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Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Horribly Wrong EPOV

Well, I can understand her being upset, but she needs to let him explain and apologize face to face. ASAP. And for the record, I still think that Edward should have punched Jacob. ;)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. They'll talk, just not now. They'll do a lot of things, just not now. Again, I'm not a violent person ;)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Horribly Wrong EPOV

Loved it :)



Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

Loved it :)



Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

Is it Jake telling him he's wrong?  This was a shocking chapter!  Edward was vicious with his words.  Some of what he said will be very hard for Bella to forget!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Bella will not be able to forgive him easily. But I promise that she will eventually.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

You cliffie 'B'.

But I do love my angst ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry about the cliffie ;). Then I think it's a good thing you only have to wait until tomorrow for the update :). See you then.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

Well, Bella was a slut in the past. She has to realize that fact. She also let Jacob kiss her. She agreed not to while they were together. She broke his heart and then didn't tell him that she was wrong about last night, but it made her realize that she loved him. She must not love him, if she would not fight for their relationship. She has to realize that this time she was in the wrong.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I don't totally agree with the slut part but I can't really deny it either. I'm a woman who's been with one man for the past seventeen years. Anyway, Jacob kissed her and not the other way around AND she stopped him. I don't think Edward would have been in the right frame of mind to listen to her if she'd tried to explain. And after he told her what he thinks of her, her worst fears coming true, she doesn't see a point explaining anything. He can't take his words back. She knows she made mistakes but Edward knowingly used her fears against her. I decided I won't make you wait until Friday for the update. I'll post it on Wednesday. See you then.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

:)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

he only saw her and Jake kissing and in the moment she was trapped in Jakes lips Edward saw and I bet Jake saw him too...I think Edward needs to leave Bella for a little while and let her get over her insecurities.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Jake didn't do anyhting to intentionally break up Bella and Edward. Edward was hurt and wanted to hurt her back. But he'll explain that way better himself next chapter ;). See you then.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

Well, you have been hinting that Jacob was going to do something noble, so I'm guessing that it's him telling Edward he is wrong. However, in Edward's defense, Bella has just been stupid about Jacob. You just don't throw the old lover in the new lover's face like she has been doing without expecting a little blowback. Edward saw them together and he was very hurt. He had a few (or a lot) of drinks and said things to hurt Bella. Not nice, but understandable. I think Bella should have given Jacob a knee to the groin when he tried to kiss her. There should have never been any contact there. Edward is going to apologize and I hope Bella is going to accept that apology without making him grovel.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, Bella's stupid but Edward chose to hurt her on purpose. He knew what him calling her cheap would mean for her. She was stupid about Jacob but she never intended to hurt anyone. I'm afraid, it won't be that easy. Bella's crushed and what would it say about her if she readily forgave someone calling her cheap? They'll get their HEA, though, just not next chapter. See you then.

Reviewer: scmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

Good for Edward! Gosh, it's such a relief to put Bella in her place. So selfish. If you tell me that Edward has to grovel so they can be back together then yikes. I'm so not a fan of weak Bella. Or selfish Bella never putting herself on Edward's shoes. Argh. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Bella should have womaned up but in my world that doesn't give Edward the right to call her cheap. Only he knows how much that word would hurt her and he chose it on purpose. I hope you don't expect Bella to forgive him easily because he betrayed her trust. Sorry. See you on Friday at the latest.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Limbo

Bella needs to stay away from Jacob, when it is just the 2 of them. I still don't trust him. She needs to have that conversation with Edward. He has been very level headed when it has come to Jacob. We all know he wants more, but is waiting for Bella to say the word. Maybe Alice should hint to Edward to tell Bella how he feels. Edward won't do it on his own, since he is trying to give Bella a chance to catch up with him.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Well, we'll see how the whole Jacob/Bella thing and THE TALK will play out. I have to warn you, though. You might be shocked. See you on Sunday.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Limbo

I hope that, "I can't" means I can't go out with you!! Worst idea EVER!! That whole make up date he proposed just pissed me off more. Wham bam not-even-a-thank-you-m'am and NOW he thinks a dinner will somehow make up for that?? I should have taken you out for a dinner before I screwed you and then immediately told you I regretted it and walked out on you? TWICE?? No, no, no, no, NOOO!

