Date: 24 May 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
loved very much like always update when you can thanks....
Date: 19 May 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Go Team Bella!!! She is so going to kick his virginal ass! LOL
So Vegas, huh? Is he going to propose before or after they get there?
Author's Response:
my lips are sealed but remember alice is invovled so anything can happen! thanks for reading michele
Date: 19 May 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
more please! hehehe :) Didn't get the e-mail notice for this chapter, by the way. Just FYI :)
Author's Response:
i haven't been getting any from the site either, whats up with that! gotta love the internet! thanks for reading michele
Date: 19 May 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Go Bella.... Gotta love Big Brothers fro helping.
Author's Response:
big brothers are definitely going to help! she's going to need it! thanks for reading it, michele
Date: 19 May 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a great idea for a story. I wondered why she agreed to his request. Knowing teenage girls as well as I do, she would have disagreed no matter what he said at that point. This is going to be so far out of the scope of Edward's experience (he cannot control things) that it should be a really fun time. p
Date: 15 May 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
bella got him hopefully for her sake she will soon even if its baby steps great chapter yeah
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad you liked it. More to come soon.
Date: 14 May 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
yeah that was over the top great chapter glad she dead
Date: 14 May 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
a calm Edward nice and fun too that's awesome
Date: 14 May 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
good chapter wolves in play now love drunk bella
Date: 14 May 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
think the boy is finally getting it great chapter
Date: 14 May 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
think the boy is finally getting it great chapter
Date: 14 May 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
lol but it was so sweet also
Date: 14 May 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
omg that was funny lmao
Date: 14 May 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter its good
Date: 14 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
now that's a reaction i could see
Date: 11 May 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wicked chapter lol and so funny. Hope you update some more soon
Date: 11 May 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Smack Kate and Tanya.
Date: 11 May 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward fishing with Billy?? That would be a hoot. Great chapter. Kat
Date: 10 May 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
that was great they got caught LOL loved it update when you can thanks....
Date: 10 May 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!!! The new car is perfect and the fact that Bella and Edward actually agree is amazing!
I don't get why Edward considers have physical contact with Bella some sort of competition? It is not like there is a bet...or did I miss something?
I thought it was one of the Denalis who messed with Edward's phone. I didn't expect it to be Kate though. I thought it was Tanya in another ploy to get her claws into Edward.
Author's Response:
he figured out when Bella confronted him about the maybach that she was playing a game and he doesn't want to lose. in reality it is! but more on that later... as for the Denali well i cant let the cat out of the bag on that one either, lets just say there are a few more twists to come. thanks for reading! michele
Date: 10 May 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
hehe - I think I feel sorry for Edward. He's going to dinner at Bella's house and then fishing with Charlie and Billy. I'm sure he'll just love that one. LOL
Date: 05 May 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
Haha i agree with Emmett, Bella totally handed him his balls lmao. Please update some more soon
Date: 05 May 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Really funny chapter. I loved how Bella "convinced" Edward. hehehe Looking forward to the Seth/Edward interaction and the car shopping. :)
Date: 05 May 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
I must admit I would have told Eddiekins were to go as well - I like. I would never have tried to off myself - however I would have been on a date with Mike Newton the next day. I think I would have had a picnic with Mike in the Cullens yard.
Date: 04 May 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
OMG!!! That whole chapter was hilarious!!! I love manipulative- ballsy Bella! I love the comment she made to Carlisle about whether vampires could go into shock! Too funny!!!
Date: 04 May 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
that was great update when you can thanks.....
Date: 04 May 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
I can see seth as a computr geek
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Is he going to get her a Hummer? That would withstand a pretty signifigant hit.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Tanya strikes again. That girl brings trouble with her in every story I read. She is probably the reason why Edward never got Bella's calls or messages.
Crap, is Victoria going to kill, torture or change her???
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love the non verbal interaction between Jacob and Edward.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
I forgot that Bella did not have a chance to expierience the wolves first hand.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Drunk Bella sounds like fun!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
First off, Carlisle rocks hard! I am so glad he is going to change Bella if Edward refuses!!!
It is about time that Edward actually removed his head from his ass and took Bella on an actual date with goodbye kiss and all! Now we have some progress. ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love girl time. And I so appreciate you not making Rose a raging bitch like she is so often portraited.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent chapter! I love how Em and Jasper are there for Bella.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love the Cullens!!! I was pissed that SM made them leave 'like sheep' as Alice said (perfect analogy). I am glad you wrote them so that they actually have an opinion on this and are sticking by Bella.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Haha, she actually agreed to a new care lol, well that should be interesting when she sees whatever he's bought for her. Hope you update more soon
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE THIS BELLA!!!! I hated how weak SM's Bella was when Edward left. I can not wait to keep reading to see what else she tries. Maybe she will cut herself in front of Jasper. LOL
Date: 28 Apr 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really glad that Victoria is no more. She has left the building and met her maker. YAY!!! Bella and the Cullen's can rest easy now, though I'd still like to find out what the deal was with Bella and Edward's phone, though.
