Date: 19 Apr 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it! Poor Bella! I hate Jessica! She's a bitch!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter Four
I hate Lauren and Jessica! Poor Bella!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Charlie is horrible! I hate Jessica and Lauren!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter: Two
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great story
Date: 21 Nov 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I enjoyed it--especially how elements of D/s were implemented without going over the top.
Date: 09 Sep 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved the revenges. wished they were much much worse :)
also wished that we could have gotten play by play about them especially
their reactions and how everything went down for each one of them.
Date: 09 Sep 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
i understand about being empathetic, compassionate, loving and understanding.
bella, of course, has all of these good attributes...
but, having too much of a good thing can also be detrimental to oneself.
i hope these good attributes dont cause more problems for bella than
they already have in her life to the point of frustration and wanting to just
bang your head against the wall.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved this do much I re-read it. Thank you so much for writing it.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter: One
I'm pretty sure I wrote a review on the last chapter and apparently on the 2nd to last chapter the last time I read this story so I decided to write another review on the 1st chapter. Again I absolutely loved this story it is at the top of my list as one of my favorite BDSM fics along with Tara Sue Me's 3 part Dom/Sub/Training series. Thank you again for all the work you all put into writing this erotic, sexy, emotional and loving story that I definitely will come back and read again!!
Melissa
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm pretty sure I wrote a review on the last chapter the last time I read this story so I decided to write another review the chapter before. Again I absolutely loved this story it is at the top of my list as one of my favorite BDSM fics along with Tara Sue Me's 3 part Dom/Sub/Training series. Thank you again for all the work you all put into writing this erotic, sexy, emotional and loving story that I definitely will come back and read again!!
Melissa
Date: 14 Jan 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved this story!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
I could not stop reading this story! I loved all the ups and downs and how much he loved her. This was an awesome story.
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
this was a wonderful read, ladies! thanks!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
This has been an almost fluffy chapter and it is a welcome addition to the story!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
Did Leah kill Harry? It sounds like you are wrapping things up here and that all is coming out as it should. Love the story!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
stopping here for today. i must say, although i'm sure the retribution and revenge was deserved, i really can't see any difference between what all those people did to Bella and the revenge Edward and James and the others took out on those that hurt her. 2 wrongs don't make a right.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
as for Tanya, I think she will try to retaliate against Bella in some way. as for Renee and Charlie, I think both will ignore her for Christmas. I love that Edward gave her the building for her new dance studio, but hate that she still has trouble thinking she deserves anything like this.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
JFC with a family like hers, Renee and Charlie, Bella doesn't need enemies! No wonder she really doesn't believe that Edward will stay with her....
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
I like how he is easing her into their play time. She will fuck up at some point and I have confidence he will give her the correct punishment that won't make her feel like she is a failure, that everyone does things to fuck up and that doesn't mean they ARE fuck-ups. Renee, I think, does not love Bella any more than Charlie does, but I hope to be wrong about that....
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm loving everything about this story and finding it difficult to stop reading it in order to take care of other things around my house today. LOL! I really love where their relationship is leading and wonder if there is a leak somewhere that allowed Jacob to slip into the college undetected...
Date: 17 Nov 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope Edwards ruins all of them in any way he can. They all deserve whatever it is he dishes out. Bella has got to someday see that this is not her fault, as I don't think she does now.....
Date: 16 Nov 2014 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
I enjoyed this chapter, and the scene, very much! Thanks for explaining your own past and how you put it into so many of your Bellas.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter: One
I don't know how I missed this one of yours! I'm reading it now, on a rec from Love Twifics. I have read many of your stories so I know the quality you put into stories. BDSM stories are some of my favorite and I look forward to immersing myself in this one. The first chapter sets a great tone and I am eager for more. I may not review every chapter as this is a completed story, but I just wanted to make my interest in this known to you two...
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved the look into their future, 5 kids! They sure kept themselves busy, lol. I can't believe that Charlie got in touch again. I don't know how it happened that Bella and Seth turned out so well without any of their parents crazy genes, but I'm glad they did. Lauren was a surprise, I'm glad she apologised to Bella and is now a different person from who she used to be unlike others that just never learn.
