Date: 20 Nov 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far this is great. I was reading in the READER, so I have no idea what chapter I was to, but Damn when you got to the 18 th b-day. Well done. Stopped before she saw stars.
Sad but I know they will get 'caught' betting it is Mike. I bet he will be an epic prick too. Well as Paul Harvey 'The rest of the story' will be be read later to day. Thanks for sharing your always fantastic words. ~ meg
Date: 12 Aug 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
soooooo glad Mikey got what was coming to him. Leah too, to an extent. Charlie deserves the silent treatment....even if he was hardly ever around. Jerk.
Yey for Carmen. Woo hoo for school.
Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have mixed feelings....I love this story, it was a delight to read, but altogether too short for my taste. I'm happy, though, as that was your choice to make it so short and still the same quality as the others! Such possibilities for later expansion, aren't there? Just sayin'......
Date: 10 Aug 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Gah! just fucking ewwwwww!!! I hope Mike gets a payback for his piggish ways.... The nicknames Grumpy and Dopey are just hilarious and precious all at the same time! So Mike noticed how Edward and Bella were around each other, did he? I wonder if anyone else noticed.....
Date: 10 Aug 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am really liking this story. So is Bella gonna get a really good b-day present. Why can't she just speak to her father; you would think that the best boyfriend for her would be Edward; he understands the situation and would never put Bella in danger; he knows and is trained for this type of situation. Who could be a better boyfriend.
What do you think?