Date: 28 Jan 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 28 Jan 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Poor Rosalie!
Date: 28 Jan 2017 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Amazing chapter!
Date: 07 Jan 2017 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Edward likes Bella!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 100
thanks so much for sharing this epic story with us ;) i think the ? pov is james with victoria of course ;D
Date: 01 May 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hmm could be Jacob or it could be James!!! I guess we will see!!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Now he knows. Alwyas love your writing! great story!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
What a trauma for Rose,,, glad they have the bastard on trial! When does Bella tell her trauma?
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
So she's his singer... love that part from the book too.
They already feel the connection from the first encounter and it is already getting bigger... I love that song by Seether and the one I think is by Bon Jovi
Like I said trouble from the skanya persuasion...
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can see where all the drama is going to come in with these two... skankya and jacob.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good for a first try... I have to confess i have read the first 2 chapters of the sequel you put up and that made me want to come read the first story... so much has happeed since this story i had to come and read what went on before...
And so they meet. I cannot wait to read the rest of the story...
Date: 09 Apr 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 100
Caught up, now on to the sequel
Date: 03 Oct 2015 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 100
Dear Lord, have you really resurrected James and Victoria? It's not like Bella and Edward haven't lived through this horror before, and you're making them relive it again with a different evil pulling the strings! Please let them be happy in their careers and their personal life! That would be my idea of a happy ever after, the security people and the FBI scoop up this pair of miscreants and slap their butts in prison!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 99
Sounds like the beginning of a wildly successful tour to me!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 98
Wonderful reception and start to their forever!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 97
Fabulous wedding, beautifully done, especially the memorial to his mom. I cried over that, too! The only bad was Renee, and with her crappy attitude, I'm just as glad she never showed!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 96
They are all on the express train now! It makes sense to do the tour now while they are hot and school can always come later! The big house and all living together is a pretty good idea, too!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 95
That was amazing! They all got really excited about hearing themselves on the radio! Good that Alice is getting better, hopefully she and Jasper get back to where they were. I also hope she was talking about Bella's huge fame and not an unplanned pregnancy!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 94
Really glad Jasper told Alice he still loves her, I think it may be what starts her on the road to recovery! This recording session sounds hot and a lot of fun! Kind of like Edward's birthday/batchelor/batchelorette party!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 93
It was almost like destiny to run into the Twilight crew in Austin and they sure had a good time jamming! I was a bit sorry for Edward having his diva moment. He probably wasn't too proud of himself since he loves Bella so much and yet was a tiny bit jealous of the way the crowd reacted to her singing! All's well that ends well!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 92
So glad this trip to Austin seems to be paying off ! Jasper really needs to go back and see Alice again. I hope they can get back together since they don't do well apart!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 91
Wonderful that Emmett came to Rome and proposed to Rosalie! Even more so that they got to sing in the Sisitine Chapel! What an honor and a memory for life! I feel bad for Alice with her bipolar disoder, my daughter suffers from it also!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 90
Alice and her machinations have really screwed up a lot of things, not only her relationship with Jasper, but the band, the wedding and the record deal! Sounds like Bella is going to drag Jasper to the wedding, though!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 89
Poor Alice and Jasper, and probably Edward, because he's her brother! This trip through Italy would be great if not for this latest drama!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 88
Well hallelujah, Haddon finally got what he deserved! Too bad he quit and they didn't have the pleasure of kicking him out!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 87
I'll bet it pissed off Haddon that he had to give Bella a decent grade! I'm with Gianetti, they need to boot that guy out of Emerson! Nice that Charlie and Sue could come to the concert.
Date: 02 Oct 2015 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 86
Not the most pleasant Easter I've ever heard of, but maybe Renee has gotten the message, finally!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 85
Edward still having doubts about Miller, I see. I'm looking forward to Jacksonville and Renee. She better not still be ornery towards Bella or it won't be very pleasant!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 84
They may want to get married right now, but if they went to Vagas it would hurt too many people!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 83
Something seems to be bothering Edward about this recoring session. Wonder what it could be? Bella being drunk on Cristal is kind of funny!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 82
That was kind of awful when Bella broke Edward's nose, but it went with the lyrics of the song, so I guess it was fate! Miller is beyond thrilled for the band to record a demo, but I can see where they may have some reservations. This might not be the time to do this!
Date: 02 Oct 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 81
Who lays hands on our girl this time? Some people have a problem with boundaries, that's for sure! I thought Jenks told them not to use their music for the demo, and then Edward turns around and says they'll do five original songs! What am I missing here?
