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Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2019 4:37 AM Title: Epilogue

I have really loved this story! Thank you for writing it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

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Date: 26 Jul 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 24 Jul 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 24 Jul 2018 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 24 Jul 2018 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 24 Jul 2018 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 24 Jul 2018 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2018 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! Paul is a prick! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2018 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2018 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2018 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2018 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: nicoleraychelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2018 6:23 AM Title: Epilogue

Woooo This Bella came around and now I’m happy. Thank you for the ride!

Reviewer: nicoleraychelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 72

Bella is getting on my last nerve...like how confused and immature can a person get??? My gawd!

Reviewer: Lelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2018 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 135

I make sauce. I get that you make gravy,  my friend Denise and I could do a comedy act with our rendition of the argument over sauce/gravy. However, when you sway that you had sausage (I am hoping you mean sweet not hot), meatballs and ”pork”, what do you mean by “pork”? What part of the pig are we talking about? 

The recipe for my sauce isn’t technically a secret, it has been passed down in my family and it is incredibly delicious, but most people who have seen me make the spice blend that is one of the ingredients and then make the sauce usually decides that it looks like too much trouble and just hope that they will be able to continue eating mine.  Mine is better than my sister’s, BTW, and I don’t know why. I think she must be cutting corners. So if you could just let me know what you mean by pork in the sauce, that would be great. 

Reviewer: Lelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2018 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 135

I make sauce. I get that you make gravy,  my friend Denise and I could do a comedy act with our rendition of the argument over sauce/gravy. However, when you sway that you had sausage (I am hoping you mean sweet not hot), meatballs and ”pork”, what do you mean by “pork”? What part of the pig are we talking about? 

The recipe for my sauce isn’t technically a secret, it has been passed down in my family and it is incredibly delicious, but most people who have seen me make the spice blend that is one of the ingredients and then make the sauce usually decides that it looks like too much trouble and just hope that they will be able to continue eating mine.  Mine is better than my sister’s, BTW, and I don’t know why. I think she must be cutting corners. So if you could just let me know what you mean by pork in the sauce, that would be great. 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 46

Loved it! 

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Date: 12 Nov 2017 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it! 

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Date: 12 Nov 2017 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 41

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it! Poor Edward! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it! 

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Emmett!  Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!  Go Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it! 

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!  Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it! 

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a jerk! 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 45

So when are they going go stop dening their true feelings for each other?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2017 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

Go Bella Go!!

Reviewer: dky3813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2016 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

 

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Date: 12 Dec 2015 3:59 PM Title: Epilogue

fun read :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 10:56 AM Title: Epilogue

another great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 138

The Zipper is my favorite ride

Reviewer: stickyfeathers Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 103

I'm loving the story but I'm over Bella and her depressing mood.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 8:35 AM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful! Amazing! Awesome! I loved it if you can't tell!

Reviewer: Aloha202 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2015 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 131

I reserved my judgment of Bella because I realized that she has serious psychological problems, but you as a writer really made her look extremely pathetic then used your other characters to justify her bad behavior. No matter how you try to spin it, it just didn't work in my opinion.  She was just plain wrong.  She even accused Edward of having a doctored photo, someone who she has known for years and questioned his meticulousness and his integrity. Wow. 

 

 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! Go Bella!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it! I really hate Rosalie!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella is awesome!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awe poor Bella! Does Edward like Bella too?

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Poor Bella! I really don't like Paul!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! What will Bella's reaction be when he tells her?

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

fantastic!

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a jerk!

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