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Reviewer: Mariel Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 24

lease finish the story I haven't laughed this much in a while its  really great

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm so sorry that this story was never finished because it has been such fun to read! Thanks for what you did post, I sure enjoiyed it!



Author's Response:

Now you have me thinking about finishing this off, glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

Charlie is doing so well accepting Edward in Bella's life! He's such a good dad! The flower and gift advice from Emmett was spot on also!



Author's Response:

I Love Emmett, he is such a good guy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 22

Fishing lessons with your b rothers, priceless! Bella and the girls sharing stuff, almost better!



Author's Response:

I know I loved the fishing lessons and the girls sharing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 21

It's really sweet that his brothers are ready to help him do well fishing with Charlie. When he sneaks back into Bella's room, Edward better try to be very quiet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 20

I see only one problem. How are they going to stand being apart now that they are married? They can just barely keep from making love twenty-four/seven!



Author's Response:

I know right.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 19

This really sounds about like a regular honeymoon, except for the marrying a vampire part! They just can't keep their hands off each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

So far so good! I knew Bella would calm right down as soon as Edward touched her! I'm glad the two couples are with them, but it is a bit sad that the parents are absent!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well, she got her dream proposal, so I'm hoping she says yes! Jasper nearly ruined the whole thing, turning on the lust on board the plane!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 16

Can't they ever get enough of this getting even, payback, etc.? I can see it going on and on! It's funny that Emmett and Rose are miffed at not being invited to Las Vegas!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

It's going to be nip and tuck and a fight and a footrace, as my mom used to say! Will he get her married to himself before she finally makes him give in?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 14

This is so much fun with practically the whole family involved!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

They have both dipped their toes inthe water and so far escaped drowning!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

It's kind of cute that they both are using the brothers for advice about pushing their limits. The new car seems to have been a hit with most everyone, even Charlie!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

That was cute and Edward probably is screwed, just as his brothers told him! I'm glad he's still looking into what happened to his phone, and that Em and Rose are going along car shopping.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thank heavens Victoria is no more! Good thing Bella is going to be okay and even better that she is going to let Edward buy her a reliable car!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

Something is fishy here and not just the fact of Victoria getting her hands on Bella! Why wasn't Edward getting any calls from Bella? Who pushed Bella off the cliff? Stuff like that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good planning meeting though it ran late, for Bella, anyway. This trip to pick apples does sound like a fun date.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward probably saved his own hide by telling Bella about the meeting with the wolves. Maybe he's getting a tiny bit smarter about her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

Definitely a slightly different Bella, drinking and dancing! I'm just glad that the wolves know about Victoria and want to help keep Bella safe.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

That first reunited as a couple date went very well! The gold bracelet with double crystal hearts was a great memento!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

I guess Bella and Edward just have to trust each other  to say and do the right thing! I do still worry about Victoria hanging around! The songs sung for this show were just spot on, by the way!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love Emmett, he really is a good big brother! Anything to help his "little sis", and to also prank his brother Jasper!



Author's Response:

Always love a good pranking by Em.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Charlie, he just has no idea of how to help his baby girl! I'm with the Cullen family, Edward is an idiot!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good for Bella, except for the suicide part! I'm glad she got angry,along with her heartbreak! Now if Edward will get a clue, progress may occur!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 24

This E & B are very fascinating. Will there be a baby in their future?

I'm hoping & looking forward ti the continuation of this story.

Reviewer: Bookjunkie2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 24

I love this story and your others.I hope you continue with this, i want to know what happens!!!

Reviewer: Bookjunkie2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm new to this site and have been reading your stories on fanfic-have no account on it. I think you have really good and creative ideas and hope you continue with them and write more. I also read that nasty comment and hope you didn't take it to hard, people do make minor areas and have different ideas, so I don't see the big deal they made. They had no right to say that, let alone on a post. If youl ike something don't worry about the nasty comment-keep writing. I think you're doing fine.

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 24

This has always been one of my favorite stories- I love the humor & the great connection E & B have. Thanks for the update- I look forward to more explanation. I LOVE Possessiveward! :)

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 24

wow! Loving this story.. Can't wait to see more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  So glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

So happy about them bonding, so many stories have them at odds with each other.



Author's Response:

I thought that too.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh yes fun times ahead thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can....



Author's Response:

There will definitely be more fun times, glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

The kitten become a tiger.   kewl



Author's Response:

We alway knew she had it in here, lol.   Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

good & neat this here isl

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 24

Closet sex is hot!!  I hope we get a nice of E&B exploring the rest of the school.