Date: 02 Oct 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 80
This is really big, a record deal and possible fame and fortune! Better than that, almost, is Dr. Gianetti being on Bella's side with Haddon's BS!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 79
The verdict was great and very just, the record deal might be a really good thing and Senior and Edward testing a relationship is promising! Altogether a real good chapter!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 78
Now we know why Senior was so insistent about talking to his son! A bit surprising, but understandable.
Date: 01 Oct 2015 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 77
It was all great right up until Masen grabbed Bella's arm and tried to force her to help him! I have no idea what he wants but he has no business acting that way!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 76
What more could that asshole do? Edward's pampering sounded wonderful, and I laughed at Gus hitting on him! Alice picked out aninteresting outfit for him, too!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 75
That wouldn't be his father would it? The story he told Bella was horrifying and heartbreaking all at once!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 74
Rose wants to kill Masen, Sr., and Edward offered to help, hell,I'll hold their coats while they do it! Where does he get off sneering at his own son?
Date: 01 Oct 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 73
It's so neat that all her friends are there for Rose at this most difficult and trying time! Plus, I love the way Cullen rolls, first class all the way!
Date: 01 Oct 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 72
Bella got a raw deal with that biology test! I'm glad Gianetti is going to get on Haddon's case! What he did was not right! The karaoke was a lot of fun to read!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 71
Ah, the joys of a relationship, warts and all! Sounded just like real life to me! Glad they are going to make up and be okay!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 70
The damnedest things happen to this pair! They were all set to enjoy this mini tour and Bella gets really ill!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 69
The photo session seems to have made everyone happy. I'm thinking if life is wonderful, you mu8st be getting ready to throw them a curve!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 68
So, things are serious between Emmett and Rose! That will be great when it happens. I think Edward needed that two hour workout with Em, just to rid himself of frustrations! Of course, when Bella got home, she helped with that nicely!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 67
The dress sounds gorgeous and Esme is a peach to gift it to Bella! Barbie is sweet to buy the bridesmaid dresses, too! Wouldn't you know, Alice picked out the perfect dress? As for Edward, I', guessing he found the vibrator!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 66
Right will out, as they say! I'm so glad Edward is taking Rosalie's advice and pressing criminal charges! Maybe that bitch will learn to,keep her hands off unwilling men!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 65
Than heaven for security cameras! Victoria stands no chance when the evidence is so clear! Poor Larry, he has rotten luck with TA's! Edward's dream was beautiful, like a benediction from his mother, Bella will love it too!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 64
It truly is painful for them to be apart! As long as Alice is correct and Edward isn't hurt, I think he'll handle whatever it is she has seen happening!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 63
That was a totally lovely Valentine's Day!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 62
I like to think of the change in Bella as growth, not corruption! Alice sure had a good time in Lover's Layne! Dr. Lunes is impressed with how well Bella is doing, I think! The visit to Pastor Webber was quite pleasant, as he seems to be a very nice man!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 61
Amazing is right, including Edward being well enough to go on stage and sing! Poor thing really had a rough time for twenty-four hours!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 60
Tanya was a viscious bitch, to say the least! Victoria is no peach, either! At least they aren't trying to kill Bella, like Jake nearly did! Bella seems to be getting her life back, the way she wants it! Bet it makes Edward pretty happy, too!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 59
How very nice and thoughtful for his parents to offer to pay for the wedding! The Volvo suv wasn't too shabby, either! I can see Bella slowly getting better.
Date: 29 Sep 2015 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 58
Bella is a smart enough person to know she needs this help from Dr. Lunes and she still needs to heal her body also. It's just going to ta ke time and some work. The all-girls weekend sounds good, too!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 57
The relationship between Bella and Renee is sure a difficult one! You would think a mother could be a bit nicer but not always, I guess. Esme seems much more like a mom to Bella than her own does! I'm glad that Bella will be going to a therapist, she needs professional help.
Date: 29 Sep 2015 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 56
I just feel so bad for Bella , and for Edward, too. Everyone has been so worried and tried to help, like Esme with the shower. Then there's Renee, who I wanted to smack! She really isn't much in the maternal department, as Edward noticed! Charlie is a good daddy, but Renee as a mom, not so much!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 55
Nothing else better happen to Bella, Edward does not do well without her beside him! Now she's awake everyone must feel a whole lot better!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 54
Thank heaven for small favors! I'm glad as can be that Jacob is gone, but I hope Bella will be okay!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 53
There go those "being watched" feelings again! Got to be Jacob, who else ? If Bella or Edward get to thinking life is really good, Jake throws a cloud over everything!
