Date: 04 Jun 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ok I ready to get to the end and Edward is right Bella is just like Elena with Damon trying to change someone so they will fit into their ways of thinking. Poor Edward it must be love because she's more trouble than whats she worth in my opinion.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 31 School Daze
awesome story!!! i'm glad that tanya didn't come back as a vamp ;) whats going to happen when aro finds out about edward? and does bella have a power? ;D
Date: 13 Oct 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 31 School Daze
absolutley loved this story edward was such a bad boy but i totally loved him and the bit with the voltori watching angel was funny as fuck ....... fantastic and funny edwards inner voice rofl....
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you loved it! Thank you! Still my favorite of my stories :) The Volturi kill me!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Are you saying Edward had his ass for lunch?! :-S
Author's Response:
Haha whattttt? :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 31 School Daze
Oh man, that Prof. is lucky to still be alive!!
Author's Response:
Haha he's not alive :)
Date: 14 Jun 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
xvxcvxc xc
Author's Response:
Hahaha I don't know what that means but I love it :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 31 School Daze
Why do I feel like I read this before? Still great though
Author's Response:
Haha just getting everything up to date here :) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 31 School Daze
Hilarious!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 31 School Daze
That was a wonderful surprise!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you thought so! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 31 School Daze
SO beautiful! Poetic Justice for his beast lol
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! Love those two!
Date: 14 Jul 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
one of his best ones yet lol
Author's Response:
Haha why thank you!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Me thinks that he is gonna feed and get himself covered in blood again!! LOL
Author's Response:
Hahaha That was an ingenious plan huh? :)
Date: 13 Jul 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well maybe Rose doesn't need to die but maybe just changed and find Emmett then she wouldn't interrupt like that ... LOL
Author's Response:
Hahah Emmett is actually the gay guy in chapter 1 that's checking out Edward :) That's as much as he's in the story!
Date: 15 Jun 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Enough with the Fuckward stuff already! It reminds me of my brother-in-law, who couldn't complete a sentence without dropping several f-bombs. When my daughter was little I had to constantly remind him to watch his mouth. He actually got to the point where he only slipped up once in a while. picture my happy face!
Author's Response:
Um, sorry you don't like his language. That's part of his personality and I went with it. I'm sure you're quite thrilled your brother-in-law got it under control.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
i love that story:)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad! Thank you :)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
this story was great. I just found it. the cow birth out take and aro out take were hysterical! I was glad that Edward was able to gt revenge for Bella. High school kids can be cruel.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you checked it out! Smugs is one of my favorite all time characters and Bella's a blast. He fell hard for his girl and finally learned to put someone first. So glad you liked it! ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
i love it!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad, thank you! Smugs is a ton of fun to write
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
That was actually pretty dumb, funny, but dumb.
Author's Response:
Um, sorry you think so. I thought it was fun.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
That was priceless.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) Always fun to torture Smugs.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 7:58 PM Title: Epilogue #3
Like to say I feel sorry for the guys but I don't.
Author's Response:
Me either, they got what they deserved.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:16 PM Title: Epilogue #1
Work as a hero team, Batman and Robin. Robin was never tha good
Author's Response:
Haha Robin was indeed, never that good :)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
Really like the love songs. His inner voice is so cute. Hope he sticks around for a long time. Have a feeling Victoria will be causing problems soon.
Author's Response:
Hah thank you! Inner voice has mostly served his purpose now, gotten E where he needs to be. But he will make some guest appearances. :)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
Happy tears.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it!!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Finally. But will she believe him?
Author's Response:
Haha she will, eventually!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Volturi?
Author's Response:
Hehe could be!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:31 PM Title: Bella's Past Outtake
Edward really has a dark side.
Author's Response:
Haha yeah he does. He's not a Twilight vamp really :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hope his inner voice never goes away. He's so great and clearly the more inteligent head.
Author's Response:
Hahah yes, Inner Voice is very bright but Edward hates him. Their fights were some of my favorite things to write :)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Incredible.
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you :)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
Finally. Sexy as all get out!
Author's Response:
Told you! Glad you liked it! He lived up to his billing ;)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Eddie Jr. aren't you ever going to give him a break? You promised less that 10 chapters.