Author's Response:

You'll just have to wait and read, sorry can't give it away. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm glad that Bella was the one to stand up to whorey Jessica.  hehehe   I loved the janitors closet.  I'm so jealous.  :)



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

I loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us.....



Author's Response:

So glad you've enjoyed it.

Reviewer: l-occitane11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

>a good start, will not wait to read the other chapters



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it.  There is some very funny stuff in this story, Edward having dinner with Charlie & Bella is one of them.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

Edward is so cute the way he is seeing his family in a whole new way.  And everytime someone said or thought 'the dance with no pants' I had to giggle.  That is too funny.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.  The 'dance with no pants' line was something I heard on the Big Bang Theory show and who else but Emmett could pull that line off so perfectly when saying it out loud.  I still laugh myself when I think about it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 23

great job.  Gotta love Emmett.  Charlie is being so cool.  Glad Sue is being nice.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  I so love Emmett, he's so much fun.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh dear.  I wonder what Emmett has in my mind for Edward.

I love this Edward.  He is so much more relaxed with Bella.  and the thought of him and her in the shower...good times. LOL

Reviewer: lorens Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

can't wait to find out what the full rose treatment is

Reviewer: MrsMcSparkly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 22

loving the new and fun edward! :D

please do tell us Rose's technique! pleaseee

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 22

I love where this story has gone- and the way you've written all the characters. I especially like the new Edward & all the "fun" they now have! Thanks for the great writing! :)

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

Funny!!! Good Job....

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 22

Haha oh god Edward is so in for it now I hope Emmett gives it to him good...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 22

he or jazz can be in my bed anytime.   Love land shark and almost all the skits with john belushi. 

 

Cheeseburger...cheeeseburger...Coke....no pepsi...chips

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

fishing with the boys was too funny....  hehehe  Can't wait for more. :)

Reviewer: Library Lolita Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 21

I wonder how long this will last loved it thanks for sharing and update when you can....

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 21

Ahhh, they are too sweet together.  Why do I feel this secret is going to blow up in their faces?  I see something being sent to Bella Cullen from Vegas.  I think it is a good thing that Edward is bullet proof.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter..... now I know someone is going to call or something and tip off Charlie....just gotta happen.   lol

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

loved it very much and can't wait for more thanks.....

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 20

hmmmmm hot  hot hot

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well, Dam!  That was a yummy chapter.  I need a cold shower now.  Teeheehee   Can't wait for more of that and your story.  hehe  :)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

loved it very much and can't wait to see what will happen next thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Sorry it took me so long to read this...I'm trying to get caught up on all the updates on the stories that I follow. 

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks, so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: AmeliaCullen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

Nice.  Sounds like Rose was very helpful!

Looking forward to the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I thought it was time Rose was put in a good light for a change.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

woo hoo.  Great honeymoon.   Just had to sneak in the feathers huh.  lol



Author's Response:

I couldn't resist the feathers and it was a perfect lead in to the pillow delivery and no too much movie watching!  BTW the honeymoon isn't over yet, more of the weekend to come!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

woohoo... finally..

 

Edward undone!

 

 

LMAO



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

Totally worth the wait!!!  That was hot and sweet and all kinds of sexy!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it and you'll be happy to know that the honeymoon weekend is continuing into the next chapter.

Reviewer: Nette91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 19

Sooooo worth the wait... can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 19

That was a very yummy chapter.  hehehe  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, there's more to come.

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh man!! What a place to end it! I can't imagine I need to say it, but I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It's coming shortly and since this is a honeymoon weekend, there's more to come!

Reviewer: AmeliaCullen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

Can't wait for the next chapter - the honeymoon. 

I just started reading this story a couple of days ago and I know I've been a bad girl for not reviewing each chapter as I went but I have enjoyed all of them. 

I'm really happy that in your story Bella fought back against Edward when he tried to leave.  It's always bothered me that she let him leave and didn't try to stop him or find him.

Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

Excellent ... would have like Carlise & Esme to show up and suprise them all, but alas, Alice didn't see that.

Love your writing style ... you make Bella and Edward as well as the rest very believable ... I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! More to come soon.

Reviewer: Pammy39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

must read

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

love Bella when she is being fierce



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more with you on that one. it always pissed me off that she stood there without as much as raising her voice or something.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

great idea the sharing of emotions with songs ... great choices & addon lines



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and Reviewing each chapter! I am so glad you like the story! Next update should be in about a week or so. Thank you again!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

love the dad/son talk & Emmett's plan and the meal ... fun chapter

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh I love how the family is behaving ... again, so much more realistic ... starting to really enjoy this story & wanting to see what happens next.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

This could be good ... really really good!

