Date: 06 Sep 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Funny and sexy!
Date: 28 Jul 2021 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 28 Jul 2021 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 28 Jul 2021 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 02 Sep 2017 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn, that was hot!! Lol, I'd love to know how the audience reacted to that scene when they finally got to see it. I know how we reacted to the original but I suspect the fictional reaction would be a million times better, hahaha!!
Loved it! Edward and Jasper are always hot but add Carlisle in there and.....wow!
Jane x
Author's Response:
Hi Jane
heheehehh - glad you liked it. MMM, I have the original scene bookmarked, and hell yes, I'd much prefer to watch my version.
Gotta admit I have a soft spot for Carlisle, even though I luuuurrvee Edward and Jasper.
Huge thanks for reading and reviewing.
Take care
maryhell
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Date: 27 Aug 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
That sure was fun ;-) Nice job on the 3some!
Author's Response:
Hi Sasharose
SQWEEEEEEE - thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it.
My apologies for the extremely late reply, I got caught up in Chicago Takedown.
Take care
maryhell
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[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, those Boyz certainly are 'into' each other!
'Cut'? Someone yelled.
Who's...Cut? Hmmm? ;}
Author's Response:
Hi Rita
hahahahaha. I wouldn't mind a reshoot.
Thank you for reviewing.
Take care
maryhell
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was hot, I loved your Dr feel good jasper and Edwards reactions whilst trying to maintain his lines.
Author's Response:
Hi Misty
There is nothing on this planet better than Jasper's stethoscope.
Glad you enjoyed the boys ball game.
Your review is VM appreciated
Take care
Yvonne
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Date: 13 Jun 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
The original story was hot, but this is SO much hotter. Thank you, thank you for deciding we needed the threesome. :)
Author's Response:
Hi TheWhitlocksGirl
Ohhh bless. Thank you so much. VM Appreciated.
It was my first 3some. Over the moon, they went down so well.
Take care
maryhell
Date: 12 Jun 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my! That was so yummy Yvonne! Thanks SO much! XO
Author's Response:
Hi Lisa
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Over the moon you enjoyed it so much. it is literally a different ball game writing a 3some isn't it. I might join in the revelry again some time.
Take care
Yvonne
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Date: 12 Jun 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sizzlin'! Thanks for that!
Author's Response:
Hi bbbluez
HEHEHEH - glad you enjoyed the bbq.
Thank you for reading and reviewing - appreciated.
Take care
maryhell
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[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
ooh loved the delicious 3some twist on this hun :)
Author's Response:
Howdy hun
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Chuffed you enjoyed the munchies.
Take care
Yvonne x
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hot damn... I need a cigarette no, and I don't even smoke! LOL
Thanks for writing this, it was a great read.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Hi Mina
Oh my life, thank you so much for your brilliant review.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Take cre
Yvonne
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