Author's Response:
And it's coming very soon. I lived up to my promise!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Eddie Jr. really needs a break here!!!!
Author's Response:
Haha it's coming up, I promise :)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 10:55 PM Title: Interview With The Vampire
That was so funny. Knew he was a White Sox fan. The good guys always are.
Author's Response:
Hahah I'm a Cards fan to I will never let my characters be Cubs fans. Sox it was! Glad you're liking it!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is absolutely hilarious.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love my crazy vamps!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
This is a really interesting version.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have a lot of fun with those two :)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is really hard core, hope Bella will change him. Love the vampire movie thing.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I think it's safe to say they'll change each other. I love Bella's vamp obsession myself :)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is certainly an interesting twist. Never saw Buffy, what if they watched Twilight?
Author's Response:
There is no Twilight in this world, since they're B&E :)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay So have you changed your mind yet I thought this was a funny Outake and we could use some more I really love it when she makes him do something that you know is pissing him off I think she gets off on it Ya think........GREENBAY LOL
Author's Response:
Hehe how are you finding things you haven't reviewed? :)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
Hilarious!!!
Author's Response:
Why thank you :) I had fun with it!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm not liking what happened to Jacob at all! He was totally innocent! he didn't deserve that.
Author's Response:
Sorry. Edward's not really a very moral creature at this point.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
Fav lines from this chapter:
“Aro, with long, stringy black hair and an almost translucent skin. If I fucking looked like that when I was three thousand years old I’d toss myself into a fucking fire, no doubt about it.”—that shit had me dying laughing!!!
“Fucking hell. I couldn’t turn my back on the gay bastard or his dick might be in my ass before I could even react.”—Hilarious!!!
“He and I were actually on fairly decent terms, maybe because I was the one who brought him into the world while his fucking mother lay around like the lazy ass that she was.”—This line shows how delusional Edward is…and it’s priceless! LOL
The visit from the Volturi was genius. Bella is considered strange, but at the same time they covet her! I loved the fact that Aro loved the Buffy DVD’s because they were a gift from Bella and she didn’t expect anything in return. This chapter was one of my favorites, and I don’t usually do outtakes.
*Claps wildly*
Author's Response:
Heh, you know he'd rather die than be old and ugly :)
I think Alec would be more than happy to try to get all up in there, but he's not stupid!
Trust Edward to boil down birth to the mother laying around doing nothing. hehe It's a damn good thing Bella can't have his kid. She'd kill him no doubt.
I'm so glad you liked the visit. I had the image of the V's watching Buffy in my head for ages and I just had to make it come to life. Aro definitely thought Bella was weird but her generous nature won him over :) Glad you read and enjoyed the outtakes!
Thanks!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ROTFLMAO @ the names of all of those cows!!!!!! She named them after Vamp characters! Priceless!
This shit here made me howl with laughter:
"She smelled worse than usual, probably because of all sorts of disgusting shit like fluid and birth juice or whatever the fuck was going on down here."
I absolutely loved this chapter. The banter was witty but you were still able to see how much Edward loves Bella by the sacrifice that he made...she totally owns his ass and it showed in this chapter. I wish that she'd named the calf Edward tho...although I like Spike too.
In the grand scheme of things...when it comes to this story...I Love it!! I will miss the shit out of this story...you really did such a great job.
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you! The cows had to have vamp names, in honor of her favorite characters :)
Edward will do pretty much anything for his girl, as clearly evidenced by the birthing. She's definitely changed him, I say for the better. hehe He might not agree but that's okay, he loves her anyway.
So glad you enjoyed it. I'll write some more outtakes, not ready to let these guys go either! Thanks for the review!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
Well done, this was hilarious
Author's Response:
Thank you! Always fun to let Smugs loose!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
Damn, that was hilarious! i've never watched buffy, so i was laughing at everyone watching it and all edwards thoughts during the process. Very fun.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it despite the non-familiarity with Buffy! hehe I had fun with it and happy you did too!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
OMG! I was laughing so hard when Aro was musing about the show. This was really fucking funny!
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you! Joss better watch out. When Caius sees it, he might be ready to murder :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
Haha omg Edward touching spikes balls was too damn funny. I still cannot believe are watched Buffy. Oh I so cannot wait to see what else u come up for these two.