Seriously, I am normally a non-violent person, but I want Edward to pound this guy! I want Bella to stand up for herself and say, "No, Jacob," for once!! She is still letting him control their relationship like she did years ago, just in a different way. He was no friend if he did what he did and took eight freaking years to apologize-which I still don't think he did adequately. He is not a friend no to think that Bella can pick right back up with their relationship because he thinks she should without taking into consideration how she felt and what she did to herself for YEARS. He just wants to feel better about himself. He doesn't care about Bella. He's selfish. I am so glad Edward told her exactly what he thought about Jake. I hope points out to her exactly what I have said so she can realize what an ass Jacob has been to her. She was wrong to go to the hockey game, especially if she doesn't like hockey! That hurt Edward. She is dense if she can't see that any man in Edward's shoes would see that as her choosing Jake over him! 

This is the longest review I have ever written. I hate, loathe and despise the character of Jacob. That doesn't mean I will quit reading the story...unless you have Bella sleep with him again, in which case I will probably shoot my computer. I really can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response: Wow! I feel honored to receive your longest review ever. I see where you all come from and I'm amazed by the amount of emotion the story stirrs with you all. Just Wow! Okay, most important thing first, there will be no sleeping with Jacob!!! Edward and Bella have their exclusivity deal and neither of them is going to break it. But the subject will come up next chapter. Bella knows exactly what she wants, and it's not being with Jacob in any romantic or sexual capacity. She wants her old friend but nothing more. But she might be fooled by his intentions, just saying. Jake has an ulterior motive for inviting Bella to dinner but I can assure you it's sincere and not at all shady. AND he's not interfering in her relationship with Edward like many readers think because as far as he knows, and he only knows what Bella told him, Edward's not her boyfriend, so she's actually fair game if he decided to persue her. Bella went to the game because Edward made it clear she should and she already promised Alice. But you're right, maybe she should have backed out after all. Edward is actually acting like a woman. You know, the way we sometimes say yes and mean no and actually expect men to understand and know what we really want. And Bella's acting like most men would, meaning she doesn't understand that Edward's actually trying to tell her not to go. But the way I created him, he really wants Bella to go because he thinks it'll make her happy. Anyway, after next chapter a lot of things will be clear, they will be out of limbo and I think most of you are in for a shock. I can see some jaws drop in the future. See you on Sunday.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Limbo

I love angst!

Author's Response: Great! Then you'll love the next chapter!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Limbo

:)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Limbo

Loved it can't wait for more:)



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll have to wait until Sunday! See you then.

Reviewer: scmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Limbo

Bella, get a clue. Duh. Must everything be spelled out for you. 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, Bella's quite clueless. But she'll get a few things spelled out for her next chapter. I just doubt that she'll like them. See you on Sunday.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Limbo

I think Jacob is a complete dickhead for offering her dinner bc he didn't give her one in the past after he screwed her over.  Way to bring up something bad.  He seems like he is trying to makeup with her a little to hard if he only has only true friendship on his brain.  I want Edward to tell her not to go but I they haven't talked yet so he doesn't know her true feelings.  I'm so glad to hear you will be updating more often! ;)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I promise you'll learn about Jacob's intentions in the next chapter. About the quicker updates, the next chapter will probably be up on Sunday. See you then.

