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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2023 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 18 Aug 2023 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 18 Aug 2023 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 18 Aug 2023 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 18 Aug 2023 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 17 Aug 2023 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 17 Aug 2023 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 17 Aug 2023 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 17 Aug 2023 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 17 Aug 2023 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 17 Aug 2023 8:41 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2023 8:30 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2023 8:25 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2023 7:55 AM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2023 7:44 AM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2023 7:34 AM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue

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Reviewer: kerra1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2023 1:13 AM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue

Hallo, i have a question.

English is not my language so i hope i can ask the question wright.

are you still active as writer.

i love dancing with the devil, but you didnt update since 2015, so i am 

not sure if you are still writing or not. 

it is totally your personal thing if you want to do it or not, but i am a little 

sad that it have not an end so i thought i try to aks to have a little soulpeace and see if its useless to come back and see if you pdatet or not. 

i think you are really talentet and hope you continue, but like i said, its your personal choice and i respect that.

thanks in advance for your anser.

kerra1

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

Please return to this!!!!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

At first I thought that Bella had gotten pregnant after her first encounter with him. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

Is Edward 6'5" or 6'7"?

 I was beginning to wonder where Bella was. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Is it just me or does Edward and his mother have an unhealthy relationship?

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

Please, Please continue with this???!!!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 3:40 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted

I'm reading this because the synopsis is very intriguing. I hope that someday you will be able to complete this story. 

Reviewer: Qwhidbee10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

Pleeeeeease finish this story!!! I absolutely love it!

Reviewer: SunRised Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2020 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

Hi, just found our story and I love it Hope you will continue Its  a wonderful story and it would be a pity. I although advertised it in our group. Hope you are ok with that. Please continue PLease.

Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 3:19 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

I had read this over on FFN, but I wanted to read the full version, so I came over here to check it out. This has been good so far. I know I'm going to regret reading this one because it isn't complete. 

Reviewer: Afwife2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great story, bummer it isn't completed. 

Reviewer: Tassie Devil Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2017 5:58 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue

I hope you finish your stories or maybe give them to someone who will.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

I hope you finish this story

Reviewer: Alicat12 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

I want more. Hope u update soon. Soo good story

Reviewer: Oruga86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

update please!!

love this story

Reviewer: Nonita Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 5:18 AM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue

<3

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 1:50 AM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue

really like this are you ever going to continue it

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

Really enjoying this story, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

awww for the ILYs

ily

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

Omg I love your story can not wait for more.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 16

Ummm...this was AMAZING, as usual!  I really loved it!  Where's my Edward/Diavolo?

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hot damn, cant wait for more

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

Is Bella in danger just being in Edward's company?

Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hoping for another surprise chapter in loving this story so far

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

That was a very good way to tell him lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 16

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: SUJARI Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great story.

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 16

I loved it and can't wait for more

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

She really is dancing with the devil, who slowly changes into an angel, but just for her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

So happy to see an update for this story! Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 16

love will make him a better person, we hope.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love it

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

Excellent!

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

That was lovely andpassionate.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for the new chapter. Good one! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 16

HOT!!! Bella is a lucky girl  

Reviewer: zan35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

great story

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

Not really sure if this is a new chapter or repost. Wondering if this story will continue??

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great story! More please....... ;o)

Reviewer: lyssmcgrath Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh my god, I love it!

I can't wait for more:)

Knowing how Jessica treated Bella, I feel that Bella will treat her the same or she might he do what Jessica never did to her, by treating her in a fair manner as the other employees...

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

Cant wait for more

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love it

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

Nice!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

That was a twist I didn't see coming.
Emmett and Jasper are into philandering, infidelity, and being all around immature males. How and why does he put up with this mess?

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 15

Aaawwww FUCK YEAH!!!!! I really hope Bella gives as good as she received!!!! Next up.....meeting the other Cullen women.....this should be interesting!!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

Perfect..

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love this chapter can't wait to see Bella in action with Jess (LOL). Love your story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

ya without extensive testing they will not know how she died.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

That was a twist love it Jessica is shiting her pants lol.

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

UN wow-

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

The old say...be careful how you act, as the ass you kick today might be the one you have to kiss tomorroow....pucker up Jessica!!!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

wow got to love it

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love the end of this chapter!  I can practically see the look on Jessica's face!  Love the work you've done!  Thank you so much for the wonderful characterizations and the plain, old-fashioned sexual combustability!  

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

SWEET! I love that Edward just made Bella Jessica's boss. Will Bella take it? 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it, I really can't wait to read more. Hopefully next Tuesday?????? Happy writing

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh Karma is a bitch and revenge is sweet.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love Edward! Great chapter, I didn't see that coming.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

and I picked Tanya.. yep who gets the gain her and her family.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.

try his wife.. she gets the gain.. It is all about power and money.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

Holy Crap on a cracker!!!!   WooHoo!!  Never saw that coming. He gave her the resturant.??!!!

 

Loving it!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo

He is married and he married Tanya because of some reason like Love or Money.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

oooh   Just punishment for Jessica.  Hate women like that (men bosses too).

Reviewer: chris1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 2:16 AM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue

Now that's what Edwards talking about.  Bella give Jessica hell.   Haha.  Loved it

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh my cant wait for more! Update again soon please 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

You go Edward hit it were it counts

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

So Jessica gets to keep her life!  

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 15

Now that's a STATEMENT!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh boy!  This was good.  Jessica was such a bitch to Bella.  Serves her right.

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

Didn't she already meet Em in earlier chapters? Why do you make it seem like they are meeting for the first time here 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

Absolutely loved it 

Reviewer: rockerchixk Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

Edward is so sweet to bella! He also a sexy Badass ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was very sweet and caring

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

damn that was hot!!! Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love this story can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

You need to continue to write this story. It becoming one of my favorite.

thank you

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo

Love it 

Reviewer: belladadiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 3:30 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue

I wasn't going to read because I don't usually start stories I don't think will be finised, based on when it was published and last updated. However, after reading the first chapter my interest was piqued! Read all 14 in a few short hours and I must say I'm hooked! Please update soon...I'm truly enjoying thus story.

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