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! Poor Edward, he uses the cows as a lie and it comes back to bite him! Aro will watch all of Buffy because he liked Bella. hehe I'll have more outtakes down the line :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
Hay did you watch episode one while you were writing this and I while they were with Charlie did they deflower her bed if so maybe you can share it with us......
Author's Response:
Yep, I watched and paused and commented and played. haha Of course they broken in her childhood bed. A must!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
*shoots coffee out nose onto computer screen*
BWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! That was great :)
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you! So much fun to let him play again!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
Here lies Edward Junior; he saw, he conquered and he came, a lot. The world weeps over the loss of a legend. 1915-2009.
Funny line!
Author's Response:
Thank you! That's one of my absolute favorites!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
HA That was entertaining as fuck, LOVED IT
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a blast writing this story :) I'm so happy you loved it!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 11:11 AM Title: Epilogue #3
OMFG WTF!!!! That was GoLd!!!! You truly know what true revenge is... WOW I'm stunned and awed by your depravity hehehehehehe AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hahah Smugs is a big believer of an eye for an eye. It's frightening how easily that came to me :) I guess it's probably a good thing for the world that I'm not a vamp, huh? :)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
Cute;-D)
Author's Response:
Haha thanks! I thought it was fun :)
Date: 07 Jan 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
Yea! More Willow!
I love how attached Bella is to her cows, and I love reading Edwards inner voice thinking how ridiculous it all is yet he is so whooped over Bella he does anything for her...I really have enjoyed thier banter and them as a couple, it is hard to say goodbye to these 2, but you did a great job writing this story - Loved it!
Author's Response:
Hehe yes, she was by far the most suggested outtake, so that's what I went with first!
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it. That's Bella and Edward, in a nutshell. She'll ask him to do all sorts of crazy stuff and he'll complain about it but he'll always do it because he loves her that much. They're a blast. I promise some more outtakes down the road.
Thank you for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
OMG!!! That was the funniest damn thing I have read in a long time!!! It was classic, the vision you painted of Edward with his hands up the cow's crotch when Bella snapped the picture! Fucking hilarious!!!
Author's Response:
Hahah Thank you! Everyone wanted more Willow and I just imagined Smugs having to help her give birth and it just killed me. I had to share. So happy you liked it. Oh to get my hands on those pictures :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
That was great! I love how Edward will do anything no matter how ludicrous it is for Bella. Loved it! Thank you for the outtake.
Author's Response:
:) Thank you! Yeah, he'll do absolutely anything for her, not silently, but he will do it! I had a blast writing this chapter! Thank you so much for reading it!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
*falls over laughing hysterically*
That was the funniest shit I have read in sooo freakin long!!
Love it!
Author's Response:
Hehe Thank you! I had a blast writing it and couldn't wait to share it with you all :) So happy you liked it!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
Great job. Laughed all the way thru this
Author's Response:
Thank you! Love making you all laugh with me! So happy you liked it! :)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
You know this story can not die. It is way too funny. I mean, I have cows and my husband said the same darn thing. I will feed them, haul off their babies at 6 months but I will NOT stick my arm in a cows behind.
Really you got to write a sequel. Life on the " Vampire Farm with Ed & Bella. " LMAO
Author's Response:
Hahah That's awesome! I love that Smugs reminded you of the husband there. That's too great! I'd have to do learn quite a few things about farms but it's totally a fun idea! hahah Love it! Thank you ;)
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 29 Cowtake
Too funny!
Author's Response:
Hehe Thanks! Had a blast writing it!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:34 AM Title: Epilogue #3
good
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it :)
Date: 26 Dec 2010 3:20 PM Title: Epilogue #3
Great epi! I wasn't sure how the video was going to get introduced but it flowed seamlessly.
Happy holidays! I'm looking forward to reading more of your words in the new year.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hahah yeah, I figured the reunion would have one of those montages and it worked well. So glad you liked it! Smugs is a genius.
Happy Holidays to you as well and I promise there's plenty more things to come from me :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2010 7:31 AM Title: Epilogue #3
That was a most excellent ending!!! I absolutely love what he did to those three ass holes. It was a fitting punishment for the way they treated Bella. And I love that she wasn't angry with him for doing it.
