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Reviewer: TwilightNerd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2017 9:55 AM Title: Home

Have you noticed that there are often British English to American English for the Americans, but it's not the other way round for the British. We have to figure out what is meant ourselves. Loving the story so far.



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Oh, thank you so much for taking the time to let me know you are enjoying my story.  As for the British idioms, I do take you point - but then I often feel that Americans think they invented English LOL.  I do recall that I once received a review for one of my other stories from a rather cross American who informed me that it was unnecessarily distracting that I used British words and phrases in a story set in England with English characters, and 'suggesting' that I used American terms instead to make it easier - presumably, this person had never read Austen, Trollope or Dickens, or, indeed, Rowling or any number of other British authors. 

Thanks again for your kind review, it's very much appreciated.

Liz 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2016 8:46 PM Title: Epilogue

The best thing about fanfic is access to so much creativity and willingness to share and risk. The worse thing about fanfic is finding story magic only to have it pulled or disappear before you can read it again. It is rare to read a story that is beyond lovely in all the right aspects of a good read. Stories filled with raw emotion, hurt, loss, fear, beauty, love and the ability to connect to the reader. You have managed this brilliantly in my humble opinion. Yes, SM owns the cannon characters and its plot but what you've done with them here is fantastic, moving and simply beautiful. Your story falls into the category of 'please don't pull this before I can soak in its loveliness once again.' ;-D Thank you for your time, efforts and creativity. Carry on...please!



Author's Response:

Gosh, what an absolutely lovely review.  Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know that you enjoyed my story.  Once a fic has finished posting, reviews are few and far between, so I really appreciate any and all that I get, especially when they are as kind and generous as yours.  Rest assured that I have no plans at this time to take this story down, so it should be available for you to read and enjoy for the foreseeable future.

Thanks again for your kind comments.

Liz

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 11:38 PM Title: Epilogue

bravo



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Thank you so much for all your kind reviews, they really are hugely appreciated. I'm delighted that you enjoyed my story.

Liz

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 9:04 PM Title: Celebration

had to listen to the song, it is classic

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:46 PM Title: Joined

wonderful, you should be published

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 3:54 AM Title: Confessions

he is a sweet boy

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 3:06 AM Title: Neighbours

so good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 2:32 AM Title: Snow

he is beautiful

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:42 AM Title: Samaritan

I loved your "Out of the corner of my eye" so I am starting this journey with you

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2015 10:36 PM Title: Epilogue

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!! story ;) thanks so much for sharing it on here ;D

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 8:18 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you so much for sharing your work with us all.

Fab story! Xx T

Reviewer: purplelily1983 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 12:58 AM Title: Epilogue

one of my favorite stories

Reviewer: frenzy4edward Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:52 PM Title: Epilogue

What a sweet story!!!!! Absolutely loved it.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 1:09 AM Title: Epilogue

This was a wonderful story. I loved every word. Great job. 

 

Vicki. Madison, WI

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 8:54 AM Title: Epilogue

What a great story. I am glad that I found it. Your work is amazing. 

Reviewer: NessaBelgium Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2013 11:28 PM Title: Epilogue

I really love your story. Thank you

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 10:26 PM Title: Epilogue

This was a wondful story. Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: Stina91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 11:34 PM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful story..very well written. Its refreshing to read fiction from an author with a varied vocabulary and not to offend any other authors out there, but I applaud your ability to use the word 'nonplussed' in the way it was originally intended. It was an absolute pleasure!

Reviewer: eyelubtwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 3:49 AM Title: Epilogue

<3!!!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2013 5:47 PM Title: Epilogue

This has been a wonderful story.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 12:51 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it thanks so much!



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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 12:34 AM Title: Forever

Sweet!  How romantic!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:00 PM Title: Closure

Sad,,but at least he has closure!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 11:19 AM Title: Justice

Good for Ed!  Sad though :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:30 AM Title: Celebration

Sweet....dang I almost cried too!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 4:12 AM Title: Confrontation

Yeah!  Guess I was wrong about him leaving 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:52 AM Title: Triumph

Lovely....Jacob has arrived!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:38 AM Title: Interruption

They are so sweet together

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:28 AM Title: Plans

Oh Bella...hot Ed very hot!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:06 AM Title: Joined

Like your story it is interesting that you switched their roles

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 12:43 AM Title: Doubt

Will these two ever get it together?!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 12:32 AM Title: Job

Things are looking up :) Jacob should show up soon

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 12:11 AM Title: Possibilities

Poor hard up people...dang jasper you are no help!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 11:52 PM Title: Explanation

Ok no more self love we need some real stuff!  LOL

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 11:40 PM Title: Horny

:( I know he doesn't want to give her a disease

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 10:18 PM Title: Closer

ALice is a piece of work!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 10:09 PM Title: Tragedy

Just go for it Bella...who cares!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 9:27 PM Title: Confessions

How terrible for Ed :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 9:04 PM Title: Understanding

Ed is sweet....poor Bella but she is strong I am sure she will get it together

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:52 PM Title: Nightmares

Oh my...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:40 PM Title: Neighbours

Always loved Alice and jasper...I wonder how long Ed will be around, I am sure. He will leave her at some point.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:29 PM Title: Snow

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:17 PM Title: Home

Poor Ed...looks like he has had a bad go of it

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:12 PM Title: Samaritan

How much younger is he?



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Hi Maria

At the beginning of the story, Edward is 19 and Bella is 29.

Thanks for reviewing.

 

Liz

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 7:27 PM Title: Escape

Interesting...lets see what happens

Reviewer: wylie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 6:11 AM Title: Epilogue

What a wonderful, heartfelt story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us.



