Date: 22 Mar 2020 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
I don't blame Bella at all, and I'm glad Jasper doesn't seem to ether. Garrett is right in what he said to Jasper though, Bella is me the to shine and be the goddess that she was destined for. Peter and Jasper should have told her the truth.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
great story! i don't think that ppl judging jasper so harshly is fair to your major. he was cheated on by his wife that although not his mate he loved her. and that cheating was done with his brother .... to put it simply, he was scorned. no one judged bella for tearing edward and alice to shreds because she hasa scorned by edward ... hell, she didn't know alice had anything to do with the wrongs edward did against her until jasper told her. i think the major had to learn to trust and let his heart give itself to another, the only true way to learn is to screw up alot. would love to see more from thiese characters and the changes to the vampire/human world. also, what happened to the other cullens?
Date: 21 Jul 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
Really struggling to get through this story at this point: keep flicking forward to the end to see if it gets better. I have always had trouble with characters with no redeeming features (who skeeve me out) and your Jasper is an unremitting worthless arse who is wrong in every respect. I'm trying though, it's very well written...
Date: 26 Apr 2015 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 33
it is Stake not stalk,it is the basis of your gift not your bases.with minimum effort not minuscule.looks like Jasper is getting a lesson in how to really treat a mate.will it sink in or his he too much of a selfish prick to learn it????
Date: 26 Apr 2015 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
Good for Peter the ass hat needed a reality check and i believe he just gave it to him.wonder what kind of car she is going to get from daddy.on a side note where are the Cullens why weren't they there to fight with Aro????
Date: 25 Apr 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
How (are) you feeling now not how you feeling now.beta would help.it seems things are getting better for her.just wonder when the shit is going to hit the fan and they are going after Aro and friends? like to hear from daddy C and how he and mommy feel about losing the "children".
Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
It's wandering around not wondering,bored not board.... Jasper is one major,no pun intended,dickheaded piece of shit asshole treating her like property.what is Jasper planning? is he gettinghis coven together and thentake out Maria then use her armyalong with the newborns to take down Aro and friends????
Date: 25 Apr 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
scent not sent.this is like an arranged marriage she was forced (into) with an arrogant prick. guess this will be the Cullen's they are meeting. wonder if Eddie will have a hissy fit when he sees his pet with Jasper?
Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
scars not scares,basis not bases,another not a nether,whether not weather.barely not barley.looks like Maria really does not have control of her army or her Major. i don't know why he doesn't just leave he doesn't have to be a nomad.i am pretty sure he is rich enough he couldlive any where and now he has a mate he doesn't need to stay with Maria.
Date: 25 Aug 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 34
Go Bella! So true! Jasper has been a royal ass punishing Bella for shit the pixie did. In reality, he is doing to Bella basically what Alice did to him. Break it! Break it! Break it! Make the ass grovel! (I normally do love Jasper and only reserve this kind of vitriol for Edward and Bill Compton, but this Jasper has just made me see red!) I still don't know how she managed to fall in love with him.