I love the man that Edward has become because of Bella and I love that she didn't beat the vampire out of him and make him conform to her ideals. She accepted him for the way he is and he changed to make her happy. Fucking perfect!!!
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you! I had a blast torturing the boys and letting Smugs slip right into that darker persona that he doesn't show all the time but is still lurking inside.
I'm so glad you love how he turned out. He changed a lot, but he's still fundamentally the same. He just learned to put someone else first and make compromises. So did she for that matter. They both came a long way and I'm so happy with how they turned out.
So happy you loved the way it ended! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'll have some outtakes down the road :)
Date: 26 Dec 2010 6:00 AM Title: Epilogue #3
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you did :)
Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:23 PM Title: Epilogue #3
Wow. Ok, am I evil? I loved Edward's revenge! very suitable.
I am going to miss this story so much. It's been a true pleasure to read, so fun. Thank you for sharing it with us all.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Sherry,
Hee, you're asking the person who wrote it? If you're evil, I must be diabolical? hehe I loved it too, honestly. It just fit him!
Thank you so much for reading. I plan on doing some outtakes and if a sequel idea ever strikes I'll bring them back, they're too much fun to shelve for good!
Thanks for the review!
Amy
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 8:27 PM Title: Epilogue #3
Perfect revenge!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! An eye for an eye, hehe!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 3:57 AM Title: Epilogue #3
OMG!!!!!! That was freaking hilarious.....
You my dear are brillant. That was the best payback ever!!!!
I love this story, and I am sad now that it has come to its fruition. I will be on the look out for your new stuff next year...
Have a wonderful Holiday Season...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I knew back when he decided to plot revenge what it would be and I just waited til he could enact it in person.
I'm so happy you love this story. It's probably my fave that I've written, though I of course love them all :) I'll do some outtakes when I get time so feel free to let me know if you have any suggestions!
Happy Holidays to you and thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:48 AM Title: Epilogue #3
WOW!!!! as always you are exquisite writer. I am only sad that is the end of this story, and is over but you have an awesome imagination and i give you BIG props for that. I read a lot of stories in this website and in twilighted and no body has written a story even close to this one with edward having this personality and bella drinking from animal and edward from humans. I LOVE IT. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS WITH US!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this story. I've had so much fun with it and I love that you guys do was well. The personalities are my absolute favorites and I've had a blast playing with them. I'm so flattered that you loved it along with me!
Thanks for reading and I should have some outtakes for you down the line :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 1:42 AM Title: Epilogue #3
Another great chapter. I'll miss this story! Thanks for the great work you did with this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll miss writing it but I'll do some outtakes and then see if Smugs wants to stick around for a sequel down the line :) More to come, either way! Thank you for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 12:16 AM Title: Epilogue #3
*standing ovation*
Author's Response:
*blushes* Thank you so much! I"ll do some outtakes when I get time and I'm very very happy you liked my crazy story!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2010 12:02 AM Title: Epilogue #3
I will miss them but maybe not if they show there faces again also an Outake in BPOV when Victoria showed up Also I would like to see a what would happen if they run into Alice and Rose and they see how well she's doing They really wheren't very good friends for her thanks for sharing and Have a good weekend and see you next Monday YAAAA EPOV so excited *squeaks*LMAO
Author's Response:
BPOV for the fight? Maybe...I don't know how much thinking she was doing during the action so we'll see if I can swing that. Rose is pregnant and out of school and Alice and Bella have grown apart, she can't really be friends with humans for long.
Haha yes EPOV is coming soon.
I'm really glad you liked it and I thank you for all your lovely reviews :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:12 PM Title: Epilogue 2
I loved it! These two are anything but traditional.
Author's Response:
Haha so very true! Traditional doesn't fit them, this did like a glove. So glad you liked it!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:32 AM Title: Epilogue 2
excellent story. I have laughed and laughed. I will miss this.
Thank you,
Author's Response:
Thank you! So will I, but I have a feeling Smugs will stay with me no matter what. I may bring him back someday too, but I've got lots of writing ahead right now. Thanks so much for reading and I love that I made you laugh
Date: 14 Dec 2010 2:40 PM Title: Epilogue 2
I don't want this to end.;( I absolutely love this Edward & Bella, but I'm sure you've got other things you'd like to do in life besides write ToI for infinity. If you don't I'm totally down with that & I can't imagine that your other readers wouldn't be too.;DDD)
That proposal was so typical Edward, perfect. I have to say I am thrilled, besides the previous remarks, that you are finishing the story, because I actually hate it when stories aren't finished, so thank you for the closure.
