Date: 03 Jun 2018 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
Plot unrealistic for the time period. BUT it was a very good plot and sweet story, nontheless. Thanks for writing - years ago.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 4 Crying in the Chapel
Crying in the Chapel - 1960. polyamorus wasn't even a term. And, her having an orgrasm or him knowing what or where clit was not possible.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 It's Now or Never
Now or Never came out in 1960. Nice little slashy lemon.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Can't Help Falling in Love
While the sentiments were lovely, I was around in 1981 and it would have very very rare to have any kind of same sex "coupling/partnership" ceremony.
Date: 08 Feb 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
That was such a beautiful story.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
Oh My Goodness! that is the sweetest little story! I hate they had such a short time together, but glad that he left a son behind.... so sweet
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and the lovely review. I cried so much writing this story, even the happy parts because I knew what was going to happen. I sing my sons to sleep with Love Me Tender (they won't let me leave the bedroom without it) and it works every time.
Suz xoxoxo
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
Loved the story. It was so sad. Love that Jason was Jaspers and that he had the courage to be true to himself and his love.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story. I cried so much writing it, I got the idea when I was listening to Crying in the Chapel one day and couldn't stop thinking about it until I finished writing it.
I'm writing another Edward/Bella/Jasper fic that is not so angsty called Menage a Trois if you are interested.
Suzanne
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
just a beautiful story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and your review. I enjoyed writing this story so much, it really came from the heart. I cried a lot too usually on the way home from work when I would listen to Elvis to get me into the right mood for writing it and all these ideas would bombard me. When I thought of the phone call between Edward and James and their crying over their workmates death and because I knew it was Jasper - crying like a baby at the traffice lights.. I did get a few strange looks!
Suzanne
Date: 14 Jul 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
WOW!!! I just found this story and it is so amazingly good. The love between Edward, Jasper and Bella was beautiful. I finally understood what happened when Edward said that he saw James Anderson as he pulled out of the parking lot. I remembered the story he told about his partner getting killed and I cried. I didn't expect that it was Jasper. I do love that Jason ended up being Jasper's son. That made for a perfect ending.
I know some people don't like stories with E/J or E/J/B but if they are written right the love overshadows everything else. You're an awesome writer and thanks for such a beautiful story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your lovely review. I am blushing. The idea for this story came to me when I was listening to Elvis's Heartbreak Hotel and I had not long seen some photos of Jackson playing guitar with his band. It was originally meant to be more of a love story between Edward and Jasper with Edward marrying Bella to keep up appearances but when I was writing the first scenes getting ready for Jason's wedding it became so much more. I cried so much writing this story and was very proud of the finished result.
Suzanne
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
Wow, I am not one to usually read stories like this...but, WOW. You made me cry for their strong relationship as well as for their loss.
I always know how good an author is if they can get the readers so wrapped up into their characters that you can get them to cry as well.
I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Author's Response:
Hey there Christine, I just finished emailing you about the banner and I came on over here to respond to a few reviews and here you are. I surprised myself writing about a threesome too but this story was really about love in all its aspects, prejudices, living a fulfilling life and of course the music of Elvis. I'll let you in on a little secret or two. The song for my wedding was Can't help falling in love and I still sing my younger boy to sleep with Love Me Tender whenever he is unsettled and especially when he is sick. I cried so much writing it. A few times my kids thought something really bad had happened because I was literally blubbering at the computer.
Thank you so much for your lovely compliments.
Suzanne
Date: 07 Jul 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
That was amazingly beautiful and heartbreaking - LOVE how it came full circle - going to check your profile to see if you have any more stories!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much much for your lovely review. I have 2 more ongoing stories on this site and a few more one-shots over on fanfiction for contests.
Suzanne
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Can't Help Falling in Love
this was truley an amazing story. it was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
this was a truley amazing story that brought me to tear. it was so beutiful yet heartbreaking at the same time.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I cried so much writing it. It was always intended to end that way and writing around the idea of a forbidden love lost far too young was so heartwrenching. I would be listening to Elvis in the car on the way home from work to get in the right frame of mind to write and when I thought of that phone call between Edward and James to link the characters together I was seriously sobbing in my car....when I got home my kids were all worried thinking something bad had happened.
