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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Outtake

WOW!!! AWESOME!!! i think this little story is one of my top fav's ;) thanks for sharing this on here ;D

Reviewer: harkie5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Outtake

Sorry I've been such a fail lately. Fantastic outtake. Love these two! It's been an amazing read. You both definitely opened my eyes. Beautiful writing! Thanks!!



Author's Response:

I have been a total fail about review replies, so it's totally okay.  Thanks for the nice review. We are thrilled that you enjoyed the story and that we opened your eyes. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2013 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Outtake

:) loved this



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Outtake

Wow that's so hot 



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the outtake!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Outtake

As long as they both love it I think it is great 



Author's Response:

Oh yes, they both definitely enjoy it.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Outtake

Oh you fantastic woman!  I could read outtake after outtake of these two!!  I'm off to Facebook to pimp you you out again. 



Author's Response:

Aww, so glad you enjoyed this brief outtake.  And thanks for the pimping on FB and the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

LOVED it!!! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you enjoyed it!  Thank you so much for the great review, we appreciate it so much! -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love!!! Fantastic story! So happy A friend pointed them in the right direction. I can picture their lives together. I love your writing style. Very visual. Thank you so much!!



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you enjoyed the way the story wrapped up! So glad you can picture their lives together. And we're so pleased you like the writing style. It was an interesting challenge for us!  Thank you for the review, we appreciate it! -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow! I can't believe their bathroom interaction. I don't like cheating but it was hot. I wish he would've handled it better. They were both in the wrong but he shouldn't have left her on her knees. At least he realizes it. Hope they are able to work it out. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Yes, he made quite the mistake there.  They're both going to have to talk about what happened, and acknowledge the mistakes they made in order to make things work.  Thank you for the review, we appreciate it!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: Heather Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

Finally have some free time to read the continuation. So good. My heart hurts for them. I hope they can make it work somehow. Amazing that they both have a connection to music and the violen. Off to read more. Thanks!!



Author's Response:

So thrilled that you are enjoying the story.  Yes, it made our hearts hurt a bit to write it.  The connection they both have to music is a strong one,a nd it will help tie them together.  Thank you so much for the great review, we appreciate it so much!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for what you girls write next. Even if it is half as good as this it will be awesome. Love the future glimpse too. 



Author's Response:

We certainly have more in store for you, so keep an eye out!  Thrilled that you enjoyed this story so much, especially the future glimpse.  We thought that was just perfect! 

Thank you so much for the great review, we appreciate it so much!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved it they are perfect for each other



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you enjoyed the story and thought they were perfect for each other.  Thank you for the review, we appreciate it!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) loved this story



Author's Response:

So happy that you enjoyed it.  Thank you for the review, we appreciate it!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

Really awsome ending! Great story that started out intense and ended up sweet.



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you enjoyed the way we wrapped up the story. 

Thank you so much for the great review, we appreciate it so much!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

The sex sounded nice 



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you for the review, we appreciate it!  -Karenec & Discordia

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

Sounds like they need to have a serious conversation. So many bad things happen in life because people don't communicate. Communication is both the blessing and curse of having the power of speech. I work with animals and their communication is a lot more straight forward in a lot of ways.



Author's Response:

Yes, they definitely do.  Communication is often very difficult, but they're going to have to work at it, if they want things to go somewhere.  You are SO right about animals.  They always let you know how they feel!

Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

i think they could not help themselves.  he needs his ass kicked for leaving her like that



Author's Response:

They definitely felt so intensely that they didn't stop to think about the ramifications.  And yes, it was a very poor decision on his part.  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Damn, intense, passionate, sad and emotionally battered by what Edward and Bella did together ultimately resulting in such an unintentional heart breaking. But, I am looking forward to moving past this and growing stronger from the experience.

Author's Response:

It was definitely an intense experience, and unfortunately their decision led to a really rough situation for both of them.  They weren't thinking clearly and now neither of them know how to bridge the gap between them. You're right though, they will definitely grow stronger from the experience.

Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: silverelvis Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story. Really like the tension between them,  even though they have only been in the same room  three times.  I hope you can make it a little bit longer than just three or four chapters.   Thank you.  I love your stories.



Author's Response:

Thrilled that you're enjoying the story, and the tension between them.  The story is complete, and it will be 4 chapters, with the final one to post tonight.  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow that must be horrible to feel 



Author's Response:

It was a really awful feeling.  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

wow edward did not handle that well

i feel bad for bella. they have such chemistry and acted on it. oh edward

i am shocked

love it



Author's Response:

No, he didn't.  It was really rough for Bella, and Edward is really hating himself right now.  Thrilled that you're enjoying it so much.  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) loved this



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the nice review, we appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: Team Switzerland 2009 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

LOVE!! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

The next chapter will post today!  So thrilled that you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

wow they are lost in each other. I'm so sad she didn't turn around



Author's Response:

There is a very strong connection there, isn't there?  And yes, it is sad that she didn't turn around.  But, give them some time to realize that they want each other bad enough to make the changes that need to happen.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)



Author's Response:

Aww, glad you liked it, hun!  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

i can almost see them both sitting behind a violin both naked as she plays it-beautiful

 

they both want something but are they willing to take what they want

they do for sex but ill they do it for life and a future



Author's Response:

That's a really lovely mental image.  If we hadn't already finished writing the rest of this, we might have included a scene like that.  And yes, they both want something together, something more than just sex, but at this point they don't want it back enough to make the changes that will need to happen.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow

that was mind blowing

i like the fact that she because he knows what he wants and submits to her and enjoys that it was arousing

i guess because for what 10 years he has thought he is sick for what he wants sexual finally being able to let go and feel and truly enjoy his fantasy is mind blowning



Author's Response:

So thrilled that you enjoyed it.  He didn't find his desires sick necessarily, but it's certainly an intimidating topic to bring up to a partner, and the more he was rejected, the more he hesitated to pursue it.  It grew to a point where he wasn't sure how he felt about it, so it was a relief for him to have it be a positive experience with Bella.  It was mind blowing for him. 

Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

You know - there's a way around just about every obstacle in life; you just have to think outside the box sometimes...



Author's Response:

Absolutely.  The obstacles they have aren't insurmountable, they just have to get to a point where they realize they want it bad enough to make it happen.  It won't be easy, but it's doable.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

Awwwwwww poor Bella and I wish they could be together and thanks for responding to my review



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's defintely feeling torn right now.  They need some time to figure out what they want and realize that they're going to have to work to be together.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: bullnala Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really need to learn not to read these stories at work. My heart is breaking for these two. 



Author's Response:

Aww.  Yeah, it's definitely a rough point for them.  So glad you are connecting with them like that though.  We'll get them together, just give them some time to figure out what they need to do to get there.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow he has learned alot about himself and She is learning more about herself to like she wants more of him.  



Author's Response:

Yes, they both learned a lot from each other.  The next chapter will post tonight.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was my absolute favorite story over at the LDA blog site. I am so very excited to read more!

Author's Response:

So thrilled that you enjoyed it!  We really had a great time writing it and we hope you enjoy the continuation.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Spamula69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Yay.  So glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hot, just hot!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it a lot nice one-shot



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the one shot.  It will be continued with three more chapters, and the first of those should post this evening.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) loved this



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it, thanks!

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow! he has never found a women that was willing to give him what he desires. i hope they get an hea. thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

There are probably a lot of women around here who would happily give Edward what he desires.  ;)  He and Bella will get a HEA, there are three more chapters to post!  Thanks for the nice review.

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