Just now finding your story. I love the alternative reaction from Bella. Seems realistic to me.

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

Aaaaaahhhhhh!!! Update soon!!!!

Author's Response:

We're on it! will get it out as soon as humanly possible. thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

YEAH!!!!  They finally did it!  Get married that is. ;)

It is funny cause I was just thinking about this story a couple of days ago wondering when you might update...and here it is!!!

Loved the chapter!  Can't wait for the lovin!



Author's Response:

We were hard at work while you were thinking of it! Love ESP! Next chapter is in the works, thanks for reading it! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

ALice is so funny



Author's Response:

Thenk you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

Good chapter.  I'm glad that Bella finally stood up to Alice about something.  hehe   Update soon.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you we are glad you liked it!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

loved it very much and so excited for the honeymoon update when you can  thanks....



Author's Response:

We will try to update faster now that our three originals are banked for the contest/challenge. So sorry for the wait! More to come soon. Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh- I can't wait to see what happens! :)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 17

That girl had better say yes!!!  Loved the almost mile high club!  Very hot!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. I was laughing as I wrote that one, had the let Jasper have a little revenge.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 17

Cute - of course she accepts graciously

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well I want her to say YES but that is up to her update when you can thanks.....



Author's Response:

But i still like to hear what you think! thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

aww he is so sweet



Author's Response:

He is sweet! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 16

OMG!  I love this Bella!  She is wicked smart and just plain wicked.  That was so awesome how she used Jasper's power against Edward and everyone else.  Loved it!!!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

loved it very much thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)  That chapter was really funny.  hehehe  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 16

LOL  Go Bella.   Get em

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh please write more.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

aww the boys were so sweet to help her

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh what a sweet story, can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter...but why couldn't Edward smell the blood?    Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out, as I was writing that portion of the dinner, my mind was moving faster than my hands on the keyboard and was left out.  I have now corrected it and he couldn't smell it because of a special mint leaf that grows high in the mountains that blocked it Jasper gave her.  I also made a note at the end of the chapter that Charlie & Bella were drinking fruit flavored v-8 juice.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

loved it very much thanks for sharing update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: maychellecatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG!! It's so realistic!! I've never read another story like yours ever. Keep updating as fast as you can ok?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

An old family recipe?!?  Loved it!!!  Where do you come up with this stuff???

Poor Bella is so sexually frustrated, I am surprised that she didn't let Edward leave just so she could take care of business herself.  Ooooh, there is an idea.  She should double click her mouse when she knows he is on her way over.  I'd bet the Volvo that he couldn't say no then.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

GREAT CHAPTER!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

I"ve been really enjoying this story, so I thought I should finally leave a review. 

I've read several of your stories, and I'm always so impressed with your ideas and the skills you have in putting your ideas into intriguing, well-structured stories.  This one is no exception.  I just LOVE how your Bella refuses to agree to Edward's request in the woods, and how the story progresses from there.

This chapter was a lot of fun.  It's always fun to see Edward and Charlie interact.

Notes on this chapter:  there are multiple sentences that should end with a question mark, but don't.  I'll try to identify them for you in the order they occur and include the ques. mark.  " . . . where would I get mountain lion?"; " . . .just like Esme's, is there more?" (occurs twice);  . . . did she think I was going to turn Charlie down?; "Never mind that.  What was on the menu?" Jasper pressed.

I hope this helps.  I'm looking forward to future chapters, as always!



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know about the question marks etc., sometimes that stuff just slips by me. I also like the Charlie/Edward interaction, so I can assure you there will be more.

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

loved it cant wait till the next one

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

oh man edward has no clue as to the fact that he is so screwed she not only has alice and rose helping her she also has emmett and jasper helping this is going to get good why do i have a feeling that edward is going to have to eat the next night and that the two of them are going to wind up getting married while they are in vegas i also cant wait to find out who messed with edward and bellas cell phones why do i have a feeling that it was tanya that did it i cant see why kate would do that to them but i guess i will just have to wait and see what happens next so please update soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

LOL  Eddie is in so much trouble with everyone "against" him.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella is the devil and Jasper and Emmett are her henchmen!  I love it!!! 

The whole going comando, very sly.  And loved the silk nightware.  It was a very nice touch.  Edward should just wave the white flag in surrender.  He doesn't stand a chance.

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

cant wait till the next one

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