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Reviewer: kitty2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 12:05 AM Title: Epilogue

You forgot Slan (The Irish for goodbye).  Loved it. Thanks. Kathryn



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Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 3:36 AM Title: Epilogue

great story



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:27 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story



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Reviewer: vivlig Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 12:54 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you so much for this story it's been brilliant something to look forward to every Saturday x

 



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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 2:12 PM Title: Forever

:) loved this

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 1:36 PM Title: Forever

Such a lovely story. Thanks for a great read. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 9:03 AM Title: Closure

:) loved this

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 4:58 PM Title: Justice

Awesome Story that just keeps getting better....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 3:27 PM Title: Justice

:)

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 12:28 AM Title: Confrontation

I fall more in love with this story every chapter.... 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 4:49 PM Title: Celebration

:) loved this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 3:55 PM Title: Confrontation

:)

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 9:34 PM Title: Triumph

Oh no what a place to stop.... I must tell you I love this story.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 3:33 PM Title: Triumph

I reaaallly hope Jacob ends up looking like a total jackass and this doesn't cause problems for E/B. Toss him out on his butt!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 5:49 PM Title: Triumph

Oh dear!!!   Love this story

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 2:09 PM Title: Interruption

I don't like the way that ended off. I hope nothing breaks them apart.

Reviewer: wylie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 3:08 AM Title: Interruption

I am so enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2013 2:11 PM Title: Interruption

:) loved this

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 1:11 AM Title: Plans

I love your story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 4:32 PM Title: Plans

:) loved this

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:01 PM Title: Joined

Beautiful!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 3:39 AM Title: Joined

God they are so damned sweet!

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 7:10 PM Title: Joined

Great chapter. I have to admit, though, it makes me nervous that she's going back to London. You know Jake is going to pull something. He's not going to let her go without a fight. I just hope she gets through it unscathed. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:43 PM Title: Joined

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:28 AM Title: Doubt

:)

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 12:10 AM Title: Doubt

:). So sweet

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 10:01 PM Title: Job

Yay for Edward! A hot guy who can cook....jackpot!

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 12:54 AM Title: Job

I love that Carlisle owns the restaurant. I soon as I saw his name, I knew Edward would get the job. Now I really hope they go home and celebrate exactly the way he wants to. And with no interruptions!! Great chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 6:39 PM Title: Job

:)

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 9:28 PM Title: Possibilities

It seems like things could be looking up for them. It sounds like that catering job would be perfect for him and could lead to bigger and better things. Now, if they could only get into town for certain supplies *wink*, things would be perfect. Then I'm sure Jacob will show up to cause trouble, but I'm positive they can deal with him.

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 5:14 PM Title: Possibilities

u always leave me wanting more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 2:47 PM Title: Possibilities

:)

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2013 3:22 PM Title: Explanation

I love this story! I hope you decide to surprise us with an extra chapter this week (hint, hint). I'm glad this misunderstanding was fixed so quickly. I hate long, drawn out angst over stupid things. You are a great writer and I can't wait for what happens next.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2013 2:54 PM Title: Explanation

:)

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 5:05 AM Title: Horny

I love this and can't wait to read more! I hope you can update again soon.

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:44 PM Title: Horny

Aww, poor guy.  Bella is kind of adorably oblivious.  I love these characters! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:12 AM Title: Horny

:)

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 2:28 AM Title: Horny

Anyone worried about STD's? I love Edward & all but he was in a relationship with a prostitute. Does that not bring up any concerns dear Bella?

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2013 11:35 PM Title: Horny

I'm guessing he doesn't want to do anything until he gets tested, I'm just hoping she gives him the chance to explain. I love these two together and I hope it gets fixed in the next chapter. Thanks for the extra chapter. It's always appreciated!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 6:50 AM Title: Closer

:)

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 10:05 PM Title: Closer

I am so excited that u are writing a new story because I loved reading ur last sory wild child I will most definatly be following this story for sur as well!!

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 2:17 PM Title: Tragedy

Oh NO I've ran out of chapters please when do u update again

 



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Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 2:51 AM Title: Understanding

Aw, now get rid of Jake for good

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 2:16 AM Title: Nightmares

crap

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 1:45 AM Title: Neighbours

I want to know Edwards story what all happened to him

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2013 1:09 AM Title: Snow

So far I know what everything is without having to read your clarifications. Still loving your story so wanting him to stay and her to stay there, I so hate Jake and Tanya so baddddddddd

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 11:26 PM Title: Home

let it snow for days

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 10:24 PM Title: Samaritan

I'm so into your story here and I normally go for Mobwards, Controlwards, etc. strong Edwards......gone to find your facebook page

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 5:33 PM Title: Escape

so far you have me hooked

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 8:16 AM Title: Tragedy

What a sad life he has led. His mother set his life into that channel. No wonder he did drugs to get away from all of that.

 

I would not have sex with him until he was tested. He had sex with a herion using hooker who used needles.  There are lists of diseases associated with that.



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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:48 AM Title: Confessions

Well since she is older she can help him heal. Get him into culinary school to be a chef.  He has skills.  That will give him an education in a field to make some good money. Let him live with her. Lord knows she needs a friend as well as he does.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:39 AM Title: Neighbours

Good story. I am enjoying it. If Jacob never comes in I will be happy!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:15 AM Title: Snow

 Poor kid. He dyed his hair, I guess it goes with the piercings.

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 2:36 AM Title: Tragedy

You know, I really enjoyed your story, Wild Child, so when I saw this one I knew I had to read it. I'm glad I did because it is fantastic! I can't wait to see what happens next.

thanks, Maria 



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