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Reviewer: djw Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2023 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 29

I'm so happy there were no separations for 'anyone's good'. Those drive me nuts. Fabulous story. I Loved it! 

Reviewer: MariahajilE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: fullmoon77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so happy to find this story! Thank you for keeping it posted. It's very, very enjoyable to read.

Reviewer: petmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 29

I love this story. I usually only read on Fanfiction but somehow got directed to this story. I don't know how to navigate this website. Is there anyway I could get a pdf of this story? I don't want to lose it. Such a sweet and broken Edward and sweet and snark Bella. I loved your banter.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

Mickey

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Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2016 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank god I found this story again!!! I love this story. I was so mad and sad that fanfiction took it down.... I can't wait to read it again.

Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 27

Just wondering if you are going to finish the story or have you lost interest? Maybe you post somewhere else that I dont know about??

Please let us desperate readers that love this story know if you are ever going to get it done.

Reviewer: sandras Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

 i love   edward

Reviewer: lmking Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

Great story.  Such creative writing.  Thanks for sharing.

Would really love an epilouge, showing them with kids, and all.

Reviewer: Vampress Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoy this story. I really enjoy that the characters are different from the originals and that you gave them a new identity and I love all the suspense! I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update! Please don't abandon this story!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 29

Love this story.  Just finished reading it for a second time.  I was curious about the Epilogue.  Do you still plan on posting one?

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: eumenida Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 18

My cheeks are in pain from constant smiling trought your story.

Reviewer: eumenida Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

Aaaand, here comes jealous Edward. I just love to read about pissing contest ( Eclipse - my favourite). Ith9;much more fun then "dark and dominating". And I just can`t understand  where is the joy in writting about "poor" and by definition stupid Bella who succumb to some chauvinistic asshole ( who, by the way, will never change). I mean is it something to express their own deprssion? Hell, I take antidepresssives for five years and don`t need another proof that we all had to much blacknees in our heads. Stories like yours just chill me up and helps to get throught another day with my mind sane. If you want to read of some darkness, take Dostojevski, I was lunatic as him for weeks after reading all his books for months.

 And for the better, if someone want patriarchalism, he/she just need to read your story - guys just substitute clubs from cave with pissing contest, for Gods sake. And it`s much, much more fun. And HEALTHIER ( for body and for mind).

Reviewer: eumenida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ooooooh, I just love it!

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 29

It's been four months since you last posted, can you please post the epilogue soon?

Reviewer: trixielou Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 29

LOVED,LOVED this story.  What a great story line.  Could not put this down.  

TNGUS ROCKS....

 

Thank you!

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 29

I really enjoyed your story.  Are you still planning to write an epilogue?  I noticed you haven't updated in a couple of months.

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 29

Awesome!  This is one of the first fanfics that I have ever read and probably one of my most favorites.  Patiently waiting for it to be updated totally paid off because the ending was fantastic.  Hoping for an epilogue?  Hehehehe, but it was such a great read of the journey that Bella and Edward took to get them where they are at now.  I will probably re-read this story from time to time because it's so entertaining.  I love it.  Thank you!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thank you, a wonderful story.

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 29

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this amazing story. I thouoghly enjoyed it. I love your characters and how they banter. And let's not forget the whole Dr. suese thing. I agree with you about the fandom having wonderful writers, I am so obsessed with twilight ff I have about 80 stories going right now. I wish I could read them all. But my family hates me because im in front of the computer all day and I'm getting secretary spread. I'm 46 and I am hoplessly in love with twilight and am not afraid to admit it. I already have my 4 day pass for comic con and I hope to not only see the cast for Breaking Dawn, but also I hope the ff panel will be there again. sorry this was long winded, but your stories are just .... I don't have the words, all I know is I love them,AND why haven't you written anything to buy.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 29

I really needed this chapter today.  RL is kicking my ass hard and not taking any breaks.  So the laughter, the smiles and the smooshing was exactly what I needed.

I agree that the line about no panties was the best one Edward said in the bar.  That was too funny and too perfect.

I loved it all.  The wedding was sweet and a little funny with the vows.  I am really going to miss these two after the epi!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 29

love it

Reviewer: Little71099 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 29

This was great.  I can't wait to read more of your work.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

Great job. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and all the witty banter throughout. Not every story has to be full of angst.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 29

loved it so sad its over but thanks you for sharing it with us....

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 29

ok I laughed, I cried, I got a little worked up ;o) then I laughed some more. Thank you for giving us this story to read,it was wonderful.  I read so much ff so it takes something really special to stand out and boy this one did.  Plus, the fact that I get to laugh some instead of all the angst is such a wonderful change.  Good luck with your future endeavors, will be looking forward to it. 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 28

I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY AND AM WONDERING IF THIS IS THE END OF IT.  THANK YOU.

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great chapter...can't wait for the last but will sooo miss hearing more about this darling couple!  great story.

Reviewer: NANA Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 28

I love this story will be sooooo sad when it ends-------but in turn cant wait for the next part of this ending----------you must start another story, I love your writing-------maybe a part 2 to this story????? 

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

LMAO @ the Bon Qui Qui reference (Yes I did girl) LOL -love the stroy so far

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 28

Great chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 28

I love their banter!  It is so teesing yet sweet and loving at the same time.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow what a wonderful chapter, I love these two, I hope they renovate the Brownstone and make it into one big home for themselves after they are married. 

