Date: 31 Jan 2020 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope you continue this story, I really like reading it. And I wonder if Bella and Jasper end up together and how that will happen
Date: 20 Dec 2017 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can see Bella leaving the force to be with Jasper
Date: 18 May 2016 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
This story is a perfect ten!!!! I'm so happy you're back and writing new chapters!!!!!
See you next update!!!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
thanks for the update. Really like this story and the diffrent pairings.
Date: 17 Aug 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter twelve
Good update
Date: 11 Aug 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter eleven
I have been drawn in to this story...eager for continuation of story...please I know it's been awhile .. But please continue this story! Your writing is captivating.
Author's Response:
Hey... At the end of July, I started to update again... :) This is the fourth update ever since. I don't promise to update every week, but I'm going to try. Because you have review you get a little surprise:
She walks by me and goes immediately to the office. Isa is standing at the bar, writing on a paper. "I'm going to talk with Alice in the office."
She looks up. "I don't care if you fuck her in your office."
This made me angry. "God damn, Isa."
"Isabella," she corrected me.
"Isabella, why are you acting like a bitch?"
"Now you care!" she yells. "Yesterday, you couldn't care less."
I close my eyes and take a deep breath. "I'm sorry." I say eventually. "I'm really sorry."
Date: 10 Aug 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter eleven
Good update
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! And I hope you stay around for the next chapter! :)
She walks by me and goes immediately to the office. Isa is standing at the bar, writing on a paper. "I'm going to talk with Alice in the office."
She looks up. "I don't care if you fuck her in your office."
This made me angry. "God damn, Isa."
"Isabella," she corrected me.
"Isabella, why are you acting like a bitch?"
"Now you care!" she yells. "Yesterday, you couldn't care less."
I close my eyes and take a deep breath. "I'm sorry." I say eventually. "I'm really sorry."
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter ten
I enjoy reading your story. Angela seems to be hiding something. Can't wait to read your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! As promised, a little suprise:
“What do you mean?” I ask her, curious at who the mystery person was.
“She met him at her graduation party for High School. It was the first time we let her go to a party.” Mrs. Webber turns to the fire place, and on the mantel stood an array of different pictures. I stand up to take a closer look. Angela looks so different in these that even I can see that I never met the same girl as on these pictures. In one of them she is smiling with each arm wrapped around one of her younger brothers. She’s wearing a classic blue, but old fashioned, dress. The dress line comes below her knees and it didn’t show any cleavage.
“My husband is the reverend at the nearby church,” she explains. I look at her and give her a small smile, before going back to my seat. “Angela always complied with everything we did. She had her freedom.”
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter ten
Well that was way out of left field for me. Is she trying to distance herself so she doesn't get more attached to Jasper?
Something is up with Angela too and I am wondering if she is a plant from Alice or whoever Alice is working with?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! And here is the little surprise :)
“What do you mean?” I ask her, curious at who the mystery person was.
“She met him at her graduation party for High School. It was the first time we let her go to a party.” Mrs. Webber turns to the fire place, and on the mantel stood an array of different pictures. I stand up to take a closer look. Angela looks so different in these that even I can see that I never met the same girl as on these pictures. In one of them she is smiling with each arm wrapped around one of her younger brothers. She’s wearing a classic blue, but old fashioned, dress. The dress line comes below her knees and it didn’t show any cleavage.
“My husband is the reverend at the nearby church,” she explains. I look at her and give her a small smile, before going back to my seat. “Angela always complied with everything we did. She had her freedom.”
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter ten
Good update
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! Here is the surprise:
“What do you mean?” I ask her, curious at who the mystery person was.
“She met him at her graduation party for High School. It was the first time we let her go to a party.” Mrs. Webber turns to the fire place, and on the mantel stood an array of different pictures. I stand up to take a closer look. Angela looks so different in these that even I can see that I never met the same girl as on these pictures. In one of them she is smiling with each arm wrapped around one of her younger brothers. She’s wearing a classic blue, but old fashioned, dress. The dress line comes below her knees and it didn’t show any cleavage.
“My husband is the reverend at the nearby church,” she explains. I look at her and give her a small smile, before going back to my seat. “Angela always complied with everything we did. She had her freedom.”
Date: 27 Jul 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter nine
Great update
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking some time to review.
Date: 24 Jul 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter eight
Good update
Date: 07 Oct 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter five
once again, absolutely amazing.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 9:40 AM Title: Chapter five
Good update
Date: 04 Oct 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter five
great chapter cant wait to see wat happens next update soon
Date: 22 Sep 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter four
Bella is the male version of Jasper., That's crazy.
She actually slept with Felix? Felix will have problems with Jasper, or it is also infiltrated the police, I think it would be good if Felix was an undercover cop, after all Bella needs help.
Kisses.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter four
great chapter loved it
Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter three
Yeah he's acting way too nice, sweet, weak to pull off being apart of a crime family....Toughen him up please
Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter four
Ooooh! He's falling fast :)
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter two
Jasper is coming off a little soft to be a mob boss...I know she's not suppose to know this about him yet and all but normally mob people carry themselves in a certain way and exhume power. He just comes across as a normal every day nice guy
Date: 11 Jul 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter three
Love it cant wait
Date: 29 Jun 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter three
Loved it, can't wait to read more .
Date: 23 Jun 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter two
Great story. I hope you update often.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter two
Another great chapter , cant wait to read more
Date: 04 Jun 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter one
Nice set up. One or two things though: Bella would be in the 15th precinct and her dad would simply be referred to as the Police Comissioner of New York City or comissionerod the NYPD.
I'm looking forward to your story! Thaks for the hard work!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter one
Good start, can't wait for more!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter one
great start cant wait to read more
Date: 31 May 2013 10:38 AM Title: Chapter one
I love it, love it, love it... I sooo can't wait to read more