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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2024 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 20 B Let's Get Physical

Thank you for the update..I can't believe Esme would ack like that now.  I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again



Author's Response:

Hello! Thanks for reading. That she is, do you think she can be redeemed?

the next chapter is posted 21.1 

I will move it up to where it's supposed to go when im ready to post chapter 23. Hope you like it.

Reviewer: Reinbeau Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2024 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 15: Carlisle

One very operprotective and over compensating Esme!



Author's Response:

That she is, thanks for reading 📚 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2024 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20 B Let's Get Physical

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, the next chapter is up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 22: Anniversary Proposal

Wow what a night .  Poor girl sick what a bummer to start to ask her and she passes out I think the second time was the best anyway no matter what her condition he still wants her so sweet.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 21: 3.5 years later

Edward was asking for Bellas hand???  So glad Charlie is ok



Author's Response:

Hmmmmmm.............!!!!! :-) 

Reviewer: ncprovencio75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20: Our First Year

I can't watie for the nexit chapter I hope to read more on fanfiction also keep it up...... 



Author's Response:

Hello, all of my stories are posted here also. You read each chapter twice? If you do thats's really cool! Thanks for following :-) <3 

Reviewer: Katherinelizzi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 4: English Literature

I really want to love this story but I can't you really need to work on your spelling and you need to decide on how to space your chapters not keep jumping from the next day to the third day all in one page. You also need to create links between the actions of the characters I just got so confused on some things and thought where the hell did he get that??

 



Author's Response:

I noticed that too. I think those mistakes are less appearing on the coming chapters...I had a beta for the first few chapters but I don't have one now... I'm sorry,  hope I don't lose you as a reader...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 20: Our First Year

So sweet they are each others for ever and so glad Esme is finely happy to she will let her kids have a live now.  When is Edward going to ask Bella to marry him officaly.



Author's Response:

Hi! That's coming up soon!  ♥



Author's Response:

Hi! That's coming up soon!  ♥



Author's Response:

Hi! That's coming up soon!  ♥

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 18: April Sleepover

Great update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 18: April Sleepover

So they got to act like normal teens for a few days good times.

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: April Sleepover

great story i loved it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 17: Foundraiser Party

Poor guy he was so emberesed Bella loves him 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 16: Valentine's Day

what a great day.  I would love a build a bear.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 18: April Sleepover

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 15: Carlisle

She wants him to make a house call ;)

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 14: I love you

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks! More soon.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 14: I love you

Bella needs to hold strong Esme will figure out that Bella is what Edward needs.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she has to sooner or later. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 13: New Year's

Fun party to bad Esme is trying to find something wrong with Bella



Author's Response:

yeah, sometimes people do that all the time.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Holydays

Esme is a fraid she is not going to be needed she is his mom he will always need her but he needs more and to be a man and have a family



Author's Response:

yeah, lets see how things progess. we need to give esme a chance.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 14: I love you

i think its going to be someone for esme ... looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

mmm, lets see about that. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Revelations

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 11: Revelations

Love it. Can wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Project

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 11: Revelations

she gets it now and that makes him that much more special.



Author's Response:

Yes, but not as an invalid, soon to be teachers know better than that! Thanks for reading :-)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday

I loved it! So glad he told her! can't wait for more.. thanks



Author's Response:

More will come soon, im reorginizing the outline of chapter 22 I need to make some adjustements. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 10: Safe in my arms

Thank goodness Jasper was going by and kicked his ass.



Author's Response:

Yep, thats Jasper! (Btw, peter wont come back in the story)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 11: Revelations

Very sweet.



Author's Response:

Yeah they are, arent they?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 9: Halloween Party

great party



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 8: Dreadful Dinner

Esme is just going to make her kids want to get away from her.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but lets give her a chance shall we? Lol!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Birth of a Friend

Great sweet date



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 6: Birthday Dinner

He has nothing to worry about with Jacob Bella likes him



Author's Response:

Yeah but he is still insecure.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 8: Dreadful Dinner

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

I will update soon...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Project

he must be very good but how could she not know



Author's Response:

She suspected but didnt want to say anything, she was trying not to judge by looks and all that. Thanks!

Reviewer: qlsm Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 8: Dreadful Dinner

That last chapter was really intense. This is a very different Esme from other stories. Interested to see how this gets resolved. looking forwrd to an update...



Author's Response:

And you havent see nothing yet, lol! Thanks for reading :-)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 8: Dreadful Dinner

What a different Esme.



Author's Response:

That she is!

Reviewer: qlsm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4: English Literature

interesting beginning. Looking forward to updates.



Author's Response:

I will update soon!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 4: English Literature

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Ill probaly update either sunday or monday.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 4: English Literature

and they meet ;)



Author's Response:

Yes they did...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3: First day at College

great first day for them all.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was it differed from my experience though, I remember I was scared and running around not wanting to be late...!!! LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: From the rain to the sun

it is good to be with family



Author's Response:

Yes it is! Thanks for reading :-)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday

Excited to read this!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I will update soon! 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday

Great story line

Author's Response:

Glad you like it, I will update soon!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday

sounds good to me



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! More will come soon :-)

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