[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 31: Part 2
what happened to the epi
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
massive heartbreak for many
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
you create major cliffies
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
he is just like Edward denying her what she wants and trying to shelter her from everything but not successfully
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
damn this is good
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
an awkward triangle
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
this is great
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Guest
great beginning
Date: 26 Mar 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 31: Part 2
Shame the epilogue was never posted. I'm assuming it is fairly close to the other version, though.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Guest
Enjoyed this one, but found the ending a bit of a shock because I was used to the other version on another site. Will have to read again to see which one I actually prefer. At least she ends up with Carlisle in both of them.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
I always said that between Jacob and Edward I'd pick Edward without thought. But between Edward and Carlisle? Carlisle is going to win, handsdown, each and every time. :) I haven't read much with that pairing, not much out there to read, but what I have engrossed myself in has been fantastic.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 31: Part 2
Well Edward lost because of his deeds, as he should. Edward can not always win because he is beautiful. That is shallow.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 31: Part 2
Well - I hope Edward's happy with eternity knowing he blew it!! :-P For anyone who can actually appreciate a well-written non-BxE story I reccommend Sassafrass junction by MissErie Chastain/VampishVixen
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 31: Part 1
Yes Bella was foolish to leave her father and go with Carlisle. No, we can't forgive Carlisle. She needs to be done with them all and all of their deception. As Edward said they can never redeem their actions against him. It would serve him right to never know about his child and be able to be a part of its life.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 31: Part 1
Heh-heh!! :-D I like how he blew off the nurses.... *laughs*
Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh wow... poor Edward, and Carlisle. Having been betrayed by Esme the one woman they both trusted. Poor Bella! the people she thought of as parents essentially used her and her residual feelings she had for Edward. I can't help but hope she takes a few years away from the Cullens figure out what she really wants. During that time i'd like to see how the relationship between the members of the Clan work themselves out.
Thanks for the awesome update. I'm glad Doc. C didn't kick the bucket.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 30
Esme and Marcus... Although I have to respect the new, kinder Marcus, I still think the whole business with decieving Bella was a complete low-blow!! If I could, I would've them all to come clean after Aro was killed.... :-(
Date: 18 Dec 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 29: The Beginning of The End.
I just found this story, and I read it in about 24 hours. love it!!! I am team Edward all the way. Im sure Carlisle is alive, and hopefully he will go back with Esme,,, hint hint lol. cant wait for the next chap
Date: 13 Dec 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 29: The Beginning of The End.
I'm not confused, but I'm hopeful that Carlisle has another way...that I missed something. Without Carlisle, Bella would just as soon die at this point. And Edward? Don't get me started! The boy needs help! Stunning action and plot twists!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 29: The Beginning of The End.
AWK!!! Oh No!!! What about Esme, Please don't let Carlisle... gah... poor Edward... caught between EVERYTHIHG! OMG... *sniffle*
Great update I loved it. Thanks
Date: 12 Dec 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 29: The Beginning of The End.
Frankly given the choice, I would've roasted both the Valhallas AND the Volturi!! With both major covens gone, who would be left to try and raise the vampires to be rulers of the world? Possibly Esme, but I doubt she could be THAT sadistic... She just hated the Voltidoucebags from what I read here...... :-S
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 28
Frankly, I'd rather be Team BelOC at this point!! :-( Far as I'm concerned, DoubleAgentWard's been a complete jackass and she's well shot of him - I just don't know how Esme is going to react when Carlisle confesses.... :-(
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
Definitely still hoping for Bella and Edward!!!!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 28
Edward please!! I don't see how this Carlisle thing would work out, especially now- it just doesn't add up.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
A really great chapter, can't wait for the next update!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
Omg WTF he might he dead NOOO!!! damn you just keep throwing us curve balls one after another now Esme might be alive and that can be why Alice kept seeing Edward and Bella together still. I so cannot wait until we have everything cleared up.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
Darn.... I'm totally cofused/unsure now... Good update all the same.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
that was the hottest debate i have ever read LOL
Date: 03 Nov 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Such a great story, with so many plot twists. I love the new characters and the way the triangle between C/E/B is playing out. Edward is a little delusional, I think, and Carlisle is too secretive, but I love it all.
