Date: 09 Jun 2017 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
Love the story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Did you know I have a Facebook group called Dinia Steel Fan Fiction? In that groups files are pdfs (some with pictures) of all my completed stories. Come check us out.
Again thank you for your support.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 17 Feb 2017 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
I like the rapid FIRE happy ending. Pun intended of course. Haha.
Author's Response:
I'm very happy that you seemed to enjoy Capture. As I said before, I departed from Canon in many places. I had one reader become insensed when Rose had unknowing sex with others. Oh well, can't please them all.
Have you read my "Out of Time - A Halloween Love Story"? To be honest I think it's the best I've written. It's an O/S and I cried while writing a great deal of it. There is an HEA however.
If you belong to Facebook, come look for my Dinia Steel Fan Fiction group. Within the files I've up loaded all my completed works as pdfs and most have pictures also.
I look forward to hear from you again.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Author's Response:
I'm very happy that you seemed to enjoy Capture. As I said before, I departed from Canon in many places. I had one reader become insensed when Rose had unknowing sex with others. Oh well, can't please them all.
Have you read my "Out of Time - A Halloween Love Story"? To be honest I think it's the best I've written. It's an O/S and I cried while writing a great deal of it. There is an HEA however.
If you belong to Facebook, come look for my Dinia Steel Fan Fiction group. Within the files I've up loaded all my completed works as pdfs and most have pictures also.
I look forward to hear from you again.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 17 Feb 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
The three sisters together could become more powerful than Aro can control.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
Aro should know better than to try and keep mates away from each other. Why would he give up his prize mind reader?
Can Alice see Aro's decisions or is he blocking her?
Date: 17 Feb 2017 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
I feel a bit sad for Aro. He seeks comfort just like any other creature.
But I'm happy that you didn't pair him with Alice.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Even though Alice was pleased with the idea of joining the group of psychics, she seems hollow. Less giving in her actions and emotions.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Eleazar was lucky he chose wisely in turning the brothers. His fate would not have been so pleasant otherwise.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was a very unexpected twist.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Does the change work the same way in this story? Three days of burning? Edward's or his brothers change wasn't fully documented.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett should have missed her stupid before she tried to run.
Where is Jasper during Alice's change?
Date: 17 Feb 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
That discussion went better than expected. Rosalie will be the next challenge. But maybe the fact that Bella has already chosen Edward and Alice is amenable to her future, she will decide to keep the trio together.
Author's Response:
I took a great deal of liberty with the canon Twilight characters in this one, and it does bode that I'll be taking more as time presses forward. If I might ask, what have you read of mine before? I might be able to help in your quest for the next of mine you'll try.
Please don't let Alice and Jasper's fate put you off. :)
Thanks for reading and your wonderful reviewing!
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 17 Feb 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
How much convincing will it take for Rosalie to remain with Emmett?
Maybe I'm rushing things here, but where has Jaspeer been this entire time?
Date: 17 Feb 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well, Alice seems to be taking their unique future plans with a grain of salt.
Did the treatment Rosalie recurved from Laurent become a reason to kill him in the future?
Date: 17 Feb 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
The 'Sister' bond saved them from further torment by their captors.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
How did Emmett get the job of retrieving Rosalie? Will their pairing be noted as well?
Why hasn't Jasper entered Alice's life yet?
Date: 17 Feb 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oops!
Carmen was right, they should have taken Edward to a remote location before he woke up.
Where are the Brother's?
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
I really enjoyed the way you wove a bit of the nation's history into this chapter.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ari's actions had me so engorssed in the story I moved on to the next chapter before I realized I forgot to review, haha.
Drama within the Volturi network. This changes the tone of story for the girls future
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Laurent's modifications to Rosalie might just bide her enough time for Emmett to find her and save her for himself.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very aggressive training. It's a wonder why human survives long enough to be sold.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Will Emmett find his pairing with Rosalie or will she end up being trained as well by Laurent?
What is happening to SS at this moment?
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
The fact that Edward is already ensconsed in the Volturi way sets up a very different feel to his character. Even though bit of his human life still affect his actions.
The girls background stories set them up as easily written off except for their financial holdings.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hello Dinia,
I'm going back through your body of work seeking out stories I have yet to read. This one popped up on my radar.
Looks very interesting.
I'm going to continue read now.
Chat with you later.
Date: 06 Aug 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
That was a lot of fun. Liked the whole storyline, very different concept.
Author's Response:
Thank you and I even had the history right! I think you'd even enjoy my Domanitrix and Ms. O story. It's not your "normal" BDSM. It was one of my very first stories.
Hugs
Carol
Date: 07 Sep 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
AWESOME ending ;) couple of things though in chp 19 it was mentioned that marcus lost his mate at the same time as aro but in this chp he still had his mate? and when edward mentioned to bella about feeding he said he had green eyes still because of what scientists made for them? anyway thanks for sharing this story on here for us ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks! Really? Humm. I'll need to look at that again.
Appreciate your kind words.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 02 Feb 2014 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
somehow that suits Jasper
Date: 02 Feb 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
very good
Date: 01 Feb 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think I read this but I don't remember it finishing so maybe now it will ...it says completed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
That was a really good ending to a bad situation, Aro in pieces and burnt to a crisp! I like that Marcus let the castle burn and tuened loose the humans! That's a different happy ever after, but not a bad one at all!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good for Edward, he will have to start now before Emmett tears down the castle! I wonder if Aro is slipping into vampire insanity? Is that even possible?
Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aro, that sneaky bastard! He gets rid of the mates so he can have their mates for himself! This will mean war, no doubt!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aro not getting what he wants? That usually isn't allowed to happen. I wonder if he really would end Fred so he could have Alice to himself?
Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Rose as a goddess, who knew? That's pretty powerful and should work just as Aro expects it to.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was handled as well as could be, I guess. Lucky for Eleazar he brought two talented recruits back or he might have suffered Aro's wrath.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
That's different for Jasper and Eleazar to be mated. It must mean Alice has someone else in her future. At least I hope so. Her sisters are , so Alice shouldn't be left out in the cold that way!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
Emmett and Rosalie are on their way to a happy future, I hope! Knowing what can happen, I won't hold my breath, just in case!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Rose is now apprised of her future and hopefully Emmett won't be in too much trouble with Aro.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm kind of glad Edward is being honest with Bella and not trying to keep things from her!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Doesn't sound to me as if the girls have much of a choice, no matter what happens in the future. They are stuck here at the mercy of the vampires.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Now that she's back to herself again, Alice seems to have no problem with the future she sees for them all.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well, so far, so good. Hopefully nothing awful is going to happen to the girls, beyond what has been already done, that is! I suppose there's no way around them being changed, though.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Through time and space, I have no doubt that Edward and Bella would find each other. I see Rose is as fiesty as ever, even after Laurent's tender mercies. Now she and Bella need to draw Alice back to the land of the living. Marcus saw how closely the girls are bonded, which I hope is a good thing.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Eleazar doesn't seem to be very good at planning ahead, otherwise he wouldn't have newborn vampires on board a sailing vessel. Makes me wonder how he plans to sail without a crew?
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Eleazar must be able to sense Jasper's gift as well as Edward's. He will most likely take all three brothers and be very satisfied with his work.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good roddance to bad rubbish, as they say! Now that Caius is gone, maybe the beatings, at least, will end.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Laurent is an evil son-of-a-bitch, if ever I read about one! Poor Rosalie!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can only guess that males, human or vampire would dream up some godforsaken training device like that! YUCK!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like Edward got to Bella just in time. Interesting that Marcus sees the mate bond between Edward and Bella. Aro can't read anything from her, just as Edward can't hear her thoughts.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
I see Caius is the usual nasty uncaring bastard he's written as! Quite the operation the vampires have going here, and such nice guys, too! Wonder what misery is in store for the three girls?
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Seems rather a cruel fate for these three girls to be stolen like that, for God knows what purpose. It's not like they haven't suffered more than enough grief in their lives! Hope there is some kind of help for them somewhere from someone! Otherwise, this is going to be pretty damn depressing!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
This story is incredibly mixed up. I'm unsure where I am when I start a new chapter. I think the concept is good but the writing and the grammar and the first person, third person narratives are all very poor.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for the story
Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad it is not aro
Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oookay....interesting
Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh man you made his gay.....not jasper
Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
Why are they being so mean to her? her thinking was logical...not selfish
Date: 21 Dec 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
Rose always gets the crap deal...always
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh em you big stud
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
She knows him...oh wait from before?
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
A reprieve for rose!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well of corse Bella gets rescued and rose literally is going to get screwed
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well that sucked....
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great they are in human trafficking..grat job Ed
Date: 21 Dec 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok let's see where it goes.
Date: 12 Nov 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
Not a bad story, didn't go in the direction I was expecting but I was a good story.
Date: 08 Nov 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Different story and I am anxious to see where you take this! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 03 Nov 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
good story..
Thank you
Date: 03 Nov 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
ut oh. Alice will see this..
Date: 03 Nov 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
well Bella took that rather well Edward having sex with Rose. Most mated females would fight to the death.. well Ha ha 101 vampire learning from Fan fiction. LMAO
Date: 03 Nov 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
so Jasper and Eleazar are mates.. I am guessing Aro and Alice since he sensed something in her.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well Rose is still self centered. Some things stay the same.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Rose is the weak one. Strong in looks weak in ability. Then she has to give in to Emmett so her life is not as a sex toy..ugh
Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
well it would seem to me if Edward wants her he will not want those men to touch her. Marcus stop this now.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far, I would like to als hear what the back stories are of our boys, also are the girls their mates and will they be changed.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow. I wonder what will happen to the girls when Emmett sees Rose and Jasper sees Alice. What will Alice see when she comes back around?
Date: 13 Feb 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hello, I really like the story and I would appreciate it if you would keep writing it. Bt the thing is , sometimes whilst I was reading it, these weird symbols and things popped up. I don't think it was my computer, but you should check it to see what it is. Idk! I really like the plot too! I think that it's a great one, but can you give some more history in the upcoming chapters? I'm confused about Ed, Em and Jas and why they're there and Aro's hovering and stuff. But overall I think this is a really great story! I apologize if I seem like a critic, I'm just an avid reader!!!
Author's Response:
He. Sorry to take so long to get back to from TWCS. I have no idea where or how those weird symbols got into the text. If it bothers you and you'd like to read it in pfd - which I have - I'd be happy to send it to you. PM me thru FF or Face Book.
xo
Dinia