Date: 06 Sep 2018 1:08 AM Title: Happy Endings
i loved this!! i was glad to read that renee got hers in the end. sad for emily though. loved every word!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2018 3:51 PM Title: Welcome to L.A.
I wonder why people stay in relationships that they know are not going anywhere. hmmmmm
Date: 07 Mar 2018 1:37 PM Title: Spring Forward
although edward fell in love at first sight, it was still a somewhat
"slow burn" for bella. i enjoyed that aspect. i loved how they got to
know each other and slowly got together taking the time to really
understand each other. what i thought was unbelievable and cheezy
was how jasper and alice got together. it was completely unbelievable
ridiculous. i didnt buy it at all. i realize perhaps you wanted the cannon
couple and happily ever for everyone but wished you didnt have to
do it for alice and jasper. i just dont feel it for them. i just felt like it was
more the physical for jasper esp with that stupid come on by alice from
the very beginning. alice did not have to end up with jasper and it would
have been all her fault since she made the strong move from the very
beginning. just mho...i do love all of your fics very much.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 11:54 AM Title: Happy Endings
a wonderful story and I am happy to be your 100th review. hope you have written more
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 11:42 AM Title: Hiding Out
you deserve more reviews gonna try to bring this to 100
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 11:39 AM Title: Original Sin
I would give up everything for him too
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 11:36 AM Title: Escape from L.A.
you deserve more reviews
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 11:33 AM Title: Welcome to L.A.
great beginning
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 11:32 AM Title: Ever After
you are another writer who makes me wish the story did not have to end
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 11:03 AM Title: Going Home
wonderful
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 10:50 AM Title: Spring Forward
love it
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 10:15 AM Title: Family Business
hate all the 13 within
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 10:00 AM Title: The Odd Couple
I do not understand Emmett
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 1:03 AM Title: The Trouble With Women *THE CORRECT CHAPTER*
it is very good
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2015 6:59 PM Title: Cool Runnings
he would be hot in or out of a uniform
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2015 3:59 PM Title: Cabin in the Woods
good job
Date: 11 May 2015 3:35 PM Title: On the Road
enjoying very much
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2015 2:29 PM Title: Sliding Doors
time for that vacation
Date: 11 May 2015 1:56 PM Title: Mommie Dearest
so good
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:39 PM Title: Happy Endings
Really really good story!! You did an amazing job with it and was a great pleasure to read
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2014 7:13 PM Title: Happy Endings
WOW!! AWESOME story ;) i dont think her having another child naturally would be that much of a problem now a days with medical help it was a great ending though ;D i would have liked some epov though ;D
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:57 AM Title: The Lion in Winter
cool but why did you give him blue eyes? and carlisle brown?
Date: 16 Mar 2014 6:37 AM Title: Happy Endings
Great story!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:40 PM Title: Welcome to L.A.
another fan
Date: 05 Feb 2014 1:50 PM Title: Happy Endings
great happy end :-)
Date: 03 Feb 2014 7:23 AM Title: Happy Endings
loved it
well done
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2014 9:53 PM Title: Happy Endings
Great story!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:30 PM Title: Welcome to L.A.
Great first chapter. I just found this by way of your more recent story. Thanks for writing
Date: 04 Aug 2013 12:21 PM Title: Happy Endings
encantadora me gusto
Author's Response:
Thank you!
-Dee
Date: 08 Jul 2013 12:24 AM Title: Happy Endings
I really enjoyed your story. There were times I wished you would have used more dialogue, but the plot was great and ups and downs were believable and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Hugs, Dee
Date: 26 Jun 2013 4:01 AM Title: Happy Endings
Thanks for the story
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews! I haven't logged on in a while so they were night to see! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Hugs, Dee
Date: 26 Jun 2013 3:35 AM Title: The Odd Couple
Well that stinks!
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:28 AM Title: Original Sin
Hot! Not the right time to ask!
