Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
My heart was breaking for Edward in the beginning. I was afraid he was going to run when Jasper stepped into the shower. I'm so glad he didn't run. That was a lovely first time for them.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'd follow him too, with that statement.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Aww sweet. I'm a little saddened Edward took so long to talk to Jasper, but I'm sure I would've done the same thing. I'm glad Jasper's the forgiving kind.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oops. Edward now has some groveling to do. I'm feeling a bit bad for him.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Fantastic! Cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you.
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful chapter. We all have things about ourselves we try to hide.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh I sooooooo can't wait to read more
Hope you up date soon
Date: 26 Nov 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love your story. Can't wait for an update! Iwas very hesitant to try your story-to even try this pair-but I'm glad I did. I also love Alice in this and found it really unique and touching for you to add Riley's aspergers. makes everything more realistic. Keep up the great work :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :-)
Really means a lot
Date: 31 Oct 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying the story, can't believe you've only had 6 reviews. Can't wait to see the next link in my inbox to read the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review. As long as I reach a couple of readers I'm happy.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Quite a bit happened this chapter. I'm curious as who who Riley is, boyfriend? Thug?
Author's Response:
thanks for the review
Date: 29 Sep 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
enjoying :) cant wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 29 Sep 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well done. I'm at 2stone 6lbs...... Lovely to see it in a story!
Author's Response:
Well done on your weight loss, currently at 2stone 8Ibs :-)
Date: 27 Aug 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the beginning of this story. Can't wait for the next update. Great storyline!
Author's Response:
thanks so much x
Date: 24 Aug 2013 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yay. Nice to see that they aren't always skinny and perfect. Just hit my super 10!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading and reviewing xxx
Date: 24 Aug 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. So funny walking to the death march toward the scale, poor Edward. Losing weight never easy.
Author's Response:
No it isnt easy hehe, thanks for the review x