finally,” I mumbled under my breath, earning a smack to my arm from Bella.

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

looking forwardtomore 



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Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) love this



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Date: 01 Mar 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

amazing :)



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Date: 20 Feb 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

cute chapter 



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Date: 20 Feb 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for the previous teaser and another good chapter! Looking forward to more.



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Date: 20 Feb 2013 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) love this



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Date: 11 Feb 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the update on the 15th!



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: robstenize Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

cant wait for more :)



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it updateeeeeeee 



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: DarcylovesD Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really like this chapter, can't wait to read more! :)



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

It is good for the man of the house to see how it is.



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: secret lover of him Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it keep going



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to more 



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

great chapter, sounds like a fun story. Lets ee what the men get into when the woman are away at woek.

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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

This kooks really good!   Looking forward to more! 



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I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

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