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Date: 31 May 2022 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 46

read it before a great read even the second or third time

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Date: 31 May 2022 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 46

read it before a great read even the second or third time

Reviewer: tsalagi mama Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 7:27 PM Title: AUTHOR'S NOTE

Thank you for your thoughtful, hard work on this series. I can honestly tell you, it's my favorite storyline of this type (celebrity/musician) I have ever read and I read a lot! Looking at your other titles now...

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2018 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 32

I know this store is old , but I just gotta say, This Edward is not my favorite. He is an over controlling idiot I'd like to punch. I just because HE wants something then it HAS to be. But, it's a good story so I can't stop reading. Very frustrated. 

Reviewer: ggf83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 1:02 AM Title: AUTHOR'S NOTE

Okay, so I just had to stop by and give you a round of applause. Because this took me 2 1/2 months to read. So I can't even imagine the amount of time you put into writing it. You should be very proud.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 39

So thinking of the girls, how is it that even with her slip nobody has hounded and made a big deal of Bella adopting them?  Especially with her taking them to school and meeting the teachers. I am sure somebody let it slip, especially the jealous ones.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 38

I thought it would have been fun if the Tria fata members all stood around her for a picture.  I am sure they were all there.  I also hope that marcus does not find out what she did to her dress.  HA!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 37

Ok you shit!  I was literally bawling.  It took forever to get through this chapter.  Best wedding moments ever.  Both pre and during.  I sure hope Emily was well compensated, she was probably laughed at for awhile by that planner at her firm.  Just desserts are so sweet.

Reviewer: pharmgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 7:10 PM Title: AUTHOR'S NOTE

I've really enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

You go girl!!  I love this strong Bella & thank you for bringing this character to life!!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 31

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Date: 05 May 2014 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 30

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Just have to say you are awesome for taking the time to review! You are awesome!!!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 03 May 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 28

HA! So the kiss with Scott is gonna seem like pay back. Good.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 03 May 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 02 May 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 02 May 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 24

Life sucks like that. I hope he makes it through.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 02 May 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 02 May 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 59

I trully think that Bella loves Embry more than Edward. She goes to him with everything. She will listen to him. She holds the society over Edward's head in every disagreement. He will never be good enough for her. She will never trust him. Embry really is her everything. Edward is just who she has sex with when she feels like it. If she had to choose she would choose Embry.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 58

Bella is just weird. Antigone is not a great name for a baby girl. There are so many strong women names. Why pick one that ends horribly? Does she want her child to die in tragedy? She seems to want to put herself in danger so maybe she wants to become infamous. Can she not find good people to be friends with? Edward is too good and patient for Bella. He deserves some one who loves and respects him. She just has to do the opposite of what Edward wants.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 02 May 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 02 May 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

The Secret Service? Oh, f#ck!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 02 May 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 02 May 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 02 May 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 02 May 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 02 May 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 02 May 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 10

Where's Jacob's sister? I guess I'll find out in future chapters.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 01 May 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 01 May 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 01 May 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 01 May 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

I was so excited to continue reading I had to come back to review.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 01 May 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

I would have started to save all the cash I could after I learned that.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I feel bad for not reviewing before now. But I loved the first 2 in the series.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 60

loved this story.  So sad it is finished

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 60

Have loved this story from the very first chapter so long ago. You never let us down, you never quit. You have every right to be so proud of these words. Love that this will continue, I'm so not ready to say good bye to these wonderful characters. Thank you for sharing your talent. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 59

So happy Embry talked her round

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Date: 16 Apr 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 58

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 57

Bella is so selfish. She says she loves Edward, but she holds Tria Fata over his head at every turn. He has tried so hard to not make her live their ways. He has had to change all his believes, but what has she done for him. She criticizes him all the time. She should have married Embry because she acts like she loves him so much more than Edward. She shoves Edward aside and runs to Embry. Edward has had to put up with so much of her crap. He is giving up his career to be a parent to these babies. Bella wants her career more than being a parent. She won't slow down even if it kills her. She doesn't see how her not taking care of herself affects Edward.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 57