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh so das to see them go, but I have enjoyed this so much. Thanks again for taking the time to write another amazing story.

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 28

I can't wait for the wedding! I am still loving this story:)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it like always can't wait for the second part thanks for sharing it with us...

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 28

Im gonna miss the banter...it always makes me giggle...

 

~tiffany

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 28

Thank you!  I feel like I've been waiting forever on an update on this story.  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 28

Why not just buy the brownstone from the trust and rebuild it to a one fam house... I'm just sayin that's what I would do.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

I made you a banner, if you want the text to say something different I can change that easily, just let me know.

 

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 27

Great story so far, I really hope you don`t have Bella take her name as `Swan-Cullen`I`m hoping she takes his name... I`ve always thought those hyphenated last names are kinda dumb... if you want to marry someone, but you don`t want their last name? Odd.

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 27

Love it!  Is this the end?

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 26

Love it!  Such a great story... and so realistic...showing not all is love and roses.

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 25

Really good to let E show he's human by crying at the end of all that is revealed to him.  B becomes his rock....

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

good way to introduce carlisle.  love it...

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter!

Reviewer: 2journey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 19

Finally!!  love at last.,..

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

Good stuff....would never have thought to use the blindfold to describe "blinding trust".  It works!  Love it.

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 16

Finally one of them understands what is going on with the emotions!  lol

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love it...E is sooo busted with the twitter scenario!  and love alice and rose's characters.  great spin on them.

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

another great chapter!

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter...finally they are experimenting with their feelings too!

Reviewer: 2journey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

Too good!

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

i sooooooooo loved this chapter..it was so sweet

Reviewer: VampEggBloo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

I love love the chapter!!! Can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 27

Can anyone be any more perfect!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 26

I'm seriously about to cry!  Your story is so sweet. When he asked him to be his best man.. sigh

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter. Can't wait for them to meet!

Reviewer: Vivipoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is probably by far my most fave story of all that I've read.  Update soon please. :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 24

That was a beautiful letter, so sad and when he said he was proud of him.. sigh

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

YAY! Carlisle!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

How freakin cute was that! Edward is so sweet building her a fort :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 21

:( I hope his grandma is ok and he goes to see her!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 20

We love the smoosher! lol  Such a sad past though.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

I'm so glad they are progressing so much!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

sigh.. I have a perminately goofy grin plastered on my face while reading your story... starting to get strange looks from my husband.. lol

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

Yeah.... I can see how staring at a picture of him would be grueling..... lol

Can't wait for Renee to meet him :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

beautiful

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

oh shit is right!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

I really liked what Bella said about the poem and being your own person, especially the built in GPS part.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 13

Sigh.. I hope he did say that.  So sweet.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

Why can't they just admit they really really love eachother! Gah! Can't wait for the ball :)

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

For the emotions being everywhere, you did a great job!  So romantic and funny and sad......

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

hot hot hot!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love Alice and Rose conversations!  They are so funny!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 8

The ladies love the good doctor....lmao!  Yes, yes we do! 

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

All I have to say is I'm soooo glad that this is in EPOV! Hot!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

Good thing the next chapter is already posted!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

hahahaha! Love that he just found her on Twitter!

Reviewer: bluiqt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 27

LOL!!  That was the cutest proposal ever!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

That was seriously so sweet when he offered to build a fort with her! sigh...   Can't wait to read EPOV!!!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella!  I hope there wont be to much more of Jake.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh he is forward!!  Yeah she def. needs to teach him a thing or two ;)  I like that she goes home and updates her blog.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

lol Great first chapter :)

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 27

Read the whole story and I loved all of it. I was having one of those days and needed a story that wasn't to angsty. TNGUS fit the bill.

Your E/B are so lovable and sweet. I think the best thing about them is their banter between. I think that's what I enjoyed the most in the books.

Bella is such a strong women and has had heartbreak in her life but she moves on. I think this is the reason she is so helpful to Edward with his issues.

Can't wait for more.

 

=-)

 

 

Reviewer: ldybug1701 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 27

What a cute proposal.  I love the crossword puzzle.  Even better was Bella messing up his flow.

Reviewer: ldybug1701 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 26

What a far way he has come from womanizer to proposing.  I did like the part when she kicks him behind the knee.  Awesome

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 27

That was an awesome way for him to propose!!!  I'll bet any money that he asked Renee's permission and that is why she was all emo during the visit.

The girls are going to flip when Bella delivers the news.  By they way, their new lyrics to old songs...very funny!!!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 27

He finally popped the question. YaY!!!! Thanks for another great chapter.

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 27

That  whole chapter was amazing. I read all the new chapters on all the web sites you haave them on. And I am going to pester you until you publish something.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 27

I love the proposal.  So sweet.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it i think i would have looked a little longer lol

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 27

i loved that proposal it was sweet and funny

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter!
Yay I'm happy they're engaged, Edwards propsal was adorable.
Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 27

loved it sooo much thanks for sharing that with us update when you can so can't wait....

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 27

That was so cute, where did you get that idea? I had a feeling you wee gonna use that ring.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

yeah their going to get married

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