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Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well..Renee sure is something. I am a little confused about Tanya's role I this whole thing. Is she related to James or someone?

Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

So glad you cleared up the adopted thing! I am so excited to see what happens.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've already read this story twice, I just love it every time I read it. I'm adding it to my list of going through all of your stories one by one anyway. (I'm doing by word count- low to high). I'm really enjoying all of them, though I have to admit I'm weary of "Nightmare". I will give it a try anyway. Thank you so much to both of you for sharing your work.💜💜🤗😏

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

excellent little story thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

You did a great job in a short story form, this had everything! It pulled a lot of emotions out of me and I enjoyed them all! Justice was served and happy ever after visited the right people!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

Those sick, depraved, rotten excuses for human beings are all right where they deserve to be, for the horrible things they did! Now I'm  looking forward to what Edward has planned for Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

I was pretty sure the evil, selfish bitch was after money! Too bad she got close enough to Edward to kiss him and make it look bad in front of Bella! Now he'll have to have his lips sterilized, who knows where that nasty mouth of hers has been?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

Sad but true, there really are people like Renee, Phil and James in this world! We might wish it were not so, but I guess it would be wrong to kill them all and hide the bodies! One good thing has come out of this, it got everyone behind Bella  and Edward, or rather on their side, even Charlie.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

What a mess! Makes me want to slap Charlie and knock some sense into him! Poor Bella, and River, they just want Edward to love them and be there for them! I hope this gets squared away, enough people have made Bella's life difficult, she deserves a break!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

What are the odds of this situationpopping up? Just for the lies Bella's motold her, she ought o have her ass kicked, and spend time in jail, to boot! That's just nasty to do that to a child! Hope Charlie doesn't kill Edward!

Reviewer: Oruga86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

:D

Reviewer: ggf83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

So glad those horrible people didn't get away with it and can't hurt Bella any more. That's absolutely horrid, what they did. And a good, long jail sentence. I know that here, at least, the sentences would be a lot shorter.

That poor girl deserves to have something go right in her life, and Edward is probably the person to bring that for her.

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: ggf83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

I just.... can't comprehend how anyone could do that to their own child.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ggf83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ugh. Could Renee be any more of a bitch? So....  was it Renee or Tanya who made the anonymous call? Because they've both been using similar accusations. Or.... is Tanya somehow connected to Renee and that's what made her do it in the first place? Oooh... conspiracy theorist! :)

Great work.

Reviewer: ggf83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! I had a suspicion that "Uncle Charlie" was Bella's real dad, but hadn't thought of the implications that Edward would be her cousin. Is it weird that I don't care about that part?

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

such a sweet story i really loved it

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well I'm glAd that everything is over with. It's so sad what happened to Bella. 

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

sweet ending

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for the great story!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wonderful end.   Thank you for writing and sharing.

 

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am sorry to see this story end. Glad that Bella told Renee off!!!! Loved how Edward proposed to Bella. Bella did an awesome job telling Edward she was pregnant, both times. Thank you for sharing ths wonderful story with us. 

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

Really great story...Thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

:) loved this story

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

OMG  I hope all three of those sleeze balls gets whats coming to them in prison.   Dead Lord.

 

Yey for the upcoming marrige thing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) loved this

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'd like to see Edward and Bella married and with another baby!!!! Also can I get the link for the contest and can't suit for the new story!!!!

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm glad we are gonna get rid of those people. And soon a wedding.

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

So glad James, Phil, and Renee got what they deserved!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

Renee, Phil and James are sick, Sick, SICK!!!!!! I am gladl that they all went to jail. I am sad that this story is coming to an end. I can't wait to read the end. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad the creeps are in jail and Bella can breathe a sigh of relief. Well, after a lot of therapy! Wedding at Disney??

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love it!!!!!!!!  Thank goodness all the evil ones are gone!  Can't wait for the wedding.  I think Bella should tell Edward at the wedding that she is going to have his baby...oh and as a bonus its twins!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm with Jasper.  Nanny cams were so smart.  Shouldnt have told Renee about the cameras.  Should have gotten that little blackmail confession on tape.    

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

Please don't let Bella be that gullible. 

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh man can we kill Renee please??

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

renee is a piece of work. man her and james need to be put in their place 10' under

 

love it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

Renee and James are really a piece of work. So all they want is money. I do not understand how Renee thinks she is going to get anything from them. I hope with the cameras as proof that James will not be able to see River. Poor Bella. Can't wait for more!!!! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

Please tell me Bella is not that stupid. Please?

