Date: 14 Apr 2018 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have looked very hard but I can't find the plot anywhere..
In the first chapter in author notes or chapter notes is written that describing what it is like and this is what else was also placed there
Date: 11 May 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Freaking hilarious with the old lady starting.note me guess Jasper is gonna go to a book store and buy her all the book titles she had at the lib r Ray instead.
Thank you so much. I found sometimes life's little experiences can be helpful.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
fuck in space niddle i wood have never thout about that
I had it suggested by a young writer who so happens, apparently, to be deaf. She expressed her ideas on where they can fuck and they are good so i used them.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm so excited to see who Edward has met! I know you said J/B can only get frisky so much before it gets boring but so far 7 chapters in & you are still coming up with some really creative places. I was thinking the piano bench was just to make Edward jealous, but you surprised me by Alice's text.
Thank you, sweets. I appreciate the positive reviews
Glad i caught ya off guard with the Alice phone call.
I like how Bella stands up and faces the consequences for whatever she does.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another winner! Please don't edit! I love it just the way it is! I think the reason Jasper and Bella fit so well is because they are both individuals who feel deeply. Always. Jasper, as an empath, can't avoid it, and Bella is quite simply an earthy, emotional, exuberant, being who revels in being cherished. You write them both astoundingly well. Again, thank you for all the hard work and happy moments! I look forward to more!
Finally someone knows how i see these two. I have never liked Edward, but in some of my ideas i do try and be nice to him. Alice... i can take her or leave her, it doesn't really matter.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
I have to tell you incredibly hot and wonderful this piece of work is! Sorry not to have reviewed each chapter, but honestly, I was always too anxious to read the next chapter! Each one has left me hot and bothered. Thank you! Finally, Bella has someone who can appreciate her and someone that she truly respects. Their interaction is luscious!
Thank you for the review. I certainly hope you have gotten a laugh out of the story so far. Edward will wise up on his own. He doesn't stay much in the house as he has someo.. somewhere to go to spend time. Don't worry, it is J/B. But things get better, although we have a slight hiccup to look forward to, it will turn out alright.