Reviewer: Birdde Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Old Friends

I just them to freaking talk.... I hope they talk before the hot steamy S.E.X lls. And i didnt think Charlie would act like that toward Jake... a shocker. I thought hell act like he didnt know anything. I cant wait until the next update!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Well, Charlie's full of surprises :). About the talk, though, I can't promise anything at all about the next few chapters. See you next week.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Old Friends

I just want E & B to talk so Bella can lay her cards on the table.  With your notes telling us they aren't out of the woods yet I'm figuring I have a bit longer to wait.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I want them to talk to, I'm not sure though if they'll get the chance to do so in the near future. Yeah, you have to be a little patient. But it'll all turn out well in the end, I promise.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Old Friends

Thanks! I want to know what Edward thought when Bella said he was not her boyfriend ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. You need to have a little patience. Edward will tell us. In a few chapters he'll have a whole chapter in his POV. See you next week.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Old Friends

:)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Old Friends

You asked for our thoughts, so here goes. I really love this story BUT, I think you are feeling more sympathetic to Jake than I am. I am really angry that he stayed away from visiting his dad for 8 years! All because he was afraid he'd run into Bella? WTH? She doesn't even live in Forks any longer.  It seems like he was blaming her for him staying away. IMO, he has still not fully manned up to his mistakes. Bella needs to look at this from Edward's point of view. She confessed to him that Jake devastated her emotionally and all of sudden, while Edward is on a business trip. Jake pops back in and all is forgiven? He was blindsided. He hates Jake for what he did to Bella, but Bella is not acknowledgimg that. I am not forgeting that they are still "just friends": I would be upset if anyone treated my friend that way! I don't want to forgive Jake and I don't think Edward would either. Just my 2 cents. On with the story!



Author's Response: Thanks! I always appreaciate every opinion, even if it's opposed to mine ;). I'm definitely feeling a lot more sympathetic to Jake than all of you. That's because I know his thoughts and you don't. I totally get why none of you like him. He's not an easy character. Bella didn't just forgive Jake like that. Edward helped her to overcome her fears and be happy again. That's why she's able to forgive. Most of her hurt came from still loving Jake. She doesn't love him anymore. That makes it easier for her. And she knows she has to bury her grudge to be able to move on with Edward. Edward will eventually forgive Jacob. At least he'll have reason to thank him some time later ;). I hope you'll be back next week although you're not happy with where the plot is going right now.

Reviewer: Birdde Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

Where is the next chapter???? And they do need to talk!!! I can't believe she just did that: agreed to hang put with Jacob when all she has been wanting to do us hang out with Edward when he came back!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. The next chapter will be up tomorrow. I agree, they really need to talk but I can't promise it'll happen any time soon. Well, Bella could hardly send Jake away once Jasper invited him. After all, she'd told him she was okay with him being around. She would never have planned for Jake to run into Edward. She wanted to tell him in private after telling him how she feels. But things didn't go her way. And about going to La Push, Edward doesn't resent her for going. He really wanted her to see her dad. He's a family person and would never keep her from an opportunity to see her family. He'd just preferred her to go without Jacob. Well, let's see what happens next chapter, meaning tomorrow. See you then.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

Jacob is being such a jerk. He treats Bella like dirt and just because she said she forgave him, does not give him a right to think he is anything special. He is still scum. I am so mad at Bella for not thinking about Edward's feelings.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I must have written this story wrong because the Jacob I envisioned isn't the asshole you all see. Yes, he hurt Bella but he regrets it terribly. And he doesn't think he's special either. He's actually only concerned about Bella's happiness. He'll prove that later, though. Yeah, Bella handled the situation badly but she didn't disregard Edward's feelings, at least not on purpose. She loves him and shows it in the way she reacts when he enters the restaurant. What happens after that results from her insecurity and that doesn't get any better once Edward starts to distance himself from her. I'm glad you shared your feelings and I hope you're still interested in the story. I promise everything will turn out fine in the end.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

I love angst ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you do. You seem to be the only one here though ;).

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks! You're the first one who doesn't seem to be upset by this chapter ;).

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

Well after reading the teaser I can see Bella does go to La push.  I was hoping she decided not to go.  Jacob is now a big pile of poop sitting in the middle of their relationship. They need a pooper scooper ASAP!

