Date: 10 May 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 22: Anniversary Proposal
Wow what a night . Poor girl sick what a bummer to start to ask her and she passes out I think the second time was the best anyway no matter what her condition he still wants her so sweet.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 21: 3.5 years later
Edward was asking for Bellas hand??? So glad Charlie is ok
Author's Response:
Hmmmmmm.............!!!!! :-)
Date: 17 Feb 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20: Our First Year
I can't watie for the nexit chapter I hope to read more on fanfiction also keep it up......
Author's Response:
Hello, all of my stories are posted here also. You read each chapter twice? If you do thats's really cool! Thanks for following :-) <3
Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 4: English Literature
I really want to love this story but I can't you really need to work on your spelling and you need to decide on how to space your chapters not keep jumping from the next day to the third day all in one page. You also need to create links between the actions of the characters I just got so confused on some things and thought where the hell did he get that??
Author's Response:
I noticed that too. I think those mistakes are less appearing on the coming chapters...I had a beta for the first few chapters but I don't have one now... I'm sorry, hope I don't lose you as a reader...
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 20: Our First Year
So sweet they are each others for ever and so glad Esme is finely happy to she will let her kids have a live now. When is Edward going to ask Bella to marry him officaly.
Author's Response:
Hi! That's coming up soon! ♥
Author's Response:
Hi! That's coming up soon! ♥
Author's Response:
Hi! That's coming up soon! ♥
Date: 01 Jul 2013 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 18: April Sleepover
Great update
Date: 24 Jun 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 18: April Sleepover
So they got to act like normal teens for a few days good times.
Date: 23 Jun 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: April Sleepover
great story i loved it
Date: 23 Jun 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 17: Foundraiser Party
Poor guy he was so emberesed Bella loves him
Date: 23 Jun 2013 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 16: Valentine's Day
what a great day. I would love a build a bear.
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 18: April Sleepover
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 15: Carlisle
She wants him to make a house call ;)
Date: 29 May 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 14: I love you
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks! More soon.
Date: 29 May 2013 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 14: I love you
Bella needs to hold strong Esme will figure out that Bella is what Edward needs.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she has to sooner or later. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 29 May 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 13: New Year's
Fun party to bad Esme is trying to find something wrong with Bella
Author's Response:
yeah, sometimes people do that all the time.
Date: 29 May 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Holydays
Esme is a fraid she is not going to be needed she is his mom he will always need her but he needs more and to be a man and have a family
Author's Response:
yeah, lets see how things progess. we need to give esme a chance.
Date: 29 May 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 14: I love you
i think its going to be someone for esme ... looking forward to more
Author's Response:
mmm, lets see about that. Thanks for reading!
Date: 28 May 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Revelations
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 28 May 2013 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 11: Revelations
Love it. Can wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 28 May 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Project
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 26 May 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 11: Revelations
she gets it now and that makes him that much more special.
Author's Response:
Yes, but not as an invalid, soon to be teachers know better than that! Thanks for reading :-)
Date: 26 May 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
I loved it! So glad he told her! can't wait for more.. thanks
Author's Response:
More will come soon, im reorginizing the outline of chapter 22 I need to make some adjustements.
Date: 26 May 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 10: Safe in my arms
Thank goodness Jasper was going by and kicked his ass.
Author's Response:
Yep, thats Jasper! (Btw, peter wont come back in the story)
Date: 26 May 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 11: Revelations
Very sweet.
Author's Response:
Yeah they are, arent they?
Date: 26 May 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 9: Halloween Party
great party
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 21 May 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 8: Dreadful Dinner
Esme is just going to make her kids want to get away from her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but lets give her a chance shall we? Lol!
Date: 21 May 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Birth of a Friend
Great sweet date
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 21 May 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 6: Birthday Dinner
He has nothing to worry about with Jacob Bella likes him
Author's Response:
Yeah but he is still insecure.
Date: 21 May 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 8: Dreadful Dinner
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
I will update soon...
Date: 21 May 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Project
he must be very good but how could she not know
Author's Response:
She suspected but didnt want to say anything, she was trying not to judge by looks and all that. Thanks!
Date: 21 May 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 8: Dreadful Dinner
That last chapter was really intense. This is a very different Esme from other stories. Interested to see how this gets resolved. looking forwrd to an update...
Author's Response:
And you havent see nothing yet, lol! Thanks for reading :-)
Date: 20 May 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 8: Dreadful Dinner
What a different Esme.
Author's Response:
That she is!
Date: 19 May 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4: English Literature
interesting beginning. Looking forward to updates.
Author's Response:
I will update soon!!
Date: 18 May 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 4: English Literature
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks, Ill probaly update either sunday or monday.
Date: 17 May 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 4: English Literature
and they meet ;)
Author's Response:
Yes they did...
Date: 17 May 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3: First day at College
great first day for them all.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was it differed from my experience though, I remember I was scared and running around not wanting to be late...!!! LOL
Date: 17 May 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: From the rain to the sun
it is good to be with family
Author's Response:
Yes it is! Thanks for reading :-)
Date: 16 May 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
Excited to read this!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I will update soon!
Date: 16 May 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
Great story line
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, I will update soon!
Date: 16 May 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
sounds good to me
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! More will come soon :-)