[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh man! I loved it...but I need MORE!! LOL. Great job as usual ladies!!
Date: 31 Oct 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
Literally in love with this. You guys should DEFINITELY continue this. An outtake or expansion of any kind really. Love them <3
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
i LOVED!!! this little story thanks for sharing ;D
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good story. Too short
Date: 12 Jun 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
nice story.. i love it
Date: 28 Jan 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
great little story
well done
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
You were mean when posting. Great place to end a chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
This was fun to see Edward's POV
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far this is great. I was reading in the READER, so I have no idea what chapter I was to, but Damn when you got to the 18 th b-day. Well done. Stopped before she saw stars.
Sad but I know they will get 'caught' betting it is Mike. I bet he will be an epic prick too. Well as Paul Harvey 'The rest of the story' will be be read later to day. Thanks for sharing your always fantastic words. ~ meg
Date: 06 Oct 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
Excellent little story. I loved the way you put the time jump ! Their love story is so cute!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it - one of your best!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it great little story :)
Date: 16 Aug 2013 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Nice read while waiting on my other fic's to update :)
Date: 16 Aug 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
*grins madly*
Awesome fic :)
Date: 15 Aug 2013 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
*happy sigh* All so sweet and fluffy (except the Mike bit, obviously :P ) and cute and yay. :)
Date: 15 Aug 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
God, he's just too nice and perfect to be real, isn't he? :) If only all guys were like that.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awwww..... *cheers*
He's gonna get in SO much trouble, however. :P
Date: 15 Aug 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
*punches Mike in the groin* :)
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yup -- you got me hooked already. :)
I love this kind of plotline, so it was a given that I'd be intrigued. :)
Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
soooooo glad Mikey got what was coming to him. Leah too, to an extent. Charlie deserves the silent treatment....even if he was hardly ever around. Jerk.
Yey for Carmen. Woo hoo for school.
Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
uh oh Mike is going to cause trouble for them. What a freakin pervert. Cameras catch him maybe?
Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Now every girl's first time should be so nice.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love that E put Mikey in his place. Well at least her parents spent some time with her for birthday. Aww for E's b-day present. aww for thier first kiss
Date: 12 Aug 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Grumpy and dopey need to go. Disgusting treatment. Of course her parents indifference is no different.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
You two write the best stories!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved it. It was a secret romance they were made for each other thank you
Date: 11 Aug 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice story..
thank you.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awe…sad to see it come to an end, but it is a great story!!
Date: 11 Aug 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow happy birthday.. Well this is dangerous.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
:) loved this story
Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
this was cute
Date: 11 Aug 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have mixed feelings....I love this story, it was a delight to read, but altogether too short for my taste. I'm happy, though, as that was your choice to make it so short and still the same quality as the others! Such possibilities for later expansion, aren't there? Just sayin'......
Date: 10 Aug 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Gah! just fucking ewwwwww!!! I hope Mike gets a payback for his piggish ways.... The nicknames Grumpy and Dopey are just hilarious and precious all at the same time! So Mike noticed how Edward and Bella were around each other, did he? I wonder if anyone else noticed.....
Date: 10 Aug 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
O.M.G i love the way you write i just love your storys
Date: 10 Aug 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh the best birthday present, EVER! this was satisfying on so many levels! I so very much love a HEA....I know it's coming.....
Date: 10 Aug 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Happy Birthday, Bella! I hope she gets the one present she really wanted.....although the time with her parents was nice and the necklace Edward gave her was even nicer....
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am really liking this story. So is Bella gonna get a really good b-day present. Why can't she just speak to her father; you would think that the best boyfriend for her would be Edward; he understands the situation and would never put Bella in danger; he knows and is trained for this type of situation. Who could be a better boyfriend.
What do you think?
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm really loving this story.
Please continue :)
Date: 10 Aug 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another great story!
Date: 10 Aug 2013 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
oooo this is gonna be great!
Date: 10 Aug 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is great, more please
Date: 10 Aug 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is awesome!! More updates please! :)
Date: 09 Aug 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Aug 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
again, I read this twice....did anyone else mention the typo in the first date listed in this chapter?
Author's Response:
What typo? There is no typo... ??
Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I couldn't wait to read this here, so when FFn posted first I had to start. I then read it again here. OK you guys are so awesome. I'm eagerly awaiting more of this!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the start of this.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) looking forward to reading this