Reviewer: hughug Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

Still love this story. Love you guys as authors as well. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

When I was a social worker, we all had radar that went off like Jessica's. We called "bad vibes". Some people immediately gave us bad vibes. Mostly the pervs like James in the story. Renee is a piece of work. Back to the baby in the hospital that Edward got removed from the mom. Who is the boyfriend? James, perhaps? That would be proof that he is unfit. Just sayin'.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved this.   Renee is a real piece of work

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

OMG YES YOU UPDATE IM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!! AND OH BELLA BETTER NOT BELIEVE THAT EDWARD WOULD EVER CHEAT ON HER WITH RENEE LIKE SERIOUSLY THAT WOMAN IS A WHORE WHO LET HER HUSBANDS FRIEND DATE HER UNDERAGE DAUGHTER AND THEN GET HER PREGNANT AND THEN WHEN SHE COMES BACK INTO BELLA'S LIFE SHE CAUSES CIAOS AND THEN ALMOST LETS JAMES RAPE HER DAUGHTER AND THEN CALLS HER A WHORE SAYING SHE WANTED IT OH HELL NO!!!!!!!!!!! AND THEN SHE KISSES EDWARD AND ACTS LIKE EDWARD CAME ONTO HER NO NOT HAPPENING!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S FUCKING RIDICULOUS AND BELLA BETTER NOT BELIEVE RENEE SHE'S DONE NOTHING BUT FUCK WITH BELLA'S LIFE SINCE DAY ONE!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE BELLA DON'T BELIEVE RENEE DON'T BELIEVE HER DON'T DO IT TRUST WHAT YOU AND EDWARD HAVE TOGETHER CAUSE IT'S ALL YOU'VE GOT!!!!!!! IF YOU LET RENEE AND JAMES WIN THEN YOU ARE SCREWED FOREVER DON'T LISTEN TO THEM DON'T BELIEVE THEM!!!!! TRUST IN WHAT YOU AND EDWARD HAVE!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T BELIEVE RENEE!!!!!!!!!! SHE BETTER NOT BELIEVE RENEE YOU HAVE TO MAKE HER LISTEN TO EDWARD AND LOVE HIM AND EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

poor bella

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

Renee is psycho!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

I really hope that Bella doesn't believe it!

Reviewer: Twilightlove4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Pls cotinue and update this story and make it soon!!! I really enjoy this story so far!!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 3

love the likeable Jessica. she is helping the couple out and she is awesome

man poor bella having to have amother like renee. she needs to be sent off somewhere. or tied up by her ankles and left in the desert for the animals to have their way with her till there is nothing left. then bury phil and james with there heads sticking out of the ground and let them starve and dehydrate themselves and let the vultures  eat their heads

i am glad bella has a family and support around her now and they are in for a fight they will win

love it

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Renee is a bitch and will dig her own grave. If I'm not mistaken James is more then 60 months older then Bella right? And as her step-fathers brother he is In a position of authority so that makes him a sexual predictor an it is a case of statutory rape. So that should help Bella's case where he is concerned. But I'm worried that he can still get access to River. While it is sick and horrible there have been cases where as her biological father he could get visitation rights even if he went to jail. Please tell me this will not happen? It makes me sick to think of that monster anywhere near River. 

 

This story really is gut wrenching and sad. But I love the build up and can't wait to see exactly where you two take it. 

Reviewer: msbull Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

Renee is evil. I love it. My renee's are evil too. Love this and all yalls stories!!!

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

love it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

Glad Charlie is being more accepting.    Of course Renee had to show up.ugh and on Christmas too.     Wow  I really like your Jessica!!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow. what a Christmas. At least Bella dn Edward have an excuse to live together now. Bella is no match for Renee and James. She needs his protection.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aww I loved the chapter!! :D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Just when things were looking up for Bella and River. I hate that Renee/Phil/James had to ruin a perfect day for Bella and River. At least River was a sleep and did not have to hear Renee being awful to them. James is taking a chance coming after them. he could be arrest because Bella was under age when they were together. I am sorry for Esme's past but I am glad that she is willing to have it put in the publice eye to help Edward/Bella and River. Love this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Dude. What are those losers doing? They just need to step off. And go leave Bella alone.

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, a lot of info in this chapter. Esmes story is so sad. At least Edward and Bella don't have to worry about being related. Gotta love Emmett.

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

love it

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh that is not a smart idea. They are still going to be watching Bella for 90 days. A social worker looks in closets they would notice men's clothing. I could see Edward moving home with his parents for 6 months then just staying there but to completely move in is suicide. Bella could lose River and I know Edward doesn't care but he could lose his job and I'm pretty sure they could cause legal problems for him as well. I hope you know what your doing. 

Reviewer: sandras Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

i adore this story sexy edward he is the best alas robert pattinson!

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love the story and will more than willingly wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

OMG LOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUCH A GOOD STORY BUT HATE THE TWIST OF BELLA AND EDWARD BEING RELATED!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love this story. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

Whoa, whoa, whoa, slow down there partner. lol Lets get Bella through the visits and such. Lets get Charlie to understand first. Though I love the idea of them living together. It touches my heart to hear River call for him. (dada awwww) Can't wait for U to get back.