Thanks for sharing your story, it's been a bit of a rollercoaster but then so is life, I've loved every minute. I always enjoy your stories and I'm looking forward to sinking my teeth into more of them.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
The Roses Ceremony was lovely and touching. I can't believe Renee is still trying to worm her way out of things, that woman needs a lot of help. As for Charlie he's just confirming what a complete arsehole he is and given time Seth will come to realise this and that he would never have got any sort of explanation or closure from him. He's so lucky to have Bella and everyone else. I'm so happy that Bella's finally getting the life she deserves with the man she loves.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Woohoo!! A boy, Edward was right, lol. Finally things seem to be settling down and their lives are becoming less fraught. I'm so happy that Leah's gone to prison, I hope she makes many 'close friends' if you know what I mean. Thank goodness Seth got off so lightly. He's a good kid, he just made a bad decision in a highly emotionally situation, I don't think he'll do that again.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm exhausted, their lives are just full on, it never stops. Pity that police officer only got Leah in the shoulder and didn't shoot to kill. Please say it was Leah who shot Harry, I so want her skanky self to go to prison, she'll have so much more in common with Charlie then and she'll meet so many girls just like herself as well, she'll feel right at home, lol. I love that Seth was able to talk to Edward.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my God! I can't believe Renee turned up at Bella's wedding. I loved the fact Bella stood up to her and then what Esme said and did, 'shit floats' lol, it most certainly does. The trial's going to be difficult but it does signify the end of the abuse for Bella, some closure maybe.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved all the revenge. Tanya being taken away in a rubbish truck was brilliant, definitely what she deserved. Jessica's and Lauren 's unfortunate encounters were fantastic, the STD posters were genius, lol. Finally Paul, Jacob and Charlie are getting their comeuppance, although I bet they're still saying they didn't do anything wrong. I can't wait for the wedding and then the baby to just bring all the family together especially Seth, he seems to be struggling at the moment, but he will get better. Now, who is Phil bringing with him?
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved the showdown, good for Bella, she was so strong. I'm glad that Sue piped up and told Charlie that Leah's not his daughter but I'm disappointed that she's not more supportive of Seth. She's letting Bella and Edward look after him so she can help Charlie and Leah, I don't see what's to help they're both abusive. Somehow they've controlled her and she's let them, she needs to take a leaf out of Bella's book and stand up for herself and come for her son. Charlie's an arsehole, if it was up to me he would fall 'victim' to an embarrassing end. I hate that worm.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Woohoo!! They're having a baby. I love that Esme got to see the proposal and Carlisle got to see the baby, now they both have bragging rights, lol. I'm glad that Edward has come around on the whole going to see Charlie thing, Bella needs to do this, she needs her answers and she deserves them. She's come so far and become so much stronger she needs to show Charlie that he can't destroy her and she's in charge of her own life. Now, what are those other two dickheads up to?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad that Bella is getting stronger and is more able to assert herself, she's finally becoming the girl she should be. Lol, I can't believe that Edward was naive about that party, as if a group of women would be excited about that, and he thinks he knows them, haha!! I knew Tanya wouldn't quietly disappear, she's determined to ruin Bella's reputation, but to what end? Does she think Edward will dump Bella and come running to her? She's so stupid. Now I'm wondering how the he'll Paul and Jacob got into the club unless Tanya helped them.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well that totally explained why Phil gets to play on the team. I can't wait for Renee to get the divorce papers and be left without a penny. Bella will survive with the love and support of Edward and everyone else. I'm wondering if Jacob is Charlie's son, it really wouldn't surprise me at all. I also think Jacob was planning to get rid of Bella completely or harm her to such an extent she would either kill herself or be institutionalized. Jacob still being registered at Harvard gives him a perfect alibi, he can't be in two places at once. I'm sure that money is at the bottom of all this.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
