Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
i was shocked at first when heidi approached bella. i wasn't sure she was into the 3 of them--wow. i was shocked when things got heated up and in come's Aro. how the hell did bella and edward miss him in hte room watching them that is creepy
i a very surprised that bella and edward did not leave. seems swingers would have been a little more up front. i am not sure I could share my partner
this was a hell of a chapter. man even though bella was never with another women wow blown away. seem there was quite some chemistry between them and this was a hawt and hell of a chapter. cold shower for everyone.
love it and thank you for writing. look forward to more chapters