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Reviewer: brandofcullencrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 15: Port Angeles Games and a Guest

This doesn't seem like Edward and Bella story. She is pregnant with Jake's baby and in love with him.

Author's Response:

Hello there! I know it looks like that but be patient. There's a reason for everything on this story. It will end as an E/B story. Just wait and see!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15: Port Angeles Games and a Guest

God I hope that baby dies I hate Jacob he doesn't fucking deserve Bella!!! Really hope that baby dies!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 10: Dress Shopping & Conversations

hmmm is she prego?   I agree that B and E need to talk but at Alice's party is def not the time to get into a heavy subject.

Yey for birthday girl Alice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 9: Last month of Summer

hmmm sounds like the wolves are starting to appear.....maybe?

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Date

dying to learn who took renee and why

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: Cliffdiving & Invitations

So Renee is pretending to be mad?



Author's Response:

No it was renee's POV but she wasnt the one speaking. Remember on the pasttake that charlie and bella were abandoned by bella's mother...??

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 7: Unexpected Sleepovers

hmmm Jake is acting quite suspicious.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 6: Shopping

cool party.  Jake is def doing the jealous thing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 5: Movie Night

lol for Jakey being jealous.   Alice is really being pushy about E.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 4: Edward

hmmm now what is wrong with E I wonder.  Alice seems a bit pushy considering B has a boyfriend.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Party

Great party.  Seems like Jake is a good kid for her so far.    Wonder what's up with E coming?



Author's Response:

He will trun this thing around that is.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Date

sweet date.  they sound cute.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: First day of Summer

awww poor B.   So all the kids are there and kinda normal?



Author's Response:

Yes, thats the key word, kind of.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 10:03 PM Title: Pasttake no. 1: Renee De Laurenttis-Swan

oooh interesting start.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 7: Unexpected Sleepovers

bleck!!!!!!! jacob barf all over!!!!!!!!!!! even more gross him and bella having sex!! bleck!!!!!!!!!! hope he dies!!!!!!!!! donn't like him wish he wasn't in this story hope he dies and never comes back!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, I hope that you bare with me and the characters and follow the story until the end? It does say on the summary that Bella and Edward will be together in the end right? I promised a cannon HEA. Hope you want to stay, thanks again!

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