Date: 30 Oct 2015 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm so sorry that this story was never finished because it has been such fun to read! Thanks for what you did post, I sure enjoiyed it!
Now you have me thinking about finishing this off, glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: 25 May 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm new to this site and have been reading your stories on fanfic-have no account on it. I think you have really good and creative ideas and hope you continue with them and write more. I also read that nasty comment and hope you didn't take it to hard, people do make minor areas and have different ideas, so I don't see the big deal they made. They had no right to say that, let alone on a post. If youl ike something don't worry about the nasty comment-keep writing. I think you're doing fine.
Date: 21 Apr 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
This has always been one of my favorite stories- I love the humor & the great connection E & B have. Thanks for the update- I look forward to more explanation. I LOVE Possessiveward! :)
So glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
Closet sex is hot!! I hope we get a nice of E&B exploring the rest of the school.
You'll just have to wait and read, sorry can't give it away. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
Edward is so cute the way he is seeing his family in a whole new way. And everytime someone said or thought 'the dance with no pants' I had to giggle. That is too funny.
So glad you enjoyed it. The 'dance with no pants' line was something I heard on the Big Bang Theory show and who else but Emmett could pull that line off so perfectly when saying it out loud. I still laugh myself when I think about it.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
woo hoo. Great honeymoon. Just had to sneak in the feathers huh. lol
I couldn't resist the feathers and it was a perfect lead in to the pillow delivery and no too much movie watching! BTW the honeymoon isn't over yet, more of the weekend to come!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait for the next chapter - the honeymoon.
I just started reading this story a couple of days ago and I know I've been a bad girl for not reviewing each chapter as I went but I have enjoyed all of them.
I'm really happy that in your story Bella fought back against Edward when he tried to leave. It's always bothered me that she let him leave and didn't try to stop him or find him.
Keep up the good work!
Thanks, glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Excellent ... would have like Carlise & Esme to show up and suprise them all, but alas, Alice didn't see that.
Love your writing style ... you make Bella and Edward as well as the rest very believable ... I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for your review! More to come soon.
Date: 23 Sep 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
love Bella when she is being fierce
I couldn't agree more with you on that one. it always pissed me off that she stood there without as much as raising her voice or something.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
great idea the sharing of emotions with songs ... great choices & addon lines
Thank you so much for reading and Reviewing each chapter! I am so glad you like the story! Next update should be in about a week or so. Thank you again!
Date: 20 Sep 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
YEAH!!!! They finally did it! Get married that is. ;)
It is funny cause I was just thinking about this story a couple of days ago wondering when you might update...and here it is!!!
Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the lovin!
We were hard at work while you were thinking of it! Love ESP! Next chapter is in the works, thanks for reading it! :)
Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
loved it very much and so excited for the honeymoon update when you can thanks....
We will try to update faster now that our three originals are banked for the contest/challenge. So sorry for the wait! More to come soon. Thank you for reading it!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter...but why couldn't Edward smell the blood? Kat
Thank you for pointing that out, as I was writing that portion of the dinner, my mind was moving faster than my hands on the keyboard and was left out. I have now corrected it and he couldn't smell it because of a special mint leaf that grows high in the mountains that blocked it Jasper gave her. I also made a note at the end of the chapter that Charlie & Bella were drinking fruit flavored v-8 juice.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
An old family recipe?!? Loved it!!! Where do you come up with this stuff???
Poor Bella is so sexually frustrated, I am surprised that she didn't let Edward leave just so she could take care of business herself. Ooooh, there is an idea. She should double click her mouse when she knows he is on her way over. I'd bet the Volvo that he couldn't say no then.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
I"ve been really enjoying this story, so I thought I should finally leave a review.
I've read several of your stories, and I'm always so impressed with your ideas and the skills you have in putting your ideas into intriguing, well-structured stories. This one is no exception. I just LOVE how your Bella refuses to agree to Edward's request in the woods, and how the story progresses from there.
This chapter was a lot of fun. It's always fun to see Edward and Charlie interact.
Notes on this chapter: there are multiple sentences that should end with a question mark, but don't. I'll try to identify them for you in the order they occur and include the ques. mark. " . . . where would I get mountain lion?"; " . . .just like Esme's, is there more?" (occurs twice); . . . did she think I was going to turn Charlie down?; "Never mind that. What was on the menu?" Jasper pressed.
I hope this helps. I'm looking forward to future chapters, as always!
Thanks for letting me know about the question marks etc., sometimes that stuff just slips by me. I also like the Charlie/Edward interaction, so I can assure you there will be more.
Date: 24 May 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh man edward has no clue as to the fact that he is so screwed she not only has alice and rose helping her she also has emmett and jasper helping this is going to get good why do i have a feeling that edward is going to have to eat the next night and that the two of them are going to wind up getting married while they are in vegas i also cant wait to find out who messed with edward and bellas cell phones why do i have a feeling that it was tanya that did it i cant see why kate would do that to them but i guess i will just have to wait and see what happens next so please update soon
Date: 24 May 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella is the devil and Jasper and Emmett are her henchmen! I love it!!!
The whole going comando, very sly. And loved the silk nightware. It was a very nice touch. Edward should just wave the white flag in surrender. He doesn't stand a chance.