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Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2017 5:21 PM Title: Epilogue

So proud of Bella and thankful that Edward came into her life to make her she she was worth loving. Happy for them finally have the HEA.  Thanks for sharing!  

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2017 6:12 AM Title: Epilogue

this was just beautiful. i wish either one of them would have told charlie off what an ass. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 3:17 PM Title: Epilogue

thanks for sharing this amazing story with us on here it's my 3rd time reading it ;D

Reviewer: silverelvis Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 9:43 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for a wonderful, funny, sad, joyful....and well written story.  I enjoyed reading it! 

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 4:21 PM Title: Epilogue

This was such a sad but very real story. So glad after all they went through they got their hea.
Thank you for sharing x x

Reviewer: sandranova Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2013 3:36 AM Title: Epilogue

I loved the story, VERY REAL!

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:57 PM Title: Tests

OMG-- so wasn't expecting that last sentence! woah!

Reviewer: sarasue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 4:40 AM Title: Afraid to Love You

as the adult daughter of an alocholic i wanted to say thank you for doing this so right i lost my dad a long time ago and i miss him every day i hope your story makes a difference even a small one for someone who struggles with this illness

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 5:42 PM Title: Not When I Need It

thanks for spoiling us with the quick updates!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 7:55 PM Title: Still Don't Know

THIS IS PERFECT!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 7:16 PM Title: La Louche

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! THANKS FOR NEW STORY!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:54 AM Title: Event Horizon

I am glad.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:47 AM Title: New Moon

Honestly I still hoped for her to wise up. But she is an addict with so many issues.

 

I hesitate to tell you this about April Fools. My mother was the prankster. She would get me before I got out of my bed.  39 years ago Early in the morning the  hospital called telling me she was dieing. She died that morning on April fools day. I have never done that again. I just cant

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:41 AM Title: Everything Has a Price

I get the part where she feels hurt. Honestly she has to realize she was not healthy enough to hear that in the beginning. He needed to be silent until she felt she could tell him. Then he chickened out telling her. She is not stable now just better. That is what I think.

She needs to stay with him because always two together working on life is easier than one. Who avoids reality.

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:39 PM Title: Everything Has a Price

heartbreaking (but I get it)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 3:34 PM Title: Procrastination

Baby first always.

 

Sad story and you are leading us to the part where he tells her or she finds out from someone else either way it will hurt. The best way is to tell her.  Then live with what she decides. In the end she has to know it is horrible to talk about and she was too weak for all the information.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and especially for taking the time to review. It's always nice to hear what my readers think! I hope you enjoy the remaining chapters!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 3:23 PM Title: Baby Steps

I am not sure if any of this will help until she realizes that James would have killed her too. Another death and then he would have found more victims to hurt.  To take a life! God sometimes uses good people to stop bad people. You have to be strong. She was not strong. Her mother made her emotionally weak because she covered all that up to have money and a man. How many women take abuse for that reason?? TOO MANY

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:51 PM Title: Guilt

Well it is a time for confession. I would say it like this. I was concerned so I looked you up on the net to see what hurt you so badly. If it would even be there. So I have known all along and never stopped me from loving you. I wanted you to tell me. It was your story. What I found out later is Emmett was one of the officers that came to your home that night.  I did not know that was you he had said it was so sad he quit law enforcement after that.

Now the fault in all this lies with James and Renee.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:26 PM Title: Medallion

of course a reason to relapse she set herself up. They do that! Vicious disease.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:17 PM Title: Change

he will let this out eventually.. I hope it does not end them.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 1:41 PM Title: Faking It

I don't like Rose and I don't want some sappy reason for her actions. She has no right to attack anyone. She is not the queen.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 1:20 PM Title: Unintended

recovery is hard.Admitting you have a problem they say is the first step. I have employed the addicted and tried to get them to get help. Not easy.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 1:06 PM Title: Four Letter Word

still attraction and all she is an addict she needs a program or help to rid herself of this. Self medicating will continue.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 12:44 PM Title: La Louche

well alcohol the drug and she is the addicted self medicating because of some hurt.

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 11:53 AM Title: Four Letter Word

this story has captivated me!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2013 5:48 PM Title: La Louche

ABSOLUTE  P E R F E C T I O N !!!!!!!!!!!! YOU!!!! ARE  AMAZING 

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2013 5:04 PM Title: Change

If he wants honesty, he needs to be honest! DUH! Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: anjalovesyou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 12:08 PM Title: La Louche

I love it update soon :) 

Reviewer: valeriecullen7 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 11:52 AM Title: Faking It

Oh shit!!!! What happens now!!!

Reviewer: valeriecullen7 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 3:57 PM Title: La Louche

This is captivating!!! How old are the characters?

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! They're in their mid- to late twenties. Definitely not a high-school fic!

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