I think I do believe Aro's story. I don't think Edward does, and I worry that Edward is hurt enough to turn the talisman over to Emil, but he will regret it. I look forward to being proven wrong...
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ahh.. my mind is on overload. WHat the hell is up with Edward being 100% sure of alices vision that is just lust Bella has for Carlisle. And why oh why did Edward steal the talisman he's just making it harder on himself with Bella. Ugh I so cannot wait to see who she ends up with in the end..
Date: 22 Oct 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Guest
i will never fogive u (unless you get carlise and bella together i love that more then esme so get cooking or i wont talk to you ill only read ur story) well anyway great first chapter
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 25: A History of Immortals
I'm confused
Aro's
IDK
Maybe they can get preggo?
Date: 10 Oct 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 25: A History of Immortals
edward... hmm he needed to move on. He did when he left her PERIOD. I dont blame her for moving on. I dont trust him any more. Playing two sided. I will always wait for you.. BS
The clans are both corrupt. I would do my best to let the war begin and then let them kill each other off while I watched. Who ever wins I would kill. (vampire wise)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 25: A History of Immortals
Frankly I'm Team Swtizerland still.... If I was in Bella's shoes, I'd rather they would ALL get lost - the Volturi, the Valhallas, Nomads, anyone....
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 25: A History of Immortals
I don't know who's side I'm on yet, I can't decide.
Yes Edward is a hypocrite!
I think Eleazar might be worried that Bella and Carlisle won't ever have a chance to get married if the war comes and Carlisle and/or Bella dies.
Idk, to keep the newborns from leaving with their partner before their one year of super strength runs out?
Date: 09 Oct 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Guest
I am very interested to find out what happen to poor Esme. I can't believe Carlisle hasn't arranged to have himself killed, unless...he wants revenge. Who do these eyes belong to? What is going on?
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
I reread this. He waited 3 long years. Well how long has Esme been dead? Did he just immediately think of Bella? Must be an overlap there on HIS part.
Edward is so screwed.
Remember a vampire can affect her emmotions. Edward did that before the ball game. Hmm..
Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 24: Secrets & Lies
Well I think Edward has truly lost her. Edward is still youthfull in his actions. Always wants to control her. Carlisle tried. Isabella is now "a force to be reconned with".
good story,
Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
I keep thinking Edward you snooze you looze. Well It does seem he has lost Bella finally. I think her biggest attraction to Carlisle was his honesty and his respect for her thoughts.
Aro uses Charlotte as a tracer. She obviously is not loyal to him.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 24: Secrets & Lies
Love the chapter, IDK, yes, IDK and me too.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 22:
Good job, I can not stop reading. Finally a vampire story that has intrigue.
Bella and Edward, well now. Lie to your soul mate and pay dearly. Good Job.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 24: Secrets & Lies
ok, i am confused... this IS a carlisle/bella story..right??? because i have this feeling that bella is going to end up back with edward for some reason or another... Why and who DID kill esme? why is edward working with the valhallas? is there something in it for him? like getting bella back? and does aro really not know about edwards working with against him? why does it seem that bella is the only one in the dark? if charlotte is such a good friend to bella why is she keeping things from her???? becasue you know she IS keeping information from bella!!!! oh and alice?!?!?!?!? what the hell, i thought she loved bella and thought of her as a sister... well you dont distance yourself from a sister you claim to be trying to help! so obiviously i have many questions... and obiviously it also measn that you are writing well since there is still small developments and still all the mystery... but i feel that now we are in to the 25th chapter that we need to begin to get real answers!!! i do finsd myself not dieing to read the new chapter becouse i know we will not be gaining much info if any at all.. so i beg of you to please please begin to give us answers asap.. if not next chapter then the following.. this si too good of a story to beging to have readers lose interest... still looking forward to the next chapter...
Date: 28 Sep 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
whoa.. Carlisle you dog.
HMM.. what will Edward do now??
