Date: 30 Dec 2015 5:28 PM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part II
Thank you for this wonderful story. I found it by pure coincidence and am damn happy I did. I love your characters and the story that almost went by without major relationship drama but Edward battling his demons with Bella by his side instead. You really did a great job writing this. Thank you so much.
Date: 11 Oct 2015 9:39 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part II
I've been waiting to read Come Back Tomorrow and will do so despite what you said about Edward being terminal! That's heartbreaking right from the start! As for this story, bravo! You did a beautiful job and I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Hi there! I'm so sorry for the lateness of this response--it's been a crazy couple of months! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing How to Forget--I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I hope you like Come Back Tomorrow as well! :)
Date: 11 Oct 2015 9:09 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I
This was every bit as difficult as I thought it would be, but as always, they got through it together. I'm so glad Bella insisted on going to Chicago with Edward. It helped immensely, plus she had a great visit with his folks! The night out with Kate and Garrett was just the relaxation they both needed!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
Funny that Edward had more faith than Bella did! He just knew that she would do what she thought was best for him, forgetting that he's a big boy and can decide things for himself! Anyway, they are together and in love and that is the very best!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
I feel so bad for Bella, him just being whisked away like that! She knew it was a possibility, but to not even get to say goodbye! She wanted to tell him how happy she was that his old life was a good one, now she just misses him something awful!
Date: 10 Oct 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
He's gotten to such a good place that he's going to ask Angela how to proceed. This sure makes Bella happy, but I'm afraid as soon as he starts to accept his new life with her, the old one is going to come back to haunt them both!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
This was bound to happen aftr he remembered what his attacker said to him! The thing that scares me is all the codeine he's taking to sleep at night! I'm a bit disappointed that he won't tell Bella what he remembered, but I guess that's just Edward, being Edward!
Date: 09 Oct 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett saying he would make it quick and painless nearly brought Edward to his knees! Talk about triggering a memory! Thank God Edward managed to calm and distract Em until Charlie arrived to help! I'm so pleased that they finally kissed and will be talking about it tomorrow!
Date: 19 Jan 2015 11:43 PM Title: Epilogue
this was absolutely wonderful!!!!!
Oh, thank you so much! I saw your reviews throughout the day, but I couldn't respond because I was at work. it was fun to follow along as you read, though. Thank you for reading, and reviewing! If you liked this one, I just started posting a new story a few weeks ago. It's called Come Back Tomorrow -- check it out!
Date: 15 Jan 2015 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I get this I do. I am a substitute teacher and there are days when I get tired of them not wanting to learn. I just remind them I get paid whether you learn or not. I get to take that pay check and buy things. If you Ever want a pay check you better find it in yourself to learn some basics at least or Mickey D's won't even hire you. You will be living with Mom and Dad (if they have them) for the duration. Your choice.
Deb (droturno) is one of my favorite authors along with Jenrar.
:) Yep, Bella had to be a bit tough with him, but as you point out, it was necessary to get him to see. Deb and Jenrar are awesome! Thank you for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:09 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I
I'm embarrassed to say I finially finished this wonderful story. Many things I could relate to unfortunately with head trama, paralysis etc. loved the story. I never for one minute believed he was a bad guy.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
No atonement needed, Edward has been struggling with his feelings of not being good enough with his returning unpleasant memories. I so happy they finally admitted their feelings for one another and were able to physically express it. I really hope Edward has put leaving to rest, he and Bella belong together.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is so hard on himself, he could just as easily be in law enforcement or ex military with his knowledge of weapons, but he automatically assumes he was on the wrong side of the law. I love the near kiss and feel like the actual kiss us just around the corner. Fantastic chapter :)
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
I empathize with Edward/John as it has to be incredibly frustrating not having any memories or knowing who you are while being surrounded by complete strangers. Then on the other hand his former companions certainly didn't have his wellbeing in mind when they left him for dead. Maybe a blank slate and fresh start is just what he actually needs.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 3:18 AM Title: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I
I had almost forgotten just how much this story affected me. I read a LOT of FF and most of it is good, some more than others, but I very much enjoyed reading this outtake. It took me right back to the heart of this story and I remembered how wrapped up I was in it all the time I was reading it. This is a very satisfying ending to the story. We get to know, to witness, the outcome. Next OT will finish it off, right? I very much want to keep this when it's done and hope you don't mind if I do. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:18 PM Title: Epilogue
I have, so very much, enjoyed reading this story. I saw Domie's post today and must say I didn't realize that this was your FIRST story! I'm doubly impressed now. You are very talented and I look forward to reading more of your work. When your 2 outtakes are posted, may I save this story to my Kindle for future enjoyment?
Date: 09 Dec 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm sad to see it end. I love this story. I kind of thought that was her reason for not getting in touch with Edward. Thanks for writing.
Me too. :( I will certainly miss these two! I'm so glad you love the story!
Date: 09 Dec 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm late getting ready for work just so I could read this. I'm so sad that it's almost over, but ecstatic that they are back together. I understand her reasoning, but so happy that he came back to confront her in person. I cried tears of joy reading this. I'm so looking forward to the epi and outtakes.....and to your next story!! Thank you so much for giving this to us!
Aww...I'm glad you were so excited about it! And you cried! WOW!! That almost makes me cry... ;) I'm glad you understood Bella's reasoning. To me it made sense, but it hasn't to everyone. Epi and outtakes will post soon, and the epi will have a bit of a tease for the next story in the A/N.
Date: 04 Dec 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
I want the outtake s. I love Edwards attitude in this chapter. Great speech. Go get her Edward!
Outtakes coming up after the epilogue. :) I'm so glad that you're happy with Edward! Yup, he's going to get to the bottom of this!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can't imagine why Bella hasn't called him. I hope everything works out. I would love the outtakes after the epilogue. Thanks for writing,
Bella has her reasons, and she thinks they are good ones. You'll find out in the last chapter!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
YES! to outtakes and all that. I suppose post them after the epilogue?
I love this story. It is truly wonderfully written (doesn't take the easy way out but doesn't create angst unnecessarily. All of the characters reactions ring true.)
Yup, I've decided to post them, and they'll be after the epilogue. Aww...thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ohh I'm so anxious to see what's gone on with Bella! I have everything crossed for them when Edward gets back to her!
You will have answers in the final chapter, I promise! Thanks for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Why hasn't she called him, I can understand her being hurt but Edward is not the one that was awake and talking to her...did her father not give her the message.
Yes, Charlie does give her the message, but she has her reasons for what's she's doing, as you'll find out in the next chapter. As she told us earlier, sometimes love is doing what you think it right for the other person, even if it breaks your heart.