[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2016 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
amazing story
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2016 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
he is the better pusher
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2016 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
I knew she would forgive
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2016 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
she will forgive
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2016 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
he is sweet
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
can't wait for tommorrow
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
sad beginning
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 37
thanks so much for sharing this amazing story with us ;D
Date: 16 Jan 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
an abortion oh no :(
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 37
I liked this story a lot at times until Bella became a whiny, pathetic doormat & Edward became a control freak, it just seems Bella went from an physical, sexual, verbally abusive controlling relationship to a mentally abusive, controlling relationship. People can justify it all they want but Edward was mentally abusive & controlling & that's nor sexy or a turn on, if he loved her at all he wouldn't be like that, especially knowing what kind of relationship she came out of, I felt that he used that to his advantage.. I also find the story not very believable when Bella was very clutzy, it was kind of annoying. & also, Edward wants Bella to pursue her dreams & go to Dartmouth, but what is the point of having that kind of education where she could put it to use if he won't let her to get a job & want her as a weak, kept woman & dependent on him? & Bella shouldn't give him that power, also husband doesn't mean to be controlling, punishing, threatening or whatever, they are suppose to respect their other half. I just find their whole relationship a disaster, train wreck, no respect & very abusive etc. Sorry but this is how I feel after reading this story.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 37
glad things worked out and they are happy and starting the family they were meant to have those years ago. keep up the awesome writing.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 37
Just thougt I'd let u know U FORGOT TO MARK THIS STORY AS COMPLETED!!! Thanks for writting this truely captivating story... I have truely looked forward to each & everyone of ur Updates...
Date: 15 May 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 37
Hi. I just found this story and have been reading it over the last couple days. I really enjoyed it. There were a few twists and turns I didn't expect which made it all the better. I'm looking forward to reading more if your older stories and the newer ones.
thanks for sharing your amaizing talent.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
loved this story
Date: 10 May 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wow, I can't believe it's the end. Thanks for the great story!
Date: 08 May 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 36
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 35
Bella is so stubborn
Date: 28 Apr 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 34
Bella can be so cruel and stupid. She should have never closed herself off to Edward. He is only trying to help her. She is the cause of the James and Jacob mess. Did she not think that Seth would be someone who could help her rescue the injured Edward. She really causes her own problems. Edward is too good for her.
Date: 09 Apr 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 32
i hope that they can keep a better relationship than they have been keeping, also hope that alice and jasper being there wont hinder her training if she continues and maybe edward can find a different way of protecting her without shutting her out. keep up the good work.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 32
Whew. I read the last two chapters at once. I wondered how he could redeem himself.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
I am so angry at Seth. He thinks he has all of answers. Now Bella is so angry at Edward. It is going to take a lot to get them back together. She had just forgave him for prom night. Edward want her to still have some softness. Now she is a warrior and all her anger is at Edward. Seth was wrong to keep her from talking to Edward in the beginning. She has a fear of abandonment and that is what happened. She does not see it as keeping her safe. Seth needs to have his balls removed preferably by one of his own weapons.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
.He leaves his wife feeling abandoned and abused,doesn't act like he really cares, he wont talk to her, hangs up on her after not talking to her for weeks BUT he is taking Jessica out on dates,smiling with her while getting their pictures in the paper and kissing her?
Just little pecks? His LIPS are on another woman while his wife crys for him???? WTF? When you are married "just a few little pecks" IS CHEATING not playing a role.
Sorry Sweety, but I have to flounce this story. There's only so much bull**** I can read. I don't read cheater fics and this is beginning to be nothing but him justifying his cheating under "trying to make her safe".
Best of luck to ya
Peace Out
Date: 03 Apr 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
I like it very much. Good chapter. A stronger Bella is awesome.
Date: 31 Mar 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well that was a surprise. How will Edward handle her request for a divorce?
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 30
what the hell bella... wow this is getting interesting
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
Poor Bella. Edward should not keep her in the dark
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 29
This is such a wonderfully capyivating story thanks for all ur hard work n dedication!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
so jessica is a rat.. hmm. I hope edward can make it up to alice soon. OOO Bella is going to be pissed when she finds out what he did. I wonder did he leave bella with option to call home ... will alice figure it out.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
Lovely! But "long months" without him??
Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yes!! Well I guess that goes to show Edward that controlled/uncontrolled environment, that Bella can handle herself. Hopefully he doesn't blow this by being an ass, and just lets Bella know how proud he is of her! And I bet Seth is going to be all smug now! As well he should be. Bella's got the power. Love it.
I know that there is more drama coming their way, with Jakob and probably other things, but I sure hope Edward comes clean about the tracking device in her necklace. I guess we all will see!
Will be anxiously awaiting the next update! Love this fic!
peach
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella has nothing to worry about. Edward and Seth are probably so proud of her. I bet Edward's cock is so hard.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella just stoodup for herself. Woohoo! She's worried about Edward's client when she just defended herself? I also believe she just met Seth's criteria for... you know the green light. Good chapter.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
I just love this story. Bella is so stubborn with Edward. I just wonder why she was such a doormat with Jacob. It is good to be fiesty, but Bella does make some unsound decisions. She needs to realize how much Edward loves her and forgives her.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
It's good to see Bella being more assertive.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh i love this story, update soon please!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Please give whiny Bella a break its killing the story. More action less emotional bratfest.
Date: 06 Feb 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yay Seth! Yay on the kissing scene also.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
'"Bella. Wait." Dr. Harper's voice boomed..."' Finally, the voice of reason. You can't keep running from your problems. They don't go away. You just take them with you.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
"...I finally started to wonder if I had made the right choice for Edward nine years ago."
That is the crux of the problem. She had no right to make any choice for Edward. She should realize that now since she hated that Jacob told her what to do.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks 4 this amazing update!!! Truely enjoying this very intriging story!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella has been through so much
Date: 09 Jan 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
These are some messed up folks. I can't wait to se some light at the end of the tunnel.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
It does not show when this story is updated, but I think you already know this? Quite a shame, because it is, in my opinion, a lovely and really well written fanfic! Go on like this!
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much!! I know about the problem and unfortunatly TWCS has told me that they are still working on the problem and dont know when that update feature will be available but yeah...it kinda sucks. But thank you for reading!!
Date: 19 Dec 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story! I wish your stories would show up when they are updated. The last time it shows is October 28th. Have a good holiday!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for updating this beautifully captivating story!! Have ur self a very Merry Christmas & will see u aginin soooooooon in the new year.
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
loving this story. Happy Christmas and New Year to you too
Date: 17 Dec 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter! Thanks for all your hard work. Merry Christmas!
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
She needs to be totally honest with Edward
Date: 03 Dec 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ohhh, that's so sad. Well, as his friend, Bella needs to sleep with Edward so HE can sleep better, yeah?
Date: 30 Nov 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is so sad. I am glad Edward opened up to her. He was sweet.
Date: 30 Nov 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter. Luv this E.
Date: 18 Nov 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
This poor Bella is really beaten down. I hope she can get her confidence back soon.
Date: 15 Nov 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
I know a lot of people might want to just smack Bella for her negative thinking and running, but the sad truth is that most abused women feel this way.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well, actually, I think that went better then I expected. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
loved this update
Date: 08 Nov 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ahhh, at last! Yeah!
Date: 04 Nov 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Woo boy! Can't wait.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Only four chapters in and I love this story! I am hooked.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
looking forward to their meeting
Date: 02 Nov 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
How does she not recognize his name?
Author's Response:
When they were kids his name was Edward Masen now he goes by Edward Cullen. It will be explained in a later chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 29 Oct 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
THAT WAS SO SAD.I LOVE IT THOUGH! THANKS AND MORE PLZ!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
He was a teenage ass-but then again aren't all guys? Is Alice going to hire Bella to be her new assistant?
Date: 28 Oct 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh no he didn't! What?!? Holy moly! Good chapter. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2013 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh Edward. Breaking her heart isn't the answer
Date: 26 Oct 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
AGAIN I LOVE IT! MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ! LOVE YA
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!!!
Date: 25 Oct 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am really enjoying this and can't wait until they meet again.
Author's Response:
SOON! THANK YOU FOR READING AND REVIEWING!
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella, she seems to have been through so much
Date: 24 Oct 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT! MORR PLZZZZZ....IM BEGGING YOU! THANKS
Date: 23 Oct 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see what happened between them. Thanks for writing. I am loving this story already.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!