I loved their date, Bella really had a good time, some fun and dancing is just what she needed. I'm so glad that Phil has kept in touch despite Renee, that woman has a screw loose. Thank God someone at Bella's college has finally seen her for the beautiful girl she is and also doesn't trust Jacob. Tanya's going to want revenge on Bella now she's lost her job. Not only is she popular with all the Doms she has what Tanya wants, Edward. Bella will be a fantastic teacher especially in dance, she should definitely go down that route and sod the law degree, life's too short to be miserable at work.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank God Renee's gone! I don't think I could have stood much more of her. It is beyond sad for Bella but she is better off without either of her parents. I really hope Phil stays in touch and builds some kind of relationship with her. I got the feeling he was a good guy and Bella needs to know that not everyone in her life is like her mum and dad.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2014 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my God! Renee nearly killed Bella. She truly is the most selfish person on the planet, I think Phil has had his eyes well and truly opened, now will he step up and become the parent Bella's been craving? Will he stay with Renee now he's seen her true colours? I can't believe how cruel she is. I know Bella just wants a proper mum to love her but she really needs to think about allowing Renee into her life. Personally I'd cut her out of my life but then I'd cut my nose off to spite my face.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Phil seems like a nice guy, he has genuine concern for Bella but is easily rail roaded by Renee. If he's so bad at baseball how come he still has a place on the team never mind all that money? Well actually, that's a point, where did he get all his dosh from? Renee's selfishness knows no bounds. I can't believe she went out and spent all that money. I know Edward's rich but you just don't do things like that, she has no shame. I love how Edward and Bella are getting closer.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my God! That was funny, I can imagine the look on Edward's face when it dawned on him about Renee, lol. I can't wait for the rest of his family to meet her. She's obviously only concerned about herself and then Phil, it seems like Bella's there to be seen and not heard and also to fetch and carry for her. That's not going to go down well.
Bella did amazingly for their first weekend, her photographic memory as well as her natural submissive nature really helped her.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think Charlie wants Bella away from him altogether and has recruited Jacob to help him. We need to know what lengths Charlie is willing to go to and from what's gone down so far it wouldn't surprise me if he wants his daughter dead. Bella is certainly a reminder of a time in his life he's desperately trying to forget, the question is why? He's making Bella's life near intolerable, maybe he was hoping she'd kill herself but with Edward in her life that's unlikely to happen now. Does Bella stand to inherit anything from a grandparent when she turns 21? It would be one explanation for what's happening to her.
I'm so glad that Edward and Bella have their contracts in place and now Edward's asking Bella if she'd like to be his real girlfriend, awww.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow! I'm thinking that this is Bella's way of telling Edward that she'd like to be his submissive properly. It's a bold move but when sometimes you struggle with saying what you want actions are the only thing left and we all know what they say about actions, lol. I loved the dance, very creative and perfect for the song. Is Charlie hoping to find something on Edward to blackmail him with or ruin his reputation? I love how the rest of Edward's family have taken Bella under their wings especially Rose.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
I don't know how Edward controlled himself but then I suppose he'd be no good to Bella if he's facing a double or triple murder charge. I really hope, as painful as it will be, that Bella finally cuts all ties to her family and allows Edward to help her fight the injustices that were allowed to happen at both Harvard and UW. I couldn't bear it if Bella tries to defend any of her parents again.
Edward really needs to talk to Bella about being a submissive properly, it will give her more stability in her life to make it official, it's what she needs.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Was it just the drugs making Bella think Jacob was there or was he really there? It wouldn't surprise me if he was. I just don't understand why everyone is so eager to think the worst of Bella, I mean don't they have minds of their own to decide if she was the victim or not? Not one of them have the brains they were born with. I hope something bad happens to Jessica and Lauren, they deserve everything they get.