Reviewer: scmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

Oh no. I was so looking forward to their reunion. :( so sad. They were both so looking forward to it and then :-/

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

What nooooo!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Well, yes, for now. But remember? I promised you all a HEA. Just be strong. Things will turn out fine eventually.

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

It's like Edward's letting her go.just in case. that was as hard as him leaving her in New Moon:(

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Edward doesn't want to stand in her way. That's it. But he's not leaving her (yet). And remember, there will be a HEA, I promise.

Reviewer: oscarkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

Completely unnecessary and out of character in comparison to how you've developed the characters so far. Disappointed.



Author's Response: I'm sorry you're disappointed but that's how I saw the story going. I agree with you that Jasper shouldn't have invited Jacob and that he maybe wouldn't. But then again, men are insensitive sometimes. Edward's caught between being shocked by Jake's appearance, being afraid to push Bella and being scared to be hurt himself. Bella's just the same insecure woman she's been from the start. If you'll give the story another chance and be back next week, I hope you'll like the next chapter better. If you're done, I hope you'll find something you'll like more. Anyway, I cherish every reader's opinion.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

Poor Edward! Bella put him in the same category with Jake. Ugh! Bella kinda did blow that. Of course, Edward should have piped up and said, "Yes, I am her boyfriend!" I hope these two don't get too miserable before they work things out. And I really want Jake back  on the other coast.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yes, Bella made a mistake. But what would have been the correct answer? Boyfriend's out of the question before THE TALK. And I think I wouldn't tell someone I'm not that close to at the moment that he's my exclusive friend with benefits or somehting along those lines. All the more I wouldn't to it in a crowded restaurant. Edward chiming in and answering would have been great but he's still afraid to push her. That's why he didn't. Well, I have to tell you that it'll get worse before it can get better. But in the end, Jake will do a good deed before he goes back to New York ;). See you next week.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 23 - A Ghost From the Past

Bella should have talked to Jacob about Edward. Most of all Bella needs to tell Edward about Jacob. If she wants a true relationship, she needs to tell her story. He needs to know about Jacob in the past and about their meeting now. Bella has to get her big girl panties on.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Edward already knows Bella and Jacob's story. She told him that night after he dragged her out of the club. That's when they made their exclusivity deal. Anyway, Bella wants to tell Edward about Jacob but I can't promise you she'll get the chance. You'll see later today when I post the new chapter. See you then.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 23 - A Ghost From the Past

Well I am glad she got this closure from Jacob, but to be friends I don't think they should and I also don't think Edward will like that idea...plus he gave a piss poor excuse for his behavior.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Bella can finalyl leave the BS with Jacob behind her. I'm sorry Jake's explanation wasn't enough for your. I tried to have him explain as best as I could. Well, Edward will be suprised to say the least. You'll learn all about his reaction next week. Hope to see you then.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 23 - A Ghost From the Past

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks! ;)

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 23 - A Ghost From the Past

I hope she can rub Edward in his face !!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The only thing I'm saying is it depends on whether Edward plays along. There'll be much more about that next week. See you then.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 23 - A Ghost From the Past

I am glad Bella let go of her anger, but his excuse was lame ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you agree with Bella. At the moment it seems that you're part of a small minority ;).

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 23 - A Ghost From the Past

She may forgive him, but will Edward? No, I don't think so. I do not see how she can be friends with Jake and be with Edward. That won't fly with him. Jacob hurt Bella too badly and Edward will not forgive that nor ever be comfortable with them being friends.

But that's just my opinion, so I look forward to seeing how you write it.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I'm not going to say much, just that you could be onto something. Some questions will be answered next week. See you then.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:44 AM Title: Outtake - Photo Session

Loved it! Super intimate and sexy.



Author's Response: Thanks! That's exactly what I was going for.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 11:11 PM Title: Outtake - Photo Session

Thank you, thank you for the v-day gift!  It was sweet with a fantastic amount citrus!  He got freakier with her than I expected which means you knocked it out of the park!  I think all of us readers can agree that when Edward gets demanding and bossy we just LOVE it! As always I'm looking forward to Tuesday's update! 



Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review. I'm so glad you liked the Valentine's Day outtake. It was fun writing it and I was really sad when I decided to cut it. But considering the overall plot it was for the best. See you later with the next chapter.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Box

It's ore of a broken heart kind of thing, plus he put her in an awkward situation by making her the other woman.



Author's Response: Thanks! You're really getting it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 10 - A walk down memory lane

Poor girl...that sucks!



Author's Response: I'm glad you agree with me. There were readers stating that it wasn't that bad what happened to her.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Revelations

Got part of his history out of the way...



Author's Response: Well, it's actually most of his story. There's a bit more in a later chapter but not so much.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Your place or mine?

Great so far!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 1:43 PM Title: Outtake - Photo Session

OMG! That was hot ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I hoped it was but I'm never sure!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:37 PM Title: Outtake - Photo Session

Definitely sweet. Happy Valentine's Day!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed my little gift. See you on Tuesday for the next regular update.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Long Distance

Awesome chapter! I can't wait for more ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! There will be more tomorrow.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Long Distance

:)

Author's Response: Thanks! ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Long Distance

I'm looking forward to their sat. Night fun! 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm sorry to kill your buzz but there might not be any Saturday night fun. I'm just saying. There's another chapter before it'll even be Saturday and much can happen in one chapter ;). But there will be fun (eventually), I promise. Maybe on Friday already because I'm trying to get the Photo Session outtake ready to post for Valentine's. See you then. Silke

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Coming Out

Valentines Day would be a perfect photo session outtake day.  Hint hint ;). I wish Bella didn't have any worries about how Edward feels but she wouldn't be Bella if she didn't. It brings me lots of smiles knowing she was ready to cry that he is leaving town.  The i Love You part that she said mentally completely shocked me! 

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I promise I'll think about the outtake as a Valentine's Day gift, but I can't promise anything. So Bella's realization shocked you? I'm sure it shocked her more ;). We'll see where it leads. See you next week.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Coming Out

She thought it! Didn't quite say it, but she thought it! Yippee!



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, she thought it and she feels it. She's just waiting for their chance to have "the talk". See you next week for a little juice ;).

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Coming Out

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks! ;)

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Coming Out

oh, i so want to read about the photo session ... fun stuff!



Author's Response: I'll sure give it to you. I'm just not sure when. The plot is going to get more intense soon and the outtake doesn't really fit anymore. But I won't forget about it.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Coming Out

Thanks!

Author's Response: You're welcome. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Coming Out

I loved it 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Kinky

:)

Author's Response: Thanks :).

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Kinky

mostly for the peak ... preview :)



Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I hope you'll be back next week.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Kinky

I'm guessing his trip to New Orleans couldn't come at a better time.  Absence makes the heart & lust grow fonder!  ;)



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There's still one chapter to go before Edward leaves for New Orleans. You're right, absence makes the heart grow fonder but what could happen during Edward's absence? I guess we'll see that soon.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:40 AM Title: Outtake - Blessing

I really really like your Charlie!  He was spot on about Jacob & Edward!  I loved when Edward got out of the car, he considered the option of running.  I have been married 15 years & I still consider running when I see my in-laws.  It made me smile really big :D when Edward said to himself about Charlie being a future in-law.  That was some great foreshadowing!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Kinky

I love Outtakes & I love kink. I guess that's why this is a perfect story for me ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! Lol, I'm glad you find that my story suits you ;).

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Kinky

Next Tuesday is so far away. I loved this chapter. I loved that Bella had her little day dream about cooking for Edward and it didn't freak her out. I can't wait until she realizes she's in love.



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll give you a little spoiler. You'll only have to wait one more week for Bella to finally see the light, all of it. But that doesn't mean were at the end of the journey. There's a lot more to come.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Kinky

I love this Edward. Great chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks! I love him too. That's why I'm writing him ;).