I'm thinking he's going to get Bella a Volvo.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks.....
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yeah! I'm glad that Vicky is dead! hehehe So glad that Edward is staying with Bella too. Update soon. :)
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
a blue audi coupe
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wolves being reasonable...amazing! lol Kat
Date: 24 Apr 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Jasper. I'd say poor Edward but he had it coming. lol Kat
Date: 24 Apr 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love your approach to this storyline. When I read your summary, I realized that you were right. Why should she promise him anything. The fallout from Edward's decision is very believable. Great job so far. Kat
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
I just hope that they are able to get her away from Victoria before she does anything bad to Bella. That and she and Edward figure out what was going on with the phone. Though, it could have been Tanya deleting his texts and messages.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
lemme guess. tanya messed with the phone.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well Tanya needs to die and I hope victoria gets it also loved it update soon thanks....
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
So is Edward going to lighten up some now when it comes to Bella? It sure seems like he is. Hmmm, I hope that continues.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is so jealous , he actually kissed her in front of her father. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter, I'm glad Edward is working on that controlling, overprotective bullshit. I really hate that! hehehe Keep writing. :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
wow what an edward thing to do loved it update when you can thanks....
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter, update soon.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good for Bella going out and partying w/o telling Edward. Drunk Bella was too funny. Fun and sweet story.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait to see whats coming up next update when you can thanks.....
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad that Edward is doing his best to change his mind and is back to being with Bella again instead of plotting to leave her. He had to see what a bad idea that was to begin with.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thats so sweet. :-)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well, i guess he's had his wake up call. I'm glad the family is doing a damage control and taking it into his own hands.
Hmm! Edward is still turning Bella right?
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
loved it can't wait to see what will come next thanks.....
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awe! That was sweet. Edward sure needs lots of help not to be a dumbass! hehehe Keep writing. :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
Nice chapter.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks.....
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
A very interesting take on NM. I really like it, would it be horrible if i said that maybe Bella while going through this self destructive phase actually realizes that she can live without Edward. IDK maybe i'm jsut being werid, but I think that would be really awesome, but this is your story so do with it what you will, i'm sure it will turn out perfectly:) can wait for more drama!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
This last bit of this chapter was very funny.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmmm Will give it a shot but I think she would have waited till he left before she did anything if she was serious.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
I have to say I like that the brothers and sisters are all helping Bella. I think I would like to take a match to Edward- I'll give him a few more chapters before I really decide. Thanks!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Okay I'm a little confused. When Bella and Edward broke up it was just Edward and Alice going to high school. I do like this story and I don't see Edward doing anything but making this worse. I also hope that Bella gets over the sucide attempts and does something really crazy like riding motorcycles and hanging out with nefarious people just to show Edward.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
so sad but really good.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
oh my god i love bon jovi!!!! dead or alive could have nice meaning they care for her dear or alive..... you give love a bad name could be a nice dig to edward from them....bad medacine well obivously bella feels edwards is her needed bad medacine. god all of them could be good.. and the boys will be great oh it will be funny i bet...i cant really give my opinion.. becasue i want them all performed... any of them will be a good show and any of the messages they could gove off play well into your story line
Date: 06 Mar 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
lmao that was such a funny chapter. I think you should do 'You Give Love a Bad Name' as it kinda fits the story line at the moment.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
too funny
go get her Edward
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
The chapter was sad, touching and funny. All together, really good. Can't wait for the next one. Keep writing. :)
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow really amazing take on the whole break-up thing lol. can't wait 4 the next chapter!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) realy angry......good for bella
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
i'm looking forward to more chapters of this story. this would be what i'd be experiencing if i was bella. :) (it helps while i'm a virgo just like bella and i completly understand her low self esteem.)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
i'm looking forward to more chapters of this story. this would be what i'd be experiencing if i was bella. :) (it helps while i'm a virgo just like bella and i completly understand her low self esteem.)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Um Duhhh - now re reading ithat sentaance again you are right... I hope u r continuing - its very good!
Cheers
Cathy
Author's Response:
Yes i am currently writing the next chapter with my beta so we should have it ready soon. Thanks so much!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it - Bever read this story line before - please continue BUT you must go and fix this line - you have written CAN instead of CAN'T which I am sure you meant
"You were right; I saw it on her face the minute the words came out of my mouth. I do not think…I can leave now, not at least until I know she will be okay. So forget what I said watch her every move and text me so I can keep her safe."
Author's Response:
the line is right he tell Alice that:
I do not think…I can leave now. Which means Yeah, he is stupid enough to think he can still leave once she sees the light of his reasoning! not if she was a typical teenager whos feeling are hurt!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
drama and humor written all in this story. E needs to get a clue and realize he f-up and that Bella is killing herself to escape the pain. She is not going to heal and find a relationship w/ a normal boy. I love that the family is coming back since E can't get his head out of his ass and stop being an emo dumbass. Great story premise. I am excited to read the next chapter.