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:23 AM Title: The Trouble With Women *THE CORRECT CHAPTER*
Drama!
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:16 AM Title: Meet the Parents
Set them straight Bella!
Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:29 PM Title: Date Night
Oh the l word....trouble ahead
Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:11 PM Title: The Lion in Winter
Ed seems sweet
Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:04 PM Title: Hiding Out
How sad for bella
Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:01 PM Title: Cabin in the Woods
Oh jasper you screwed up!
Date: 24 Jun 2013 5:05 AM Title: Sliding Doors
What a terrible family!
Date: 24 Jun 2013 4:50 AM Title: Welcome to L.A.
Sounds interesting
Date: 02 Jun 2013 2:50 AM Title: Happy Endings
loved it! i hoped Renee got more of wat she deserved! lol
Author's Response:
lol! Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 3:30 AM Title: Happy Endings
That was such a beautiful story they adopted twins like her parents had! It took me forever to finally read this story and I'm as I passed it up so many times I absolutely loved it and read it all in one day while doing stuff around the house! Thank you for sharing this beautiful story!!!
melissa
Author's Response:
Wow. Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm so glad you took the time to read it, but more importantly that you enjoyed it.
It's people like you who make me smile and keep me wanting to write.
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2013 3:27 AM Title: Happy Endings
Great story & very enjoyable. Liked all the drama because it wasn't between Bella & Edward like most stories. Going to check to see if you've wrote any others cause you have an easy reading type of writing style. Thanks for sharing
hugs Stephanie
Author's Response:
Thanks hun! I do have other stories, but they are all posted on fanfiction.net under Deebelle1 if you want to check them out!
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2013 8:35 PM Title: Happy Endings
I loved this, just wish there was more.
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Date: 22 Apr 2013 3:35 PM Title: Happy Endings
Wonderful end to the story. Emily and Renee are real pieces of work. Glad the YRF worked out for them. awww for ending.
TY for writing and sharing.
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[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2013 11:46 AM Title: Happy Endings
I love the story!!! Great work!!! Thanks for sharing it with all of us!!
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Date: 22 Apr 2013 11:42 AM Title: Happy Endings
loved this story
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[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2013 9:14 AM Title: Happy Endings
I absolutely love this story! So glad Bellas family members got the Karma they deserve!!!
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[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 9:20 PM Title: Ever After
I am truely enjoying reading this captivating & intriging story!!! I am a little confused it says end of part 1 but this story is not check as completed!!! So do u have still more to come & not finished yet???????????
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Date: 21 Apr 2013 6:54 PM Title: Ever After
Wonderful chapter LOVE LOVE LOVE what happened to Renee!!!!
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Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:39 PM Title: Going Home
Glad she got to put Renee in her place. Surprised Renee isnt running to the tabloids about how horrible B is. Glad she's made peace with Rose and Em. Tattoo is sweet.
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Date: 20 Apr 2013 4:00 AM Title: Spring Forward
Love it cant wait
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter! hope you enjoy that too!
xx Dee
Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:19 PM Title: Spring Forward
wonderful chapter. Glad things are going well with the wedding planning. Wonder if Renee is going to make a huge fuss or something?
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Date: 19 Apr 2013 7:56 PM Title: Family Business
Glad she told off her Dad. He was being a wanker. Aww for Em appologizing.
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Date: 19 Apr 2013 7:22 PM Title: The Odd Couple
Glad jazz is there. Ugh for Em and Daddy C coming along to be wankers.
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Date: 19 Apr 2013 6:28 PM Title: Serendipity
Glad Alice apologized. Was not liking her at all.
Yey for proposals.
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Date: 19 Apr 2013 5:59 PM Title: Original Sin
Wondeful chapter. Happy Lemony Dance time:
oooh Marry me huh?
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I didn't want to write a story that was nothing but lemons, but there when I did write it, I wanted to make sure it was worth it...I hope it was. Sometime the sex is so good we marriage is the only option. lol
Thanks as always for being so fabulous!