Date: 17 May 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Can't Help Falling in Love
All I can say is WOW! I cried with the last chapter. I really like this. I'm not into the whole 3some thing and all that but I like reading about them. Keep up the good work. I hope to read more soon. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and and the lovely review. I was listening to the radio one day and Heartbreak Hotel came on and all of a sudden an image of Jasper on stage playing the guitar popped in to my head. I cried a lot writing the story especially the parts earlier on that hinted at what was to come in the end. I am a sucker for sad books/movies and the plot just called to me to write.
Suzanne
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
It's so sweet, but so sad at the same time! You've done a great job. I'm very happy I stumbled across this one.
~Rachel
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I love this story and I loved writing it, although I did cry A LOT doing so, ususally in the car on the way home from work listening to Elvis CDs to get in the mood for writing when I got home. I am sure people at the traffic lights must have thought I suffered from some major tragedy rather than an overactive imagination. Thanks for the lovely review :-)
Suzanne
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
This story was amazing, I was crying by the end
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I cried a lot writing it too as I always knew the ending. Very happy that you enjoyed, it is one of my favourite stories that I have written.
Suzanne
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
Heartbreaking!
Author's Response:
Thanks for supporting my little the story till the end :-) I cried so much writing the story as the ending was decided quite early and I wanted to tell it sensiteively. I am a sucker for a happy ever after usually but then again one of my favourite books/movies is Atonement...
Suzanne
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 Without Love
Awwww. i want to cry...... this litle story was really sweet. Can't wait to see what your working on next. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I cried a lot writing it. I was driving home from work one day thinking about the story and the ending came to me while listening to Elvis and I was literally sobbing in my car - very embarrassing at the traffic lights! I have just submitted 2 chapters of a much longer story about Edward and Bella where Bella is the reincarnated soul mate of Edwards. It is quite angsty in parts but there is a lot of romance as well. The story is called Scent of a Woman.
Suzanne
Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 6 Can't Help Falling in Love Part II
Great little ceremony! Hot wedding night!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I really wanted them to have something sweet between themselves and yeah writing the wedding night was so hot I had to take a few cold showers myself. Last chapter coming up tomorrow :-)
Suzanne
Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 Canon in D
This is a very sweet (and erotic) journey. I am sitting on the edge of my seat awainting more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It's not a long story but I am very proud of writing it. Next up tomorrow will be the wedding night!!!! In the meantime, I am posting the first chapter of a more modern E/B/J story tonight. It will be a lot longer multi chapter fic but only the first 2 chapters have been written so I won't be updating as often.
Suzanne
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 5 Canon in D
Excellent chapter! I like that they're having their own little ceremony!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing, definately a good incentive to keep going. Next up - the wedding night!! Very Very Lemony.... Should be updated tomorrow.
Suzanne
Date: 08 Mar 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 5 Canon in D
I'm absolutely loving this story. I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Next Chapter up in 2 days :-)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 It's Now or Never
I was wondering if I am doing something wrong Chapter 3 is not here. How do I read it?
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for letting me know there was a problem. I have noticed this happening to a few stories over the weekend. I just uploaded the text for the story again and it appears to be working this time. Sorry about that....
Chapter 3 is probably my most favourite chapter....be warned it is very lemony...
Suzanne
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 4 Crying in the Chapel
It's going to be interesting to see how they make this work considering the time period!
Author's Response:
Hey bbbluez, thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Yes it was a very repressed time and of course the stigma of how they feel about each other is reflected in the actions they decide to take. Chapter 5 will be up on Monday :-)
Suzanne
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Heartbreak Hotel
Really good..)
Author's Response:
Thank you :-)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Can't Help Falling in Love
I like it.:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :-)
Suzanne
Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 It's Now or Never
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you :-)
Chapter 5 up tomorrow.
Suzanne
Date: 05 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 3 It's Now or Never
loved it very hot
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. That was definately one of my favourite chapters to write. Chapter 4 is coming up soon :-)
Suzanne
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Heartbreak Hotel
Great chapter! Interested in seeing how the three of them get closer!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. Chapter 3 is being uploaded now :-) It's very lemony!
Suzanne
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Can't Help Falling in Love
Looking forward to this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am moving house tomorrow but hopefully if my internet connection is working I will post Chapter 2 then, most likely early evening. Chapter 2 takes us back to when Edward, Bella and Jasper first meet and it gets very lemony before too long.... Hope you like it!
Suzanne