Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
You been around along time writing (I think ) you are missing words in these sentences. JUST FYI. Maybe you are not using a word program that alterts you or maybe no Beta.
Author's Response:
I've only been around two years. I'm not missing a beta, but I sure am missing her help lately. Thank you for reviewing.
~RobstenLover93
Date: 02 Jun 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
I 'm still here, want to read more
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2014 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh keep it going. I am so in love with it. It is truly so different than the others.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
His (Secret boy in Ch. 2) POV
“I know that! Her mother was kidnapped when she was a young girl by Aro, I have thoughts that if he can kidnap Renée then he can kidnap Bella” he said
“That was 12 years ago! Renée is fine! Fine brother fine!” I said
“You don’t that! Did you friend her? Do you know her mother is just fine after being kidnapped and beaten? May I include how Aro had hisfriends rape her? How they don’t know of their other brother? Seth? They have a reason to know these things brother. Although you haveno right to tell her you have a connection to her ex-boyfriend, do you know how easily she would kick you out of her life? Do you?” he asked
Please find above i copied and paste our of chapter 3. - i have made Aro name larger for you.
Can you please explain as im totally lost. From what has been started so far in the story to which i have re read all fingers point to ARO being the person that kidnapped and rapes Renee not Anthony or Edward but yet your author response says aro not in the story.
sorry very lost now
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. I have seem to made the mistake of forgetting that in chapter two. Thank you for pointing it out....
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am missing something. He would be jailed because they think he kidnappted Rene?
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Surprise she went so easily with him just after meeting him. Hum!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
So it wasn't Edward, yeah!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
What a plot! Renee thinks it was Anthony Cullen who did things to her when it was aro!
bella still loves Edward and Edward still love bella
in very interested to see how the truth comes out!
Author's Response:
Aro? He's not in the story hun sorry! It was Anthony, not Aro :) Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter but you have this chapter repeated!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW, amazing so far.