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 24: Secrets & Lies
*snorts* Huh, you should be a bloody comedian if you're going to keep writing like this!! Props to Carlisle for admitting he was a complete fool though!! :-P
Date: 22 Sep 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 22:
Great chapter! Something tells me that a newborn with gifts like Bella's can do two things: 1) overcome the blood-lust, and 2) outsmart Aro. I'm looking forward to it!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
Meh, I'm too pudgy for cookies!! :-P I will be looking forward to the next Ch.!! :-D
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
edwards playing a dangerous game,does charlotte know why edward keeps going siberia?or is she just going for ignorance and stupidity? i know there will be the war, but i have to say i have no clue who's on who's side,surely alice has seen where edward keeps going and if aro is constantly tapping into them (visions), then he knows also?
*scratching head and rubbing forehead*it could be my cold but you have left me stumpted,it's brilliant,i have no clue whats happening next,can't wait for your next up-date,excellent,thanks,bye.c.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 12: Misguided reality
Interesting fic but I think that both Carlisle and Bella are betraying Edward and despite what happened between them, I think it is wrong.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
well edward is an idiot! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 22:
I doubt it.... But it's just like Aro to pull something like this - ITALIAN SCHWEIN!! :-[
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 22:
way for alice to be more cryptic! starting to react like bella with the whats and the whys,it has to be bella and edward in the end, daddy c and bella is just a little too creepy feeling to me, even if they are both in their 20's, what was that from alice, that they are just friends?huhh, the plot thickens lol.
is charlotte based on the peter and charlotte characters,if so is peter going to make an appearance.?
if something has happened between char and edward, bella has no right to act badly after alll she shacked up with Dr C,not that 2 wrongs make a right.hope teh cullens kick ass in this war and take numbers hee hee hee lol.thanks for an amazing story so far,bye until next time cheryl.
Author's Response:
Charlotte is an original character of my own creation and not based on Jasper's old friends. But Peter and Charlotte might make an appearence in the battle between the Volturi and the Valhallas.
Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 22:
Excellent chapter.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 20: Within Temptation
wth!!!! dont just leave me hagin" i wanna know what hapends nexttt!! update soon an this is a fantastic story! i started reading it wensday or tuesday.id read it after my mom went to bed and i stay up all nigth reding chapters over agian so i coul under stand..........anyway fantastic story
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 21: Intermission
Team Carlisle all the way.
I love this story. More please, soon please.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 21: Intermission
Definatley Team Carlisle. I think Edward has more maturing to do. Great work here! You had me guessing right to the end...and now beyond.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 21: Intermission
Team EDWARD...unless you wanna go crazy and have Bella and JASPER run away together.... :D
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 21: Intermission
TEAM CARLISLE! Charlotte and Edward probably had a thing together while they were in Volterra. I have no idea what her powers will be, I just know that it is in your power, and your power alone, to update this chapter as soon as humanly possible.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 21: Intermission
Well I'll be dammed. I get the feeling that Edward had something to do with Charlotte and that's why she has that hurt look everytime she sees Edward go to Bella. I can't wait to see who Bella chooses I for one hope it's Edward. Wonder what powers she will have and how it will change her from who she was.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 21: Intermission
UGH!! VOLTURI SCUM..... MORE PLEASE?!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 20: Within Temptation
Wicked cliffhanger you have here!! Bravo! I can't figure out which I want to read next: Bella's changing from her POV or the madness that goes on in that room after Bella passes out. I'm more than glad I'm not the one making the decision! I trust you with that! Kudos!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 20: Within Temptation
OMG im at the edge of my seat here
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 20: Within Temptation
What does Edward mean alice is never wrong WTH did she see.. Ugh ur evil leaving us with that cliffy lol.. I think Edward is so going to kick Carlisle's butt if not for having sex with Bella then for turning her. At this point I have no idea if her feelings will change or not plus I can even decide who I want her to end up with so I'll just wait till you decide that for me..
Date: 21 Aug 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 20: Within Temptation
I started reading this today and I couldn't stop till the end of the chapter...
now I am hanging on the edge of my seat waiting....
