Date: 01 Jul 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Please update your story
Date: 10 Apr 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
can't wait til the next update
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
My last review was really short. Sorry. You gained me as a reader. I am looking forward to see where the character go in story. I really feel for Jasper and hope he gets through this. I really like your story and am waiting for more. Is there a way I can be alerted that you updated to the story? Thank you again and I hope you keep writing. :)
Date: 06 Jul 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Jasper!
Date: 13 May 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
So glad to see an update can't wait for the next chapter i absolutly love this story
Date: 10 May 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
I was raised Mormon. Sex was for procreation and nothing more. Other than that it was dirty. So wrong.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm still here! I love this story!
Date: 19 Mar 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Anxious for next chapter!
Date: 17 Mar 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
Update Please!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Still here and enjoyed the new chapter!
Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
So happy to see an update! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
thank god i though you had lost interest in this story now onto the yummy stuff with jasper/bells please
Author's Response:
Yes the yummy stuff will now commence :) Thanks for sticking with me everyone xxxx
Date: 16 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow his family were real pieces of work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for continuing to read xxx
Date: 16 Mar 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
I was so excited to get your update. Thanks for all the back ground information on Jasper and his father. Jasper has a lot of things to work through. Thanks again for sharing with us. Excited to be getting updates again.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your lovely words, more to come very very soon I promise xxx
Date: 15 Mar 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
I missed this story can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you - its always nice to me missed :D Move very very soon xxxx
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awww, fuck! Im out of chapters at a critical moment! Dammittihell!!please update. :(
Date: 29 Jan 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thats just so sad and pitiful, that he knew as a scared child that his parents werent available emotionally. And him being denied all touch, even casual? Its like those kids forced to live in closets! :(. I hope the girls can fix him!!
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story! Hoping that you will post a new chapter soon!
Date: 20 Nov 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love it!! Can't wait to see where this leads
Date: 15 Nov 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh god! What happened? Anxious for next chapter!
Date: 12 Nov 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Really enjoying this story so far, looking forward to see where this goes, and not so patiently waiting for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ooh! What a nasty cliffy! I hope it's because he's developing feelings for her beyond what one should feel for a therapist and not that Alice steered him away fom her because she's wanting to help him in that regard as well or because Alice's drunken comment at the bar bothered him.
Date: 12 Nov 2013 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bella! On the other hand, perhaps the reason is a good one. Perhaps, Jasper is growing attached to Bella. He would need someone detached for therapy. Loved it!
Date: 11 Nov 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love it! I am thinking that he spoke to Alice about maybe developing feelings he is having for Bella and didn't want to have issues with his treatment, at least that is what I am hoping so that they can be together!!! :)
-Kate
Date: 10 Nov 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Um, he's starting to have personal feelings for Bella? Gah, you're killing me here! Update ASAP!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hopefully he's decided he wants to see her in a 'non=professional' way. *evil, wicked grin*
Catherine
Date: 10 Nov 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
So glad to get this update from you. I have missed this story. So what is up with Jasper???? I am thinking that Jasper is interested in Bella, personally and told Alice. So Alice suggested that he quit seeing Bella professionally and try to see her personally. Just my thoughts. Can't wait for your next update. Hope it is soon.
Date: 09 Nov 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
lol for Slutty Drunk Alice. Oh wow for end. What a bomb to drop that way. Evil Cliffy Woman!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oooooo did Jasper tell Alice what happen that night at the bar
Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well, Jasper is just going to have to ask Bella out on a date. Or, if he's not a client, she can ask him out!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Omg this doesn't sounds good. I hope alice isn't plotting anything bad. Update soon
Date: 02 Nov 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Anxious for next chapter!! ;D
Author's Response:
I am halfway through next chapter. sorry for the wait. real life getting I'm the way again xxx
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love it!!! Please update soon
Date: 01 Oct 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
So happy to have you back writing again. Absolutely love this story can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bad bad Alice ! love it update soon
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
I dont know how Bella can control herself -I just want to attack him! Good thing she is a professional!