Besides get revenge at reunion next chapter are we going to get to see Edward meet Charlie?
Looking forward to next chapter and some dark side. mmwhaahaaha
Author's Response:
Haha I'm sad to let them go but excited at the same time because they really have had an amazing little journey that I couldn't have anticipated when I started the story :)
The proposal was exactly as it had to be with these too! I'll never leave you guys hanging on one of my stories, nor will I pull them. I hate when stories disappear and I won't do that to you.
Yes, Charlie and Edward meet as well next chapter. hehe I hope you like it! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 2:16 PM Title: Epilogue 2
Reviewed on FFN, hon!! But just one small addendum - seriously fucking LOVE AngryElla!! :-P
Author's Response:
Haha I love turning her loose on him as well. Makes me laugh everytime the explosion comes and he knows it's coming and eggs it on. They're so good together. :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2010 5:57 AM Title: Epilogue 2
Just so you know I have a huge crush on Darkward so I am so excited for the next chapter/outake. I like Sweetward very much but Darkward wins everytime I really don't know why So please take your time and really give it to us OK I am so excited to see what he has planed for them Thank you for sharing this with us and Update when you can Also have a good week I went back to work today So funkin' happy but its Christmas and I'm a Mail Lady I was at work before the sun came up and left in the dark Packages everywhere Have a good week......
Author's Response:
Ahhh glad to hear it! I'm a little worried people will think I erased all his progress but I really think he needs to do this one thing to complete his journey. You'll see soon enough!
Yikes! Mail's insane this time of year, so good luck! We're almost there and things will hopefully calm down soon hon :) Take care!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2010 2:48 AM Title: Epilogue 2
You have truly outdone yourself with this one. I have not laughed so hard in a long, long while. The visual of the pre-proposal was epic! I love your characters and your style :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a good time with this chapter and I think it's definitely my favorite :) I love hearing that I made you laugh and that you had fun with it just like I do. I love these crazy characters myself! Thanks!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 1:03 AM Title: Epilogue 2
awww. I loved this. you are wodnerful, thanks for sharing !!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you loved it, this was my favorite chapter by far. Thanks for the review ;)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:59 AM Title: Epilogue 2
another great chapter, I love this couple, and they have come a long way. Man, he really does suck at proposing, but you can't deny it was sincere. I hope the last chapter/outtake includes the trip to Forks
Author's Response:
Haha it does indeed, I promise! It goes darker than I expected but it felt right. Hopefully you'll like that!
He does suck at proposing but he sure tries hard and he did get her to say yes.
I'm so happy you liked it!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:34 AM Title: Epilogue 2
Very nice! It was the perfect unorthodox way for them to make it official. They're no ordinary couple so why should their marriage be? Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Haha very much how I felt about it. Nothing typical about them so their proposal and wedding most certainly should not be! Thanks for the review, so glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:05 AM Title: Epilogue 2
This was the perfect proposal and wedding for this story. Thanks for writing this!
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you agree with me. I couldn't see it going any other way :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 11:13 PM Title: Epilogue 2
Wow 3 times he tried and didn't get to propose how he wanted. So their married on their way to see Charlie and her HS reunion that should be interesting. Hmm wonder what Edward will do with mike and the guys..
Author's Response:
Haha well I can promise you it'll be pretty dark. I hope you all like it! Yes, the romantic proposals didn't work but the last one did. That's all that matters!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:05 AM Title: Epilogue #1
He has changed so much! I really like him now!