E/k

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

Aww I loved it!! Huh Charlie just really made everything worse!! Making Bella have a meltdown I hope things work for her and Edward :)

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

great chapter

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

So glad to see this update!  Charlie has totally over reacted ( understandably to a point.  Bella is an adult after all)  hopefully he will realize that he is hurting more than helping soon!  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: msbull Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love it. This is why I started posting my own story. You all are a great inspiration. Love all yalls stories.

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

omg love it

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

Dang. This poor Bella is getting it from all sides! But I think Edward can get her through it.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

heartbreaking

so much hurt. so many feelings. so many people who have been lied to

wow to have your daughter show up and all along you thought you where helping her out. renee has just been taking his money and bella has been struggling.

man renee you so need to be held accountable. bella is a good mother and is basically on trial fighting to keep her baby

love it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow  Charlie really flipped out on E.  Hope he comes around and they all get back at Renee and crew soon.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

I am glad that at the end of this chapter Bella and Edward are together again.  Did they file any kind of complaint against Tanya regarding the stolen money for utilities and rent that Bella did pay?  Did she get a money order or anything?  I remember using those a long time ago and they had carbons on the back.  Something that could discredit her complaint.  I know she was not named but I think you can say you have an idea who the complaintant might be and file paperwork that shows proof otherwise.  I really don't know.  I just want them to be safe and happy.  I think Charlie dropped the ball in not being more forceful regarding Bella and he is taking it out on Edward.  They are not physically blood-related, nor were they raised together, so their love makes sense to me.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

I am loving this story. I am sorry but Charlie is being a jerk. I know he is hurt, but he is not thinking of what is best for Bella and River. I am glad that their meeting went so good. But Edward was told not to let anyone know for six months about him and Bella. He does not need to move in and he does not need to be present at the meeting with Jessica if River is there. River will call him "Dada" in front of Jessica. Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

What is Tanya's issue with Bella? Does she have something against her? She's a slum lord and I hope Edward hands her her ass. I hate bullies.



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

I actually love it. I love Edward. Amazing since I was a social worker for children's protective services. I admit, I had a hard time with 'boudaries', but Edward has me beat! lol Cannot wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

love your stories

thank you for writing



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: catmey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

im in love with this story !!!!



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is such a cute little story : ) baby River is a doll and I love Edward and Bella's characters. Interesting to see what happens next with Charlie and Bella but I'm hoping for a trip to kick Renee's butt and then James. Till next time



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is good and very well written



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: Flora73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it so much :)



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Damn loved the story!! :)

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Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is just awesome love the twist at the end, looking forward to more chapters

Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing first chapter, keep going. I freaking love it.



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Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) loved this.  Looking forward to reading the continuation



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

HA HA HA!! That was a very funny ending. I love this fic. It is definitly a keeper. You had me feeling so sorry for her and then happy for her and Edward, but you had to go and make me laugh my ass off at the end, when I relised they were related. Yeah this is such a keeper. Can't wait for more.

E/k

Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful, wonderful story!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I love the story, and yes, you made me cry on at least 3 occasions!  (not easy!).  I can't wait to see where this story goes.  Hopefully, Edward will stick to his guns or Bella will feel deserted and worthless again.  His caring has opened her world up.  



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: Kimmiesan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really liking this story

 



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: angel hall Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

loving it can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it 

Renee will keep making up lies just to continue hurting others and lie just to save here ass and her seem like the vitum even when it comes to her on daughter 

Edward is at a lose on what to do he just found out that Bella is his uncle Charlie's daughter that he was so desperately trying find and see and Renee lied to both to but Edward and Bella love each but after find out that there cousins NOT by blood but cousins all the same how will effect them now and River who sees Edward as a dad now and Edward sees her as a daughter as well 

Can't  wait to read more



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I am putting you on alert. I can't wait to see where you take this story. I love stories with Edward/Bella and little kids. Love it when the kids are in the store like River is. 



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Now that is one hell of a start.



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh I absolutely loved it. I'm glad your planning on a doing to it. 



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

I need a favorite.... PLEASE WRITE FAST!! I need more of Edward,Bella,River and Charlie!

I hope that Tanya gets rabies from her rat dog!

It is such a wonderful story.  My favorite of the TOTF series.

So good. 

Please update soon!! :)

 



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: Xioana Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Haha! LOVED Edward's little freak out :). I think you should update and put this on fanfiction (it'll be easier for me to read and review). BY the way, though I love the story so far, I think that Edward and Bella got together way too quickly to be realistic in my opinion, but this IS fanfiction after all, so carry on. Update soon!!



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Haha love it cant wait to see wat happens next

Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cute...love Edwards panic attack!



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like the story and I can't wait for me. Great job.



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

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