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's heartbreaking to hear his story!
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
If fingertip touching gets him excited, i wonder what else will happen! LOL! Love it!
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
I still feel sad for Jasper, but Bella is certainly lucky!
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awwww....poor Jasper!
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very interesting!
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Looking forward to more!
Date: 24 Sep 2013 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Faux pas, much?! Alice needs to watch the alcohol! Perhaps now though, Jasper will not see Bella as some sort of idealized woman. He will begin to understand her failures and flaws. Nice work and a nice twist!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
oooh Drunk Alice is very mouthy. Poor B and J.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am glad that Bella saw that Jasper was panicking and helped him out. I can not wait to read more of this wonderful story.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Very interesting twist! Alice needs to learn how to hold her tongue and her liquor though. As unorthodox as it was, Bella sensing his discomfort and coming to his rescue like that I hope showed him that she sincerely cares about him. I got the impression that her comment abut him having her as long as he wanted her, sparked a hope in him that her caring went beyond that of her job. Hopefully that spark wasn't totally extinguished by her later comment about pretending the night never happened.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ok, so is Alice talking to Jasper? I hope Alice is not got a crush on Jasper too.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Things are heating up with Bella and Jasper.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
WOW, I would say that this chapter was a HUGE break throught for Jasper.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like Bella has some naughty plans for Jasper. LOL!!!!!!!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bless Jasper's heart. He is really messed up. I am hoping that Bella can help him.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Maybe there is hope for Jasper after all.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like Jasper's parents did a number on him.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very Interesting
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
WELL...... very interesting.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ooh! As is she wasn't all too tempted by the man already, now she sees him in a social situation. Has he seen her? Did he hear them? If so, will he be hurt by her denial? What about Alice's little slip? Is she more interested in him than she should be too? This has the makings for a very interesting evening...
Date: 14 Sep 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
They are too funny
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really like your story. Glad I found it. Can't wait for more!
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm with Bella... I'd like to hold him in my arms and comfort him... poor baby.
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
ok this is really really good you have to finsh it please
Author's Response:
awww thank you and I promise you it WILL be finished xxxx
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful chapter!That was quite the emotional session they had. Her confoting him so tenderly as he cried was a lovely moment. I also loved how yu made their first kiss so natural, not clinical
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I am really pleased with how this chapter came out in the end, as I was stuck on it for quite a while and it ended up taking a different direction to what I'd planned (for the better I think) xxx
Date: 23 Aug 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love the tug of war Bella is having here. Part of her wants to be professional and take time copying up to Jasper, and the other, more emotional side wants to make love to the man NOW or yesterday! I find it sweet that her gentleness wins out. It's sweet, but not the least bit less sexy! Love the relationship and the story! Thank you!
Author's Response:
awww thank you for such a lovely review. It's awesome that I'm doing a good enough job to convey the emotions of the charactures that you 'get' them :) xxxxx
Date: 22 Aug 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
So sorry to hear that you have had some issues, RL always comes first but I am happy that you were able to start updates again! :) Loved it!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter, thank you for your lovely words xx
Date: 21 Aug 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think you have your muse back. That was a great, sensitive chapter! Thanks.
Author's Response:
yes the words are flowing again :) Thank you for your kind words xx
Date: 21 Aug 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Go B!!!! Loving this Jasper. You are teasing us Soooooo well.
Author's Response:
that's the plan :) I love me a bit of slow burn xx Thanks for your lovely review, it feels good to be back xx
Date: 26 Jul 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it all. I cannot wait to see how this devwlops update soon
Date: 08 Jul 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
How much longer for the next update? im hanging on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response:
UPDATED :) Hope you can forgive me for the delay and that you enjoy the chapter xx
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. I love your story
Date: 24 Jun 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
So great! :) I love that he is opening up to her and allowing her to comfort him, I believe that is a giant step in the right direction, let's just hope that there aren't any setbacks!