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:06 AM Title: Outtake - Blessing

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:26 AM Title: Outtake - Blessing

Thank you! I love outtakes, they are one of the best things about fan fiction ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! Outtakes and most of all the close contact between readers and and writers is what I enjoy the most, too. I stopped reading "real" books because I'm so happy with the way I can communicate with the authors here. I like that I can ask background questions and I love to answer my reader's questions. If I would ever get to write an original story (and I'm not saying that I'm trying, not at the moment anyway), I'd really miss the close contact with my readers. You make this all worth while.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 8:14 PM Title: Outtake - Blessing

It was almost what I expected, except I thought Edward would be a little more forth coming with Charlie about his feelings for Bella. But, Charlie already seems to know that Edward loves her, so if he's good with that, so am I. Looking forward to Tuesday!



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I deliberated having Edward spill his guts but then I thought he wouldn't do it. Not before Bella knows. You're right to look forward to Tuesday. It's going to get a little "Kinky" ;).

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 6:38 PM Title: Outtake - Blessing

Hopefully soon Bella will realize that Edward is her boyfriend and the love of her life. She is just hiding from the truth.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I promise she will but I don't make any promises about where they're going from there ;).

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Thanksgiving

I am lovin where this story is headed ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I hope to take this story to an interesting turn. You'll see in a few chapters.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Thanksgiving

:)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Thanksgiving

Bella is not freaking out anymore.  Edward is stepping up his sweetness aka "boyfriend moves" and Bella is responding well!  I noticed when Edward told Bella what Charlie said about taking care of his girl, Edward responded he would.  He didn't placate to Charlie that they were just friends.  The EPOV outtake is going to be interesting!



Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review. Yeah, Bella'S making progress but Edward risked a lot with his boyfriend moves. She might have run for the hills. You'll see what that conversation with Charlie was like and why Edward didn't correct Charlie. See you on Friday.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Thanksgiving

Good chapter. I am looking forward to the outtake! Did Edward confind in Charlie? I think Bella is coming around.



Author's Response: Thank you! The outtake was fun to write. I hope it'll be fun to read, too. See you on Friday.

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Thanksgiving

Love it



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Bare Your Soul

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Bare Your Soul

Perfect!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Bare Your Soul

I loved this chapter, it was super important!  Bella was sooo mushy & I would have to say that the walls are crumbling fast! 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're agreeing with me about the importance of the chapter. I can assure you that Bella's change or heart is going to be way more obvious next week. See you then.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Bare Your Soul

I am glad these two sad people found each other!



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I promise, next week it will be much more obvious that Bella's made a major progress. See you then.

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Bare Your Soul

Oh god I love your story !



Author's Response: Thanks for your nice words. It feels so good to know that readers like my story.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Meet the Parents

Thanks! I am lovin' Charlie ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! He's fun writing. There will be a bit more of him in an outtake two weeks from now.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Meet the Parents

I hope Edward has some great sneaking skills & makes into Bella's bedroom w/o a Charlie or Sue interruption!  That sneaky kiss that happened in her bedroom caught me off guard.  I LOVED it! I can't get enough when Edward takes control!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! So, you think Edward would disrespect Bella's father by sneaking around and having indecent contact with her? We'll see about that next chapter ;).

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Meet the Parents

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Do You Trust Me?

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 8:46 AM Title: Outtakes - Conversations II

:-)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 8:05 AM Title: Outtakes - Conversations I

:-)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Emmett

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Do You Trust Me?

Bella seems to want to hide from life. She likes to lie to herself. It makes sense that she would not tell her parents about her life.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, in a way, Bella's hiding from a lot of things. But very soon she'll see that she can't keep doing it for much longer.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Do You Trust Me?

Nothing like going out of 2013 with a BANG! Haha!  Happy new year!  I so love that she invited him to thanksgiving & was extremely comfortable going to the movies!  It made me smile when she woke up & missed that he wasn't in bed with her.  She is warming up & her walls are crumbling.  You are writing it brilliantly!  



Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review. I'm blushing right now. I'm really glad you like the story. It won't be long now until Bella takes a big step towards Edward.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Do You Trust Me?

OK, I plead the Fifth on this chapter. ;)



Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review. The next chapter is going to be PG. But the one after that not so much ;). Hope to see you then.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 2:42 AM Title: Outtakes - Conversations II

I love it when a guy can admit he's in love without fighting it. Love!



Author's Response: Yeah, Edward doesn't really have issues with that. He just slept around because he was frustrated. Bella does it because she's afraid. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Emmett

I am just catching up after my Christmas with no internet. Very sexy, but too adventurous for my real life. Fun to read about though. I think Emmett was going to say that Bella was someone Edward would want to marry.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm not that adventurous either. But I really liked writing it ;).

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:40 PM Title: Outtakes - Conversations II

Thanks!

Author's Response: You're welcome. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 12:54 PM Title: Outtakes - Conversations II

This was so sweet!  I feel like it was some extra candy I found in my stocking! Thanks so much!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the sweet review. I'm glad you liked it. Now you know how Edward feels. Next, he will make Bella feel some new things.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 2:26 PM Title: Outtakes - Conversations I

Thanks you! I am lovin' this story ;)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you do.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 2:09 PM Title: Outtakes - Conversations I

I love it how he says "she's amazing" it makes me giddy just imagining how smitten he is with her. I think jasper is a good friend to both.  Thanks for the Christmas conversation! It was a real treat!



Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. Although I've had parts of it planned out for a while now, the talk between Jasper and Edward wasn't easy to write. It was hard to decide how much he would share with Edward and what he wouldn't say out of respect and loyalty for Bella. But I think it turned out alright. He didn't say too much but Edward pretty much understood what was going on with Bella. I'm working on two more conversations with Emmett and I hope I'll be done with them by the end of the weekend so I can post them before New Year's. Hope to hear from you again soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Emmett

That was so hot. I bet Edward told Emmett that he was going to marry Bella one day. He just knows that would scare her, so he is playing it cool.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, you might be right. That piece of information would definitely send Bella running for the hills.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Emmett

That was a hot little lemon! You were spot on about adding excitement getting lemony in public!  Yes, I have done it and it adds to the experience but not so much if you get caught. Which has also happened, thank goodness only once!  

I love all of the things Emmet said but didn't say.  I think it is is so fantastic that you have written Bella to be so oblivious and I'm not annoyed with her. Probably bc she is like so many of my friends who think they can keep their walls up but are so smitten it is almost funny.  So, I guess what I'm saying is Bella is very relatable in your story. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It was only coincidence that Bella came just the moment they were being caught. It wasn't because she was extra excited over the audience. Bella will soon start to see that there's much more to the connection between the both of them than she's been willing to admit. Just another couple of chapters ;). Until then, I'll give you an extra long lemon next week and a step into the right direction for Bella. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Emmett

Fabulous! I love this story ;)

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Chicken Soup

Yes, yes, yes is my answer to Edward outtakes! Those would be Christmas gifts on their own but you are also going to give us a lemon too!  That's you saying Happy New Year too! 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm feeling generous this year so there will in fact be a lemon for Christmas AND another one for New Years. And if everything goes as planned, there will be a couple of short outtakes. See you then.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Chicken Soup

:)

Author's Response: Thanks ;).

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Chicken Soup

Edward is sneeking into her heart.



Author's Response: You got that right. That's exactly what he's doing ;). Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2013 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Chicken Soup

Thanks! I am lovin' this story ;)

I love outtakes

Author's Response: Thanks for loving it. I'm working on the outtakes. You'll get them soon, I promise.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Chicken Soup

Yes, that was sweet. My hubby takes good care of me like that when I am sick, too. Can't wait until next week.



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. My hubby tends to be sick whenever I am so he very rarely takes care of me. See you next week.

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