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Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

Please continue writing this story it is so different and fascinating...your writing style and structure has grown in leaps and bounds after reading your most recent stories but the story of good verses evil you have woven so far is so complex and compelling. I am definitely feeling a pregnancy on the horizon and then what will Edward do when he is forced to reveal himself? Oh my mind is spinning with the possibilities of where you could go in this situation 

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 14

Please continue writing this story it is so different and fascinating...your writing style and structure has grown in leaps and bounds after reading your most recent stories but the story of good verses evil you have woven so far is so complex and compelling. I am definitely feeling a pregnancy on the horizon and then what will Edward do when he is forced to reveal himself? Oh my mind is spinning with the possibilities of where you could go in this situation 

Reviewer: chritbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

I like this story very dark. Not like Rosalie very much. Can't wait til Aug 

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

Nooo til August? Ahhhhhhh

Reviewer: IvyLane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

I do hope you finish this story eventually. It is really extremely interesting!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

Any chance of an update? I've been thinking about this story.

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

hope you come back soon

Reviewer: fprm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

Intense malice

Reviewer: brocketts86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really miss this story! Please update soon :)

Reviewer: Guardian2o12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful story!!!! Hope you update soon

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh boy....and now Rosalie let loose Peter....what of Alice!?!? How different will she be when she awakens?!?! What about Bella....she's in more danger now than ever!!! And they have no clue!!! More soon please!!!

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

Excellent chapter!! Please update again soon!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

Please update

Reviewer: LegendaryDiamond Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

This is ridiculous. One minute she doesn't want him and vows to resist him then the next she can't get enough of him. This Bella is quite irritating and the chapters are getting repititive. Its the same thing going back and forth with she and Edward. Alice is quite timid as well. This is what, the twelfth chapter and Bella is still in the dark? This story is moving so slow. I like other aspects if it tho. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

Rose really wants to die huh?

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

Good update 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) :) :) Good to see an update, these two facinate me.

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

Thank you.  Great chapter. Looking forward to the next! T

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

"What if her efforts failed and the master found out of her betrayal?" Rose is a nasty character. Hopefully there's some good torture planned for her 'cause she pisses me off::))

"There would be no good outcome to come of this, he knew that. Unless she would become...but he could never, would never do that to her." Guess no matter what species he is, he's an idiot:) Not that I want Bella to become a demon which is in a whole other ballpark than a vampire::))

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

thank you for th eupdate...who has Rosalie called?  what will Peter do?  What will Mason do when he finds out?...until you post again

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 😉

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awww something tells me bella will be a pawn to peter getting even. I think the min edward calls bella her name instead of miss swan will be the day he himself admits he has fallen in love too,

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

love it but awful long wait

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

:):)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

OMG what has Rose done Edward will be in a fight to protect Bella even more than before

 

Reviewer: Sevendevils Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

OMG! It has been along time since the last update, I loved it!! Please super Duper please update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

thanks,, thought you had quit this and us..

 

Rose and Satan and Peter how apt.

Reviewer: Pox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

Looking foreword to next chapter :)

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

And we all know he gets everything he wants.....  Poor Bella has a bullseye on her back ow.  Great chapter.  Hope we don't have to wait so long for the next chapter.  Love this story!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

So glad that you have updated.  I am worried about what Peter and Rose are planning. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

loving in the stars wow what  else could be better.  why is Rose wanting Bella out of the way so bad??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 12

She know something is not right but just cant put her finger on it.  Did Rose find her?

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh my......more soon please!!!! Will she be successful? Edward is gonna be beyond pissed when he sees Rose has not learned her lesson!!!

Reviewer: ivysilvergoldandglitter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Been checking this site everyday hoping you have updated. Please give us more chapters soon. This story is really good and I enjoy reading it. 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

Sounds like rosalie is not going to give up easily. 

 

Lol I am thinking Edward is falling in love.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

What is she planning and when Edward finds out how fast will she die

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

I guess Rosalie has not learned her lesson.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

been a long wait but it was a good chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

What is Rosalie up to????? As always you leave me wanting more and more.  Hope you update again soon. 

Reviewer: Tash 79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2014 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great so far

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 13

LOVED IT AS ALWAYS! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Sevendevils Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved it!!!!!!! Plz update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

"I bet you secretly love it when they bow to you," "You would be correct," lol lol It's interesting how Bella isn't really very intimidated by Edward, at not in a fearful way.

