Date: 26 Feb 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant! It was so funny, and worryingly, I can actually picture Mike Newton doing just that! Wish you wrote more like this.
Date: 12 May 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
lol, that was hilarious!!! Poor Jessica:(
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
simplly lovely deary
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is hilarious.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my lord. I haven't laughed that hard in a long time. Priceless. Please tell me you are doing more of these? Thank you for such a hilarious story.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was awesome!!!




Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
OME!!!!!!!! that was great!! and actually probably right on the money for Mike Newton. poor Jess' she really doesn't deserve that much bad. thanks, I can't stop laughing!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
jajajajaja wow I think that Jessica had to much tolerance with mike but hey if she dump him in the end she is not that dumb. And I relly love Edward for his concern about Mike and Jessica loves life.
(sorry if some things that I said above aren't writte right is because the english isn't my natal lenguage)
Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was very cute!