Thank God Bella has Edward and she's accepting more help from him.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
After that scene I think all the Doms need to go back in training. None of them thought it wasn't okay to treat and speak to their submissive that way. I'm glad that Bella will have the protection from the other Doms at the club now she has Edward's in-training collar. I still think they're in danger of just slipping into this relationship, I feel that Edward has blurred the lines quite a bit.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward said he was concerned about Bella and himself slipping into a Dom and sub relationship without them making that decision, I think they're getting pretty close to that, especially with Bella's natural submissive nature. I loved the descriptions of Edward's ink.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter Four
Oh my God! The way Bella gets treated by virtually everyone goes from bad to worse. I hope Edward can give her the confidence to stand up for herself. Lauren and Jessica are complete skanks who couldn't even recognise a man they've come on to before. It's like Bella has this neon flashing sign over her head saying I'm weak, do whatever you like to me. It's heart breaking that Bella is completely aware of how her family are cutting her out of their lives. I don't know how much more she can take before she breaks. For me this would have been the final straw and I'd cut them off completely, they would never hear from me or see me again.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hate Lauren and Jessica. Who do they think they are? God's gift to men? I don't think so. Calling Bella that hateful nickname. I know Edward would never hit a woman but seriously I don't know how he kept his hands to himself. Sadly I think his little scene with Bella will only make things worse for her. As for Charlie, he's just such a dick to do that to his daughter. Of course Bella seeks parental approval, we all do, it's natural but there has to come a point when you say no more. I hope Bella reaches that point soon and does what she wants to do.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter: Two
I shouldn't be shocked that there was a party going on when Bella got back but I was. They're supposed to be more mature being older and at college, young adults, but instead they're all acting like spoiled and mean five year olds. I take back what I said about Charlie being a marginally better parent, he's an arsehole and none of them deserve Bella. I just want Edward to put on his shining armour and ride in there on his white horse and sweep Bella away.
From what Bella told Edward I think Paul tried to rape her and he got away with it because his family have money and standing. I can't think why Charlie and Renee are this way with Bella, they should be proud of her and boasting about her to anyone who will listen.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter: One
Oh my God! It sounds as though Charlie is only a marginally better parent than Renee, although the pair of them are useless. It sounds as though Bella's always been treated as being older than her years because she's smart and the fact that she was still a child when she started college seems to have been lost on them. I say sod becoming a lawyer and go and dance, lol. I love how open and frank she is with Edward and I hope there comes a point where she can royally rub Jessica's nose in it and really piss her off. Who needs enemies when you have friends like her?
I'm really looking forward to finding out how this develops.
Jane x
Date: 08 Jun 2014 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
Very good story, girls. Thanks for putting it out here.
Date: 08 Jun 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
It is nigh time that we have a good James and Victoria! The karma was fantastic.
Date: 07 Jun 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
That stupid Tanya will probably hook up with Jake and crew and do something terrible to Bella.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh, I know the cruelty towards her hasn't stopped yet. Jacob and crew are sure to have something planned and this will add to the drama.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
These people need to be smacked down-- they are horrible. What on earth did Bella ever do to deserve this sort of treatment?
Date: 06 Jun 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am a big one for payback. These people in her life are horrible to her. They need to suffer the consequences of their actions. I can't believe how mean they are to her. Jessica is a slutty little wench who needs to be beat into submission.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
I always wonder about this lifestyle. I have only read of it in fanfiction which always has classy, good-looking people. I just wonder how it compares to real life BDSM. LOL.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter Four
I can't believe how this girl literally gets kicked to the curb at every turn by all the idiots surrounding her. She just takes it. Her parents are horrible. This Charlie is a really bad one.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
The last Bella that I read of yours was crapped on just like this Bella is. I feel really badly for her. She's so sweet and no one cares about her. Jessica is the bitch in this story.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter: Two
Oh wow! Charlie and Renee are horrible parents. This poor girl. At least Edward is taking an interest in her. No one else seems to give a rip about her.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
Brilliant!!
Date: 26 May 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Jacob is a scared cat how act tough, but is neven but a bully.
Date: 26 May 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hated both Charlie and Jacob what hell is wrong with them. As for Leah a bitch, bully,whore,and a psycho,here name for her psychobitch. No one stand up to bella dad.
Date: 24 May 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Charlie alone in jail, Leah still a bitch,Hey jacob and paul how it feel to be the bitch in the relationship,Lauren grew-up.Jessica a whore,what happened to the other boys how hurt bella too? Great way to end the story.
Date: 24 May 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm happy for everyone.
Date: 24 May 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Leah and Charlie both are stupid.