Edward either knows what Rosalie is up to & is just letting her hang herself or he has a flaw in his power.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

This is a great chapter. Thank you so much. Can't wait to find out what Rosalie is up to.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hope Mr Mason saves her. Another great chapter.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 13

Happy birthday to me hun it's like reading paradise lost book one where are you going with thus one hun it's stunningly brilliant

Reviewer: NikkiCullen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love! Very update did not disappoint. Devilward is hot! More please. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ugh Rose doesn't know when to stop does she.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

Good chapter. 

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow I didn't think she would do that. Ok rose has me worried what she is doing. Great chapter. I am surprised he just doesn't have them married.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

Will Bella get pregnant with a devil spawn?  Roselie is just asking to be brutally killed by him. 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

I wish he had killed Rosalie. She is horrible.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

Rose.. more evil than the Devil himself.

Reviewer: rockerchixk Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

Rosalie is crazy! I'm talking C-R-A-Z-Y with a straitjacket

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter again...   Jeez, Rosalie is really nasty.  I hope she is dealt with swiftly and painfully.   Thank you! 

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

More please more Cristina

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh boy, Oh boy, Oh boy...

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

LOVED IT, THANK YOU!

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

"Well, well, well. What do we have here?" I suspect Rosalie:( Obviously, Edward isn't all knowing. His arrogance seems to make it impossible for him to believe his 'followers' would ever work against him. As always in fanfics, Bella is the one to suffer for his stupidity.
I'm really curious what Edward has in mind for Bella's future even tho I suspect he currently has no idea beyond the immediate (sex)::))

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

This story is so creepy. It is a love hate relationship with this Edward.

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

I am really loving this fic!

Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Another Chapter soon please!??

Best wishes, T

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

Rosalie??  Loving this!!!

 

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm following your story but can't help but wish that there wasn't any blood sacrifice in it. (I know I know you warned me, but still) 

Concerned about Esme and Carlisle. Keep them safe please. 

Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm so confused.... Update soon 

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

Good chapter

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Esme.   hmm mind control huh.  That's not good.  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh crap! I'm guessing Roselie has once again snuck into the castle.  

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

OMG!I love your story can not wait for more .Best story out here.Great writing.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

The well well must be Rose..

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

Is that Rose???? I was so glad to see your update this morning.  Poor Alice.  Now that she has accepted Edward as her master will she still try to get Bella away from him or will she try to get them together now. I can't wait to find out what Rose jas planed for Bella. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

Taking thats rose at the end? Can edward imprenant bella, idk if the demon can or not? Loved the lemon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loving this

Reviewer: Sevendevils Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 12

I like it, I loved it please update soon

Reviewer: Jlec30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

What a great story. Very unique :)

Reviewer: kinskye Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh my fucking god noooooo dont end this chapter with me so close to the ed gee! !!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 12

I wonder who is with Bella...   Great chapter.  Love this story.  

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

Holy crap! Hope that isn't Rosalie!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 12

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

So the lady in black is Esme. Was Bella a virgin? I can not believe he just took her like that and just disappeared for a few days. I would be mad too.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

Rosalie is one side ck woman. She is crazy.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

So Rosalie wants Edward for herself. I am thinking that Rosalie was the one that "lead" Bella to the hidden room that night. Edward will distroy her when he finds out. Hopefully Alice will mention this conversation to Jasper and Jasper will mention it to Edward. I don't want Bella hurt.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

Omgosh!!!!!!! I can not believe that she gave into him. I was surprised that he made it snow in July. He is being brave or stupid

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

I can not believe that Edward did not know that Bella was there witnessing what was going on. How in the world is he going to explain what she just saw?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

I was surprised that Edward was in the church. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hot hot hot!!!!!!!! Poor Bella she is in so much lustful trouble. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

So is he truly a demon? He is not a vampire?? Is he manipulating her feelings? He blow in her face and made her say yes, even though I thought no she would have said yes anyway.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

Enjoying this story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait to find out more about Edward.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wonder if Edward's taking Bella's virginity will protect her...from Rosalie?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

As much as I am not a fan of the devil or evil spirits, I love Edward so much. I think I am just as torn as Bella. It would be hard to not want Edward.

Reviewer: nikkirocsurworld Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love this story! I just started it last night. I can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved the lemon. I have a feeling that since edward claimed bella, he will kill rose for trying to harm whats his. Wonder why bella passed out for 2 days after she had lost her vcard?

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

YOUR BACK! MORE PLZ,LOVE IT!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow!  Glad you're back.  Love this story.  Thank you.

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