Author's Response:
Hahah I'm glad you do :) He's come a long way!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 9:13 PM Title: Epilogue #1
please say there's another epi;D)
cause I want more;)
Author's Response:
Two more, actually! So yeah, still some to come. Glad you want more :)
Date: 06 Dec 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Okay, I'm totally a fan girl of your Bella characterization, her questioning of everything and fierce approach & defense of her insecurities. Especially combined with Edward, what a duo. Great read;-D)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! She's wild and unpredictable and keeps him on his toes. She was the perfect foil for him and made him a better vamp without him even realizing it much of the time. So glad you enjoy her and her with him :) Thank you!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
an Fucckk, finally;)
Author's Response:
Haha yes, I came through eventually!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:23 PM Title: Epilogue #1
What a great chapter. I have really enjoyed your story and the growth of these 2 characters from beginning to end...and I love the irony that they have a pet cow named Willow...can't wait to see how you wrap it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I've had a good time bringing them together. Willow is such a hit! I love it! New chapter soon. Thank you :)
Date: 03 Dec 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
ahemm, next
Author's Response:
Hahah I don't know what that means exactly but okay :)
Date: 03 Dec 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
He's such a raving narcissist that it's hilarious to read. Her brain turn off & turn on to Buffy the Vampire Slayer equally hilarious. Can't wait to read more and to know that I'm going to get an ending already is equally exciting;D)
Author's Response:
Hahah yes, well I have two more epilogues to post but it's very nearly ended! He is quite full of himself but he'll show other sides as we go, I promise ;) The Buffy thing still remains my favorite :)
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
douchitude, ha ha. Actually that was more the word I was thinking to describe Edward, total douche. He is so full of himself it is laughable.
Author's Response:
Haha he is very full of himself to be sure. Somehow he manages to be charming much of the time though. At least to me!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Man, what an intro. I feel like the first 2 chapters were the introduction and they were awesome. haha I wasn't sure if she was going to be some whinny ass thing or what to expect.
Can't wait to read more;{p
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! They were actually, well at least chapter one was supposed to stand alone but people asked me to expand and I wanted to play with that smug vampire :) So glad you're enjoying it. Bella's not whiny, but she is a handful! Hope you enjoy it!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
yes yes yes, I;ll marry you
Author's Response:
Hehe don't make Bella kick your butt :) I'd say yes too though!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:53 AM Title: Epilogue #1
This has to happen to him nothing else has gone the way he wanted at first but he will get what he wants I hope they run into Mike loved thanks for sharing....
Author's Response:
Hahah yes this is very true. It wouldn't be Smugs and Bella if it went down smoothly the first time around :) Mike is coming up!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:53 AM Title: Epilogue #1
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
hi, I love this story, it`s hilarious...
Author's Response:
Hi, thank you! I love writing it and getting lost in his crazy head :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:39 AM Title: Epilogue #1
Ahhhh, poor Edward. He really did have it planned out so nicely. I love that Bella sent him hunting. She is finally finding her balance in this life. And I think it is cool that she has been able to keep in touch with Charlie.
Author's Response:
Hahah yeah he did but of course it couldn't go perfectly. Never does for the poor vamp! I really, really loved that Bella told him to go kill that guy. It showed that not only does she accept his choices, she encourages them. She's changed him in many good ways but I felt that that needed to stay to allow him to be true to himself. And yeah, she still calls Dad and they're working on repairing their relationship!
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:17 AM Title: Epilogue #1
Already R&R'ed on FFN, hon!! :-P
Author's Response:
Saw that! Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:05 AM Title: Epilogue #1
I'm not surprised he didn't get to propose lol nothing is that easy for him to do.
Author's Response:
Hehe nope! Not in the romantic sense anyway, he has a hard time of it. But he's trying :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:38 AM Title: Epilogue #1
Wow, holy shit, that is a great part on of the end of one hell of a story!!!
Now, lets get Eddie over there and help the damsel!
Onward, fellow readers!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it! I thought it suited them both perfectly and gave her a chance to not only support his choices, but encourage them! He'll save the girl! Thanks for the review ;)
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:12 AM Title: Epilogue #1
Great chapter! I loved the "first date." Looking forward to the final installment. Are there more outtakes planned? I have the outtakes on alert, but I was just curious.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Two more chapters to come, so a little left. I have a few outtake ideas running through my head but not sure. If you have any requests, feel free to let me know :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
ya thats 2 more down 65 more emails to go I enjoyed this chapter very muck so thank you for sharing it with us.....
Author's Response:
:) And still you review both places? You're the best!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved it!!! That was awesomw the way Bella called Edward her husband and then kicked Victwhoria's ass!!!!
I hope they get married before or during an epilouge!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! The marriage issue will be addressed, I promise :)