Date: 24 May 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yes everyone lose something. Charlie guess what Leah not your daughter. Ha,ha. Jacob and Paul are in deep shit now. Thank you for letting everyone get even.
Date: 24 May 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yes about time somebody gives a dam about bella. Renee and her ex-husband Charlie need there ass kick.
Date: 08 May 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella dad is really crazy son of a bitch,that daughter Leah need a good slap in the face,sue need leave Charlie because he crazy,seth think God he left the heartless bitch,that no good shit dad of his,mom needs a wake-up call. James plan yes.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yeah Karma can be an evil bitch...Lol oh sweet justice for all those assholes...I loved it all and thank you foe the HEA...
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am happy to see all the bastards in Bella's life have been delt with...karma is a bitch...it is very sweet to see these two get a break
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Good to see things are going better for those two...did I mention Leah got what she deserved
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
O_o. Ho. Ho...da..oh Hades... that was one dozy of a chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Stupid Renee.. yeah I was high fiving Esme during that scene...
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
I may go to hell for saying Charlie deserves it but he'll be there long before me...Sue needs to grow a pair and leave
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Damn Charlie to the deepest pits of Hades... I hope they catch those other two...
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
Holy Hades a baby too...dang you keep me guessing...and those evil bastards got away...uggg
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
I just want to rip Tanya' s hair out right now!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh the poor girl can't catch a break...her mother is an evil skank...
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm gonna fucking kill Renee
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
Renee is a piece of work...god how i want to bitch slap her delusional ass...
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
Damn Jacob black...
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm with Edward... I could kill Charlie and Jacob right now...
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
How I want to rip Jessica to shreds the evil bitch...aackk
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ugg her dad is a rat bastard...wanna hit him...
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter: Two
Her family seems like a bunch of bastards...
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
I just wanted to say Thank you. This is one of the BDSM stories that I have read. You really captured what our lifestyle really is about. So thank you for that. So many times I have been called a freak and have been told that my husband/Dom is abusive because he likes to spank me. This story was beautiful. Thank you from one submissive who appreciates the work and research that went into this story. Thank you for creating something beautiful nothing like that trash Fifty Shades of Grey. Anyway just want to say that. Great story.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
yeahhhhh....well that just killed the story for me. I can't finish. I just wanted to say you're a great writer and the story has been FABULOUS!! Keep up the good work!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 25
Such a beautiful story I can't believe I didn't read it sooner! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
Melissa
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
loved the ending to this, those that were nasty got what they deserved.
Loved IT
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hi.....I am so sorry to hear about your childhood,. No child should be subjected to that. It is abuse and neglect. I cannot speak from experience becuase my childhood was wonderful, but my best girlfriend's mother sounds a little like yours. She gaveher daughter SPEED in the 4th grade so that she could clean her house. I was taught to always respect my elders but I had not respect for this worman. I don't want to dwell, but I will say this.....WHAT DOES NOT KILL YOU DEFINITELY MAKES YOU STRONGER and you my dear girl are very STRONG. I am looking forward to reading this story. i can read anything that is angsty as long as i know that there is a HEA in there. Thanks you for putting yourself out there and telling us abut a part of your life. Please do not let some people bother you with their remarks because they either cannot handle it or are just assholes......People who don't like the story and cannot give any "constructive critisism" can just not read it or just go to hell. My feelings are that people who put their work out there on the internet have so much courage and I have only so much respect for them. I am not a writer but a reader. My sister is the writer in my family. I love reading about Twilight. I am also an Edward lover.....THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher.....I would love to hear from you. Thanks again.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great story. I loved reading it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
Best read I have had in a long time, and I read ALOT. Thank you all for taking time to write and post these great stories.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
This is really good please keep up the great work
Date: 14 Jan 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it!!! Sad it's over! I'd really love to read this thing of ours! Can you send me the link so I can ask to join?
Author's Response:
https://www.facebook.com/groups/teamalltwilightfanfiction/
https://www.facebook.com/groups/607198782650330/
these are the two groups which the facebook story will be posted in. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Sorry we don't have the normal reveiw reply done yet.