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm not sure why you're nervous about this. I think you did a lovely job writing about a verty sensitive and touching moment that they shared. It's good that they are developing emotional intimacy along their road to physical intimacy.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
Amazing. It really did need the tissue alert. I am facinated by your premise amd the story. Please update as often as possible.
Date: 23 Jun 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Bella is getting into Jasper's makeup. He needs encouragement so much he positively aches for it and you make us feel that along with Bella. Nicely done! Especially bringing Jasper's art in to the scene. Another thing I love about this story is how totally opposite Jasper is in it. Usually, he is a warrior, The God of War, tough and battle tried through and through. Here, you bring us a completely opposite Jadper, yet one who draws us in and makes us want to be a part of eloping him toward strength. Well done!
Date: 23 Jun 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that had me tearing. I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
No need to be nervous, this was a great chapter and shows just how broken he is. I cannot wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this story !!! It is an amazing idea and you're doing a great job writing it. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
thank you xxx
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Jasper is so confused:( I can't wait to see where they both go from her. Great story!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
good progress. hope J gets better.
Date: 15 Jun 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
awww poor jasper. Glad B is helping him
Date: 14 Jun 2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great story! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved her little confession to put him at ease. I'm going to bet that if he thinks back on their session later that evening and gets a mental picture of her and her BOB that he ends up doing a little extra credit homework. ;) He probably won't full on whack off, but he'll at least think about doing so and maybe try touching himself a little bit. Will you be including his POV at all in this story? If not, would you consider doing an outtake or two?
Author's Response:
Maybe a little later I'll do a Jasper POV outtake. The story will be in Bella's POV throughout as I want J's feeling and thoughts to unfold during the sessions, so doing his POV at the moment would give too much away, if that makes sense!!! So until then, you'll have to continue to use your imagination :) But if you do have any ideas of what you'd like to see happen, then email me and I'll do my best to include them (em.de3010@gmail.com)
Date: 14 Jun 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
The more i read of this story the more i seem to want.
Author's Response:
Good :D Keep enjoying and I'll keep writing xx
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
This was a great chapter and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Good, next chapter is half wrote xx
Date: 13 Jun 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
And will Bella admit that to Jasper? lol
Author's Response:
:D I think we'll have to keep it our little secret for the moment xx
Date: 13 Jun 2013 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
Really enjoying this story, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
*giggles* hehehe... This was a good chapter~
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Again, it was great. I'm really enjoying shy, timid Jasper. :D
Date: 09 Jun 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh wow!!! More please me likey
Author's Response:
More on the way - ch 6 is with Megan to pre-read x
Date: 09 Jun 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
You write with feeling and heart and therefore do your subject matter proud! I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to your updates. Jasper, at this point, reminds me of a locked diary or journal. So much valuable and worth knowing within but shut away from the world and hidden. Bella has just begun to turn the lock and even if she has to pick the lock, she will find a way to let the world see what a beautiful soul is closed inside. I will never touch someone's hand and feel quite the same way again! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you, your comments mean so much to me xxx
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's horrible that a young man can be made to feel that just having another person's fingers touch his is sexual and evel and wrong. Granted, those feelings are likely exacerbated by the obvious sexual chemistry these two seem to latently share, but even so...It should be an innocent gesture signifying anything from acknowledgement or a greeting (such as a hand shake) to a comforting touch of solace, the innocent friendships of hildhood where one holds hqandsw as part of a gam e or4 as you run together, Yes, it can be the opening step to exual intimacy, but that is in a small fraction of the number of times we touch another's hand during the course of our lives.
Author's Response:
Thank you for such a lovely review x
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am really enjoying this story, and cannot wait for more. Wish it was me that was giving him therpy though. LOL!! Awesome chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
In my head I'm Bella and I have lots planned for my Jasper :P
Date: 08 Jun 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story
Author's Response:
thank you x
Date: 08 Jun 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love it! can't wait for next chapter :)