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Reviewer: Scrappy843 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

REAL GOOD I HOPE U FINSHED IT SOON CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENDS

Reviewer: SunRised Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2016 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 18

Good morning, liked your story and hope you will continue. please

 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love your story can not wait for more.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15

sweet

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

wonder where he's taking her

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

yikes

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

seems he's planned ahead

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

yikes indeed

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

hmm

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

lol

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

wonder if it's a coincidence

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

think they will find them

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

good start

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 18

can't wait for more

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

read this long ago so restartin it since you seem to posting again

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Edward's love and attention will be wonderful for Bella. She needs to be taken care of from someone who loves her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

So glad that she talked to Carlisle so easy. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor girl there are creeps everywhere.  Edward will be more protective over her and very happy she told his dad what happened and she was getting help.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 18

Well... that was interesting.  Now I can't wait for the next update.  READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

I was afraid that he had attacked Bella.  Or worse!!    Thank you for the update!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well, you were missed! I see it's been a while but no matter still a joy to see you back. A filler chapter but I look forward to the next chapter all the same.  READ YOU SOON ♥



Author's Response:

Thanks! I never meant to be gone for long. I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow, hope you enjy it as well!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you love it! I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

Fun story, I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next chapter will be posted tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 17

It has been so long since this story ipdated I had to read the first few chapters to remember whatits avout again.  Thank you for updating. Its a real good story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and I am glad you like it. I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow. :)

Reviewer: evilAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

I have to ask what is a painted line and why did it cause her to fall when she stepped on it?



Author's Response:

A painted line is the lines that they paint on streets and in parking lots that tell people where to park, or when they can pass. When dew falls at night or it rains because the lines are paint water collects on them. Bella was wearing flip flops that the tread has been worn out on so when she stepped on the line with her shoes having no tread and the combintion of a little water it created a slick surface which caused her to slip and fall. I have done this more times than I can count. Though usually I do not fall... but... I have been known to fall. I hope this clears this up. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

So glad to see this story return.



Author's Response:

Thanks! You will also get another update tomorrow. :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

So have I!  Great story so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love how playful they are with each other but Edward is still Master.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 17

great chapter 

looking foward to more updates

well done



Author's Response:

Thanks! You will get another update tomorrow. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

You're welcome! You will get another update tomorrow. :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chatper~~



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

Finally,  they each got some release!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

She is so busted!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

Fantastic lemony goodness!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

Shockingly she didn't get spanked.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

He is so controlling!  I wonder how many times Bella will try & buck the system while they hangout for the fourth.  It seems he plans on taking her with him back home for as many clothes as he has in the closet.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

Cockyward makes me smile!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow! I commend you for taking time out of a very busy life to share your time & words with us.

Reviewer: cravingj155 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

love it!!!! So good cannot wait for more!!!!

 



Author's Response: I am glad You liked it! Thanks!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thats too funny!!  I would love to see this!!



Author's Response:

Glad it made you laugh!! :D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter. I am glad that they decided on their rules. LET THE FUN BEGIN!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes! It will begin. :D

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!  Thanks for the update! 



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

they are off to a great start



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 16

What a life hot ass by a hot ass lol



Author's Response:

Lol!! Thanks!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

IT'S BEEN TOO LONG I MISSED YOUR UPDATE BUT.... THIS WAS WORT TH WAIT. THANK YOU! READ YOU SOON!



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it, and that you thought it was worth the wait! :) It shouldn't be nearly as long for the next chapter, but no promises.

Reviewer: Gooseonline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

love this story, DON"T question your writing its you 

stay true to yourself

love goose



Author's Response:

Thanks! ;)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

how often do you post can;t wait



Author's Response:

I wanted to say thank you for all of your reviews! I decided to respond to the last one rather than respond to all of them. :) I am glad you like my story. As to how often I post. It really depends. I was going for once a week, but RL kicked my ass the past couple of weeks so it has been longer. My goal is to get back on track and at least update every two weeks, if I can it will be more. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

it was hot

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

how did he know, did she have afterglow

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

I like  longer

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

gonna be caught up and wishing for more in a blink

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

damn he is hot

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

good I do hope you intend on finishin

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

at least he was concerned about her

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

fireworks are bound to happen since it is4th of July week

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

great start of  course I know who owns that smirk

Reviewer: mjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

Sounds like a great day I would like to have.



Author's Response:

I know! I'd love to have a day like this too! :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am so glad you loved it!

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

I am really enjoying this so far.  I wish the chapters were longer though.



Author's Response:

I am glad you like it, this is probably going to be as long as each chapter gets.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

I agree the Cullen men are so sweet. Too bad that there is not one for everyone. I love Les Miserables.



Author's Response:

Too bad yes! :) I love Les Miserables as well.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

The girls are really being spoiled!!!!!Love it!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you liked it!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

Good chapter.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Thank you for reviewing and letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 15

CHAPTERS ARE STILL TOO SHORT BUT AS ALWAYS A JOY TO READ. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: OCA Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

read it from chapter one to fiteen in one sitting absolutely brilliant.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Your reveiw make me grin. I am glad you like it!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad to see that you have posted the next chapter so will there be any girl three way for the guys to watch that would be a great surprise for the boys



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! No, this is not that type of story, sorrry.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

Will there ever be an EPOV?



Author's Response:

I'm not sure. I might do an outtake. I will have to think about it, but for right now no.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love it so far can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! You should be getting a new chapter today or tomorrow, it is with my Beta now! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

nice day of domestice blis



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

I am really enjoying this story. Bella needs to listen. Her behind has to be tender after her recent punishments. She needs to give it a chance to cool down.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

I am truely enjoying reading this very captivating& intriginging story!! This truely is an amazingly beautifully well written story!! Than for all ur hard work.



Author's Response:

Thanks you your wonderful review! It has made me smile and has truely made my day, Thank you!!

Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

I like this chapter it painted a nice picture for me, felt real,

i thought it was quite sweet actually but I feel like there is still more to edward Cullen 



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing to tell me!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

I was so excited to get this update. I have missed this story. Loved their shopping spree at the grocery store. lol



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you are excited to get my updates. My goal is to start updating every week and to get on a scheduale.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

cant wait till more 



Author's Response:

I am working on it! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14

NOW I'LL BE WAITING IMPATIENTLY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. UPDATE SOON!!!



Author's Response:

Lol! I am working on it, My goal is to start posting once a week.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

Thank you!  Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

You're Welcome! Thanks for reviewing and letting me know what you thought!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love this story!   Thank you for the chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love this Edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I like him too ;)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 13

Happy 2014 to you, too!   This is a awesome story! 



Author's Response:

Happy 2014 to you as well. and Thanks again!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

That was hot,  hot,  hot!



Author's Response:

So glad you think it was hot, I am always nervous posting lemons

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh, boy!  This is so good! 



Author's Response:

So glad you like it!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

I knew he was a Dom,  this is very good,  very good indeed! 



Author's Response:

Very glad you like it!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

thank you for the update. read you soon!!



Author's Response:

You're welcome!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

Never had a pork pop but mercy it sounds yummy



Author's Response:

They are so yummy!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh yum, a little Dominant SexyWard!   Yummy! 



Author's Response:

:D Glad you like him!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 6

Very good story!   Really digging it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

This one never knew that painted lines in a parking lot were dangerous!   Lol!   Great story



Author's Response:

Yes they are! Lol! I have slipped on them many times.

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