Date: 19 Apr 2013 5:28 PM Title: The Trouble With Women *THE CORRECT CHAPTER*
Wow not liking Alice a whole lot right now. Glad B stood up for herself though
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Date: 18 Apr 2013 4:39 AM Title: The Trouble With Women *THE CORRECT CHAPTER*
Holy christmas, Alice acts like a manic depressive.
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Date: 16 Apr 2013 10:41 AM Title: Serendipity
looking forward to more
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[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 11:11 AM Title: Original Sin
Thank you for fixing so quickly. I did not mean any criticism, just wanted more of your story. Again, thank you, love yr storyline, love an absolute full on male who is the boss, but can still show love, compassion and romance. Pamela Hanley
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Date: 14 Apr 2013 9:01 AM Title: Meet the Parents
Nice dinner with the 'rents once Alice calmed down.
Author's Response:
Got to love the parents...the sister? Who knows. lol.
Thanks KT!
xx Dee
Date: 13 Apr 2013 9:53 AM Title: Meet the Parents
lookinmg forward to more
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Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:11 PM Title: Date Night
aww they are so sweet together.
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Date: 12 Apr 2013 2:40 PM Title: Date Night
looking forard to more
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Date: 12 Apr 2013 2:32 AM Title: Touching Home
Glad she and Jasper got to talk together. Like the E and B are going slow.
Author's Response:
The talk was definitely important. It's not a race, but it will continue to move forward for sure.
Thanks as always, KT!
xx Dee
Date: 11 Apr 2013 11:27 PM Title: Touching Home
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks! It'll really start moving now that we're in the second half of the story. See you tomorrow!
xx Dee
Date: 10 Apr 2013 4:01 PM Title: Cool Runnings
glad our kids are getting to know each other. Nice letter to jasper. Too bad he was a wanker who didnt answer.
Author's Response:
They get to learn a lot about each other before Bella finally allows her heart to be completely exposed. Jasper, Jasper, Jasper...what can we do? lol
Thanks for being so awesome and for reading!
Dee xx
Date: 10 Apr 2013 3:41 PM Title: Cool Runnings
its about time he got off his high horse and called her ... looking forward to more
Author's Response:
What can I say...Men are slow sometimes; even they are totally adorable. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Dee xx
Date: 10 Apr 2013 12:21 AM Title: The Lion in Winter
loving it looking forward to mroe
Author's Response:
Thanks! There will be an update again tomorrow! See you then.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
-Dee
Date: 09 Apr 2013 5:45 PM Title: The Lion in Winter
Edward fell hard and fast it seems. Will we get to hear from Edward? Bella needs to just let go and feel. I hope she and Jasper can mend their friendship. Please update soon! I bet Edward may already know who she is?
Author's Response:
This entire story is told from Bella's POV. You'll only get to here from Edward based on what he says to Bella, but you will get get to know him. As Edward's backstory comes out, you'll get to understand how he just knew she was his one and only. Jasper...has a bit of growing up to do, but I'm hopeful. ;)
Next update will be tomorrow.
Thanks for your review and for reading!
-Dee
Date: 09 Apr 2013 2:32 PM Title: The Lion in Winter
great chapter. ROFL for her falling down. Klutzy B strikes again.
Author's Response:
I tried to give the story it's own twist, but that's one Bella characteristic I can relate to, so it had to stay in! lol
Thanks again, KT! You rock.
Hugs, Dee
Date: 08 Apr 2013 8:01 PM Title: Hiding Out
Glad she had a better day. Cooking with Carlisle was cool.
Author's Response:
Such is life, right? We have good and bad days too. I wouldn't mind Cooking with Carlisle; whom I picture as Richard Gere or P. Fach's bacon chopping Carlisle. lol
Thanks again KT! xx
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:24 PM Title: Welcome to L.A.