Great story, thank you update soon!!!!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 20: Within Temptation
Hate cliffhangers but looooooooooooove the chapter. I think Bella will go back to Edward and the Volturi will finish Carlisle but that's my thinking
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 20: Within Temptation
Oh boy what a cliffie. Can't wait till next time.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 20: Within Temptation
i think he did the right thing ! it took enierly way to long for him to change her i understand his reasoing but it was about time! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 17 Aug 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
See?! Seperation does make the heart grow fonder! Rosalie is alive, but without Emmett she'll never be whole. She sees Bella's love for what it is now. Great chapter.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
yes, you are a tease ... what is Carlisle hiding ... I suspect it's grusome for him to react the way he did
Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
lovley lusty lemons ... good job
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
awwww ... sweet!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 14: An Interview with the Volturi
You are teasing me ... love the story ... the cliffies are driving me nuts.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
I keep saying it ... uh oh.
Wonder if Bella's dream has anything to do with where she is going. Off to read another chapter.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 12: Misguided reality
uh oh ... loving your story
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Guest
Can't wait for the next chapter....
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Team Carlisle ... but I feel sorry for Edward (although he did bring it on himself)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
yum ... little lemons
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
how very confusing ... for Bella
loving your story ... had to wake up this morning and read for a bit
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 The Black Gardenia Ball
really enjoying this story ... and love that Edward has shown up
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
I think he wants to get hitched.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
Hmm I think Carlisle want to marry Bella first before he changes her. I'm pretty sure will fkn flip when he finds out Carlisle has mated with Bella. I had a feeling Rosalie was a alive and Aro just wanted to get Carlisle to show up to prevent more deaths from his coven.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
oo la la ... the attraction grows
wonder what Jasper is feeling coming from Carlisle
& where are they going?
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Okay, that was different ... liking the story, but so grateful that I can continue reading. I'd be really upset about the cliffies if I had to wait.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: Shadows.
"crimson" ... okay, that can't be good
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
now I'm completely puzzled as to what is going on ... good thing I can keep reading
your story is intriging
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Guest
So sad that Esme died ... but all kinds of possibilities can come from the start of this story... on to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm thinking Charlotte has something to do with the talisman. And I'm all for team Carlisle I mean common he's a total DILF :)
I am wondering what was up with the scarf did alice but him??
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
suprised that rose is alive and cant wait to see what happens when they go and visit aro!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
hmmm.Is he going to marry her first? About time hes going to change her. Good chapter
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
Well I love this story, I think that Rose is a Guinnea Pig in this Volturi shit. I too think that Carlisle will ask her to marry him.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
Finally!! My god.. haha. :] I'm quite happy.. write more soon!! Like, now-ish..
<3
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
YES I'm happy Rose is alive!!!! I think Carlisle plans to ask for Bella's hand in marrige and all that jazz. Edward will totally flip, of course. and I really hope not.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.
O.K.... A bit of an interrogation, huh?! Well, here's my answers:
(a) Pretty chuffed!
(b) Propose?
(c) He'll go ballistic?
(d) Highly possible, but I doubt Aro would do anything before she was changed - he'd want her for himself the Italian schwein!!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Please don't let Rose be dead.....poor Emmett. If she is dead then I know he would want to be next, and I can't even image a Twilight story with out the lovable teddy bear that is our Emmett.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
Cock-blocker.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wonderful chapter! The action and love scenes - superb! Let's see, I think Rosalie is still alive, but I have no idea where Carlisle is planning on taking Bella. I'm just enjoying the ride immensely!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Rosalie isn;t dead.. atleast i hope not. ><
I have not idea.. he needs to take her, though.
He enjoy's sex WAYY too much wkith her as a human.. :]
I want to say edward, but i don't know..
Hurry and write more soon!! <3
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
JEEZE LOUISE - W-H-Y IS EMILE BEING SUCH A DICK!? He has to know she wouldn't be intersted in his group, OR the Volturi. As far as she's concerned, once the Cullens are safe, Emile and Aro can finish each other off no?!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
cant wait till the next chapter! he needs to just turn her and get it over with ! men! cant live with them cant live with out them