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 56

Bella needs to think more rationally. She also needs to listen to the men that love her. Is her career more important than her family?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 56

loving this

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 55

Bella is so over dramatic. She can't help Jacob at this point. She needs to take care of herself and the baby. She wanted to get pregnant so bad, yet she does not want to take of herself and the baby during the pregnancy. You don't miss doctor's appointments and if you are slammed to the ground, you get checked out. The movie is not as important as herself or family.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 55

I hope Jacob makes it

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 55

Wow, just Wow.  Left me stunned.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 54

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 53

Bella is still a little mental and spoiled. She has a tantrum everytime she doesn't get her way. She still acts like a child. She blows everything out of proportion. Edward has so patient with her. She is such a handfull. It takes 3 men to take care of her and she is still a mess.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 53

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Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 53

Love this story and look forward to you updates. Thank you!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 52

loved this

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Date: 06 Mar 2014 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 51

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Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 49

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Date: 22 Feb 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 48

loved this.  Bella finally got her say.  I know Edward loves her but he needs to stop treating her like a child.  We women can be very emotional and do like some alone time!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 47

Poor Bella.  She is trying to help and please everybody and it appears to be all crashing down around her

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 46

Thank YOU for sharing your talent!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 46

This is truely such a beautifully captivating story with such a talented writter who truely captivates their audience "us reader who dilligently follow this story" Lookin for to next update to the breathtaking beautifully well written story!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 46

loved this

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 45

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 45

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Date: 01 Feb 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 44

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Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 43

You continue to amaze me with this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 43

loving this

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 42

Oops.Hope Edward chills. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 42

I loved this chapter - it's so funny how silly us girls can get sometimes!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 42

oops!

Reviewer: bgkeel22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 41

love this story please please finish

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 41

Looking forward to Tanya getting all she deserves!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 40

Thrilled to see this update and know you are well.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 40

Thank you for updating.  Happy New Year to you too

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Date: 04 Dec 2013 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 39

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Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 38

Best present ever, but is she really ready? XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 38

I truely am loving reading this amazingly beautifully well written series!! This series is truely has captivated me!! Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication in writting this amazing series!! I hope that u will contiue hopefully with a  part 4 please.

Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 38

loved this

Reviewer: IBACULLEN Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 37

THANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO REVIEW. I REALLY APPRECIATE IT!!!    

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 37

So happy. XOXO,Cheri



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THANK YOU!!!    

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 37

Sniff!!  loved this

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Date: 11 Nov 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 36

loved this

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 35

Love these two in Italy.  Finally a wedding to look forward to. Thank you for a wondeful story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 35

Finally! lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 35

loved this

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Date: 27 Oct 2013 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 22 Oct 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 33

Way to go Alice!! Yes, Bella time to grow up.  XOXO, Cheri

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 32

love this

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Date: 11 Oct 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

loved this



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YOU'RE AWESOME! YOU REVIEWED ON ALL THREE SITES; THANK YOU!!!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 30

Will this have an HEA because I'm not sure I can finish it if it doesn't??



Author's Response:

WELL SINCE CROSSFADE HAPPENS AFTER A WORKING TITLE THAT WILL MOST LIKELY HAVE THE HAPPY ENDING THAT YOU'RE LOOKING FOR. THANKS FOR READING!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 30

loving this

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Love this chapter and the progression Edward and Bella make in their relationship!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29

Okay help me to understand bella.... she doesn't want to be a mother to edwards kids but she will be a mother to two kids that aren't hers biological. i really don't understand that.. she lets them call her moma and embry dad, and edward uncle... whats wrong with this picture?? 



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Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 28

A lot of people feel the same way... Especially on the fanfiction website.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 28

Did I mention I don't like this Bella at all. I love this Edward and I think he gives in too much to Bella!  She may love him but her actions sure doesn't!! 

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