Date: 18 Oct 2014 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love this story and hope too see how to ends. i lovenyour work. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I am trying to work through writer's block. I am hoping to have something up by the 1st if the month. Again thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 37
I have stayed faithful to this story since chapter one ...but that was mean poor dad ....let them have a moment of happiness ....please
Author's Response: Patience. I promise all is good. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 34
I can't wait for the next chapter to read what will be happening with these characters.
I also can't wait to read what Edwards Explanaiton as to why he is wearing a gold band on his hand...it should be good to find out what edward has been up to these past months since he left her in Forks?
It will be interesting also what the family will say about Bella and Edward having twins I hope that we will get to see how they react to this news soon.
I can't wait to read about what they will say when they findout that she came out to chicago and then left when she saw edward hugging Irina before the twins were born and it was because of Renee and her web of lies.
Author's Response: Hope you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow didn't see the Victoria and Jake paring coming. Can't wait for more chapters to see where you are going to take this story!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad I could surprise you. Lots more of those to come.
Date: 17 Apr 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 32
Yes!!!!They reunited again,I hope that Edward has a chance to explain about wearing a wedding ring to Bella before she runs away again.Reene deserves a fire with her name on it,I mean she killed Paul and abused Bella for years and about Charlie he deserves some hard work before he is allowed to be in Bella and the twin's life's again.
Author's Response: Fate can be a real b**** sometimes. Let's hope he can. Renee well the firey pits if hell are too good for her but I'm sure karma, fate's big sister, can handle her. Charlie is a whole other story. Blinded by love and distraught by the idea of someone hurting his daughter. Denile is a tricky thing. Once it takes root it's hard to get past. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 32
I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what Edward will do in reaction to Bella being in Chicago with twins that are calling him dada when he walks into the room. I hope you will update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I have the chapter written just need to tweek it. Hopefully I can get a few more done before the weekend so I can update then.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story however I'm a little confused. How can Edward and Bella be in school together if he is five years older than her? She's about to turn 18 making Edward at least 22-23 yrs old. Could you explain.
Author's Response: The ages mentioned are Bella's. Edward is in college He is 5 years older than Bella. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
O now it is getting good. I wonder what edward is going to think.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Soon you will have your answer. I have Edward's pov half way written. Will update soon.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
I feel for Charlie. He's so clueless.
Author's Response: Very clueless. He will have to deal with this later but you know how Bella is. She will make sure everything is okay where he is concerned. Thank you reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Evil cliffies leaver! Sorry for the delay, life ya know...
Author's Response: Yep. I learned from the best about cliffies 😉. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yes I know how life gets in the way. d84;a039; Ya
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 32
this is the prologue i assume .. i cant wait for the next chapter ..
I know you have school and everything but please try to update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes this is the prologue. The next chapter is half way written.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wasnt attacking Bella , i get why she hid and why she acted like that .. I just wish she tried harder to fight the Renee in her mind .. She had it ingrained in her head .. she may have hid from everyone , renee included but in her mind renee was still there.
Author's Response: OK thank you. I just didn't want you to be disappointed in her. I appreciate you reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thank GOD Jake thought to tape the conversation. Still wondering who the dead girl is. I wouldn't have barged in. I would have had a family meeting or better yet, let Renee play the grieving mother and play the tape at the funeral. ROFL.
Author's Response: That would have been funny. We find out the identity of the mystery girl soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
hmmm Now who else did Renee kill besides Paul? Guessing she didnt like his threats. Freakin Emmy nominee performance huh?
Author's Response: Yeah she can out on a show. Really think she should run off to Hollywood and get a part on a soap opera. They always need more more villains. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
So glad Victoris and Peter and Char all kept thier word. Paul needs to grow a freakin concience soon. F'ing Renee
Author's Response: Yes Renee is at it again. Paul needs to stay off that stuff if he really believes Bella is coming home to him. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Hope you update soon .. Cant wait to see where Renee ends , hopefully in a ditch somewhere .
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I will try to get more up soon. Personally i feel like a ditch would be too good tor Renee but hey we'll see what happens.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
Charlie deserves the pain he's about to feel .. i dont feel bad for him seeing as he more or less chose that bitch over his only child ..
Author's Response: Charlie was blinded by love. And remember Renee never miss treated Bella in front of anyone. I agree he is not innocent but Renee has a way of charming men. ;-)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
I cant say Bella's an idiot given her life with Renee her first instinct is to protect herself and now her kids but a woman answering someone's phone isnt proof .. Plus it's been a year and she's almost 19 now so no statuory rape threat anymore ..
Author's Response: Please remember that Renee is crazy. Bella feared for their safety more so that the charges. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Charlie is an idiot .. What's the point of looking all over for Bella when he cant see what has been right in front of him all those years.
Author's Response: Renee is a great actress and he didn't see the abuse. He will deal with her in his own way soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
They all stood there and watched her get mistreated .. I get the cullens to some extent but Carlisle was obliged to report abuse and there's onl so many times a child gets hurt .
Why would Bella believe Renee anyway . she knows she's a spiteful bitch .
Author's Response: They never really saw the abuse Bella is clumsy after all. They just suspected and with out proof or Bella reporting it Carlisle really couldn't do anything. I mean Charlie is the chair of police. When someone voices your worst fears and you feel depressed, abandoned, and your hormones are out of whack you will be them. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
Want more...I realised half way trough that it was not finished but I hoped. Can't wait, its a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Shouldn't be long before it's finished. Glad you like it.
Date: 26 Dec 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hope they all keep thier word about not turning her in. Hope Renee doesnt find her. hmm Twins maybe???
Author's Response: Yep twins. Renee is about to meet her match. I think. You know how these people develop minds if their own. Ha ha. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
I never like a Bella that keeps the kids from Edward. That's such a horrible thing to do. He may have moved on from YOU but does that mean you punish him by missing the birth growing up etc.
Thank you for updating and I do hope all's under control now
Author's Response: She's not purposing keeping them away. She fears for their lives. Renee is an evil witch. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Dec 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Heya, would there be an update soon. This story has always being on my mind.
Hope all is well with you.
Author's Response: Hoping to get something up soon. New curriculum at school has really taken up a lot of time. Hopefully within the next few weeks. Thank you for your interest.
Date: 03 Aug 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so relieved Charlie had not participated in absusing and mistreating Bella. Initially I had the impression he was aware of and an active participant in the bad parenting, with that being said Charlie still should have been a more observant parent. I'm really enjoying the story, thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: So so so sorry I missed your review. Obviously I lost my mind when school started. I am so glad you are enjoying it. Charlie is blinded by love. All will come to light Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Aug 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow Renee is a complete lunatic Bitch to seek unhappiness for her own child, poor Bella. Thank you fr the update.
Author's Response: My extreme apologies. I missed all you reviews and I am so very sorry. Thank you for reading and reviewing.