Date: 13 Apr 2019 4:37 AM Title: Epilogue
I have really loved this story! Thank you for writing it!
Date: 23 Jul 2018 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Paul is a prick! Poor Bella!
Date: 23 Jul 2018 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 27 Feb 2018 6:23 AM Title: Epilogue
Woooo This Bella came around and now I’m happy. Thank you for the ride!
Date: 26 Feb 2018 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 72
Bella is getting on my last nerve...like how confused and immature can a person get??? My gawd!
Date: 10 Feb 2018 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 135
I make sauce. I get that you make gravy, my friend Denise and I could do a comedy act with our rendition of the argument over sauce/gravy. However, when you sway that you had sausage (I am hoping you mean sweet not hot), meatballs and ”pork”, what do you mean by “pork”? What part of the pig are we talking about?
The recipe for my sauce isn’t technically a secret, it has been passed down in my family and it is incredibly delicious, but most people who have seen me make the spice blend that is one of the ingredients and then make the sauce usually decides that it looks like too much trouble and just hope that they will be able to continue eating mine. Mine is better than my sister’s, BTW, and I don’t know why. I think she must be cutting corners. So if you could just let me know what you mean by pork in the sauce, that would be great.
Date: 10 Feb 2018 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 135
I make sauce. I get that you make gravy, my friend Denise and I could do a comedy act with our rendition of the argument over sauce/gravy. However, when you sway that you had sausage (I am hoping you mean sweet not hot), meatballs and ”pork”, what do you mean by “pork”? What part of the pig are we talking about?
The recipe for my sauce isn’t technically a secret, it has been passed down in my family and it is incredibly delicious, but most people who have seen me make the spice blend that is one of the ingredients and then make the sauce usually decides that it looks like too much trouble and just hope that they will be able to continue eating mine. Mine is better than my sister’s, BTW, and I don’t know why. I think she must be cutting corners. So if you could just let me know what you mean by pork in the sauce, that would be great.
Date: 13 Nov 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 46
Loved it!
Date: 12 Nov 2017 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 45
Loved it!
Date: 12 Nov 2017 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 44
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 43
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 42
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 38
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it!
Date: 08 Nov 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Emmett! Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!
Date: 07 Nov 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a jerk!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 45
So when are they going go stop dening their true feelings for each other?
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Go Bella Go!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 10:56 AM Title: Epilogue
another great story
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 138
The Zipper is my favorite ride
Date: 14 May 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 103
I'm loving the story but I'm over Bella and her depressing mood.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 8:35 AM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful! Amazing! Awesome! I loved it if you can't tell!
Date: 01 Mar 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 131
I reserved my judgment of Bella because I realized that she has serious psychological problems, but you as a writer really made her look extremely pathetic then used your other characters to justify her bad behavior. No matter how you try to spin it, it just didn't work in my opinion. She was just plain wrong. She even accused Edward of having a doctored photo, someone who she has known for years and questioned his meticulousness and his integrity. Wow.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! I really hate Rosalie!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is awesome!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awe poor Bella! Does Edward like Bella too?
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Poor Bella! I really don't like Paul!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! What will Bella's reaction be when he tells her?
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! Poor Bella! Paul is a jerk!