Date: 29 Sep 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 52
I thought that was pretty nice of Bella and Edward, hosting their friends through the blizzard! It was cute when Edward got his glasses and was amazed how clear everything became!
Date: 28 Sep 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 51
Bless Emily Uley for the heads up about Jacob! I'm a firm believer in forewarned is forearmed! I think it's a good thing Bella and the girls are taking a selfdefense course.
Date: 28 Sep 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 50
Except for the lack of murderous intent, Tanya is the female equivelant of Jacob! Both of them just don't know when to quit!
Date: 28 Sep 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 48
Good, for not planning punishment for Emily, after all, she tried to talk sense to Jacob, it's not her fault he's too stu[pid to listen! I loved Bella overhearing Edward talking to his mom, that was so sweet! I got the feeling Renee is not nearly as happy for her daughter as she seems, wonder what's up with that?
Date: 28 Sep 2015 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 47
You just couldn't let him die in the ocean? Surely that would be the kindest thing to do, putting a rabid animal out of it's misery!
Date: 28 Sep 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 46
Was there ever any doubt thatNew Year's Eve would end this way?
Date: 28 Sep 2015 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 45
I think his plan is sweet! Nothing wrong with a little tradition!Boy, Charlies was impressed with Bella's ring, not to mention Edward's ability to take care of her for the rest of their lives!
Date: 28 Sep 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 44
If Charlie regains his health, he belongs back at work. I knew Edward would be overwhelmed by Bella's gift. It was the most loving, caring thoughtful gift ever! I would be thrilled if Jake was dead, one can but hope!
Date: 28 Sep 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 43
Instead of catching Jake, I hope the son-of-a-bitch drowned in the ocean! Charlie must really be convinced of Edward's feelings for Bella to give him his ring and permission to sleep with her!
Date: 28 Sep 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 41
Only two more days! Now if only you wouldn't threaten them with Jacob, it would be perfect!
Date: 28 Sep 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 40
Just had a hunch there was something not right about Charlie, and sure enough! Nice that Edward's dad is a first-rate oncologist! I'm getting those creepy feelings Bella may well be right about something bad happening to her while she's home for Christmas.
Date: 28 Sep 2015 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 39
It was almost painful to read about them saying goodbye at the airport! I hope there will be no danger going home for Christmas!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 38
I get that Edward has no problem letting out his emotions, that's great, but those realistic nightmares are a bit much! It's almost like prophecy or something! This move to their apartment was a marvel of speed and efficient planning, the guy is really organized!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 37
Oh lord! Someone has broken in while they were away, I'll bet money on it! If so, it would be a nasty way to end a great time off!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 36
Good Thanksgiving, even the Truth or Dare part. The next chapter sounds okay, except for the Jacob drama !
Date: 27 Sep 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 35
Fabulous Thanksgiving from beginning to end! The food sounded wonderful, it was great that Bella and Esme worked together so well, and everyone helped, want to or not! The conversation after dinner was wonderful, giving Bella background on Edward's mom. I also loved it when everyone told why they were grateful!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Another really good chapter, especially when Carlisle came home, heard Bella and Edward playing and said what he did! That was so touching!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 33
Alice is the unstoppable force of shopping! Paying attention to the words of Halo you end up a puddle of goo! It's amazing how much they love each other, and how beautifully they express it!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 32
It finally got through to me just what a horrible thing Jacob did to Bella! It will take time and work if she is ever to be rid of his toxic influence! Thank heaven for Edward and a sapphire promise ring!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
Another great chapter! Them finding an apartment together was a stroke of luck, especially after the smelly one! Something probably did die in it! The concert was wonderfully successgul, as I knew it would be! Plus, Charlie was reconciled to Bella moving in with Edwar, so good for them!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
They did a very creditable job at the competition, so it's no wonder Felix was proud of all of them! It may have a bit to do with Emmett's influence, but Rose is getting more comfortable around guys and enjoying herself more. I'll bet Edward finds an aparetment to share with Bella!
Date: 27 Sep 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
This trip to Toronto sounds like they will have a lot of fun, as well as compete against other groups! Bella is right, she and Edward need to get away from the stressful situation they live with every day!