Omg am so sorry i must of clicked on this story an reviewed that review was meant for another fic i was readin its 32 chaps along an nothin is happening i am so sorry about that if you wouldn of replied back i wouldnt of noticed ill take the review down asap i am so sorry i am such a ditz xx
Author's Response:
lol. I was so confused...Thanks for letting me know. Thirty-two chapters is a long time to wait for something to happen.
-Dee xx
Date: 07 Apr 2013 8:48 PM Title: Cabin in the Woods
oh Jazz..... you def picked the wrong time to try to jumpstart a relationship. She's right though. She needs to be consumed with love.
Silly drinky girl.
Author's Response:
What can I say...Men are clueless sometimes. I think we all want that all consuming kind of love.
Thanks again KT!
-Dee xx
Date: 06 Apr 2013 9:25 PM Title: On the Road
i am really liki g this story so far. this last chapter made me laugh. i live just off off highway 99 in modesto ca and her drive up i-5 makde me laugh because its a trip i make alot. when she finally got to higheay 97 going in to oregon it was major deja vu. because i am from klamath falls oregon. it was like being home. are you from around there or did you just do some good research? you got the town just right and the lake too. i cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm originally from the So Cal, but I live in Medford now. I've been to K.Falls a few times, but not much. I googled all the details because I wanted it to be as recognizable as possible to someone who knows the drive, so I'm glad you can appreciate that. The lake drive can be scary sometimes...that I remember for sure. I'm glad i could give you a bit of home while you read. I love me some Fred Meyer! lol. Way better quality than a super Walmart.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy all the detail as the story continues.
Hugs, Dee
Date: 06 Apr 2013 5:12 PM Title: On the Road
glad she got there safe and sound. the lodge sounds wonderful
Author's Response:
Thanks...It was stormy like her life, but I think it will be worth the drive. ;) I forgot to add the link to the pics; I'll put them up with the next posting.
Thanks again, KT!
xx Dee
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:21 PM Title: Escape from L.A.
Glad Rose is not taking sides and is seeing both sides. Angela is so sweet. Love the idea of a getaway
Author's Response:
Thanks! Rose understands what it's like to be an outsider in her own family. Had to have Angela in there somehow...even if it was a cameo. Getaways are fun.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Hugs, Dee
Date: 04 Apr 2013 8:47 PM Title: Sliding Doors
Glad she got her night to shine. Em was a arse. Glad Jasper is there for her along with her Dad. Wonder if mommy dearest is going to claim credit somehow?
Author's Response:
She definitely did. The difference in my Emmett is he's not a funny arse...It will take time for him to realize what he's doing wrong. Jasper is her BFF. Mommie Dearest is a handful to say the least.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
xx Dee
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2013 6:01 PM Title: Indecent Exposure
Cant wait till Mama Dearest finds out she is a success all on her own. What a bitch. Glad Em realizes his mistakes too. Paparazzi are bane of existence. pathetic.
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks KT! It's all gonna start coming to a head in the best of ways. Em's a work in progress, but I can't help but love him. Paps suck for sure...but so does the press sometimes.
Thanks again, Dee xx
Date: 02 Apr 2013 7:01 PM Title: Mommie Dearest
I knew it. Jake and Nessie. Go B. I really don't like Renee at all. Suprised Charlie stays with her.
Author's Response:
Yep...It starts fast with the drama. I don't expect anyone to like Renee. As for Charlie...men can be clueless sometimes. lol Thanks for reading and reviewing.
xx Dee
Date: 02 Apr 2013 12:14 AM Title: Welcome to L.A.
Excellent start. Guessing Jake is cheating on her? Sounds like I'm gonna hae renee. Love Jazz.
Welcome to the TWCS Family
Author's Response:
There isn't a long wait to find out exactly what's going on with Jake. Renee is a bitch, plan and simple. As for Jazz...I love him as a character.
Thank you so much for reviewing. See you tomorrow with the next chapter.
Thank you for the welcome as well. It's bright and colorful! ;)